CAPTIVE 3 Updated Last Part on Page 34 / 17-7-2022 - Page 29

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Posted: 3 years ago

It was like watching a thrill movie with lots of suspense!! I wasn't expecting the rough and tough man like maan can be blackmail by them. 2 different characters with different personalities, lifestyle, status, living and society come up to meet with each other in what circumstances. Doesn't sounds good but you never know what are meant for you will comes to you no matter what would be the situation.!! Liked the geet character which is strong enough to fight with him!! That's another thing she was not successful to get ride of her kidnapper! So maan is a street fighter and he is living for his grandpa. He is not well. Maan source of income comes from the frights. Seems like he is living his life like hand to mouth! The last scene was unexpected.. I can recognize that it was for someone dear to him that he took this work for kidnapping!! His dadu the way you describe the last lines was my favourite.. Like the way he showed his concern for his grandpa. Waiting for his next move is there something more or just ended here.. I am not able to find reply option in captive one so posting here

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Okay I will share pw of part one

It was like watching a thrill movie with lots of suspense!! I wasn't expecting the rough and tough man like maan can be blackmail by them. 2 different characters with different personalities, lifestyle, status, living and society come up to meet with each other in what circumstances. Doesn't sounds good but you never know what are meant for you will comes to you no matter what would be the situation.!! Liked the geet character which is strong enough to fight with him!! That's another thing she was not successful to get ride of her kidnapper! So maan is a street fighter and he is living for his grandpa. He is not well. Maan source of income comes from the frights. Seems like he is living his life like hand to mouth! The last scene was unexpected.. I can recognize that it was for someone dear to him that he took this work for kidnapping!! His dadu the way you describe the last lines was my favourite.. Like the way he showed his concern for his grandpa waiting for his next move is there something more or just ended here... I am not able to find reply option in captive 1 so posting here

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Posted: 3 years ago

The abductor wants to kill her. Her thought process was same the way I was thinking... I thought it will be kind of kidnapping asking for some money or something else but never thought they are planning to kill her!! Glad maan reached on time and safe her!! It was very strange that she safe maan and cover him up. Look like she is quite impress from him the way he kidnap, find her out and protect her!! I like the way geet directly give credit to maan for saving her and same time felt happy the way she answer the officer back!! She very well know how to use her intelligence!! She is handa's princess. Her father got his life just by her daughter been his side!! Meet her family and Look like that the person who is willing to kill can be from her family!! The last scene ✌ I am sure everyone knows who is the bodyguard !! None other than maan but why will maan accept her offer maybe for his dadu

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 2:

As expected geet want maan to be her body guard!! Very much interesting when he directly reject her offer! Seriously the way he said I don't want any bad thing happened with us because of her!! Like the way how patiently she wait for maan, her anger expression and controlling herself! I loved the way his dadu kissed him 💟Direct Munh Mein hi bol diya vah kya baat hai!! Must appreciate maan the want he is very much straight forward person!! I liked the picture you add on. Felt said for his dadu.. Omg what a emotional scene it was🥺🥺 I could not control my self. He was suffering so hard even in this situation he shout on his doctor then he immediately apologize !! quickly. For the first time you show maan very emotional person for the well being for his grandpa!! No one was able to believe even for a moment I was also like really maan is so soft inside specially for his dadu. The last scene was really very much heartbroken!! His mind was reminding him again and again about geet offer.. I knew it he have to accept the offer but so soon never gave a thought about it! His bad luck he wasn't able to find the card! Oh no 😱 then how he will going to have words with geet? After reading this I am sure when he can go to any length to save his grandpa so he can do anything to give his dadu!!! When he can kidnapped geet and save her because of dadu!! Interesting part was when she was just Remembering the time which was direct contact between their eyes!! I have not noticed geet had such a eye reader women!! Liked the way she took her anger and trying to calm herself!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Pt 3

Impressive!! Full on action sequence!! Just for the well being of his grandpa he blow down honestly speaking the only love ones make you weak!! Apnon ko khone se bhi dar lagta hai!! Maan is on the same boat he can not afford to lose his dadu!! He blow down!! His 1st priority is his grandpa!! Wow what a detail you define about the hospital!! Glad maan reached on time before it was too late!! Now the only hope depend on his dadu for maam and geet!! The way geet was commanding the Dr seems like she was giving a threat or a death sentence that you have to save him no matter what and I don't want any lame excuses!! The power of money! Paise se bhi Upar Ki takat hai Aur vah Khuda Hai! !!! Geet test maan as well and showed to her family why he chose him!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 4

