MG FF - Mujhse Shadhi Karoge? Updt pt 87 pg 97 Oct 10 - Page 81

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part – 67

It’s the D-Day….

Tara and Lucky are a little nervous…

But Geet is pretty confident…

One by one all the jodis arrive and are ready for their one last rehearsal…

Everyone’s done with their practice and are ready to rock the party….

Even the anonymous well wishers from the Darma Productions have also confirmed their presence….

Everything is on the roll…

But there is a small problem…

The person who is to be Pari’s partner and so called boyfriend is missing…

Pari keeps trying to contact him but there is no response…

Pari panics as this would alert Tara and it might not be possible to get near Vicky…

Geet is least bothered…

Lucky: Geet, how can you be so indifferent? We are worried that we might not be able to reach Vicky as we would like to, forget about getting him back from the clutches of that Tara

Geet: why are you worried about what will happen now itself?

Lucky: Pari’s partner is not coming

Geet: so what? There are a lot of others who could potentially be Pari’s boyfriend, or maybe you could take that part

Lucky: what? Tara will never believe that I am Pari’s boyfriend

Geet: veerji, it’s a theme party and everyone will be playing some role, it will noy be that easy to recognize you

Lucky: whatever, I just want Vicky to be saved

Pari: he will be, I know that everything will go as per Geet’s plans, I still believe that goodness wins in the end, Geet will succeed for her noble intentions

Geet: see, that’s the spirit, let’s do it

Just then there is a new guest at the door ..

Lucky goes to welcome …

Lucky thinks that it’s the man from Darma Productions…

Lucky: welcome sir, we are really honoured to have you here, thanks for coming

Pari: who is it Vicky?

Lucky: it’s him, this is surely our lucky day, sir, you look like a Hero yourself, you should try acting

Pari too acknowledges Lucky’s words… for once Lucky is right..

Pari: Lucky, then there would be no chance for others , welcome sir, it’s a great pleasure to have you here, these guys are really working hard and they are very talented, I bet you will not be disappointed, you will find some real gems here

Lucky: Geet, Geet, where are you?

Geet comes running….

Geet: veerji, why are you shouting? Please let me do my job, it’s already late

Geet is looking at Lucky and heading blindly towards the guest…

Lucky: Geet, look out

Geet comes and straight away bumps into the gentleman…

That gentleman is not surprised…

Pari is also shocked…

But he is not upset at all… thank God for that…

Why would he be? After all no one knows Geet better than him…

He has caught Geet and is holding her in his arms safely…

Geet is looking into his eyes and is lost in them…

Lucky: Geet, are you alright?

Pari: Geet, Geet

Geet is not ready to take her eyes off… she can’t believe that he is here….

Geet then realizes the danger…

Geet: what are you doing here Maan? How do you know that I am here?

Pari and Lucky are puzzled… Geet knows everyone….

Maan: what are you doing here Geet? First tell me why you lied to me?

Geet: because I am the director you know

Maan turns towards Pari and Lucky….

Maan: yes, you are, but you should not hide a part of the script from your actors like this madam

Lucky: director?

Pari: what?

Geet gets nervous ..

Pari and Lucky can’t believe that someone could upset Geet Handa…

Geet: this is not about you Maan

Maan: but I am also a part of it, you need to get my approval Geet

Maan looks serious now… he doesn’t want Geet to do anything stupid again….

Geet: but Maan

Maan: will someone tell me what’s going on here?

Maan is staring Geet only as he looks upset and angry…

Pari and Lucky doesn’t understand anything…

Geet: I will explain, come with me

Geet catches hold of Maan’s hands and takes him in…

Geet: Maan, there is no time for any argument, I just want you to give me one last chance to get bro back, you just wait and watch

Maan: I can’t Geet, after knowing you so well I can’t take any more risks, do you understand?

Geet: I knew you would be upset, that’s why I didn’t even tell Annie, and I left her safe and sound at home itself, them why do you bother Maan ?

Geet is looking through Maan’s eyes while asking this question, she wants to know that he has come for her….

