MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 104

We absolutely adore this story. Yes we might differ in our views but still love the story. Do please present it as you want. We will enjoy but still crib about certain characters. Ha ha Lol!!!

I'm looking forward to see what you

have installed for Maan and Geet

together as a unit

Follow your flow dear.. You are the writer who make the character comes alive & create a beautiful story. Like real life no one perfect n every one have their own fault.same like in this story where Dadi choose Anne when they were small & let maan live with others, here Geet been pampered by their parents & maan till she cant differentiate which is right & wrong.She was a child, child is like a clay & they will form as how we mold. Lastly maan, because he accept everything without any complain because of his possessiveness, love for geet..Pls cont soon dear.

Thanks for the update..

This would be a special update close to my heart.. At one point, Geet had to come clean. All the past couldn't be hidden for long. Keeping it within would have made Geet guilt trodden for all the hurt, humiliation Maan had to go through...

Am so glad this has been brought out before Dadima as she would be wise and kind enough to decide on this...

She knows Maan loves Geet beyond all understanding and will not consider the hurt as a big issue. But Dadima being a third person (also a rationale reader in me) was not agreeing to this kind of love where respect and dignity is taken for a toss just because Geet was a child...

Wonder what will be Maan's reaction when he knows the conditions imposed on Geet and the Handas??

I prefer it should be after Geet has acted on all these conditions.. Maza aayega yeh dekhne mein!!!

With regards to Annie, I feel sorry for her. But Maan is her biggest rock pillar and guide, ready to back in all situations.. Hoping she overcomes this phase soon...

Thanks Anu... Enjoying the drama going on...

Hey I’m continuing my comment here coz it won’t allow me to comment in FF coz of length😒😒

Ok so there’s a Telugu movie called Pramante Idera. In that the hero falls in love with a girl but his mum is against it coz she made a promise to her bro that she’d get her son married to his daughter. So she outright rejects this girl he loves… then one time she is observing the 2 lovebirds, the girl accidentally closes the door on his finger so it hurts him.. & the girl repeatedly asks him sorry sorry but he says its nothing n brushes it off. Next he leaves the place but the girl puts her finger in the same place & hurts herself the same way & is crying 😢 all this is observed by the mother & she immediately melts.. accepts the girl whole heartedly that noone can love her son this much. This is a beautiful scene I couldn’t find in youtube to share with u.. dadima in this ff is always reminding me of this movie scene.. The girl here is Preity Zinta. I’m thinking something like this will happen that could change dadi’s perception on Geet. My apologies for all this rambling I have to let all this out even if IF objects.. I hope u got the gist of my explanation above 🫣

love the way you proceeding with concept

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Hi Anu... Thanks for the note.

Enjoying reading the story, please continue as you planned

Lovely update

Loved it

Geet told all about maans childhood and how they have treated him ..

Geet doesnot wanna to start a new life with guilt and lie ..

She told all the truth about maans childhood and how they have treated him ..

Dadima s hurt and very angry on them ..

Dadima s harsh on geet and she wanna geet to give all love and happiness to maan ..

Geet need to stop maan from helping them

Continue soon

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Hi Anu

How are you?

will await an update

Hoping for an update

please do try and update