Wired Hearts (8) Updated Ch:61, Pg:37 |August 9th - Page 23

Please try and update

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Happy Birthday Avi

Hope you have a had a terrific day

Thanks dear I was on vacation and did not get a chance to reply sowie for late response🤗

updated my comment

sorry for delay maarna mat mujhe😆

desperately waiting for an update

eagerly waiting for an update

Please try and update next chapter

Originally posted by: dqno1

Haiye Mari!

What a seeti maar update as a birthday present❤️

I have read and reread so many times now

Your control over words and feelings is exquisite

It felt like a screenplay and I could see the characters and feel their emotions effortlessly

I felt her anger and her sorrow

You have no idea how much these words mean to me coming from someone who has a magic paintbrush in her words and who has the ability to pull people into a different realm just by the power of her words!

For once my fencedweller fell off the fence and her heart was shattered

His love is unfailing though

He came for her

He can't let her go

While Locket Maan was my idea of ideal Maan yours is better, way better Someone who is broken and fixes himself and yet she is in his vicinity always

I beg to differ! Can't surpass TL's Maan in any way! 😃

A magnetic pull that causes him pain and pleasure always

For the first time in the story we get the magic words Maan's POV😳

Haha! This is the 2nd time you got his POV here but I don't blame you for forgetting the 1st one! 😆

She wants to leave town for his sake but he wont let her go

Just a request from someone who wants to stay "wired" don't end it too soon

The end is certainly near but not before giving them (and you all) some well-deserved "shareef" romance 😆

These were my favorite parts as you can imagine, the eternal romantic that I am😃

It just felt natural – like I was meant to love him. (Of course you were☺️ ask us all how we felt)

Sticking an eye on the peephole, I saw that he had not yet disappeared. My heart started pounding against my chest as I shook the stupor off. This was real. He really was at my door.

There stood the man who had robbed me of myself. He had stolen whatever control I had over my heart and mind, of my emotions and actions, of my feelings and senses. ( yes that happened to us too in the white shirt jeep scene when he saves Geet😆 see me mixing up Geets Maan with Wired Maan)

his hand which instantly came up to hold the door in its place when I attempted to shut it. He did not push it open, but firmly held it in place, not letting me close it. (I like how you did that; neither forcing his will on her nor allowing her to shut him out)

THIS! You have captured the essence of Maan here! He has never been one to force anything upon her, but he has always been determined to make his presence known, felt and valued!

“I am done running away from you.” (Sigh! Dhak Dhak!)

It felt like I belonged here, like this was what my arms were made to hold. It felt like home. (At Last👏)

sorry for the late update of my comment

I have been on an adventure which involved travel wedding IPL mangoes and more)

Thanks from the bottom of my heart for remembering my birthday and mking me feel special Mari🤗

Oh wow! Sounds like you had some great fun!

I'm just glad I could save this special chapter to be dedicated to you - the loudest rooter of Maan and the best critique of Geet! 🤗

Originally posted by: ArhamRizwan

Awesome superb uff what should I say extraordinarily beautiful, is the word I will use for what you have written, in my mind and heart I know even these words are not enough to praise but what should I say…..Literally I am crying, felt each and every emotion which you have put in this part…Geet trying not to talk to Maan , Maan being sticked at the door of trying to talk to Geet , Maan baring his heart to Geet , felt the pain and sadness which he felt a decade ago and how he made a facade of hatred around him for Geet to feel the less pain of losing his only love. Will be waiting for next part, do update soon

Thank you so much! Your words mean a lot to me!

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Unbelievable

finally

What an update. Oh man. Cannot still believe he came to her. Knowing she will be locked up and away from everyone

because he himself is hating this seiaration

His words at the end made complete sense. Pushing away the one thing he had dreamtvakwsys of He cannot believe he did that

so glad he finally woke up and came. Amd comfessed

surprised by geets anger initially but understand with her explanation

loved it

So glad confession happened

Now what’s going yo happen with his engagement.

How will his mom sister react

Thank you so much! So glad you loved it!

The engagement scenario is yet to be dealt with. Let's see what happens!

Originally posted by: janu2006

Beautiful part

Loved their talk out

Hope this conversation of their make them see their love and accept the same to fight if any problem vibes

Cont soon

Thank you!

Yup, let's hope they stand tall against all odds together!