Maaneet FF-Marriage at First Sight -Thrd 6 Part 61- pg-17- 29/Aug/20 - Page 2

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Thanksfor liking and comments dearies, if any grammatical mistakes in this part,Kindly ignore & I am sorry,Extremely Sorry Thanksyou so much for waiting..Love u all Guys.

Part58

Earlymorning

Sharmicome back to mansion for geet checkup ..& sanskar jerk up from sleep &remember maan in geet room..almost he was running to geet room & same timesharmi push the maaneet room door as sanskar eyes popped seeing sharmi hand on door,she tried to push while inside room maanwas sleeping holding his jaan with his secure arms,Sanskar penetrate as slippedto floor with heavy pain sound, sharmi distract hearing sanskar voice,her heavysteps near to sanskar as left lightly open the door.

Sanskarsat in floor & held his foot with fake paining face and sharmi kneel down levelto sanskar.

Sharmi:bhai, what happened with concern voice.

Sanskar:oh .. (he saw one servant mopping floor, he got idea )my leg slipped because offloor water, servant gasped look at sanskar.

Sharmihelped sanskar to stand himself and made sat in near cough..

Sharmi:are u ok

Sanskar: haan..

Sharmi:u sit here I go to check geet..she turn..

Sanskarshout : no..sharmi werid gaze at sanskar ..

Sanskar: oh……(sharmi curiously look at his face as if any word come out from his mouthrather than oh )… ha...i need water ..

Sharminod her head with confused face:ok bhai..wait I call anyone..servant come theirside, sharmi informed bring water for sanskar.. with in 2 minutes servantbrought water for him, sanskar drinking water same time sharmi reached geetroom with long steps,sanskar drop glass to floor and ran to sharmi before sheenter room, sanskar stood like wall between sharmi & room entrance.

Sharmibrain start doubt his behavior: bhai..now ur legs was fine

Sanskar: yeah..perfectly fine..see..he do little ramp walk infront of sharmi with his sillyface,she rolled her eyes and just ignore his stupid antics..enter the room..sanskarturn look at sharmi , she was not in corridor and he hit his forhead as enterroom with his stormy step

Sharmichecking sleeping geet and his eyes searching maan ,he got relief that maan left before sharmi enter in room.

Sanskarcome near to geet asked sharmi: how she is with worries tone

Sharmi: she is fine…injection syringe fallen into floor and sanskar bend takesyringe, his eyes popped seeing maan hide under cot, maan signed hi to sanskar,his fuming face signed, what r u doing here..maan signed send sharmi out.

Sharmi:bhai..what u searching in floor ,give me syringe ..

Sanskarstand straightly:oh sharmi..when geet get conscious

Sharmi:hmm.. (geet tried open her eyes with tired face)..geet with slow voice..

Geetopen her eyes with unknowing feeling around her no its not unknowing feelingfor her,every sec wishing this feel come to real one not in her dream,today whyshe feeling that he is very close to her,she could feeling her skin filled withhis natural fragrance..Sharmi shake her arms, geet distract from her ownbeautiful thought.

Sharmi:geet,u have pain in ur abdomen

Geetnod her head negatively but her mind & heart searching something in room,hermind fighting is real or hallucination but her heart craving seeing his facewho reason of her heart beat,After long time her face showing some expression wasvisible unlike previous days.

Sharmi:geet, today u come to hospital right with warning eyes.

Sanskar& maan same tone: why..once sec geet full body has been shaken ,her eyeswere roaming here & there..maanclosed his eye with frustrated face even his voice very slow tone compare tosanskar voice but geet should sense him through his breathing why not hiswhispering voice.

Sanskar: sharmi,why hospital..anything serious..wait i will call all specialist doctorfrom Khurana hospital..geet signed sharmi stop him before he do something likethat.

Sharmi:Bhai, nothing it just precaution nothing else.i already said she doing morework because of stress, her body already weak if she will admit hospital in twodays means she stay away from work, she get some peace & rest..then only Iasked come to admit hospital.

Sanskar: is it true with concern voice.

Sharmi: yes..bhai with little hesitate voice.

Sanskar: ok today choti,swara & Vicky coming with geet,they stay with geet untilshe in hospital & siva also come with some bodyguard.

Sharmi: bhai..she was coming to hospital for rest purpose norshe was going to world tour bring everyone with her..i am in hospital..i takecare of her,nothing to worry.

Sanskar: No sharmi , I trust u but ..why she admit in ur Sanjeevani hospital rather than Khurana hospital.

Sharmi: because I am not working in Khurana hospital and also I am her doctor.

Sanskar : you get offer letter from Khurana hospital within 10 minutes then u haveno problem geet stay in KH with bossy tone , maan smirked hearing Sanskar bossyvoice while geet rolled her eyes.

Sharmiglare to Sanskar : Bhai , No one decline offer from Khurana Management but I amhappy which hospital now I am working & my patient obey doctor order nordoctor obey by patient order ,if geet stay in KH means that only happen, she isowner of KH, No one guts stop her doing anything in her Hospital & Iunderstand ur worried about her but I am with her 24 hours..u don’t worry. Maangetting fuming hearing sharmi stubborn word.

Sanskarsigned: ok but siva (bodyguard) come with geet ..sharmi look at geet & geetnods as accept sanskar decision.

