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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 28

Later at KC…

Dev comes to KC…

Geet doesn’t go to her cabin at all as Dev is there inside with Maan… they are discussing about the new project…

Maan calls Geet…

Geet avoids going sending the message through Adi that she is having a head ache…

Maan comes to check on her after Dev leaves…

Geet is having a chat with Pinky.. she looks to be fine…

Maan: Geet

Geet turns back and looks at Maan…

Maan goes back to the cabin…

Geet follows him…

Geet: aap ne mujhe bhualaya?

Maan: mein kal bhualatha toh tu parsoon aaoge kya?

Geet: woh mein thoda busy thi

Maan: Pinky ke saath gappe marke?

Geet: aap bhi toh apne dhost ke saath busy the, mein ne kuch bhola?

Maan: Geeeet

Geet: you can’t take me for granted, I’m here just for myself, I’m not your puppet, bhool jao ki aap jo chahe wahi hoga

Maan: tum jo chahte ho woh bhi nahi hoga

Geet: dekhte hai

Geet leaves angrily… she doesn’t talk to him after that…

Maan only knows that he already has a life ….

Whatever may be his reason he should never have made such a grave mistake…

One day dadi comes up with another idea to help Geet…..

She calls Maan and asks him to take Geet out for a change for she has not gone anywhere but be at his service all the time…

That evening Maan takes Geet out for dinner compelled by Dadi…

Maan has been observing the changes in Geet towards Maan…

She is simply smitten….

Maan is not at all happy with the proceedings of this nakli shadi ki drama…

He doesn’t want to encourage Geet’s feelings but this dadi is pouring oil in the already raging fire which Maan is desperately trying to douse before much damage is done…

Geet had got herself a special saree while she was shopping with Annie this afternoon specially for her first date with the MSK…

Poor Maan is unaware of the date twist that dadi had given to Geet…

Geet is getting ready in the OH…

Maan is waiting for her downstairs…

Maan is little worried as Geet takes so long to come…

Maan thinks that Geet is deliberately keeping him waiting…

After a while Maan loses his patience and goes up to find what’s taking Geet so long to get ready for a casual dinner…

As Maan goes and knocks the door Geet goes to open the door..

She struggles to walk fast in the saree for she is wearing one for the first time…

Maan: Geet, Geeeeet

Maan shouts impatiently…

Geet: andar aao

Maan springs the door open just to see her angelic beauty…

Maan turns back trying to ignore her…

Maan: chalein?

Geet: haan

Maan walks ahead faster…

Geet tries to catch up with him… she has almost reached him…

As she takes long steps her legs get entangled in the saree and she looses her balance…

Geet falls on Maan who is just in front of her…

Maan acts swiftly and stops her from falling on the ground….

Maan is holding her waist and Geet freezes by the touch of his long fingers…

Maan could feel her silky smooth skin and her raising heart beats…

Maan: what’s the hurry Geet? Why are you racing in a saree?

Geet: nahi

Maan: you can change the saree if you are not comfortable, I’ll wait

Maybe Maan is the one who is feeling uncomfortable seeing Geet in that beautiful saree…

Geet: nahi, mein teek hoon

Maan: are you sure?

Geet: haan

Maan: be careful Geet

Geet: teek hai

Maan slows down so that Geet can walk slowly…

Maan helps her by opening the car’s door for her as she is still struggling to walk steadily in the saree…

Geet is happy that Maan is helping his lady like a perfect gentleman..

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Posted: 4 years ago

oh no dadi and geet shadi drama and maan is helpless in front of them.... he does not want to encourage her but does not know what to do....he wants her happy but not with him as he has his kid to take care of...wonder where this is going to go....geet too is stubborn and does not mind the kiddo...

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Posted: 4 years ago

thank you for the pm


Part 28

Outstanding update! well written

Clever Geet! liked how she avoids Dev

oh dadi and Geet team up against Maan

Maan unaware of the date

Geet indeed looks gorgeous

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 28

Beautiful update !!!

Geet & maan’s little convos are so cute

Like how dadi is trying to spice things up

& how maan is affected by geet in a saree

The scene where he caught her was nice

Excited for the date 😉

Very well written

Thank you

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely story ! read it all in one go... love the starting banter between Maan and Geet, then the emotional updates ... Raano asking Maan to help geet and Geet's past. Maan coming to Geet's rescue all the time and the cherry on the cake were the updates starting from chapter 19 ....Challange between Maan and geet Dadi helping Geet. I feel Maan is so wrong in pushing geet toward Dev. It's ok that he doesn't want to share his life with geet but he cannot force dev into geet's life or trying to show dev false dream. I feel Mansi is not well and that's what Maan is hiding from everyone.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 28


Fabulous Update


Maan feels he does not want to encourage Geet

as he already have his life

Maan is actually taking Geet for granted

why did he not tell her about his child before

if that is the reason then its just an excuse because he too needs

a life partner

good to see that Maan is taking Geet out at least

and no doubt he feels she looks beautiful in a saree

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice update dear

Dadi again plan to send them together for dinner

Maan is avoiding geet

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting fiction!!! Just came across it and read it in a go!!!!


Maan is being stubborn.... His point of view also makes sense but he also likes geet but just holding back with excuses....


Geet is quite a case... Full of mischief and fun..... And deep liking for maan.....


Lot of push and pull between the two..... Can't wait for more updates!!!


happy writing!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

One small suggestion.

Can we have index at the start?? I just came across the story and had to go through each page so I do not miss out the chapter.

Index will make it easy for any new reader. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

One small suggestion.

Can we have index at the start?? I just came across the story and had to go through each page so I do not miss out the chapter.

Index will make it easy for any new reader. 🤗

I don't make index cause the next part is in the very next or the following page...

Bit lazy... 😃 Will try....

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