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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks for the update! It was beautifully written and you could feel Maan’s pain. His mother is a selfish woman and is still lying to this day. She has no remorse. Sanjana and Geet together should sort out the evil witch... that would be fun! 😁

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART 127



This update was filled with every emotion, be it sweet, hurt, confusion or suspense..... There was every element in the chapter



Happy that finally Geet is moving on from her pain, it has been difficult for both of them but Maan stood there waiting for Geet and eventually and finally Geet came back. Their sweet moment are the best part of the updates.... I live to read those😅😍



It was sad to see Amelia so tired and in self doubt..... Karan will need to reassure her again again, it will be a difficult journey for them for some time but I am sure they will too overcome it



What is it that Vikrant is hiding... There is nothing more to say about that

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART 128


I know it's important to have some suspense to build up the story but now that I realized there are back to back three suspense

1. What is Amelia hiding? Thank god we got to know about it, even though it was sad


2. What are Taz and Sam talking about? I mean I know they are discussing about dadi but what is connection between her and Adi and Sanjana🧐


3. What is Vikrant hiding?

I hope to get the answer in coming updates


Also I felt like it was update to build the bridge for the coming updates.... It was somewhat similar to the previous where maaneet moments were sweet, Vikrant was mystery and Amelia and Karan together in their pain.... The addition was Araina and Ranbir part where Araina was bit paranoid and according to me Ranbir is being protectful of her because of her ex

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update dear, gaytariis such a shameless person, she didn't have any regret as years ago she left her family for another rich man,

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART 129


I love the maaneet moments, it will be always difficult for them to remember their little angel but I hope with time they would remember the sweet memories of her before her arrival with smile.... Liked the way dadima tried to lighten the moment and Maan teasing Geet was missing this part from a long time, happy to read about it


It's good at least Meera said what was in her heart instead of suffocating inside..... And even though it must have been shocking for Vikrant, hopefully he will see how his behavior is sprouting doubts in Meera's and a bridge in their relationship


Oh my..... Gayatri entry was shocking part of the update, she is Adi step mom, that makes Adi stepbrother of Maan and Vikrant.... How is this realization change their relations..... I don't think it would bring much change and if it does I think it may be negative for Maan and Adi bcoz Maan hates Gayatri but Adi loves his mom but I am gonna go with Sanju Taz and Sam judgement she is not a good lady

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 130


Karan is right if Amelia doesn't let her dad know about her condition he will be heartbroken learning about it later, and as Karan said right now what she need is family she should not hide it just to save them from pain..... It's sweet that Karan proposed Amelia but it was truly not a good time but still it's shows his sincerity


It was nice to see boys and girls bonding..... It will be good for future as well bcoz Maan and Geet are gonna stay in London for a long period of time


I was wondering what did Taz and Sanju made Geet purchased and when I understood it's a pet I hoped it was a puppy🐶 but again it was kitten, I think you are a cat person bcoz in Nikah too there was crystal and here too.... Loved Maan's reaction and Geets 's drama


It was heart stopping moment while reading Maan's part after he faced that woman of his life who he just wanna forget, she was standing in front of him


There are few confusion which hopefully will be solved with future updates


1. How does Adi know dadi?

There is definitely going to have some past part according to me


2. Would love to know Kaira's character a bit more to understand her


3. Why Sam and Taz were trying to avoid Dadi and Adi and Sanju meeting dadi?


4. How Maan and Geet going to handle this new problem when they just overcome the previous one


5. And what is Vikrant hiding

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Posted: 5 years ago

How hard it must have been on young Maan to see his mother leave him and his brother crying without any second thought, your explaination to make his pain understand really touched me, I could literally feel the sadness...... No wonder he had trust issues


Vikrant💔I truly didn't thought it was this, God so much pain in just the start of the update.


One side Maan is trying to fight his past demon which reappear in his live bringing all the painful memories and other Meera got to know her husband kissed someone else and that someone else is already that person who made her feel insecure😫😢


Every character is going through their own dilemma and problem



Such a 🤬, so easily Gayatru lied to everyone to make herself the victim, when in the past she was the one who left her own children without looking back and she is saying dadi didn't let her leave with her own kids, truly she is venomous 🐍...... Maan on the other hand still feeling the pain of this lady leaving them behind. Whenever Gayatri was calling dadu by her name and feeding lies to others my temper was raising, her every dialogue was making me crazy.