Maan: because it’s about Annie’s life Geet, I don’t want anything unfortunate to happen to Vicky, I have promised Annie to get back her happiness Geet

Geet is disappointed and angry… she knows that somewhere deep down his heart there is a part that wants to beat for Geet, only Geet… but this man won’t accept that easily…. Haina?

Geet: I am also here for Annie only

Maan: what are you going to do this time Geet? Get everyone into trouble unnecessarily?

Geet: I know what I am doing Maan, you please stay away from this

Geet warns him and tries to leave in anger….

Maan stops her….

Maan: I can’t let you do whatever you want Geet, I have to know what’s all this about, I will let you proceed only if I am convinced Geet

Geet: Maan, this is not about business, this is not even reality, this is the Dreamland, everything is fair here, you won’t understand

Maan: ok, but I will also be a part of it, I can’t stand there and watch everything with folded hands Geet

Geet: ok, this is what is going to happen

Geet narrates everything to Maan…

Maan: I am ready to do this just for Annie and Riya, else I would never be able to accept such things

Maan and Geet go back to the hall where Pari and Lucky are waiting impatiently…

Pari: Geet, is everything ok?

Geet: it’s fine Pari

Maan: I came to know that you need a boyfriend, this is Maan Singh Khurana, can I be your boyfriend?

Pari likes Maan…. Who will say no to the MSK?

Pari: sure

Pari pinches herself…

Pari: is this a dream? It’s a dream come true for Pari

Pari lends her hand and Maan takes it….

Geet is feeling helpless and jealous…

Geet: but Maan, what if bro recognizes you

Maan: Geet, better hope that he recognizes you in the first place

Geet: Maaaan

Maan is busy taking dancing lessons from Pari…. .

Geet is burning like a volcano…

Lucky is confused as to what’s happening….

Lucky: Geet, who is he?

Maan: I am Maan

Pari: Maan Singh Khurana

Geet leaves angrily from there….

As the time passes, everyone is trying to get into their characters…

There comes Lucky, as Rahul, in that blue-green t-shirt of Rahul…

Geet looks gorgeous as Anjali, in that sexy saree ….

Maan is Sanjay, dashing as always..

Pari is Kalpana, looking very beautiful and sizzling…

The party begins with a roar as the chief guests arrive from Darma Productions….

But Geet is looking for Vicky…

Why hasn’t Tara come yet?

Will she come with Vicky?

Geet keeps looking at the entrance itself and Maan too wants Geet to succeed…

Maan is also waiting for Vicky ..

Pari comes to Maan…

Pari: let’s go Mr.Sanjay Singhania

Maan goes with Pari as Geet watches them…

Geet and Lucky look funny together…. .

Geet is watching Maan and Maan only…

Maan too knows that…. Maan is keeping a watch on Geet, but just to ensure that nothing goes wrong due to her craziness….

Pari: Maan, you really are looking like Sanjay Singhania

Maan: I am also a business man

Pari: you should be acting Maan, you will be a instant hit with those killer looks

Maan: I already am acting

Pari: what?

Maan: yes, I am acting in Geet’s script

Pari: you mean this? I meant for real, you are hero material

Geet can hear their conversation clearly as they are standing next to each other….

Geet should have scripted to include Maan as her partner…

Haina?

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Posted: 1 years ago

thanks for the pm and update


Part 67

not surprised that Maan came there

great that he confronted Geet

now Maan becomes involved

of cos Geet is jealous seeing Maan with Pari


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

67

lucy is afraid but pari is positively supporting geet

geet's confidence shake seeing maan in party

geet is jealous see pari with maan


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Posted: 1 years ago

Just finishing read your lovely Ff. Can’t wait for the update

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Posted: 1 years ago

maan toh will never change................


nice update..........

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 67


Fascinating Update


Maan has also arrived but now he is there

to welcome Vicky

hope Tara comes with Vicky this time

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Part – 68

And the party is rocking….

Everyone is sinking in their respective characters….

The chief guests themselves have arrived in characters from vintage Bollywood…..

Raja and Bobby ….

But this Raja is more interested in Ms. Anjali, aka Geet while our Bobby darling is lattu over Rahul aka Lucky….

