Falling Slowly | OS - Page 2

Yay I'm so happy to read your stories after KZK.

This was so apt

Sai's breakdown moment is still aching my heart

Hope viru the gabbar now takes a stand against Pakhi mistreating Sai at every point giving constipation ki dukaan a piece of her mind

Loved it

This was amazing

Sai being vulnerable

Virat realising the magnitude of damage chavan family’s toxicity is doing to Sai - who suddenly lost her father and was pushed into dealwali marriage

Such a nice take on this 👍🏼

This was SO beautiful! Thank you for writing this OS. Sais breakdown and her candid confession thst it bothers her when he doesn't speak up against pp is so nicely described...

This was superb specially the morning conversation and realization on virats part simply beautiful

That was so emotional and beautifully written! I want to say more but I am seriously out of words and I wish we get to see something like this on the screen as well Neil and Ayesha would nail such angsty scenes!

Oh wow👏

I totally loved this...amazing.

it was so emotional. Sai's turmoil to Virat's realization...

Keep on writing

I am back here😆

I have read four of your works....is there any more?

would love to read

Wow!........Beautifully written.......👏👌👏

It is really a masterpiece.....

You have truly depicted the turmoil of 19 year old girl where she should spend a carefree life and enjoy hanging out with friends......she is continuously fighting and defending so that she will not lose her self respect......what a pity....

You have made virat realise all these very nicely.....👌

Please write more such......