God, I don't know to side with whom, Amelia for thinking about others before herself or everyone else to want to tell the necessary people in their lives..... I mean both are right at their place but hiding or delaying is a no no, what about situation was reversed without Amelia wanna know firsthand.


At least end was like a balm to the heart wrenching update where Maan and Geet understand, support and love each other unconditionally...... This is the bond which truly develops with time


Would love to see how story move forward now with so many problems in characters lives and how they overcome as winner


Update as soon as you can, will be waiting for it

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Posted: 5 years ago

Chapter 132


"You did what?" Meera turned around, her eyes narrowed and furious.

"I... well not kissed" Vikrant murmured as he watched his wife climb down the steps and come towards him.

"What do you mean by YOU KISSED-NOT KISSED Jennifer? You either kissed her or you didn’t. Which is it?" Her fingers tightened around the water jug.

"I didn’t kiss... her... but it might seem like it did" Vikrant mumbled as he tried to make sense of what he was saying.

Unable to hold back her rage within, Meera flung the jug, the cold water splashing fiercely on Vikrant’s face.

"MEERA" Vikrant hissed rubbing his face.

"Sit down and tell me what the hell you’re talking about, I’ve had enough of these secrets, enough of you lying and being silent. Tell me the truth, Vikrant. You either kissed another woman or you didn’t, despite being married to me" her voice trailed off, anger, hurt evident in her tone.

Vikrant sighed heavily brushing his hand through his now wet hair.

"Jennifer and I were shooting, a sequence of us kissing, well pretending to kiss" he started slowly. "This was supposed to be a surprise for our fans, it was under wraps. Only crew members knew about it, the day we were shooting for it someone snapped us from an angle where it seems we were kissing. I didn’t even know until I received an envelope with the pictures inside, it was edited in a way that it seemed we were without clothes as well".

Meera listened without interrupting him, his words sinking in.

"This… b*stard who snapped us started blackmailing me, each interview I've mentioned you and he knew you were my weakness, if I told you I know you'd stress over it because the images would leak out, he was going to send them you if I didn’t pay up. I didn’t want to hurt you with the media frenzy that would have followed, I didn’t want to add onto the stress".

His confession was like a soothing balm over her sinking heart, she had assumed the worst when he'd uttered those words, thought it had relieved her it didn’t stop the hurt or anger she felt towards her husband.

"How couldn’t you have told me?" she questioned.

"I didn’t want to stress or hurt you with this, Meers. I was closing in on the b*stard who's been blackmailing me" he answered.

"That doesn’t excuse the silence, I wished you trusted me enough to tell me" she murmured. "Haven't we gone through enough to trust each other blindly?" she questioned.

"I'm so sorry, Meers" he stepped forward taking her hand into his and squeezed.

Meera freed her hands from his and turned climbing up the stairs, she paused hearing footsteps behind her, "Don’t follow me, you're not sleeping next to me" she stated without a single glance over her shoulder. If she had looked over, she would’ve seen Vikrant's pained face as he realised that he had hurt his wife even more.

"I just wish you'd have told me" she murmured and walked towards their bedroom.

Geet watched her husband moving around their bedroom, it was only nearing 7am and despite sleeping late, he was up and ready for work. Recently, he hadn’t started until 9am. "Maan" she called sitting up and leaning against the headboard.

"Hey" Maan approached her side settling on the edge and pressed a kiss to her forehead. "Sleep for some more time, dadima isn’t going to be waking up anytime soon" he told her.

"You’re going to work?" she asked concerned.

"Yes, I’m not going to let that woman affect me" he informed, he had woken up determined. He allowed himself to be vulnerable due to the sudden shock of seeing her, however that was now behind him. He wasn’t going to let the woman have an affect on his life, she didn’t exist for him.

Geet cradled his cheek, "Then stay, have breakfast as we have been doing altogether then go to work" she replied.

"I’ve got things at the office that I..."

"I don’t want to hear anything" Geet cut him off shaking her head, "You’re going to stay and eat breakfast, then you’re going to give me my kiss - after that you’re going to work" she stated.

Maan smiled softly closing his eyes when Geet leaned forward and pressed a kiss to his nose.

"Go and sit watching the news or something, I’m going to brush my teeth and then prepare something" she gestured.

