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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 29

At the restaurant….

Maan has already booked a table at a fine dining restaurant…

Maan goes to the table reserved for them and Geet follows him like a kid…

Its in a corner facing the garden, very private…

They wait for the server when the restaurant manager comes and tells something to Maan….

Maan: no no, we are fine

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: kuch nahi

Just then an elderly man comes to the table….

Old man: halo beautiful, my wife wants to invite you for our anniversary celebrations, would you like to join us and be our guests of honour tonight?

The manager was just conveying that message to Maan…

The elderly couple are celebrating their 50th anniversary and when they saw Maneet they wanted to celebrate with this young couple who are yet to step into their love life….

Geet doesn’t know what to say…

She looks at Maan for his response…

Seeing that old man Maan is reminded of his dadaji…

Maan: sure, it would be our pleasure

Geet: happy anniversary uncle ji

Uncle: thank you sweetie for not calling me dadaji, and halo young man, let me show you something

Uncle asks Geet’s hands, takes her hand and walks her to their table…. He pulls the chair for her and requests her to sit there….

Maan would have loved to do that if only they are a couple…

Uncle: that’s how we have hit half century and still batting strong, haina ji?

Aunty smiles to acknowledge it… haan ji

Maan: excuse me

Maan takes leave and goes to talk with the manager …

Geet thinks that it’s not nice to leave like that when they are inviting you with so much love ….

They are all alone na…

Maan comes back….

Aunty: take your seat beta, you are just like my grandson, our son and his family are in Auckland, we didn’t want to celebrate our fiftieth anniversary alone, that’s why we wanted to invite you

Maan: wish you a very happy anniversary

Aunty: you too look cute together, I think it’s just the beginning of your sweet journey together

Uncle: wish you both too celebrate fifty years of love together just like us

Aunty: why are you so quiet beta?

Aunty finds Geet feeling a little out of place…

In a couple of minutes the manager comes with a beautiful cake for the couple…

Maan has ordered it…

Uncle: oh, that’s wonderful

Aunty: that’s so nice of you

Uncle and Aunty cut the cake and they all have a good time eating the cake…

Geet likes how Maan has won the hearts of the couple in no time….

Uncle orders a drink as it’s celebration time and no celebration is complete without a drink according to him…

Uncle is a retired service man who was a Colonel in the army….

Aunty has a few drinks occassionally but nowadays she has stopped drinking and also restricts uncle…

Uncle is in no mood to listen to her today…

Aunty also doesn’t mind him having a good time….

Aunty orders mock tails for the ladies…

Uncle asks Maan to give him company…

Maan politely refuses as he has to drive back…

Uncle insists he has a drink at least…

Maan obligues….

But when uncle compels Maan to drink again Aunty gives her drink to Maan and asks him to pretend to give uncle company…

Then she gives Geet’s drink too…

Aunty doesn’t know that uncle had asked to spike the ladies drinks for fun…

Maan ends up being drunk badly…

Maan is in no condition to drive…

Geet feels helpless…

Aunty asks Geet not to worry for they can take a cab…

Geet books a cab for the four of them…

Aunty thought Maneet could drop Uncle and Aunty on their way as their home is nearby…

Geet holds Maan and guides him to the cab while Uncle feels sorry for his mistake…

Aunty apologizes to Geet for what happened and suggests that Maneet stay at their place for the night as she thought she couldn’t trust the cab driver…

Geet too was very scared and she is more than happy to stay back with Aunty…

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update! Maan is no doubt a gentleman and knows how to win hearts, celebrating and getting a cake for the couple was a nice gesture. It was not right on uncleji's part to spiked the ladies' drink, he could have done that for his wife but not for geet. Maaneet staying in uncleji's house in the same room and on top of it both are intoxicated ....hope we are in for a romantic update next.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 29

The older couple is cute

Sweet if maan to order them a cake

Uh oh the man spiked the ladies drinks as well & maan is drunk 🥴

Good thing they r going to stay at the old couples home

Will their be any love confessions or romance tonight ??

Thank you

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow wow wow!


Maan Drunk!

Geet Helpless!


Is there something fishy about this Uncle and Aunty?


Or it is going to be union of two souls at the strangers' residence?

You understand what I'm saying right?


Do update soon!

Eagerly waiting.


P.S. : I read the last 4 updates together.. and could comment only so much! Apologies!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Maan being drunk hope he remembers what happened earlier

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan geet join elderly couple too make them happy maan also ordered cake fr them all in this uncle insist fr drink and maan can't deny but uncle ji spiked the ladies drinks which is wrong he can have fun with his wife but geet he don't know even she ever have hard drink or no

All get drunk and no one in position to drive so the took cap and maaneet too stayed with couple in their house so waiting fr next how both get react when they get in sense

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 29


Mind Blowing Update


Maan and Geet at the restaurant and are invited

to join an elderly couple celebrating their 50th wedding anniversary

and there Maan got drunk though he did not want to drink as he was

to drive back home

now Maan and Geet will have to spend the night at the couples place


waiting to see what happens

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 29

splendid update.... greatly written

the elderly couple are nice

thoughtful of Maan to order cake for them

oh no the uncle spiked the ladies drinks and made Maan drink

Maan is drunk

great that the aunty told them to stay at her place

so what will now happen

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan is begani Shaadi mein Abdulla dewana types ... Dadi Dada ke anniversary ke liye cake and drinks.... Being thoughtful and sweet for sm1 u just met.... But pays no attention to self and life with geet.....

Uncle was mast.... Spiking the drink 😂😂

Aunty is sweet to ask them to stay back... Maan is drunk and travel safety is quite needed....