Critical decision taken! Hoping for the best!!!!! Loved the way you defined dadu and maan relationship!! How much he is looking after him since 13 !! Hope against all odds!!! The way you showed maan no one was able to believe that maan is so lost even geet as well!!! His heart is so soft!! Loved the lines you used giving example of his emotions connecting flower!!! Finally the life race win!!! The way he kiss his dadu hand was so sweet innocent and adorable!!!! Even geet was waiting for his dadu well being news!! When he was consoling maan and maan told her the truth still she tired to used smooth with her words liked the way she said positive words in such different situation!!! So maan the bodyguard is here!! I do not get positive vibes with her family.. Look like koi family se hee hai!! , Jo dikhata hai woh hai waisa Hota Nahin Hai Jo Nahin dikhata woh waisa Hota Hai

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Posted: 2 years ago

I liked the way you showed geet entry wow... Full on filmy and elite class thi!! What I liked about this update was you define maan personality that how he is been cage in the Circus for his dadu. The emotional maan scene with dadu always took my heart & it become favourite part of mine!! Attack again 😱 uff what a move maan applied to safeguard them!! His action is truly well trained .. Who doesn't fear anyone not even but his weakness lies in his dadu.. A single stretch can make him kneel down to anyone!! The way maan told the truth and reality check about the shooter!! Seems like it can be her driver, he can be involved. Her brother does not seems to be happy with geet spoiled treatment from their parents.. He is jealous and insecure!!! I am having very strong feelings that the person must be very close with geet who is after geet life!!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Geet is testing maan. Attacked was done by geet herself to know the truth. There is nothing for maan to hide from geet. They both are smart enough to know the truth about the attack. Maan is smart and intelligent he knows very well that what is running behind her mind and he accept the mobile phone from her!! I just loved his attitude when he spoke the truth!!! Just loved the way maan is handling it!! Wow loved his character!! He will surely prove that he has nothing to do with maan.. I have a doubt that it can be from her family.. Look like the attacker is closer with geet..

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 7

My thought process is going to say that geet is going in a wrong direction. I think he isn't the actual culprit. Ufff kya scene thay. Geet na toh bhai puri nude movie hee dekhne let🤣🤣🤣 I can not control myself after reading this update!! How she was able to control her emotional and her dream part was special really can not recognize that actually she was dreaming after watching him in his form definitely aise hee dream aaenge😂😂 again attack but this one is the real one. Geet want to catch her enemy but how and her doubt about maan doesn't give her a favor either!! Well her friend seems to be positive character!! Maan is not happy by being her side specially elite class people.. I really have a very strong sense that the culprit must be from her family how come that they came to know where she is going until there is someone from her side!! Let see what will happened I am sure in her friend house the culprit will find a way to attack her because the attempt are getting fail again and again!!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 8 ...Geet do not have a fun time because the way all the girls were treating her bodyguard she completely hate it.. The way her she was feeling it was completely opposite to her nature and attitude.. Why? Ma'am save the girl he tried to look on and focus that it was a kind of trap I am sure it was for geet!! I liked the way you define how she adopte her grandfather attitude and stubborn!! Loved the way maan is always alerts like a lion

Part 9

What kind of a challenge it went even I was shocked never expected that maam would go like that way ... This is the side effects after seeing him in CCTV 😉😆 the girls don't want him to go... The crowd encourage him n he was no less than oh I don't have words to express!! Uff Kia scene thay..!! Maan tired to knock some sense on her mind.. That he is not the who she is chasing!! He told her the truth!!! She will believe his words?? I really liked the way maan mention about his dadu he can go to any way just to be safeguarde his dadu!! Geet handa princese ego hurt badly.. How she will revover 😆ufff kya kar diya maan ny I was also was ready to believe he actually did it he was removing his pant at the 11th hour she came and took him!! Her friend is right why she felt bad!! They did previously same!! Liked the way she told geet yo

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