He managed to smile properly, leaning forward he kissed his wife slowly and gently. He couldn’t have thanked her for her support, she was pulling him back before he allowed the woman affect him anymore. He hoped to disappear and immerse himself into his work and forget that the woman he hated most was a couple of feet away.

"Meera?" Anisha looked pleasantly surprised seeing her walk in. Meera greeted her with a hug exchanging pleasantries with one another.

"Did you finish work just now?" she asked.

"Just a little bit ago, woh Amelia text me saying she’ll be staying here for a while" Meera responded.

"Haan, woh upar hai" Anisha pointed, "Why don’t you go up and see her? I’ll bring some tea and snacks for you both".

"Please don’t trouble yourself, I won’t be staying for long" she informed, "I’m just going to check up on her" she excused herself and headed upstairs. Amelia was sat leaning against the headboard of the room switching channels on the tv.

"Knock, knock" Meera knocked on the door.

Amelia smiled faintly climbing out of bed, Meera was beside her in an instant, both of them enveloping one another tightly. Both girls had missed one another the last couple of days, they had been each other’s support whenever they needed.

"How are you?" Meera pulled away slowly brushing Amelia’s hair away from her face.

"Still alive" Amelia shrugged.

"Don’t joke like that" Meera scowled cradling both her cheeks, "I don’t want to even think of losing another friend. I’ve lost one already" she murmured. Amelia sighed climbing back into bed and pulling the blanket over herself.

"Have you spoken to Geet?" Meera sat down on the edge of the bed.

Amelia shook her head, "I... I won’t tell her about me and neither will you mention anything" she stated firmly.

Meera couldn’t counter her decision because Amelia wasn’t the only one hiding, they were all hiding something. When had secrets come between them all? They’d once laid out their lives bare in front of their friends and family yet here they all are hiding one thing or the other.

"How have you been? How is Karan?" Meera questioned.

"He’s been supportive, but I hear him speaking to Anisha aunty. He’s scared" Amelia said, despite Karan seemingly trying to be strong he was afraid of what the future held for them.

"Everyone is" Meera agreed reaching for Amelia’s hand and squeezed.

"Are you okay? How is my boyfriend?" Amelia asked trying her utmost best to be cheerful and teasing.

"Your boyfriend is in the dog house right now and isn’t coming out so easily" Meera huffed.

"Uh oh, what did he do now?"

"You don’t even want to know" Meera shook her head.

"Try me, it’d give me something to focus on something else other than..." Amelia trailed off.

Meera then explained everything keeping out the fact that she’s been immensely hurt and insecure due to his silence and the closeness that was highlighted in every damn article.

"My boyfriend is stupid" Amelia shook her head, "you’d think he’d know better".

"Why am I stupid?" Karan walked in looking curiously between both friends. "I’ve not done anything" he added.

"We’re talking about Vikrant" Meera informed, "your cousin is an asshat and I wish I’d not been dumb enough to fall for his cheesy pick up lines" she muttered.

Karan chuckled, "I’m sure whatever he’s done, he’s regretting it".

"He’s got a lot of making up to do" Meera informed nodding her head then looked at Amelia. "Have you chosen a treatment? Or doctor?"

"We’re meeting a couple of them over the next few days" Amelia answered.

"Okay, if you want me to join let me know. I’d like to be there" Meera responded.

Amelia nodded, Karan was very supportive right now however Amelia could do with her friend as well during the difficult time. She would have loved it even more having Geet here holding her hand as well.

"I’d appreciate that" Amelia answered. "Karan is making me meet around 4 doctors in one day" she pouted mockingly.

"Yes, only so we could weed out the best one" Karan shifted stretching on the bed settling besides her, "I want to hear who’s got the best treatment and who’s sensitive" he added.

"I agree" Meera nodded, "you don’t want a doctor who just thinks you’re a new challenge for him as some doctors do, they don’t consider that you are a life".

"Okay, I’ll listen to what you’ve got to say" Amelia held her hands up in mock surrender.

"Good" Meera smiled, she leaned forward pressing a kiss to Amelia’s cheek. "I’ve got to get home, text me".

"See you later" both Amelia and Karan bid bye to her as she walked out.

"Meera" Anisha called noting that she was climbing down the stairs. "Going already?" she questioned curiously.

