MG FF- Silent Whisper- Part 28, Pg 106, Sept 09 - Page 22

Wonderful update.

Maan and geet started living together in the same house but not crossing their paths and are busy with their own lives whereas all the staff became fond of maan but geet is busy on protecting and building the empire.

Looking forward for the story.

Originally posted by: tellyme

thank you dear

where’s the pic ??

oops forgot to upload dear 😊 next time sure 😄

Amazing update.

Maan n geet stay at same house but never cross d path with each other.

In house staff is very much fond of maan as he helps them n their children also.

In community females r attractive with maan because of his physic n his helping nature.

He guides staff in house.

Staff cannot listen against him from geet also.

Geet is curious to kwn abt maan n his nature as he never crossed her till now.

What is d maan dream that he is very much busy for that.

Now that geet parents r going to visit them then something will change in the relationship I think.

Wonderful update…loved the way maan appreciate Geet hard work..slowly slowly he start to realise Geet lifestyle…love the maan nature how he treat the peoples..I hope soon Geet also realise the real maan is soo different then the image she is making in her mind.

Before I hit off with this story,

First of All, Welcome back and thanks a million for continuing your awesome Maaneet stories.

Hope you are doing well. Thank you for the notifying PM - chapter 4. I did catch up but as usual late (being late is my character trait by now lmao)

So, finally, my distracted ass read all the parts. A fine concept, brilliantly crafted so far.

Chapter 1 and 2 focuses on their basic background. Geet is this youth star, who is the lone heir of her father's empire. She is trying her best to save it from the vultures. This must have driven her to the path of being way too materialized in the sense that she has grown quite calculative. But she ain't fooling me.

What I sense is that's just a facade and deep down there is still a naive innocent girl who wishes to be swept in love! Because that's what her condition showed. How? Let me explain. On one side she is not denying her parents regarding getting married but then putting forth the irrational conditions thinking it will be impossible to find someone like that. Shows there is some incoherent thought process is going on inside her. She must be stressed. And when dealing with pressure at young age people tend to mask their emotions. More so that others can't take advantage of it.

So far, sensing that it's sort of going to be Maan and Geet's core character switch. With one slight change. As Maan however is not bubbly or naive like the OG show's version of Geet Handa.

Now about Geet's conditions, it's like ordering food from a restaurant, Bhaiya samose ke sath thoda aur chatni dena, Bacon & cheddar burger with extra cheese!

She wants brains? How about deal with his heart instead!
She wants a puppet? Soon seems will be shackled by her own emotions. Can't wait to see how that happens. It's always these type of concepts that are intriguing to me.

Coming to Maan, biochemical? That's a rare one. Just as Geet demanded, brains! So he is a double Ph.D. in biochemistry. Though there is no CS (or if there is I must have missed), Maan must be around at least 32 or more to obtain that double PhD. That tells me he is mature. Now he is pursuing MBA, guess to enhance his resume even more. (Me being a chronic class bunker and queen of procrastination be like my dude please mera wala bhi tum padhlo, hats off to his patience level, I can't😅😂)
With his expertise, I would think he would have better opportunities in research centers in India or be settled abroad, or perhaps that's on the way in the future. The salary of such a skilled genius is quite a lot. But as the sole breadwinner in the family, it's understandably very hard for Maan and quite not enough.

Handas must have been good with their pursuance that Maan's family have agreed for this transactional less of a marriage settlement. But why Maan agreed that's somewhat bleak. Was he in that bad of a situation financially to be coerced into this marriage. But as a nerdy genius character romance/ love/ having a family must not have been a sheer priority for him. The way I see it, he sort of decided to sacrifice these in terms of the betterment of his family. Pretty sure to obtain not one but two PhDs in the field of living organisms he barely had time to think about himself. I would be happy if he has hair left on his scalp with all that studying.

But Miss Geet, now MRS Maan Khurana thinks her father must have bought him, dolled him up for her! 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ Gurrlll say what!!??
There are already times I wanted to teleport inside the ff and tell her that's not how it works and this has been every time when she thinks Maan was being bought by Mr Handa!

