Mg New ss Kashmkash ......part 6 on page 9- 23 Feb - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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part 4

Baby drinking in such way milk it show that how much that little soul is hungry Geet feel like ask her so called mother what is this how could anyone ingnore so beautiful angle …baby start to play with Geet finger and slowly start to slip in sleep a content sleep …after her hunger get satisfied …

That old women take deep breath after watching clam baby ….maan watching Geet again turn his face other side he is still in shock with Geet move for baby …

Other side Geet stop to feed baby than make her sleep in palana …….she make herself presentable with her cloth before come out from bed ….

Geet say anything before that old lady took Geet in Hug …she mummer again and again thanks beta u come as angle today thanks



Geet feel like she feel motherly warm in that hug from that hug …she control her emotions and say please aunty aise no boilye she is so small ….

That lady broke the hug …in between Maan arrived near them she want to introduce both ladies but Geet cell start to vibrate and she went outside of room to attend that call .and after while Maan also joined her he waited till Geet finish her call …..Geet finish that call and Maan ask her a coffee he ask in such manner she cannot denied it. And after this all she need talk with Maan.



so both maan geet went to canteen …..both turn all silent both of them have so many questions in their …mind …after of few min ..Maan say thanks for your help


Geet reply please don’t say thanks what u done to us its just little help in front of that and in my place anyone can help her she is so small …..may be god grass me with this motherhood opportunity for few min …..because its not going to come in my life ever ….she say in sad tone …Maan look to her his heart ache in pain with her word …dev sudden death snatch everything from her … Geet get with Maan gaze she say her heart thoughts so loudly ,before he say some sympathy word to her she ask ….but why her mother is not near her ….that question make all emotions changes of Maan face his face turn so sad with pain …..

He sip the water and reply she is my nise my little sister daughter I lost my sister and her husband in car accident before some days …..so we are here me and my ma …..he stop he cannot able to talk further …from last so many days he control himself for Ma sake so she will not break down ….but its start to make him suffocate it ….now he don’t know when tear make its way from his eyes he is so good in hiding emotion he never display his emotion like this but today ……he clutch his finger tightly to control his emotions …but this time he fail big time a pain, agony lost of close one …..

Geet get shock with Maan shock is so small word how on earth destiny play so much cruel with that small life .. that small life need her mother and father most in her life and destiny snatch it just like it . Geet saw Maan painful emotions passing from his face and then she saw a tear fall from his eyes … she feel bad for him some time for else they have to bolt up their own emotions and that is not less than any torucher we can wear the mask of coldness ,mature or strongest…but one moment that moment make us weak …..she don’t know how she make him clam how she help her to face him his sorrow . she is in dilemma what shall she do..

Just than his palm cover with soft palm he look to plam its Geet who rested her palm on Maan hand …like sharing his pain giving him courage to face such situation cruel game of so called destiny ….that tiny life without parent ..She could not think of it …..till she thought that she is one who facing word big problem lost of Dev …but after Maan talk she don’t know what to think that little angel face again and again coming to her mind ……

Geet make some decision and softly say …..Mr. Khurana sambhal liyjiye khud ko … we cannot escape from our destiny and with that little angle u have to be more and more strong ….and one things is sure now on till you in this city she is my duty ….

Maan give her shocking and surprised look , her word work as medicine on his aching heart ….and he stunt with her thought she herself facing so much lost of dev now accident with aunty ……still she ready to help him….

He took deep breath he know she will be big help but he cannot use her in such crucial time ….he say app sab thik bol rahi ho I have to be strong for that little life ….for my ma ….and about your help I cannot already u have full hand with aunty and uncle I cannot force more on u…..

Geet look to him for while …she ask in hurt u don’t like my closeness to her ….but Maan cut her imm…no please please don’t say that what u done to her I cannot think about that …please app aisa mat soucho I worried about your tight schedule nothing else don’t mistook me.

A small smile appear on her face and she replay after think foe while ok we will done one think u takecare of Ma ,baba I will manage Baby ……

Maan stunt with her replay he really feel lack of word he feel like his eyes again start to fill with tears …ahhh he somehow control himself and say u are first person who make me cry do u know ….that..

Geet smile on his talk and say sometime we need this tears ….else our heart will be burst with pain Mr. Khurana …Maan nodded in her talk …..