"Yes, I’ve got to get home. I’ve got some work to do and prepare something to eat tonight" she explained.

"I’ve got some containers packed, take these with you" she told her walking to the table where she had already packed a bag of homemade food. "Eat with Vikrant and take care of your eating, you’re eating for two" she added surprising Meera who stared taken aback.

"H...how did... How did you know?" Meera asked softly.

"I was pregnant, not once but twice" Anisha smiled, "Why have you not told anyone? This is happy news, Meera".

"What happened with... I’m worried and I don’t want to hurt Geet".

Anisha smiled gently, caressing Meera’s cheek she said "Do you think Geet would be hurting to know her best friend is pregnant? She’s going to be happy for you, yes she might remember her daughter but she’ll be happy for you. She wouldn’t be unhappy with this news".

Meera thought over her words carefully.

"Don’t take too long to tell everyone" Anisha added, "And take care of yourself properly, if you ever want anything don’t hesitate to come for me" she patted her cheek. Meera smiled and gave Anisha a hug and headed back towards the mansion. It didn’t surprise her to see that their mansion is silent once again.

Geet had just bid bye to Maan and was closing the door when a hand reached out stopping her. She frowned confused and opened the door. "Taz, Sanjana, what are you two doing here?"

"We’ve come to talk" Sanjana replied.

"Not now please" Geet shook her head, Maan might not be here but dadima was and she was sat on the sofa waiting.

"Is Maan, Gayatri aunty’s son?" Sanjana asked slowly. Before Geet could answer, dadima had intervened having heard them.

"That woman isn’t related to any of us in any way" dadima walked over.

Sanjana shared a look with Taz pondering over the hatred filled look that lingered in dadima’s eyes and the tone of her voice.

"It’s best if we keep some distance for a little while" Geet suggested. Taz and Sanjana agreed nodding their heads and returned to their apartment.

"Something isn’t right" Sanjana stated, "the woman looks beyond pissed off" she commented.

"You sure Cruella isn’t lying?" Taz questioned unlocking her door and entering inside followed by Sanjana.

"I’m sure she’s hiding something, why would a mother disown her own child?" she questioned.

"And Geet’s spoken highly of her" Taz reminded. "The woman is old, and doesn’t seem like she’s got a malicious bone in her body" she added.

"Cruella is either lying or hiding something" Sanjana declared.

"Cruella isn’t going to spill the beans to us, she’s got her flawless image to keep up for Aditya and her husband" Taz informed, "And, you heard what Geet said they want space - so how will we find out what she’s hiding?"

Maan sat on his desk staring ahead blankly, he’d closed the blinds and locked the door informing his assistant that he didn’t want to be disturbed, he had even called the clients to reschedule their appointment.

There wasn’t a time he had come to the office and simply stared at his surroundings, even when he’d first moved to Manchester he allowed himself work to distract his mind wanting to keep himself occupied and not overthink in trying to understand as to why his daughter had not made it into his arms long enough.

This situation, however was proving difficult. He pinched the bridge of his nose sighing heavily in frustration, he saw Gayatri each time he closed his eyes, which was quickly followed with the memory of Geet cradling their daughter. They had their daughter for a couple of minutes in their arms, lifeless yet the powerful pull of love tugged at their hearts, so how hadn’t the woman who’d given birth, who had raised them for a little while leave them due to the greed for money? How could she have left them so cruelly? They had just lost their father, she hadn’t allowed them to cry because she had already found out the husband she’d bagged in the hopes of becoming rich was in fact losing all his money and the little money that had remained was put under his and Vikrant’s name.

If she once had told him to bring her the moon, he’d had worked day and night to give that if it meant that she remain and raise them with her love. He would have worked his damned hardest for that woman and she had ruined him within a few minutes.



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Posted: 5 years ago

Chapter 132

Vikrant finally opened up and now Meera is relieved but hurt that he chose to hide such a fact from her. Two of Geet’s best friends are hiding something from her, I hope at least Meera will inform her of the pregnancy. Maan trying to get normal and Geet is putting her best in his support

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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely update, Every one has so much to deal with. This shows that life is not a cake walk and you have written well from everyone point of view. I wish everything goes back to normal and all of them are back together and happy. I still feel Maneet should come back home and start fresh rather than staying in a different country among strangers trying to forget their sorrows.

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