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Posted: 3 years ago

Hello Richa

hope that you are feeling much better

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Posted: 3 years ago


PART - 10



Pw sending.... Wait..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part-10

Nice update..

Commented on blog..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Poor girl, still cannot get rid of the past tortures ....she is scared ..does not want to see her family especially her mom and herdad and brother for supporting her mom

how can she come out of it..


yes maan is there but only to a point...unfortunately their backgrounds are so different he cannot be there with all the time...like in the party she just went to....

he wants her well he wants her to take help and she is avoiding it...

maybe now she will hopefully!!!


maan also wants to know what she really feels for him, yes she loves him but to what extyent...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome updatee baby 😃 commented on blog 😃

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Commented on theeee blog baby 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Richa, how are you?

the update is appreciated


Part 10

Captivating update…splendidly written

at least Geet knows Maan is angry

Maan's thoughts are understandable

he accepts that Geet has issues

his concerns are reasonable

of cos he knows her family will never accept him

hmm Geet has no choice but to attend the business party

Gosh she is dressed to impress

she is determined to avoid the Handas

as expected Maan is displeased seeing her outfit

he is indeed possessive

great that she assures him

admire his efforts to distract her

he very well knows what she is going through

liked that she told him he is not her pawn but her knight warrior

well she wants Maan to accompany to the party

sadly its not possible

Man clearly cares for her reputation

however he will be close by

so Geet treats Rudr as a stranger

her anger and comments are justified

hate that he tries to manipulate her

good that she put in his place

Geet is having a difficult time at the party avoiding the Handas

finally she leaves the party

feeling for Geet

oh she wants Maan and is upset seeing him just stand there

not surprised with her outburst

she vents her anger out on Maan

dismayed that he become her punching bag

glad that he understand her mental state

pleased how he handled the situation

he was correct that she was not in senses and he cannot talk to her

loved that he wants Geet to take medical help and heal

hope she heeds his advice

want Geet to get better

he stayed with her until she slept

nice that she apologised in her sleepy state


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet have to face Handa family in party it's business party she can't even ignore

Geet want him in party with him he make her understand he is no match to her both were from different backgrounds

Her family never accept him he knows ppl around them start whispering but he doesn't bother until Geet get effect

Geet try to avoid her parents but they try to come close to to her at last she left and in out house she get some peace but Maan want her to take proper treatment to get rid of her past he can't undo whatever just happened

He taking care of her she's so disturbed after party

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10

thanks a lot for pm n pw

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Geet know maan angry with her

Handa throwing party

Geet want to go there handa official party

Geet ready for party

Seeing geet dress maan asked r u wearing the revealing dress

Maan take her to the party and leave her But geet want to maan join her to party

But maan say no

Geet dad trying to talk to geet

Rudra friend come to talk to her and introduce his son Rahul to geet

Geet mom want to talk to geet

But geet trying to avoid her

Maaneet come to home

Geet drunk she want maan

Maan not obey her

Geet angry with him and slapped him

Maan say geet need medical need

Waiting for next update

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