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Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you for updating


Part 42

Intriguing update… dynamically written

so Maan continued telling his and Geet's story

great Maan revealed how he fell for Geet, always spent time with and helped her in her studies

he smartly told dadima and Annie what he wanted them to know

as expected he twisted everything stating how possessive he was of Geet etc

covering the reality how Geet and elders Handas treated him was hidden

good that Maan shifted the story to Rohan

well he knows Annie will be hurt

he was correct that Rohan started his game after Geet came back into Maan's life

wonder how and when Annie met Rohan

not surprised that dadima was keenly observing Geet's expression as Maan was telling their story

of cos Maan does not want to hurt Annie

however she needed to know Rohan's reality

loved how Maan revealed about his enemy and what he did

glad that Maan was direct that Geet made mistakes and tried to rectify it

he also told them how Geet lived in guilt for 8 years

Geet's reaction was justified

ahh Maan did take revenge and told them that his enemy is a drug addict

alas his enemy is targeting his loved one, Annie

Annie was certainly confused

Maan's fears and concern for Annie were reasonable

loved that Annie assures him

nice that dadima chided herself for assuming that Maan will ignore Annie for Geet

finally he tells them that its Rohan

Annie was indeed shocked and hurt

oh so they know each other since the past 6 months

feeling for Annie.....

sad that she was falling for Rohan

hope she gets out of this soon

at least Geet went after Annie

can understand that Annie needed space

hate that dadima blames Geet for Annie's pain

she fails to see that Maan loves Geet so much

Gosh dadima decided to stay the night with Geet while Maan will be there for Annie

Maan was certainly happy assuming that dadima has accepted Geet

Geet was clearly confused with dadima's behavior

wonderful that Maan advised Geet

hmm nothing escapes dadima

dismayed that dadima doubts that Geet is the best for Maan

wish that dadima doubts get cleared

will she confront Geet?


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Great part

Dadima still not convinced by maans way of telling their past

But he managed great with telling Annie

Hope she understands and stands by maan

Wonder how will dadima react to geet once she gets to know from her as coffee and chatting with dadima can go seriously tough for maaneet

Cont soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Amazing update.

Maan told his past filter with lot of information.

Hope is able to able to digest d bitter truth of rohan n forget abt him.

Dadi is sure some part is missing n she wants to kwn that's y she went to geet Apartment.

Hope that geet make well conversation with dadi n dadi is not going to separate maan n geet again after listening to their whole past.

Hope Annie is able to make well after taking elephants truth.

Let c wht happen..

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Posted: 2 years ago

Awesome update

Maan tells the story about him and Geet

But Daadi ma not satisfied

Because her experiences tells her that there is missing something because she keenly observed Geet's reactions

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Posted: 2 years ago

Wah I can already see a future totally hen-pecked husband in Maan😁 I bet he’s going to be one hell of a joru ka ghulam ☺️ can’t wait to see them married tho. The way he totally backed her without giving them a hint of the silly stuff she did was good. But have to admit this Dadi is turning more cunning than I thought huh… I’m shocked to know her real intention is that Maan is going to ignore Annie for his future wife.. so insecure this lady is getting! And no wonder she understood the white lies he’s been telling her in protecting his Geet! I mean whatsoever is her problem?! Maan said so much about Rohan and all she could catch is her granddaughter is indirectly sad coz of Geet! It’s like if you don’t like someone you find reasons to hate/ blame them for every wrong that happens. & what vile plan did she hatch now that she stayed with Geet for the night?! I hope she doesn’t do something silly and separate them further. Something on the lines of saying Maan deserves a better partner might actually affect Geet… this old lady wants her Maan to be enslaved to them for life, and not have a life of his own. So selfish she is. She is unable to digest how important Geet is to him. Eagerly waiting to see what happens next. I hope Annie understands what happened and why. And also hope Maan is smart enough this time as well to understand what Dadi’s intentions are.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Great update

Maan tells abt his past with Geet & her family. He talk very convincingly abt his relationship but somewhere Dadima is not convinced seeing Geet in guilt. Maan tells abt Rohan as he is now using Annie to get even with maan Annie is all upset. And Dadima wants maan to stay with Annie and she wl stay with Geet Dadima has her doubts abt Geet. Maan thinks that Dadima has accepted Geet but I don’t think so. Dadima will tactfully question Geet & let’s see how Geet wl handle the situation

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Posted: 2 years ago

Maan told about the past but glossed over the details about his treatment.

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Dadi is beginning to blame Geet for the misfortune that hit Annie.

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Dadi knows she did not hear the complete story. Geet might spill the beans when they are alone now.

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Posted: 2 years ago

lovely update

Dadi with experience, can guess something is missing from that story n doesn't know with a pang of guilt whether geet will spill it or not..if she spill it how will Dadi react

Annie poor her but this is imp to get this hurt than later feel sorry

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