SS||Whispers of a Broken Soul [Complete] - Page 9

Chapter 11

Of cos Geet’s plan came to fruition

She was indeed calm whilst the drama unfolded

So she made it seem that Raj was having an affair

Veena’s anger was anticipated

Great she confronted Raj

Well Veena refused to believe Raj

Geet was clearly happy seeing them fight

Now the tension between Raj and Veena escalated

Maan’s concern was reasonable

Inside Geet was overjoyed but pretended to bes ympathetic

Geet just assured Maan

As expected Geet slowly and steadily dismantled the Khurana business

Everything was a mess

Maan is certainly overwhelmed

Not surprised that he feels Geet is his support

One thing for sure that he genuinely loves her

She seems to have some feelings for him

Media is indeed restless

Geet completely destroyed the Khuranas

Despite their efforts, nothing could be salvaged

Veena was overwhelmed and shattered seeing everything crumbling

Chapter 12

ahh Geet hit the final nail in the coffin

this effective sealed Maan's fate

of cos she send all in the info regarding Meera's case, Maan's involvement and the Khuranas cover up

well she even left some "evidence" in the Khurana mansion

it did hit the news

as expected Meera's case was reopened

oh Raj and Veena argued

Maan did try and intervene

hmm so Geet felt no joy but satisfaction

now the Khurana family are torn apart

Maan was clearly overwhelmed and sought Geet's advice

not surprised with Geet's response

Maan's confusion was justified

finally she revealed her identity

Maan's reaction was anticipated

at least he apologised

however Geet was angry

her pain was understandable

so Maan attempted to explain

Geet had a valid point

she was direct that she destroyed the Khurana family

as you sow, so shall you reap

Maan was indeed shocked

Maan was certainly unaware what his parents did

feeling for Maan

he genuinely loved Geet

perhaps Geet ought to not toyed with Maan's feelings to get justice

she could have done it another way

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

despite everything, he still loves her

his question to Geet was reasonable

her silence said it all

she was hurt for this to Maan

she lost her heart to Maan

Chapter 13

as you set out do, Geet destroyed the Khuranas

she got her justice

however at what price

she was shocked that Maan confessed his crime

he was awaiting trial

of cos she was relieved and at the same time felt pain

it was truly a bittersweet moment

she was indeed happy for her parents and Meera and sad for Maan

at least she realised that Maan spent years atoning for the sin he couldn't undo

the guilt never left Maan

now the once powerful Khurana family was ruined and shattered

all thanks to Geet's machinations

upset that Maan's parents fled abroad without thinking of him

finally Geet's parents returned

as expected Geet told them everything

their reaction was reasonable

they felt that they left Geet down

glad that Handas got closure

feeling for Maan.....

he is not a bad person

his thoughts were understandable

she came into his lifelike a beautiful dream and left him distraught questioning everything

he loves Geet so much

he clearly feels that he deserves what his happenings

hate his family for ruining his life

good that Maan understood the depth of his sins

if only his parents allowed him to take responsibility

not surprised that Geet cannot help but think of Maan

she did fall for Maan....

sad that Geet let her quest for revenge take over her life

in all this Geet lost the light and love

alas Maan bought some feeling in her

pleased that Geet opened up to her mom about Maan and her feelings

agree with Rano that love can just happen

Geet's question was justified

Rano was correct that Geet should what is right for herself

Geet breaking down was necessary

Rano was right that it was time for Geet let go for herself

great that Geet wants to move forward

what is in store for Geet and Maan??

thanks for sharing this amazing realistic story with us

enjoyed reading this story

it was an emotional rollercoaster and had me feeling for both Maan and Geet

hope you do decided to write the second part

appreciate your time, effort and hard work

Just finished reading all the parts in one go and I must admit it was like watching a movie!

There were conflicting emotions like I knew Maan was guilty but his love for Geet was genuine and I felt the pain.

It is a story and something like this would rarely happen but this climax will surely be playing in my mind for longer

Prologue

Geet is avenging her sister's death. Who was behind it and why?

chapter 1

Maan caused the accident but his parents whisked him away from the scene.

chapter 2

The family buried the evidence and offered money to make the problem go away. No regard for a life lost.

chapter 3

The revenge is on. Maan looks like he still regrets his actions but she doesn't know that.

chapter 4

She is getting closer to her target. Soon she will face the parents who covered up for their son.