MG : Majili || Part 5 updated @ Pg 14 || 23rd Feb - Page 2

Nice start dear

Maan married to geet but loved someone deepti

Intressting start

Watting for update

Hey my favorite movie and you wrote on maaneet hey thanks for that when I watched majili I imagine gurti maaneet in place of hero heorin lol you fufil my dream thanks dear

Now I impatiently waiting for next

Amazing update

Maan love deepti n married to geet.

Maan doesn't value geet or their relation..

Let c wht happen

congrats for the new story...nice update...waiting for next one...maan and geet are together and yet not together

Interesting story...maan seems to be still in love with deepti...and now married to geet...but why not letting her go outside...

Looking forward to it..

Note : Maan's Not a Business Man in this, He belong's to the Middle class family. Presently He is in search of a job. Maan's Family consists of his father and his wife Geet.

Geet also belongs to a middle-class family.

Maan's Father : Kiran Singh Khurana.

Geet's Father : Anand Handa.

Geet's Mother : Sujata

Part 2

Next Day Maan filed a case against Dev's Gang for eve-teasing His wife, as he felt his Thrashing was not enough!. Kiran Singh khurana his Father Also came with him. It was 3rd time he was coming to police station. Maan's Furious ways of thrashing people always landed him here, especially Dev's Gang... Dev was his Rival Since from college Days and Also he was involved in separation of Both Maan and Deepti in the past, So Maan Never Spares whenever Dev touched His things!! Kiran Explained Whatever Occurred in the Market to the inspector.

What's Your Name!? The inspector asked Maan who was Cooly leaning on the wall of the station. He didn't utter anything.

Maan Singh khurana sir Instead his father Replied.

Can't He speak inspector glared at Maan.

We didn't do Anysuch eve-teasing Case sir This time Dev opened His mouth but winced When he felt pain on his Jaw making Maan smirk at him.

What's This Haan, he will kill and hit anyone who touches His girlfriend !? Inspector Asked Kiran.

Sir He might Let go, If it was His girlfriend But she's His wife Whom he married by taking Oath to protect her for Lifetime Kiran said slowly, Maan looked At his Father who became Emotional at once.

Then Tell herself to file a complaint against them said The inspector.

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Geet entered The police station, Her steps hesitant and unsure.. She wants to let it go, as Bashing them was enough for such low people but Maan was not ready to listen. She sighed and stepped in.

So You're His Wife? Inspector asked. Geet looked at Maan who was Not looking at her and answered in a slow yes.

Are these Guys who misbehaved with you!!?

She looked at them And Shivered in fear, Yes, sir she answered confidently.

Hmm, they will be punished for a month and also your husband will be in jail for one day as he took law in his hands Inspector said Making Geet shiver more, she looked at the lockers..No she didn't want him to be here, Not even a second, that too on their special day !!

So Complaint or compromise Inspector asked understanding her turmoil.

Compromise Geet said even before he could complete the sentence. Maan Fisted his hands in anger and went Out of the station, it was raining heavily. He tried to light his cigar, he always smoked whenever he feels he was in his extreme anger. Geet came Out holding the umberella and put it on him, to not let Him get drenched. He Took 3 puffs And let it go then turning towards his wife he glared at her.

Do you think this as a joke!!! He hissed at her coming dangerously close to her..

Here I was trying to punish them, And what you did inside is utterly Foolish Geet!! He barked at her.

But you have to be in Jail for one day she said looking at him innocently.

Tho!!?? Rehene deti muje, It's not like I have been there for first time!

Tho phir Mera kya She whispered.. She couldnt Even see Him in a single pain, then how could she let him be in jail for whole day knowing it was because of her he was staying!! She cursed herself for this..He Already told her to not to go alone To Market Knowing Dev's Gang will be there and whenever they get chance they humiliate her

Whatt !?? Are you listening?? Dil se pattar Hoon lekin dimag se Nahi, I cant let Anyone Misbehave with You..yes i don't accept you as my wife.. But what they did was punishable, that Bashing wasnt enough for me.. ARGHH i cant even Make you understand!! Maine Kaha tha pehle hii That Dev's Gang will be there, tho kyu Gayii vahha He glared at her, But she didnt even Heard anyother words other than i cant let anyone misbehave with you! He was Talking this Much for the first time in this 2 years she was surprised and shocked. He cared for her! Only that was ringing in her mind.

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Next Day Geet was Preparing Breakfast and she entered with Two Plates.

Not Fair, Geet Patii Ko omeltette Aur Muje Dosa kiran teased her. Geet winked At His Father in law and mouthed Yes. Maan was trying to bandage his hand.

I will do it Geet moved towards Maan.

Don't Need He said and Took the plate and started eating.

Yes you don't Need her But you want the Breakfast prepared by her!!? Kiran Mocked His son, who was eating in a hurry as if he didnt eat For days, OHHH yes he was not home for 2 days!!

It's been 2 years Did you even talk To her with love He said sitting beside his Son.

She wanted You to take her to Temple as it was Your Marriage day, But you took her to the police station he said Making Geet look down, Maan stiffened hearing This but continued eating gulping it.

Leave it Na, Papaji it was because of me Gest said Interjecting.

No It's not the case Beta, Your husband didn't Hit them because of love on you, He did it to show up his Heroism. He said glaring at his son.

Leave It na Papaji, He is Eating let it be she tried

Sir Is only available while eating, otherwise when can we get him! Right? He said Making Maan leave the hall.