Continue soon!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 30

At Uncle’s place….

Aunty ji shows them the guest room…

Geet is holding Maan for he is still not able to stand on his feet ….

Maan holds Geet back and is thinking that he is the one who is steady and helping Geet out….

Maan: thank you for the drink Uncle, and happy anniversary night

Geet doesn’t know what that even means…. Maan is just blabbering in his tipsy state…

Geet: chalein?

Geet is not able to hold him for long…

Aunty: take him in beta, the old man will keep talking all night

Maan: tum pehle chalo

Geet takes him towards the bed…

She makes him sit there…

She bends down to help him take off his shoes…

Maan stops her by holding her shoulder…

He pulls her strongly and makes her sit beside him..

Maan: tum beitjao, mein karloonga

Maan himself removes his shoes off somehow…

Aunty knocks…

Geet tries to get up …

Maan holds her back by catching hold of her hand…

Maan: kahan jaa rahi ho?

Geet: koi aaya hai

Maan let’s her go reluctantly…

Aunty has got some clothes for Geet to change…

Aunty: sab teek hai na beta, koi problem ton nahi?

Geet: nahi Aunty, aap pareshaan mat ho, he is fine

Aunty: good night beta

Geet: good night aunty

Geet comes back and finds Maan waiting for her…

Geet: aap sojao, mein change karke aathi hoon

Maan lies down and closes his eyes…

Geet changes and lies down on the couch…

She couldn’t sleep… She keeps a watch on Maan…

Maan gets up and looks for Geet…

Geet goes to help him …

Geet: aap ko kuch chahiye?

Maan just keeps looking at her…

Geet: aap teek toh haina?

Maan doesn’t answer… he keeps staring her…

Geet doesn’t know what he wants…

Geet: aap pani piyoge?

So saying she tries to turn back to take the jug…

Maan stops her and pulls her closer…

Geet is scared… there is something wrong with the way Maan is looking at her…

Maybe it’s the booze…

Maan looks into her beautiful eyes…

Maan: I forgot something

Geet panics immediately…

She looks into eyes and asks in a feeble voice…

Geet: what?

Maan doesn’t say anything… he keeps looking into her eyes…

Geet is also looking into his eyes closely for the first time..

Maan always avoids making eye contact with her…

Maan’s eyes are filled with love and passion…

He has never looked at her like that…

Maybe he has mistaken her for someone else…

Maybe he is reminded of his past… he is mistaking her for Sameera….

Maan slowly pulls her closer as she starts shivering…

He places a warm kiss on her lips …

Geet just melts in his hands…

Maan: good night

Geet stands still while Maan goes back to sleep ruining poor Geet’s sleep tonight…

Geet gets back to the couch and watches him sleep peacefully as if he has fulfilled his longtime wish….

Geet has got a glimpse of his love for her from this… he has been in denial all the while for some reason…

Geet is now very confident that somewhere Maan too likes her the same way she likes him…

He too enjoys being with her but he won’t accept it ….

He too needs her whenever he feels too lonely, not having that special someone with whom he could at least share his feelings …

He may think that he doesn’t need anyone but he too is human and deserves all the love and affection that she is ready to shower on him ….

He can’t deny the fact that he’ll be happier if she is with him…

He can’t blame Geet for she just wants to give back whatever be has given her…

Geet didn’t seek anything from him, he is the one who volunteered to help her…

Geet is obviously impressed by his care and concern that she now wants to retain that for her lifetime…

Next morning…

Geet wakes up and goes down to see aunty…

Aunty is up and reading the paper….

Aunty: good morning beta

Geet: good morning

Aunty: hwz Maan?

Geet: he is still asleep

Aunty: hope he didn’t trouble you much last night

Geet: nahi, he slept then itself

Aunty: did you sleep?

Geet: haan, we should leave now, dadi would be worried

Aunty: I’ll ask the driver to drop you guys

Geet: I’ll go and tell him

Geet goes and finds that Maan is already in the washroom getting ready…

Geet waits for him…

Maan comes out…

Maan: chalein, I’m late for office already

Maan acts as if nothing happened last night….

Geet too pretends not to be affected….

Geet: app jao, mein tayaar hoke aathi hoon

Maan leaves…

Uncle is there waiting for him…

Uncle: morning young man, where’s your lady Love?

Maan: she is getting ready

Uncle: hwz our humble abode Maan

Maan: oh this place looks great

Uncle: all the credit goes to the Mrs

Aunty: it must, this old man would have built me a bunker of I had let him to

Uncle: you didn’t even ask for my suggestions

Aunty: b’coz I already knew how good they would be

Uncle: you don’t underestimate my choices, you are one of them

Aunty: you never had any choice, it’s my bad luck that I chose you

Maan: I can’t believe you two have made it this far

Uncle: we wouldn’t have made it without these banters, then life becomes boring

Aunty: that’s true

Geet just comes…

Uncle: you two are not far behind I think

Uncle has seen their hide and seek moments and also their love for each other….

Aunty: I wish that you also celebrate your 50th anniversary just like us and remember us then, will you remember us?

Geet: sure, I was thinking that you two should come and bless us at our wedding, will you?

Maan is shocked to hear that… this girl is insane….

Aunty: oh, our blessings will always be with you two

Geet hugs aunty and they take leave….

Geet looks little different now, Maan wonders what happened that made her so happy and full of confidence.. Maan doesn’t remember anything from last night… hope he didn’t do anything that would turn against himself….

Maan is little worried while Geet is not hiding her happiness….

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