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Posted: 3 years ago

First read part 8

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan is gutter worm for Geet family and for Geet her mom not even exist

So once and for all Geet should marry Maan and close this topic

Maan too can't see her like this they hurting her not understanding her POV so Geet have to take big decision

What is Maan background y he have only his grandfather

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Maaneet come back

Akash say geet he want to talk to her alone

Geet say maan wait for her in her cabin

Akash say he happy geet got the contract

Akash say geet forgive her mom and leave maan

Geet angry on akash

Geet come to cabin

Seeing geet in pain maan asked wt happen

But geet not say anything

She want to forget all

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part-9

Nice update..

Commented on blog..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 9

Like seriously....... Aakash has the audacity to question geet’s relationship with maan !!!! He is worried about their so called image in society & thinks maan is beneath them ....... a gutter worm 😡

Maan is by any means a far superior human being than any of geet’s family !! Not only did her mother try to murder her but the whole family forgave her like it was nothing & let her re-enter their lives like nothing happened !! Did they even think for one minute the magnitude of the situation!! She did not just commit small little blunder or crime that could be easily forgiven but it was full fledged premeditated attempted murder of her own flesh & blood .... her daughter!!! Don’t get me wrong di I am a very caring & forgiving person but her mother’s actions are unforgivable!!! She should of been punished !!! And by no means been able to re-enter everyone’s lives like nothing ever happened. By allowing her in their lives again , her family just condoned her actions , like trying to murder geet was no big deal !!! 😡

Well that is the message they sent & instead of trying to support geet through this very traumatic & earth shattering situation..... they abandoned her w/o thinking of her emotions & feelings !! Poor geet was & still is so vulnerable with her mom’s betrayal & then her family’s betrayal by supporting her mom..... her whole life was derailed ....... think about it, her mother , her nurturer wanted her dead & her immediate family thinks it is no big deal . What kind of message did that relay to geet ?? That her life is worthless..??.... she has no value ?? ..... no one loves her ???

Where was Aakash & his family when geet attempted suicide ??? Where were they when her world crumbled ??? They are concerned about her now when she is with maan ?? Without this so called gutter worm .... she would not be alive today ...

And now maan once again is comforting a distraught geet ...... he cannot see her in pain ......... their actions speak volumes of what they cannot say ........ they pour out their emotions to each other & comfort one another .

I believe geet’s family will never her Rest In Peace ...,,,,can she marry maan & live separately & run the company w/o their interference???

I apologize di , I get really riled up sometimes when things are unjust ...., I forget it is just a story 😆..... but that is b/c your writing is just that good that I lose myself in your stories

Thank you di 🤗


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 9

Like seriously....... Aakash has the audacity to question geet’s relationship with maan !!!! He is worried about their so called image in society & thinks maan is beneath them ....... a gutter worm 😡

Maan is by any means a far superior human being than any of geet’s family !! Not only did her mother try to murder her but the whole family forgave her like it was nothing & let her re-enter their lives like nothing happened !! Did they even think for one minute the magnitude of the situation!! She did not just commit small little blunder or crime that could be easily forgiven but it was full fledged premeditated attempted murder of her own flesh & blood .... her daughter!!! Don’t get me wrong di I am a very caring & forgiving person but her mother’s actions are unforgivable!!! She should of been punished !!! And by no means been able to re-enter everyone’s lives like nothing ever happened. By allowing her in their lives again , her family just condoned her actions , like trying to murder geet was no big deal !!! 😡

Well that is the message they sent & instead of trying to support geet through this very traumatic & earth shattering situation..... they abandoned her w/o thinking of her emotions & feelings !! Poor geet was & still is so vulnerable with her mom’s betrayal & then her family’s betrayal by supporting her mom..... her whole life was derailed ....... think about it, her mother , her nurturer wanted her dead & her immediate family thinks it is no big deal . What kind of message did that relay to geet ?? That her life is worthless..??.... she has no value ?? ..... no one loves her ???

Where was Aakash & his family when geet attempted suicide ??? Where were they when her world crumbled ??? They are concerned about her now when she is with maan ?? Without this so called gutter worm .... she would not be alive today ...

And now maan once again is comforting a distraught geet ...... he cannot see her in pain ......... their actions speak volumes of what they cannot say ........ they pour out their emotions to each other & comfort one another .

I believe geet’s family will never her Rest In Peace ...,,,,can she marry maan & live separately & run the company w/o their interference???

I apologize di , I get really riled up sometimes when things are unjust ...., I forget it is just a story 😆..... but that is b/c your writing is just that good that I lose myself in your stories

Thank you di 🤗


Don't say sorry sweety.... I always love to read your thoughts ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Akash comes to met geet and told her to forgive her mom and leave maan

Cant he see his sister pain they really selfish they have more importancevon family fake prestige

Geet is hurt maan get angry to see her condition

Maan goes to teach a lesson to akash but geet stops him

Poor geet feeling bad for her her family don't care how their attitude hurt her so much

Thank for pw di 😊update soon

Edited by cutical - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 9

Whoa 😮 hold up a second... Who gave him the rights to talk about her life and who she spends it with... Did she interfere with their life... No then why are they judging and interfering with hers... She want to do nothing with them why don't they just leave her be... Oh ow I think Akash pressed the wrong switch... Geet is so furious she could have burned him down for saying that... How dare he to say Maan a gutter worm... Where are they when she's suffering no one cared to see her problems then why are they so much of a busybody with her life... And Maan if given a chance would burn the whole world for Geet and he's ready to do just that to Akash for hurting her feeling's... Yep even the steamy time didn't do well on calming him down... There will be a fight definitely.... 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice and hot update.

Geet ' s brother tried to convince geet not to continue this relationship with maan as for her family he is not the right person. But geet got hyper as she only knew how she was depressed and maan helped her to overcome it.

Again she found solace in maan arms. He is very angry to see her breaking down again because of her family and want to know the truth. Hotand passionate moments between them but still he want to know that her family said.

Eager to see how geet will handle this situation. At least her family should be happy to see her living her life again.

Edited by natu10 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Erotic update...

Aakash does not like the fact that Maaneet are so close with each other and he tries to tell Geet but Geet is not ready to listen him becoz she is right. Geet told him that it was only Maan that helped her out of her depression and it was him that brought life back to her. Maan is the only one that truly protects her... They didn't care about Geet when she was upset... Geet goes to her cabin where Maan was waiting for her. And by seeing Geet's condition Maan knew that Aakash has told Geet something bcoz of that Geet is shaking and he knew she could easily return to that depression and dull state. Maan is angry and wants to confront Aakash, but Geet stops him. And they make love in Geet's cabin yet Maan is still angry. And Geet knew that Maan could not forget the state of Geet....

Thanks for the pm dear

Waiting for next update 🙂😉🙂🙂

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