She did find him attractive though. His heart didn't flutter any less, however, they decided to bury their clandestine thoughts right then and there.

Lawd! Not me screaming at both of these airheads to persist the glance in a prolonged stare! 😆 Thoda aur dekh lete (baat bhi ho sakti thi ) toh kiya jata dono ka?

After the marriage, Maan has shifted to Geet's luxurious penthouse! Oh boy, that house is gorgeous!

The fourth chapter is not a drag. I personally feel slow updates are essential to build up the story. Whilst this was far from a slow update, rather a super fast forwarded one which is showing the turns of events over the course of 4 months that have transpired. I like Mina. As an observer of her boss's life I guess we readers sort of fit into Mina's place quite oddly? You get what I mean? Of course, Maan Singh Khurana ho and fanclub na ho aisa ho sakta hain? Biggest fan is still waiting to be enlisted though *cough cough* *Geet in the house* *cough cough*

Both of Maaneet so far acting up very practical but looks like the "Silent Whispers" of love emotions/ chemical reactions in the brains whatever one may call it soon is about to erupt.

Going by the story title, it's mostly from the side where the reluctance has originated. Thus, I am waiting for Geet to fall in love with Maan. If Maan is the first initiator that's fine too. I know we can demand a lot of things, this and that but a lot of things don't always go just as the author might plan to curve through the story so either way it's totally going to be worth it, at least for me. (I was writing on a similar concept and well it got so fast despite me planning it a bit differently. And there are stories which I want to fast forward but then it requires the gradual process, or completely veering somewhere else depending on mood lol.)

Let's see how you have planned to bloom that heart inside Geet which craves as much as love Maan has to offer which he isn't aware of and vice versa. And the journey of him being the shield who will provide comfort and a sense of sanctuary to her, that she is not alone on the battlefield of saving the empire of her father.

Phew, even though late but done with the overview for all 4 parts, hope it's not too long (the next ones might be brief just this one tried to convey the writers' pov as you wanted. I anyway rarely react to new stories due to my schedule and short attention span, however, if I do, I've never given a summary and prefer to make an insightful overview. So bear with me.)
The way it's written that's easy to connect. Though still now Maaneet scenes have not taken place but I can understand you are creating the atmosphere for it. This is a beautiful trick to leave us hanging for more. 👏 You are skillfully crafting it in a way that one lingers for more, at least I did. With each chapter, it's getting better. The anticipation increases. Will wait for chapter 5 and maaneet interactions.

Thank you for sharing this amazing maaneet story. Keep spreading the magic. 💖🥰🤗

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Before I hit off with this story,

First of All, Welcome back and thanks a million for continuing your awesome Maaneet stories.

Hope you are doing well. Thank you for the notifying PM - chapter 4. I did catch up but as usual late (being late is my character trait by now lmao)

So, finally, my distracted ass read all the parts. A fine concept, brilliantly crafted so far.

Chapter 1 and 2 focuses on their basic background. Geet is this youth star, who is the lone heir of her father's empire. She is trying her best to save it from the vultures. This must have driven her to the path of being way too materialized in the sense that she has grown quite calculative. But she ain't fooling me.

What I sense is that's just a facade and deep down there is still a naive innocent girl who wishes to be swept in love! Because that's what her condition showed. How? Let me explain. On one side she is not denying her parents regarding getting married but then putting forth the irrational conditions thinking it will be impossible to find someone like that. Shows there is some incoherent thought process is going on inside her. She must be stressed. And when dealing with pressure at young age people tend to mask their emotions. More so that others can't take advantage of it.

So far, sensing that it's sort of going to be Maan and Geet's core character switch. With one slight change. As Maan however is not bubbly or naive like the OG show's version of Geet Handa.

Now about Geet's conditions, it's like ordering food from a restaurant, Bhaiya samose ke sath thoda aur chatni dena, Bacon & cheddar burger with extra cheese!