Sharmi;ok.. geet come to hospital afternoon.. I am leaving now.. she left.

Geetget up from bed & she need answer from sanskar.

Geet: bhai..

Sanskar;yes,geetu..u need anything with concern voice

Geet:whostay with me last night with hoping eye..

Sanskar: Oh.. I .. I stay with u, geetu withstammering voice.. her hopeful eyes changed into blank one,Once again.she couldguess her bhai hide important thing from her No her soul from her.

Geetstep down from bed and her payal fallen to floor,she did not noticed..and herzombie leg move on to door,her leg stop in near door without turning face tohim

Geetcold tone:when u using maan perfume bhai with cold voice.maan closed his eyeshearing her cold voice

Sanskarface changed into pale: geetu..yesterday mistakenly my hand hit into dressingtable while perfume bottle broken down into floor.. Myself I cleaned floor,thatperfume smell spread room as well as mine with signed relief face.

Geetsmiled weakly and look at her closed palm: oh really..with sarcastic voice..sheleft without saying anything to sanskar..

Sanskarbend down : maan come out..geet left out..

Maancome out from cot : sanskar ,she deeply hurt..i am only giving pain to her..with painful voice.

Sanskartouch his shoulder : maan please this is not time,She is my sister I know howto manage her .time god No one wake up,go out before anyone seeing u.& back side of outhouse already car waiting foru.maan nod his head & left the room using another door..( this doorconnected to outhouse through brigde like corridor)

Maan:hmmm..u also go with geet to hospital & after check up ,bring her medicalreport to my apartment..maan eyes down to floor ,his mishty anklet layed infloor and maan bend down take her anklet ,he just starring anklet with mixed ofloving filled & sad face.

Sanskar: maan with sad face.. maan look at sanskar & gave his weak smile andplaced anklet in his pant packet..left the place through door way.

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Geetcome out from dadi room before she instruct duty nurse : no one enter dadi roomwithout her permission.with serious warning tone.

Otherside Vicky room

Swara:Vicky bhai called us come to his room but he was not here..where he went

Choti: ur brother is mad person,he said one thing but do other thing with tauntingtone.

Swara:yeah like he love with one girl but roaming with other girl in smirked face

Chotihit her shoulder:shut up shona with irritating face

Swaragiggled : cool down bhabhiji with teasing tone..

Choti:don’t call me bhabhi swara with angry face..

Swaraplaced her hand in choti shoulder: I knew everything,so hide with anyone notwith me darling with teasing look

Chotismiled lightly: nothing re…

Vickyenter his room with smiling face : Girls, we got our first clue ..Girls smiledbroadly

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Maanapartment

Sanskar: maan why u not understand tomorrow, u must join hospital, Next week u have a surgery maan.

Maanangry face: I don’t want surgery now. Still yet I did not complete my work.

Sanskar: maan don’t behave like child,ur not normal healthy person,u blessed man thenonly still u r alive.ur each breathe ,each second in ur life god gifts u.

Maan:I know but my family with fear face . aaahhh..maan held his chest with painfulface & sanskar worried face held him he tried to calm down maan but hecontinues to explain his fear if anything happened to me after surgery,whatthey would do..now i am here protect them after surgery who save from them

Sanskarangry face: maan, they were also my family, this surgery very important for urlife & we need you ,ur mishty need u.plz believe urself nothing happen withu

Maanclosed his eyes : ok but day after tomorrow I join hospital until I stay here..I am alright…

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Adienter Apartment: maan I got their history with happy face

Maansmirked face: good Job Adi ..

Sanskar: Now we got proof right atleast u accept join hospital early.

Maanangry face: No sanskar before I finish their chapter nor I never get peace inmy life

Adi:Maan, we will do whatever ur wish but before ur health important for us

Maan:sanskar ,what about geet ‘s medical report

Sanskar:maan, today only sharmi did geet full check up ,tomorrow we get her report fromhospital.

Maan:no sanskar,I don’t trust geet report by her.Dr.sharmi hiding something aboutgeet health issues from our family with doubting face

Sanskar: don’t think wrong about sharmi,She ischild hood best friend of geet.

Maan:hmm if she intention good ,its good for her otherwise she would be know who is MSK with angry face

Sanskar: hello MSKji,trust me she was good friend of geet

Maan:whatever Dr,sharmi give geet reporttomorrow or not but I need one more report from other staff who working in samehospital & working with Dr.sharmi after I compare both report then only Iwill confirm her intention good with my mishty or not & I want my mishtycorrect report,if she have any problem in her health, I am not accept mysurgery.that my final decision with stubborn voice

Sanskarrolled his eyes: oh man,plz don’t start with initial stage & why u need tworeport knowing geet health condition. Maan glare to sanskar

Sanskarsigned : Ok .. I arrange one more report from other doctor without knowledge ofsharmi & geetu. Maan nod his head.

Adishowed that file to Sanskar: & Maan: what about them..with smirked face

Maanclose his fist tightly: they will get what they were deserve with evily smile.

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Anikasat on chair in her room balcony with deep thinking face,her phone ring broughther back to real world.without noticing ID,she picked up the call ..

Anika..

Anikaface change to kind of disgusting with filled painful face : why u called meMr. oberai with angry tone

Shivay:Anika listen where is geet.. her call not reached ..where is she

Anika: u already snatched happiness from her now what u want from her..

