SS - Pre - Mission Rituals _ pt 3(C) pg 23_updt 07 July - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
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FANTASTIC! Such a good read. Right from how their routine was set to how this mission shows their sync. Sai was so on point. She knew exactly the way to behave. There was Quiet efficiency. I love that valcony scene♥️ so so nicely written. Look forward to more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

A very beautiful update. You have mentioned the progress between Virat and Sai so well. Their innermost feelings are so very well written. Simply amazing.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Oh wow! So beautiful❤️

Could totally imagine our SaiRat in this scene❤️

Amazing👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Honestly, am speechless. I cannot even describe in words how beautiful this was. For once, to me, it wasn't about Sairat but about those many many police, military, navy and air force officers and their families. some who go away only to come back as beautiful memories. Immense respect for these protectors of the nation and the sacrifices their families make. I am grateful that I was born in a country that doesn't have wars etc. but my heart literally goes out to countries that are war-ridden and innocent lives are lost every day. Thank you for tagging me into such a beautiful piece of writing. Hope to read more amazing pieces from you. ❤️ ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Sorry for the late reply😭

The word that screamed through each and every word of your update was- Domestic. Realistic, easy love. not glittery and blinding like a masala bollywood movie, but like the warmth of a cozy blanket in cold winter mornings, a cup of tea while gazing at the little droplets of water falling down from the leaves after a heavy downpour has ceased. It's like the cold ocean waves drenching your feet rah rah ke. This is how I feel. Completely drenched in love when I read your stories❤️❤️

The comfortable love, the easy communication, the unspoken understanding, the unrestricted care. The little moments that you create between them aahhhh! Like Sai tightening her fingers, her taking care of his belongings more than her own, Virat's silent admiration and overwhelming gratitude for Sai's love that doesn't come out of her words of confession, but through everything she says, everything she does, and everything she is❤️

Your Sai Virat are fast becoming more dear to me than the show's Sai Virat❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Amazing chapter 😍😍

Virat went to Sai’s college to let her know that he’s going and and she came back for him.🥺❤️

Their synchrony 🥺🥺

And they’re so understanding of each other 🥺🥺

They’ve become so comfortable with the physical contact 🥺🥺❤️❤️

I too could visualise Virat calling Sai from on top of a tree🤣🤣

Update soon❣️❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

A very beautiful chapter full of heartfelt emotions 😘😘


Just loved how you described Sairat's concern for each other and their restlessness loved it really 🥰🥰

Sai , the blazing fire and Virat , the steady river shows how different they are , such contrasting personalities they have but they are still perfect for each other making them complete. They are so much in sync with each other's behaviour 🤗🤗

Virat didn't tell Sai about the danger completely and his teammates also told him not to go to the mission I hope he will be safe 🥺🥺

Veeru standing on electric post talking with Sai Oh God ! the mental image is so hilarious 😂😂

Sai's comeback to Sonali is just brilliant , telling her that not only she is a brave IPS officer's wife but also the daughter of a martyred police officer and she knows perfectly well not to let her emotions hinder her duties 😙😙 Even Kaku and Baba are a little proud though reluctantly.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Beautiful..... loved it..😍

Loved the pure domestic relationship between them....They way both are concerned about each other....

So kaku and ninad could see the truth now... nice....

Excited to read further...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Absolutely love your version of sairat as their understanding is top notch compared to show. So glad the chakrams are not blind to see the truth in here.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Beautiful update

Such sweet moments between them

Hope Virat comes back soon

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