She wants brains? How about deal with his heart instead!
She wants a puppet? Soon seems will be shackled by her own emotions. Can't wait to see how that happens. It's always these type of concepts that are intriguing to me.

Coming to Maan, biochemical? That's a rare one. Just as Geet demanded, brains! So he is a double Ph.D. in biochemistry. Though there is no CS (or if there is I must have missed), Maan must be around at least 32 or more to obtain that double PhD. That tells me he is mature. Now he is pursuing MBA, guess to enhance his resume even more. (Me being a chronic class bunker and queen of procrastination be like my dude please mera wala bhi tum padhlo, hats off to his patience level, I can't😅😂)
With his expertise, I would think he would have better opportunities in research centers in India or be settled abroad, or perhaps that's on the way in the future. The salary of such a skilled genius is quite a lot. But as the sole breadwinner in the family, it's understandably very hard for Maan and quite not enough.

Handas must have been good with their pursuance that Maan's family have agreed for this transactional less of a marriage settlement. But why Maan agreed that's somewhat bleak. Was he in that bad of a situation financially to be coerced into this marriage. But as a nerdy genius character romance/ love/ having a family must not have been a sheer priority for him. The way I see it, he sort of decided to sacrifice these in terms of the betterment of his family. Pretty sure to obtain not one but two PhDs in the field of living organisms he barely had time to think about himself. I would be happy if he has hair left on his scalp with all that studying.

But Miss Geet, now MRS Maan Khurana thinks her father must have bought him, dolled him up for her! 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ Gurrlll say what!!??
There are already times I wanted to teleport inside the ff and tell her that's not how it works and this has been every time when she thinks Maan was being bought by Mr Handa!

She did find him attractive though. His heart didn't flutter any less, however, they decided to bury their clandestine thoughts right then and there.

Lawd! Not me screaming at both of these airheads to persist the glance in a prolonged stare! 😆 Thoda aur dekh lete (baat bhi ho sakti thi ) toh kiya jata dono ka?

After the marriage, Maan has shifted to Geet's luxurious penthouse! Oh boy, that house is gorgeous!

The fourth chapter is not a drag. I personally feel slow updates are essential to build up the story. Whilst this was far from a slow update, rather a super fast forwarded one which is showing the turns of events over the course of 4 months that have transpired. I like Mina. As an observer of her boss's life I guess we readers sort of fit into Mina's place quite oddly? You get what I mean? Of course, Maan Singh Khurana ho and fanclub na ho aisa ho sakta hain? Biggest fan is still waiting to be enlisted though *cough cough* *Geet in the house* *cough cough*

Both of Maaneet so far acting up very practical but looks like the "Silent Whispers" of love emotions/ chemical reactions in the brains whatever one may call it soon is about to erupt.

Going by the story title, it's mostly from the side where the reluctance has originated. Thus, I am waiting for Geet to fall in love with Maan. If Maan is the first initiator that's fine too. I know we can demand a lot of things, this and that but a lot of things don't always go just as the author might plan to curve through the story so either way it's totally going to be worth it, at least for me. (I was writing on a similar concept and well it got so fast despite me planning it a bit differently. And there are stories which I want to fast forward but then it requires the gradual process, or completely veering somewhere else depending on mood lol.)

Let's see how you have planned to bloom that heart inside Geet which craves as much as love Maan has to offer which he isn't aware of and vice versa. And the journey of him being the shield who will provide comfort and a sense of sanctuary to her, that she is not alone on the battlefield of saving the empire of her father.

Phew, even though late but done with the overview for all 4 parts, hope it's not too long (the next ones might be brief just this one tried to convey the writers' pov as you wanted. I anyway rarely react to new stories due to my schedule and short attention span, however, if I do, I've never given a summary and prefer to make an insightful overview. So bear with me.)
The way it's written that's easy to connect. Though still now Maaneet scenes have not taken place but I can understand you are creating the atmosphere for it. This is a beautiful trick to leave us hanging for more. 👏 You are skillfully crafting it in a way that one lingers for more, at least I did. With each chapter, it's getting better. The anticipation increases. Will wait for chapter 5 and maaneet interactions.