Shivay: Noodu..plz tell me where is geet with painful voice

Anika: Noodu ..that noodu died when u killed …(her word struck in her throat ,tearsflowing in her eyes) our friend no my friend that day not only maan died ,urnoodu also died..cut the phone ,kneel down cried loudly..

Anika: why u did it because of ur bloody revenge,we lost everything,I lost my friend,my love.i never forgive u Nandu (shivaay).

Flashback start with

Maancollege days or say fantastic four masti days with anika

Sanskarsat on canteen with mood off face.maan,adi & ranjith (shivaay) reachcanteen, joined with sanskar

Sanskarlook at his phone every 10 sec with longing face & others confused seeinghis behavior.

Adi:Sanskar ,why ur face longing look at urphone long time. are u waiting for any important call

Ranjith:important call or ur special girl call with teasing look as sanskar glare toranjith.. maan smiled lightly joined with ranjith join to tease sanskar

Maan:come on sanskar why u glaring to flirty,ur behavior like that only,urwaiting with grin tone

Sanskar:Ialready tensed,she did not call me long two days but everyone teasing me &yeah she is very important person in my life more than anyone with angry face.

Ranjithmurmur to sanskar ear : she is very important more than ur shona ( swara) withslow teasing tone.. sanskar embrassed but he did not say anything with ranjith& maan heared what ranjith said to sanskar, he know sanskar love his sisteralso he knew very well , he scared for their friendship break insake of he didnot confess his love with anyone except his sister (geet).

Maanthought : Sanskar waiting for important person call even person is girl ..maybe chances, he waiting for that Chennai express call light smile crept on hislip as remember previous phone conversation with sanskar sis.

Ranjithsmirked face : see now Maan in dream world …hey bros everyone come out fromdream world yaar.. class going to start..

Whoare in dream land voice come their behind..

Aditurn smiled: come Anika..

Anikasmiled genuinely to everyone except maan ,her face seeking something from maan& anika called his name , maan get up from chair , he went out withoutseeing her face, her tear moist in her eyes. Gang felt bad for her. Sanskar& Adi left behind Maan while gave sorry look to Anika ..Anika also move outfrom place.

Fewminutes she sat in playground corner place, her eyes filled with water.ranjithcome sit next with her,placed his hand in her shoulder.Anika look at Ranjith

Anika:why maan not love me ,I am not looking good with innocent voice..Ranjithchuckled hearing her baby tone.

Anikafumed face & hit him plaufully: Moron, stupid, why u put ur face likedonkey.. Ranjith held her hand & bring her very close to him ,his breathtouch her face,she have some goose bump in her body.

Ranjithsmirked face: first u must clear urself ,u love maan or its just attraction like other girls doingwith him with sharp voice.Anika pushed ranjith away from him..

Anika(stubborn voice) : I love him , I know very well.. I don’t need anyone clarificationin my love with him if I am not get him , I will die for my love with angryvoice & her eyes searched something from her bag ,take small knife from herbag & cut her wrist ..ranjith scared seeing her madness

Ranjithheld her wrist & tried to stop her bleeding: are u mad, why u cut ur wristwith angry face

Anikasmiled: its only small cut ranjith, if I did not get my love , I am not alivein this world ..i just shown my love for maan, she left the place but ranjith(shivaay ) got pain like someone sharpknife pierced in his heart

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Ranjithhouse

Ranjiththought: first I thought I just crush with you but day by day, I fallen lovewith you crazily Anika but u love with that maan who I want to wish kill himdaily through my bare hand..u love him..why u did not see my love filling eyes for u..why..everybitterness happened in my life why ..my life became tragedy because of u maan,u only destroyed my life,u snatched everything from me Maan.. I am not leave u..he shouting like madness man

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Ranjithphone ringed ,he attend her call with little smile face: hello anika

Anika:Ranjith, I need ur help..

Ranjith:yes mam, am ur service any time with flirty tone

Anika:Flirty ..stop ur flirt..

Ranjith:hey don’t call me flirty , maan only right call me to flirty with grinned tone.( opps actually he said fluently just forgot revenge with maan just fewsecond..hmm not bad right)

Anikachuckled face: yeah I am not calling that name..ur friend maan only have copyright.(ranjith got reality back ..thought he is not my friend ,he is myenemy) I need ur help, plz collect mything from xyz shop ..

Ranjith:I send anyone collect ur thing from shop ..

Anika:No.. u only go collect my thing with bossy tone..it very precious to me..

Ranjith:Precious to you more than maan with smirked face

Anika:yes ..she hanged down phone..

Ranjiththought : then myself only collect for my Anika…precious ..let see whatprecious items that was

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Shop

Ranjithtold shop keeper Anika thing,shop keeper placed little box in table..

Ranjithwerid face: I thought big parcel but its very smaller than ring box.. whatprecious thing inside in this box.let open it then I found out why I givingstress my brain.. Ranjith tried open box and same time his phone ringed ..he attend his call

Ranjith:yes uncle.. I am coming ..placed box in his pocket left the place with hurriedface

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Ranjith uncle house

Ranjith: uncle why u called me urgently..

R.Uncle: we get great chance to destroy khurana family,I boughtkhurana employee who maan & his dadi trust more than his own family.nowthat employee in our side.he would do anything for us

Ranjith excited face: how u did it

R.unlce: money shivaay.. it bought anything in this world.