All are shaking their legs on the dance floor….

Pari is mesmerized while she dances like a puppet in MSK’s arms….

Maan looks for Geet, he could only find Lucky dancing with Bobby, Lucky can’t believe his luck, he is not going to mess this time, he knows that this is his last chance to get into the film industry….

He has forgot about Vicky and even Geet….

Maan is shocked to see Geet missing….

Where is that stupid girl? Did she go to find Tara and Vicky?

Maan gets frustrated, when will this girl learn to think before doing anything?

She should at least discuss with Maan before getting herself into trouble….

That way at least Maan will be prepared to handle any danger that comes their way, this girl is really a “ Chalti phirti disaster “…

Maan excuses and goes in search of Geet….

Geet is waiting in the lobby for her bro….

Geet had so much confidence that Tara will definitely come along with her bro…

If only Geet sees Vicky once, she will grab that opportunity and save him from that devil…..

Geet is even ready to face Tara one on one, knock her out with a few boxing punches that she learnt from none other than MSK, and kidnap Vicky….

Geet is all ready waiting to pounce on that devil like a prowling Tigress, if Tara gets into the hands of Geet tonight then there is no escape for her….

And the moment has come for which Geet has been working for, Tara enters with Vicky…

Geet couldn’t believe that for a moment, the she realizes that it’s really her bro, Vicky, Geet couldn’t stop herself from running towards him….

Tara has arrived, but her wicked brain is still throwing cautions inside, she has her eyes firmly on Vicky and she scans the place for any kind of deception….

Geet has forgot everything and is walking in a hurry to meet her brother finally…

Just as Geet is about to enter Tara’s sight, she is being pulled to the sides by the strong hands of our MSK…

Maan pulls her aside and pins her to the wall as he closes her mouth with his hands before she could scream and grab the attention of that devil….

Geet has turned mad about the missed chance to get a hold of her bro, she gets angry at the culprit who spoiled her plans at the wrong moment….

If only this fool didn’t stop Geet, Vicky would have been saved by this time… haina?

Geet tries to hit the villain who is responsible for the anti-climax and her pea brain couldn’t process anything in her wildness….

Maan catches hold of her hands in one hand while still keeping her mouth shut with the other….

Maan gets angry….

Maan: what are you doing Geet? Just stop it Geet

Geet freezes hearing that voice, she then slowly opens her eyes wide and looks at the villain…

It’s MSK, but why did he stop her?

Geet tries to speak something….

Maan: Geet, what were you trying to do? If Tara had seen you then she would have called her back-up gang and disappeared with Vicky, do you think she is also a fool like you?

Maan knows this devil lady, he had already met her once when Geet and Annie came to rescue Vicky for the first time….

This woman is like the lady don, she is part of the drug network and has her ways in the police department too….

With the snap of her fingers she could take control of any situation with her underworld connection…

She has a invisible secure network working for her…..

Maan gathered all the information about this Tara once Geet came up with her proposal to save Annie’s life, Maan got into action then itself, he was preparing for the war on his own style while Geet was trying her tricks out separately….

Now, they have to work in tandem to win …..

Geet keeps watching Maan….

Maan: Geet, you have been patient for so long, you have to wait for sometime more, just keep calm and silently watch the enemies moves before attacking

Geet: I was waiting for bro, he is here Maan, didn’t you see him? Vicky is here Maan, how can you act as if you haven’t seen him? Had Annie been here, would she also stand and watch him from the hiding like you Maan? I didn’t know that you were a coward like this, if I still keep waiting then he will be gone forever Maan

Geet gets emotional…. But now is not the time to get weak, to let your emotions defeat yourselves…

Maan shakes Geet by grabbing her shoulders….

Maan: Geet, come out of your reel world, this is the real world, you have no control over what happens in real world like you do in the reel world Geet, here you have to be vigil and read the situation before making any moves Geet

Maan tries to explain Geet about how cautions they have to be while handling that Tara….

Maan tells about what he has found out about Tara and how dangerous she could be…

She would not even spare Vicky of she thinks that her life is in danger…

Geet slowly understands the situation….