Edited by Mahimaan - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

thanks for the update


Part 4

Heart wrenching update..... amazingly written

at least Geet was able to feed the baby and make the baby sleep

the old lady is emotional and grateful

great that Maan took Geet to have coffee

as expected Maan thanked Geet

Geet's response indicated her feelings

oh no the baby's parents have died

feeling for the little soul

she is Maan's niece

at least she has Maan and his mom

finally Maan breaks down as he was being strong for his mom

Geet assures him and says the she will take care of the baby

Maan does not want burden her

liked that she said she will take care of the baby while he takes care of the ma and baba


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice part but emotional 🥺 small baby is maan's sister's.really geet ia angel 💕💖💗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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They need each other. Geet was able to feed the baby. She lost her child and that little baby lost a mother.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi Mahi.....

are you fine?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello Mahi

anxiously waiting for updates

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi Mahi

Compliments of the New Year!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey Mahi

hoping that you are well

do update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Now only i saw this story qnd read it so nice story very nicely you show the emotions 😀 😊 i like this so much

Waiting for next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 5


This two incidence ( dev and his sister accident ) so much give impact on her life ….because of early death of parent he become parent of his little sis for her he ignore his own life ,she only become his priority …he is not socially active always behind his business …his family means his sis and his dadi ,his life is a round them ..so when she died ….he feel like someone snatch his last happiness of life ..but this small angel don’t give him time to him for his own pain his lost ..

Dev is first fiend who really closed to him in his entire life but he lost him suddenly ..like this now again he is standing in same point of life alone first he fight for his baby sis now he have to fight for his sister baby …today he feel like human when Geet make him conferred bahot kuch jo usne khood ke dil main daba ke rakha tha uska pain ,dard sab kuch ajj aasu (tear ) ban ke beh gaya ..he feel light now kuch to boz kam ho gaya heart se . he actually feel light after talk with Geet ..

Both finish their coffee went to respected room to take care of their own…

Next morning Maan call Geet early 4 when baby get wakeup …she start to serch for Geet so hehave to call her they exchange their number in canteen .

Geet who is deep slumber wake up in hurdle …she ask give her 5 min she will be there .

Geet entered in baby room after clean her hand and went to baby side ….maan mummer softly ..main aunty ke pass jata hu ..ma is here if u need anything. Geet nodded and took baby like miracle baby get clam like she know Geet a soft smile appear on ma and Maan face ..next moment Maan went to aunty room and Geet settle with baby….

In night Geet talk about Maan sister accident with baba including what he done for baby she don’t want hide anything from him baba took her in hug and say that she is proud of her ,and Maan talk about dev and his family with ma … ma get stun with Geet big heart a girl who is in such pain ,get ready t o help them like this that’s big things.

Maan reach to aunty room and make uncle took finish his morning activity ,BF ect …baba nodded he stand near Maan and give him a tight hug and say softly don’t worry beta time is best medicine for every problem and for that little soul and for you we are there always to jab hi jarrorat ho hichkana mat ..maan feel so relax with thought that he have some father figure for him from whom he can be depended in crucial time who guide some time kuch physical help na bhi mile bhir bhi we need a mental support which give much courage for fight with situation .Maan somehow control himself and nodded .

Just than aunty wake up from sleep and Maan call for sister ….sister appear there and finish all aunty check up and all process….. aunty looking like tired …

Just than they get a visitor may be aunty sis because they calling didi ..to aunty

Maan not so positive wibe from visitor he massage Geet that ask ma to look to baby a nd she should come down aunty have some visitor some ladies .

Other side Geet heart beat get skip with Maan sms ..she very well know who is visitor ,its good that baby is asleep …she informed Maan mother and went downside with heavy heart almost with fear .

Geet entered in room where Maan is almost stand for went out but don’t know what make him stop and he stand there for while.

Geet entered in room and take bless from the ladies …they only nodded …

Masi (devs masi ) didi kya hua hai pata nahi kiski nazar lagi apke ke ghar ko .. First dev now your accident .

Tear pass from Geet eyes ..uncle start to get restless and aunty looking more disturbed … room atmosphere get tense with that ladies talk , Maan feel odd with talk with that ladies … he very well know widow specially in our country suffer more in their house in between their relative itself .

Just than uncle reply in tight voice your didi face such accident before Dev marriage also because she basically have sugar issue with low Bp which took her to get unconscious. you have to ask her to took care of her eating sweets ….

Masi - yes yes main wahi bole jane wali thi jijai she reply in hurdle burdle. She feel like she get tongue cut with uncle words ..wise hi Geet need to took good care of you both waise bhi usko family ka care karna Hard jata hoga ,anath ashram jo pali badi hai ….stillthat masi not stop from talk apoison

Maan who feel relax with uncle word get shock with information she don’t have family . he look to Geet side who is trying hard control her tear for not to fall from her eyes …..both eyes meet for while ,in that moment Maan feel how much she feel humiliated in front of him that ladies talking all nonsense.

He once look to aunty and Geet and turn to unlce side and say politely uncle I will come back after some time ..

But uncle stop him and say I tight tone ..no no Maan beta app ruko wo kya hai na masi have hurry she need to reach home early ..she have work …abhi unka apne didi se milna ho chukka hai … and doctor will scold us if aunty don’t get araam am I right …..uncle took strong stand and color drain from masi face …a respect for uncle get 10 time increased with uncle stand …

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