(Shivaay & Ranjith both are same person don’t confuse ok)

Ranjith: then ur plan uncle with smirked face

r.uncle: khurana cotton textiles my first target, Khurana ‘s exportcotton to other countries through ship container, our mens mixed drugs bundleto cotton bundle with help of khurana employee.. no one found out drugs incontainer before they placed their Khurana product to ship , custom officercaugh drugs container in correct time.they arrest maan, drugs case is notsimple case ,he cannot just like that come out from jail.After his khuranareputation gone, he killed himself with own family reputation otherwise we willkill him in jail then we spread news because of drug case, he did suicide withevily plan.

Ranjith shocked face: why drugs case .. uncle.. with stammeringvoice

R.uncle held his shoulder : shivaay.. don’t forgot what he didwith u.. he is ur enemy..dont say u also fallen his black magic ..outside onlyhe showing he is pure person but inside he is cunning person like fox ..dontforgot ur father died because of them.

Ranjith : I never forgot with angry face.. one sec anika faceflashed in front of eyes.. I need time ..plz until I say don’t do anything& ranjith left the place.

R.uncle fumed face: he is changing …no ..i am not allow his griploosen from me..he is my puppet who destroy that khurana.. I will find out soon why he did back from his revenge..

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Ranjith come to usual favourite spot in mountain & shout :why Anika why anika ..why u come to mylife..today I betrayed my father because of my love for you, I stopped my uncleto revenge with maan who u love him that person reason of my father died.u r notlove me but I saved maan from my uncle plan because u love him.i scared ifanything happen to maan, you will kill urself why I caring about u.who love myenemy. why..i did not understand..he knelt down to floor ,his tear drenchedmuds.long time sat in same position..his hand touched his packet as rememberanika precious box with him, he opened that box..his eyes widely seeing thatthing.. he cannot trust his eyes.. he take gold chain from box.. it goldenchain with half heart pendant hooked. His tears face smiled crept brightly.omg sheis my..

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College

Anika curiously waiting for Ranjith come to college, he enter incollege casual way After looking anika eagerness,broad smile crept in his lips.

Anika : ranjith .. hey idiot, why u did not called me.. I amwaiting for ur call..where is my chain.

Ranjith casual: which chain..

Anika: I kill u..yesterday night u received from shop right ..giveme..

Ranjith hit his forhead : oh that one..i forgot in my house.Tomorrow I give u.

Anika fumed: no way we go to ur house.. we get chain from urhouse.. yesterday that chain broked u don’t know how to I felt ..Since my 10years old that chain with me .without held that chain, I cannot sleepproperly.u know yesterday sleep away from my eyes with pout face

Ranjith eager tone: why ..

Anika: because chain gifted by my Nandu ..my best best friend ..with happy face..

Ranjith: oh friend only gifted right why u create big drama withuninterested tone

Anika hit his shoulder : idiot he is not my just friend ..he ismy best friend . u don’t know anything about my Nandu ..u did not understandmine & Nandu relationship..its is very unique ..its apart from friendship,love ..

Ranjith: Aacha ji..then say u & chuckled face ur Nandustory..

Anika glared to ranjith & ranjith held his ear with puppy face, she smiled..

Anika: I met my Nandu when my 9 years old ,he is serious & khadoos character...he just angryman sorry sorry angry child…with chuckled face .he don’t know how to smile..

Ranjith shout : kya

Anika:shut up & don’t disturb.. Ranjith nod his head withgrinned face.. & Anika continues her & her Nandu story ..she don’t knowalready their class start and finish one session.One of their classmate interprettheir conversation sorry anika speaking while ranjith listening.

( Note : part already long one so their childhood story I willadd in upcoming part ..first I concentrate maaneet story & then Iconcentrate their love story blossoming ..yeah I add little story about them soyou r not confuse)

Anika angry glare to classmate: why u disturbing ourconversation ( ranjith thought when am I talking with her with weird face)moreover we have more time to start peter sir class ..

Classmate /friend taunting tone : oh yeah u have more time toattend peter sir class.. u just wait for next 24 hours.. person left the place.

Anika : 24 hours.. she look at her wrist watch & hit herforhead oh my god we lost peter sir class .next day he give me more lecturewith pout face.. Ranjith laughed seeing her face

Anika hit his shoulder : because of u,we lost our classlecture..

Ranjith : oyie , I did not nothing, everything did only ur Nandu.. I had not taken this responsibility ..

Anika : go to hell ..she left the place & forgot totally sheneed to collect chain from him.. ranjith take chain from his packet &smiled broadly ..

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Class room

Lecture was teaching important topic everyone listening with pindrop silence except sanskar..his look only with his phone.sanskar phone ringed.its very slow sound because of silencce..it hear like drums sound, every oneeyes shifted to sanskar ..he gave sheepish smile mainly who sitting next withhim..

Sanskar : sorry maan with whishper voice..he tried to attendcall before he should do ..maan pressed call end button.. sanskar sad look atmaan , he signed listen lecture first with angry face.once again phone ringing.Sanskar excited face tried take his phone..opps maan end the call & keptphone with his side .. repeatly phone was ringing time god lecture was finished.Everyone left except maan gang.sanskar taken long breathe & asked phonefrom maan give back to him, he nod his head negatively

Sanskar : why u not gave my phone.. lecture finished na withgrinned teeth.