Thank you for sharing this amazing maaneet story. Keep spreading the magic. 💖🥰🤗

I never get bored by long comment, in fact everyone who writes big comment on my thread with insightful review should be sure that I read their comment multiple times as such comments make me see my update from readers perspective.

Now coming to your comment -

@pink - You will soon meet her. Of course she has saved this side of her for our MSK

@blue - naive Maan, you have it in abundance in its prequel - Roothe Piya. It is all about how she took away his innocent. In this one he is anything but innocent.

@purple - I generally do not give character sketch. I like when my readers uncover my characters on their own and with their own perspective. like you rightly guess Maan is in early thirties - I have kept him 30-31 ish.

@yellow - Bal bache hain because one, I cannot afford to play around with MSK physical personality. Sari story ek taraf, MSK ka physical appearance ek taraf for me

Second he is very particular about his health.

Now onto why Maan agreed - it is very simple, he was emotionally blackmailed by his mother and she had been completely floored by an industrialist seeing such value in her son who everyone else thinks boring. He does not have any love interest and not any solid reason to deny. exact case of arrange marriage. He want them to stop pestering him so he can focus on his work.

Rest all your wish list, it will be fulfilled. Hope you like the way it comes out.

Take care

any chance of getting update here ?

Awwww totally totally loved it and I’m so happy after this update!! It looks so positive everything in this.. wow thanks for the hint last time that it could be Geet falling for him and not the other way around!!!! I can totally see wht you meant. How tables turned!! Geet’s parents visit was the beginning of it. Them telling her she has to know him only then will realize what kind of person he is, and Maan is so upset on them.. he is directly taunting them it was kind of cute and funny the way he is using sarcasm throughout the way he was taunting his sasur was fun! But man’s got a point. And her dad is so sure that once Geet knows him she will definitely fall in love with him, so he confidently brought that in front of Maan!

And next was Geet discovering a lot of things about Maan.. one by one a lot of things got clear to her and she realised she judged him very wrongly.. if this was only by few things she saw and understood abt him, she will be a gone case when she probably spends time with him! I loved the way they spoke on phone. And Maan, he dropped a few hints here and there that he isn’t very uninterested in her… like saying he didn’t commit to not keeping tabs on her, or saying that he married her so will be there when she needs him. She didn’t understand that now but but later this may matter a lot to her… Anyway I’m too eager for their proper meeting this time.. waiting to see how it goes and can already see her getting attracted to him. Loved the update. And one very nice thing is, in this Geet is not a brat. She may have some wrong judgements abt people but she’s not a morally wrong person or anything like in Roothe Piya.. the way she scolded the servants for not taking care of Maan or when she felt that she ought to take care of his travel coz he’s travelling for her.. tells that she’s not some negative character type. Please update soonest and also get well soon Before that

Great and fantastic update

I really loved it

Not surprised how geet welcomed her family well then her family know that maan and geet haven't yet started their married life rano even said to geet her maid know more about maan hubby than her .

When mohinder reached to talk to maan even maan do not talk straight mouth that made Mohinder even see the mistake that was made of marrying his daughter to this man but maan is the best for geet as when she will face hurdle in future he would be there for sure for her

Now the invitation is here by geet s cousin who were looking for one chance to prove geet s marriage fake so geet put her ego aside and reached maan s room to talk to him and then she saw his room that shows how simple man he is and at the end she named maan as proper itv bahu wah !! Geet called him and maan have saved her number as highness 🤓😁🤣🤣🤣 well then geet wants maan to be here and there is annie birthday maan after taunting her enough agree to come but on being offered for booking of business class airplane tickets he completed showed he dont need that well now there is some ticklish feeling to know her husband and now this party seems only excuse she wants to know more about him

Cant wait for another update now 😭😭😭😭😭😭😜😜😜😜