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Maan entered his room and Shut the door.. He leaned on it and thought !! Wedding day His !!? He closed his eyes and Fisted his hand sideways..He didnt even knew it was his marriage Day, he dint even care!! He hit the Bed nd Let the memories of Deepti flood his mind.

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Congrats for the new story

Nice concept

Maan in love with Deepti but now married to geet whom he doesn't loves.......I'm eager to know more

Continue soon

Maan and dev are enemise in college days.Maan behaviour with Geet is confusing he didn't like Geet insult by dev but didn't accept her as a wife.

Dear Kuttisri,

I came across this story today, I already watched the telugu movie of same name. but i like the changes which you made in your story. Nice writing, looking forward to for next update.

add me in your PM list and ping me for updates..

Are you from HYD...?

Thank you

Note : Deepti Left Maan 5 years ago and Maaneet were Married for 2 years Now!

Part 3

Geet looked at his retreating back and let her tears flow down freely... It was 2 years of their Marriage... Even after 2 years She was still unsuccessful to bring him back from the pain.. She had been Watching him suffering from the depression Since 5 years now, Yes 5, she knew Him since her college days.. he was her Neighbor and also Her senior In the same college she used to study! She closed her eyes and Thought of their past.

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Flashback

5 years back..

She entered the campus and heard The Hooting Sounds Like Maan, Maan, Maan they were Faint, But even Then she heard it clearly. She Stood At The playground of her college and watched On.. Her Senior boys Were playing Cricket, Seems Like it was a 20-20 match.. The batting ones Are winning over the Bowlers.. She Already knew that the One who was batting is Maan.. As whenever he Hit six or Four the whisling and Hooting got Louder and They Cheered Maan, Maan! She Looked on as they won the Match. She couldn't see his face as he was wearing helmet But then her Breath hitched when he removed his helmet and stretched his Hand widely with His bat, Oh He Hit Century!!! He was the Most Handsome Man she had ever seen, his cricket Uniform, his hair, His clean shaved face, everything about him screamed perfection! She didn't knew when she started to admire him, her eyes didn't blink at once, she felt her Heart beating furiously, her lips slowly curl into smile.. She watched as he smirked arrogantly at the opposite players aI if mocking them for losing.. Soon there was big commotion and Both the teams were Fighting !! Her eyes widened Looking at Maan who was busy Thrashing The opposite Team.. Soon the coacher came and seperated them.

I didn't expect This kind of behaviour from You both Maan and Dev, detention For you Both for 1 month. Maan Muttered few curses and left from there, His Shoulders brused Geets making her heart pounding in her chest...

She Got to know from her friend Ramya That he was Studying electrical engineering 2nd year...When she came to her House, she was surprised to see him as her neighbour.. Soon her admiration turned into love.. It was Like Love at first sight for her. Whenever There was powercut in their colony, He used To correct it Making all the Lights glitter more brightly, Just like her Smile when she sees Him.

He had Never Seen her in lime light, he just acknowledged her as his Neighbors and his junior Nothing More. She was innocent, Naive and a padakhu and she used to Follow Him secretly, making black calls Just to hear his voice, She used to giggle herself hearing him mutter Agar baat nahi karna tho phone Kyu karte ho bhai! Soon she became His deewani.. Whenever Her parents Called him Awaara As he always gets to involve in Bashing people She supported him saying That It was not his Fault when they enrage him using dirty talks making her parents mouth shut! They Never understood why her daughter supported The Awaara of his colony, Anand Her Father, who had medical shop always wished Her to stay away from From This kind of bad boys,.. But her heart Already fell for him. Geet was close to Maan's father, she got to know that Maan's mother was no more.. so she always used to pack some crurries and Take them to their house.

Mom Had made chicken curry she said smiling.. and looked at maan who was eating ladies finger fry with a frown. Maan looked up and smiled at her thankfully.. haaye She has been craving for this smile of his !

No he wouldn't like to eat Non-veg, he took an oath from the lord His father kiran teased nd Snatched it away from Maan's hold ! Making Maan pout and glare at him.

What are you saying Dad!!?, Geet dont believe, he is always like this whenever he sees chicken.. Maan said taking the chicken box from her hands.. and dipped it in rice and relished.

Wow Thanks Geet He said Relishing the taste making her smile widely.

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You have loved him for 4 Years, why dont you propse to him !? Her friend Ramya asked Who was staring At Maan watching him play cricket.

I'll propose to him after my exams Geet said smilingly still lost in him. But one day her heart Crushed Looking at Him holding a Girl so close to him, They were hugging each other passionately..

Love You so much Deepti, I can't Live without You, Promise me that you wouldn't leave me Maan said pulling her closer to Him.

Where Will I go without you, I Cant even live a second without You.. I love You More then You can Imagine She Said Making Maan smile, he leaned forward and placed His Lips on hers kissing her passionately.

she gulped and and immediately went away from there... she closed Her Door and cried, cried for hours.. Was She too Late!!!?? her Naive heart didn't want to believe that he was Not hers but he was someones. She wrote Few Lines In her Diary and let Sleep invade her.

After I completely Drown With Admiration in your love..

I wrote a love letter with My eyes

I have No Acknowledgement whether My present reaches You or Not.

Heart With Hopes Behind Hopes is Still Alive for you..

I have always been in love with you..

Iam completely drenched in the showers of your love..

My heart Often gets scared that we might get sepearted..

Even if you do not want me in your life..

I will always want to have you in my life..

(Above lines are Taken From the Song In same movie)

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