Maan fold his hand to hischest : No still my lecture is pending..with stern voice.. phone ringingcontinuously ..maan attend phone with stern face

Maan: hello if u never use ur brain .everytime ur call cutted,udid not understand single thing ..who u calling that person was busy..why uthought about other suitation ..girls are selfish with angry face ..

Maan: hello are u in line or run out ..

Girl shout: I am hearing mister ..u continues with calm voice.

Her calm tone making maan to hyper.

Maan: you are useless,brainless person Girl interpret

Girl: no mister don’t say this word through phone with meekytone.

Maan grinned teeth : then what would I do.. come infront of you& shout in ur ears.

Girl : no mr.khadoos .. u don’t strain ur body like that..justgo infront of mirror shout this word..then word reach to correct person withangry tone.

Maan: You..

Girl: yes am I ..first u have any common sense….yeah first puton my bro phone to speaker mode ..right now with heavy bossy tone..one sec maanbody little shaken hearing her heavy bossy voice & fantastic group giggled seeingmaan face.. he come back to normal angry mode before he open his mouth ranjithsaid ur bhai phone already in speaker mood with naughty tone.

Geet: thanks for information & my bro friend were eavesdroppinghabit person.Ranjith pout look at everyone. U Mr.Khadoos.u want know right whyI continuously calling my bhai.My maa in hospital.

Sanskar & Maan unison:what with shocked expression..Sanskarcontinues..what happened to maa .why she is in hospital..with worriedtone.other stand in silent spectator with concern face.

Geet: bhai … oh .. threedays back she got accident.. her head & right hand injured with slow voice.

Sanskar: why u did not call me early with angry voice. maanplaced his hand in sanskar shoulder as tried to control him..

Geet: sorry bhai ..with sad voice..sanskar closed his eyes &control his anger.

Sanskar: how is maa now ..with hell worried tone.

Geet: she is ok but right hand injured heavly so she gotfractured & I knew very well ..After I call u ,u got angry with me but bhaiu have important project presentation last day. If I called u early, u lefteverything without consider about ur study,u come to Chennai. We don’t wantspoil ur carieer because of small accident.with slow voice .

Sanskar :May be u thought small accident but person who gotaccident..my mother ,our mother, I really hurt ur ignorance and u hellconcerned about my carieer & even papa not informed me.. No one consider asI am also one of the family member,his voice showing deeply hurt & painfulvoice.

Geet closed her eyes : Bhai I am sorry & don’t say ur notour family member and oh. And papa also not here.he went to out of station,because of landslides ,he also struck that place.

Sanskar: Oh god without dad how u both girls mananged hospitalsituation.. u r crazy .. maan thought no she is not crazy ,she is brave &understanding girl ..

Geet: Bhai, I am not kinder garden school kid. I am doing myfinal year & I could do face any suitation & don’t underestimate powerof ur sister with attitude voice.. Sanskar with everyone chuckled hearing herbold mixing of attitude voice.

Sanskar: I know u r Jhansi ki rani but be careful until I reachhere.

Geet: yeah come soon, ur mom stubborn like u.she doing big dramataking her medicines.This two days,I felt she is my daughter as I am her motherwith chuckling face.come soon then only I relieve from mother job with teasingtone

Sanskar : Don’t tease my mom..with warning tone..

Geet: Hello bhaiji.. don’t behave like over protective son withwarning tone & mom alright don’t panic. U come here without any rush withconcern voice.

Sanskar smiled: Ok sweety & take care u ,Mom & choti.

Geet: bhai one sec.. Hello Mr. Khaddoos ji I hope ur hearing mywhole conversation.first I am sorry disturbed ur important lecture but I don’t knew that bhai have class today.thenonly I called continuously. Sorry everyone with humbleful voice.. Maan thoughtshe so sweet next sec his thought vanished & don’t dare underestimate powerof women & Women were creator & also destroyer with warning tone.

Sanskar look at maan face & his angry increasing morehearing geetu attitude voice : sweety I call u later bye.

Geet: Bye bhai.. call end

Ranjith blast his laughter while other also joined with himexcept maan: Sanskar u r right she is unique girl.

Maan thought: yeah very unique, single phone conversation sheshowering all emotion angry,sweet,naughty,innocence & mainly her attitudewith smile smirked face.( Not bad Great Maan singh Khurana Impressed)

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Days moving fastly,day after tomorrow farewell party for MBAstudent. One side Anika & ranjith friendship so deep.she shared everythingwith ranjith.even though she knew maan never accept her as his lover, he alwaystreat her as good friend but sometimes she hurt seeing his ignorance after sheconfession her love to him.May be she was missing her good friend.Ranjithalways making her happy,cheer up through his naughtiness & teasing.sheunknownly fallen love with ranjith but she did not realize what relationship shewas sharing with him.

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Shivaay /Ranjith shout : what the hell,I already said don’texcute plan until I say why uncleexcuted his plan.

Man: Sir,Saab only said mixed drug packet in Khurana cottoncontainer & he clearly mentioned that u never know about his plan.

Shivaay: So u did not say me ..stupid with angry face left the place..

One person also listen their conversation whisper voice: Maanwith shocking face..