Geet: but Maan, we have to do something before it’s too late

Geet is scared of losing her brother….

Geet looks very upset and is feeling helpless…. She is desperate to save Vicky tonight…

She has promised Annie, she has promised Riya…. Geet can’t lose at any cost this time… haina?

Geet: I can’t lose Maan, what will I saw Annie if I did, how will I answer Riya’s que8when she finds out about how her Geet let her down

Maan: Geet, what are you talking about? How could you even think about losing? You will never lose until MSK is with you, I will never let you lose, this is not just your battle Geet, this is our battle now

Geet falls in Maan’s arms and hugs him tight ..

Geet: I know Maan , you will always be there for me

Maan: Haan Geet, MSK can’t see Geet like this, I promise you Geet, everything will be alright, I will not let your belief in life fail, MSK might have failed terribly in Life, but Geet Handa can never fail, I know that, haan, Geet, you will win

Geet: thanks Maan

Maan: just stay with me Geet, don’t even try to get away from my sight, do you understand?

Geet: ok Maan

Maan and Geet go back to the party hall….

Tara is yet to believe what she is seeing…

Vicky is lost in his own world…

Pari: halo Tara, I am so happy that you made it to the party, and I assure you that you won’t be disappointed

Tara: I should say that this is some party, many congrats for your good work, I just came to know that this party is the talk of the town, and you have special guests I believe

Pari : you heard it right, let me take the pleasure to introduce you to the chief guests, you might also know 4hat they are from the K-production house, I mean the Dharma productions

Tara: hmmm, I know, I must say that you are really lucky to have got this new boyfriend, I can’t wait to see him, where is he? Do we have the privilege to meet HIM?

Tara really wants to know this man, she has to get direct access to him somehow….

That is actually her mission to have come to this party….

Pari: he is indeed, just a minute

Pari looks for Maan…

Geet and Maan just come….

Pari: so here you are, I want you to meet a friend of mine, you will be happy to meet her

Pari winks….

Geet: Geet only heard the word “her”…

Geet holds Maan’s hand stronger…

Maan: it will be my pleasure to meet your friend Pari

Geet: Maaaan?

Maan: you just go and tell her that I will be there in a minute

Pari: ok, but it’s very important, you wouldn’t want to miss her

Maan: just give me a second

Pari leaves….

Maan looks at Geet who is fuming, this man is a hypocrite, he acts as if he is a saint but runs after every girl except me, haina babaji? Pehle Pari, and now God only knows who that other specimen is …..

Geet: you are not going anywhere Maan, you promised to be with me remember?

Maan: but, she must be someone special, or Pari wouldn’t insist that much

Geet: someone special, all are special but for Geet, babaji, are you seeing all this? You keep a watch on him, he is mine, and mine only, you know that na?

Geet is praying to her babaji, Maan couldn’t hear her clearly…

But he loves all her dramatic expressions….

Maan calls Lucky…. .

Maan: Geet, be careful, stay with Lucky, don’t try your direction skills here, understand?

Geet: I have lost control of everything, it looks hopeless for Director Geet

Geet is pointing towards MSK….

Maan smiles…: Lucky, keep an eye on her, don’t let her do anything till I come back

Lucky is confused…. What could be possibility do?

Geet Handa never listens to anyone, not even this man who looks like a dictator himself….

Maan goes to meet Pari and her new friend…

Geet won’t let him do whatever he wants, she will show him that she is still the director as far as MSK is concerned, haina?

What will Geet do now?

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 68

well Geet was behaving rashly

Glad that Maan stopped Geet

she was being emotional

Geet certainly underestimated Tara

Maan was correct

liked that Maan is aware of Tara and her contacts

pleased that Maan assured Geet

Geet needs to be patient


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

68

geet become emotional seeing her brother but maan stop her in time to save future failure

maan share everything about tara n her underworld connection n took everything in his hand

hope geet follow maan n viky will be back in family

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Posted: 1 years ago

part 66

Geet is one positive person. Like Pari says, it rubs off on people.

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