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Maan Speaking someone with angry face: you must find them soonwho try to destroy my business & family reputation..

Adi: Maan what happened why u shouting in phone..

Maan: Someone mixed drugs packet in our Khurana cottoncontainer.

Adi: what.. with shocked face.

Maan:Time god before custom officer reach harbor,our mendisposed drug packets from container & handover to Police commissioner.

Adi: how is it possible.we have high security arrangement, howits happened in our back..In our office only someone helping them

Maan : yes Adi.first we need found out who helping my enemy& After I will make them regrets why they mishaps with khurana with dangerface.

Adi : but maan how could u knew about this trap

Maan: we Thanks that unknown lady. One lady called me & informtheir plan but she did not say their names who want my destroy.i tried call herlady number once again but it phone booth.No one knew about that lady.

Adi : whatever maan That lady saved from big problem.

Maan: Hmm.. Both left from college.

Anika stood little far from Adi & maan ( mindthought):I Knewmaan what u both talking,I called u maan ,I cannot reveal my identity.I don’tknow why Ranjith want to destroy u.even why I did not reveal his name ,he onlytrying to destroy u.today I went to his home,I heared his conversation withguards.After hearing their conversation I totally shattered,why he couldharming u,maan.Why he was cheating u,he is ur friend but why.. I reallyconfused I don’t know what I will do .. One side ranjith other side you maan.First I need to clear my doubt with ranjith then I will tell u everything

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Farewell day

Everyone enjoying their last day college celebration, Anikaconfusing seeing ranjith friendly behavior with everyone mainly with maan,shewant shout how this man changing his behavior like chameleon,but she did notvoice out.ranjith tensed face went out party without seen anyone.Anika noticedhis exit, she tried to follow him but he already went from her sight.shedirectly went to ranjith home, may be changes he came to his home shethought.she got one more shock in her life.her body shivering hearing theirconversation no revelation.her heart beat increasing rapidly.

Anika scared face: I want to save him ..Maan.. her shiveringhand dialed maan number.. she tried many times but maan not pick up his phonebecause of heavy sound effects in party. Maan please pick up..please..

Anika: oh god.. please pick up..he did not pick up my call.. directlyI will go to tell him..

Man: see that girl heared everything & kill her.. Anikapanic..she run out behind man person chase her..

Party place..

Maan look at his phone & saw anika missed call : why anikacalled many times.. where she was.. she was not here in long time.. maan iscalling anika mobile.. other side anika running to escape from goons.

Anika : maan calling me… Anika hide behind in pillar,she attendher call .. maan clearly hearing her rapid breathing.. her breathed made hisworry about her.

Maan: anika where are you.. with worry tone

Anika: maan.. panic voice..

Maan: Anika ..what happened..

Anika: maan….goon tried to attack behind her back.. Anika pushedgoon to floor ..once again running while maan in line.

Maan: Anika ..she was in trouble ..i don’t know where she was.. Anika..where are u..

Anika: maan..plz come soon… I am ..XYZ place… plz.. with tearface

Maan: I am coming… don’t cut my call & dont panic.. iamcoming.. Anika ..Maan left the place..maan drive his car with full speed..

*******

Maan reached that place still he did not cut his call.. : Anikawhere are you..

Anika saw maan car & she come out from bush .. maan also sawher.. he step down from car.. run to her side while anika also running to him..before maan reach her, car hit anika as drove out from their sight with speed..suddenattack maan staunt in his place.. his whole body numb in few secs.his shiftedto anika , she in pool of blood in ground.his legs move to her, take her bloodfilled body in his arm & patted her cheeks..

Maan: Anika..open ur eyes.. oh god.. who the hell .. did it..openur eyes.

Goon hide behind the building & inform his boss: she wasdead…

Flash back end

Anika tears flowing inher eyes : why I am not died that day if I dead means no one suffer because ofme..geet not lost her husband..dadi not lost her grandson.. vicky & swaranot lost their brother.. sanskar & adi not lost their friend. today everythinghappened because of ur bloody revenge Nandu. I hate u too core of my heart.. Ihate u..

( Next part how anika was alive & why she blaming herselffor maan death ,I tell u later so wait guys for upcoming part)

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Sanjeevani Hospital

Sharmi: How are u Mrs Khurana ..with casual tone

Mrs.K : I am fine Dr.sharmi.. with attitude voice

Sharmi raise her eye brow: Geet u never changed yaar.. Now alsou behaved like Khurana Empire MD ,GMSK.Dont forgot u r my patient so behavelike patient with chuckled face

Geet cough lightly and sharmi offer water to geet..

Sharmi : what happened..

Geet: u only said right behave like patient.. so I did

Sharmi: very funny with mocking tone.. ur check up report in myhand.. u want to see

Geet: keep it with you but be careful no one know about myoriginal report & I asked right my fake report where that was..

Sharmi signed: both r in my hand only show her right hand thisone its ur original report & left hand its ur fake report.

Geet: Good, fake report sent to sanskar bhai through guard &say same thing to bhai what in fake report.. he surely call u after seeing myreport.

Sharmi: geet its necessary hide ur health issues from ur familywith concern voice

Geet: just few days after everything will be alright soon then Iwill tell everything to everyone.

Sharmi:.u r playing with ur life.. why u did not understanddammit with angry voice

Geet: I know but nothing will happen to me.. Plz trust me..

Sharmi : ok.. then u would do what I am saying only..you willtake complete rest & take ur medicine properly & u stay hospitalatleast 2 or 3 days.

Geet: I will do but I will stay here two weeks rather than 2 or3 days.

Sharmi shocked face: are u saying u r stay hospital even twoweeks not one or two days.. I m doctor ..dont making me to patient.

Geet: don’t shock sharmi… i am saying truth.. u care on ur other patient.. I hope that I mnot one & only ur patient.

Sharmi: yup..right ..take rest & i will be back..sharmi leftthe place

Geet placed her head in bed post: I hve more work do withoutanyone interpret so this is right place with smirked face.

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Maan apartment..

Maan was walking one side to other side with tensed face.. Adiwas watching maan movement without removing his eyes from him.

Adi: maan calm down.. why u getting tensed.. sanskar coming withgeet report..same time sanskar also reached

Maan almost snathed report from sanskar hand & his handshivering open her report…

Adi signed sanskar is it anything serious..sanskar nod his headnegatively.

Maan take long breathe : time god nothing any big issues in herhealth but why her bp raised.. with angry look to adi & sanskar

Sanskar : hello brother in law ji.. u r the reason increase herBP .. we were not..

Maan sad face: I know.. sanskar is it correct report right..

Sanskar : yes boss.. its correct report..show one more report tomaan..this is sharmi send report to me & in ur hand I got my another stafffrom sharmi hospital.. & both report was same ..u only hyper think abouther..she was perfect alright..because of stress.. her body was weak nothingelse.

Maan yeah both report r same but still I felt something hiddenfrom my eyes..

Sanskar : Maan wait I call geet after hearing her voice ,youwill be alright..

Maan give bright smile & sanskar calling geet no.. she didnot pickup his call..sanskar tried many time.. she did not..

Sanskar : may be she was sleeping..

Maan face fell down like 0 watts bulb: ok don’t disturb her..

Sanskar placed his hand to his shoulder : come on Man .. u rlook like teenage lover seeking single glimpse from his lover with teasingtone.

Maan smiled sadly & Adi enlighten his mood: Sanskar ursister curse come to truth one

Sanskar: what curse… Adi chuckled face remembering Flashback

Flashback start ( Before Maaneet official marriage)

Geet lips moving with so many angles.. with fuming face.. hereyes shifted to infront of people face

Geet: why everyone looking at me like I am doing bangra..

Swara: Nothing bhabhi.. we were calculating how many languages ur cursing bhai.. with giggled tone

Choti: oh my poor jiju.. he just not call u one day only ..but uscolding him more than 5 languages with teasing tone

Geet: jiju ki chamchi..u shut ur mouth don’t support him..itsjust one day for u but for me…

Its each sec passing like one epic for me with emotional voice..vicky side hug to geet..

Vicky: GB ,don’t worry I am ur side only..

Adi come to dinning hall: Good Morning everyone

Everyone replied : Good morning.. except geet..she in maan landright

Adi chuckled to geet: geet, he went to important meeting .. thereis no signal there.. so his call not reach u.. after he come back from site ..hesurely would call u.

Geet grumpy face: jiju.. today what I feeling same way ..he willalso feel like me some day, One day he is craving to hear my voice that day henever

Adi giggled face: don’t curse my bro, Ok lets go to office.. otherwiseMSK back to office then shout no one do their work properly in my absence withmaan imitate voice .. geet giggled ..both left to office.

Flash back end

Adi : we were happy inour paradise. why God was playing cruel game with us.. with hurt voice

Maan: No Adi,we should not have blame god ..everything happenedin our life because of that bloody culprits.i never leave that culprits toalive in this world with angry face

**********

Sanjeevani Hospital

Geet working in her laptop in hospital and sharmi snatchedlaptop from her.. geet angry glare to sharmi..

Sharmi: hello madam don’t raise ur eyebrow ..i should not scareur look with dramatic tone.

Geet:give my laptop back to me.. I am sending urgent mail withwarning voice

Sharmi: No chances.. give glass of milk.. have this milk &then sleep peacefully

Geet: Peace with sad smirk .. my sleep left long ago from mesharmi with scarastic voice

Sharmi touch her shoulder : we know each other from childhood .. I never saw thisgeet in my life time. Ur my open book to everyone now ur mystery to me.i didnot understand ur single step geet..

Geet smiled sadly :I am not mystery sharmi but my life filledwith mystery ..i am trying solve that mystery.. I don’t know I will win or losein my life game.

Sharmi: don’t confused more.. already my mind thinking what r u doing ,why , for whom.. more questionrunning in my mind ..not anymore..& one person come to met u right.. who he was ..ur not comfortable with him even he also stood infront of u in guility face

Geet: u know sharmi.. some times we need shake our hand with ourenemy.. life was really mystery or riddles we don’t know what would happen tonext sec..

Sharmi give back to her laptop & fold her both hand : Icannot.. I need to go check my other patient.. u will do ur work but fewminutes only with strict voice..

Geet give one report to sharmi : be careful sharmi ..

Sharmi confused look at geet and open that reports that geetoriginal report but her report keep safe with me but how she got this file..

Sharmi: this report ..

Geet: that report same time Geet phone ring up ,gesture sharmi Itell u later & attend her call : yes Mr. Oberai.. You did what I said withbossy voice..sharmi left the room with confused face

Shivay: yes I did it what u said Mrs. Khurana.. with slow voice

Geet: Good ..i hope you r not stab me like u did to ur closeone.

Shivaay closed his eyes: This time you could trust me

Geet: that good for u & that deal yours..

Shivaay: Geet.. I am helping u not sake of our deal.. just getlittle peace to my heart.

Geet laughed : Mr.oberai u r saying about heart..if first u have heart .,u never cheat ur close…(geet close her eyes controlled her emotion) forgot .. I did not need any favourfrom u .. it just deal from both of us.once again never say u r helping me& never try to cheat me in ur dreams also.. if u will ..this business worldwould forget Oberai industries one company here in their association.. oneminute I will ash ur industries ..this is Geet maan singh Khurana promise..withangry face. cut the call without get his reply ..

Geet closed her eyes : I hate u maan.. really I hate u.. I lost myself.. I hate u…

**********

Choti: stop the car

Vicky:why u shouting idiot ,people thought that I am kidnappingyou in my car .

Swara:both stop it yaar ,we r team, we don’t what we r doing,why we r doing everything , I already confused..between both of you I cannottolerate with teary face.

Choti side hug to swara : sorry shona

Vicky: I am sorry but I don’t know why everyone was hiding bigmatter from us,why my sense saying that its related to maan bhai

Swara : I know bhai but we r lost our bhai

Vicky with angry face: even we lost him but we need to find outwho the hell separate our bhai from us

Choti: yeh calm down ..u said right we got clue what was that

Vicky: yeah my friend told that he saw adi bhai more time inforest side area,he is wild photographer.

Swara: forest area …

Vicky: hmmm may be we will get any clue there & even my friendfollowed adi bhai & its lonely building in between of forest , he was notenter in building because of heavy security

Choti : I cannot believe that why adi jiju was going that typeof place

Vicky: my doubt increasing more than before ,adi bhai know somethingbut hidden from us

Swara: then why u waiting start the car we need go that place

Vicky : I am also doing same right because of her stupid stund Istopped the car

Choti fuming face: sorry but you must inform early that ur fault..swararolled her eyes : enough

…………

Hospital

Sharmi with fear face : what the hell ,that girl make me crazywhat would I say to sanskar bhai ,he definitely kill me as he know that geetwas missing in my hospital

.........

What the hell they were doing here... with frustrated evenmore concerned voice.

End

Next part Link below after Precap

Precap

Man : Good to see you Mrs.khurana

Geet with attitude face:I dont think it's good for you

Man: iam impressed even u r in my gun point your attitude neverleft from u……with evily smirk tone.

………

Hospital –

Sanskar : I don’t know how could I say about geet to maan .. Icannot

Adi : Sanskar even me too in same state

Maan : what happened why both of u tensed

Adi : Maan , its about geet, she wasmissing

Maan with confused face :geet ….

>………

Gun shots for who...

😉Wait for next part


NEXT PART Link - PART 59 - Page 4

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Awesome update n maan can feel maan that maan is with her n she ask about it to sanskar n he lied her n sharmi told them about geet condition n she needs rest as is weak n she needs to admit in hospital for her check up n maan was suspect her n he ask sanskar that he needs geet reports for other staff of hospital and sanskar told him about his surgery n he needs to admit but maan told them first he needs geet reports n then only he will admit n please pm me too

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Itna suspense ful update😕

But great update

Please update soon revail why they separate what happened to maaneet

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precap is really scary........


maan n geet both are not well......but both r trying to ignore it..........whts happening.......its really madness...........


nice update...........

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 58


Fabulous , Worrisome and Excellent Update



Maan had come home to his and Geet's room

he slept on his bed next to Geet

then why is he making her suffer so much

if he is suffering from some condition or illness he was

suppose at least trust in Geet and tell her

but instead he stays away from her and his family

its only Sanskar and Adi that knows where he is

Shivaay and his uncle are terrible putting drugs in Maan's shipment

trying to ruin Maan's business and his family name

Anika found out that Shivaay wanted revenge from Maan

and she met with an accident as a speeding car bumped her

but I think Maan must have taken her to the hospital

Geet is she now doing business with Shivaay

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Part 58

why is Maan doing to Geet?

What is wrong with Maan?

sad seeing them like this.

Shivay is trying to ruin Maan.

oh no Anika went in an accident

hope Anika will be fine.

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intriguing precap... update soon and do pm

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58

great update

misture of past n present very well

maan n geet both are facing health problem but hiding from family

geet can sense maan around her

jope every thing become normal soon

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Originally posted by: natashathakur

Awesome update n maan can feel maan that maan is with her n she ask about it to sanskar n he lied her n sharmi told them about geet condition n she needs rest as is weak n she needs to admit in hospital for her check up n maan was suspect her n he ask sanskar that he needs geet reports for other staff of hospital and sanskar told him about his surgery n he needs to admit but maan told them first he needs geet reports n then only he will admit n please pm me too


Thanks for comment dear

of course i do Pm for u when i will send pm everyone

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Originally posted by: hira2010

Itna suspense ful update😕

But great update

Please update soon revail why they separate what happened to maaneet


Thanks for comment

Yeah next part revelation starts

I love suspense 😆

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