STREE***** DBL. UPDATE pg. 26 ****23/02/2020

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STREE

(THE WOMAN)

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Today, I'm starting a new story, “STREE” (The Woman) on my birthday, 16th January. This story tells about determination, courage and love of a woman keeping her integrity, character and virtue intact. How she faces dual faced men in society with intelligence and dignity. In this story as the name suggests Maan will not be the main focus but Geet. As concept is not new and hence it will be similar to many stories. It also has underlying fantasy to it thereby making it illogical at certain times.

I’m out of town for three weeks and therefore will commence the main story either after completion of “Meri Mishty Kaun??” or after I return. Whichever happens first!

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ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS . Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. There also maybe some HINDU MYTHOLOGICAL references but they all are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. If any resemblance to persons, places, events and stories is there, it is purely coincidental! It has FANTASY (totally untrue) undertones to it. KINDLY READ IF ONLY COMFORTABLE!!!

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CHARACTER SKETCH



KINGDOM OF RAMGARH (FICTITIOUS PLACE)

RAJMATA SAVITRI DEVI (KHURANA) RAJSINGHANIA



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76 yr. Old. Queen Mother of Kingdom of Ramgarh. Chairperson of Khurana Group of Industries i.e. Khurana Constructions, Khurana Interiors and textiles, Khurana Hotels, Khurana Hospitals, Khurana Foundation etc. Khurana Industries was launched by Savitri Devi’s father-in-law, Maharaj Indravadhan who felt that times of Royalty have long been over. Present times, status is based on merit (kaarye kshamta) of a person. Savitri Devi’s husband had started Khurana Hospitals so that excellent medical care is provided to Khuranas as well as the society. Savitri Devi’s husband, Amarjeet was a renowed cardiologist. Savitri Devi is a firm believer of parampara (traditions) and royal protocol. But she is also a very warm person and treats her daughter-in-law as her daughter. Despite of being Royalty she has lot of compassion for citizen of her Kingdom whether they are rich or poor. Hence people of Ramgarh love and respect her. However, she knows where to draw the line and is extremely conscious about respect and pride of Rajsinghania Rajparivar (royal Rajsinghania family).



MAHARAJ SATYAJEET (KHURANA) RAJSINGHANIA



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57yr. Old king of Kingdom of Ramgarh. CEO of Khurana Group of Industries. Yuvraj Madhav Rao Rajsinghania (Maan) is the apple of Maharaj’s eye. Maharaj Satyajeet is an extremely loved and just ruler. He loves his son, Maan to the level of obssession. He is unable to bear if Maan is not in front of his eyes once in every 24hrs. He is constantly scared about Yuvraj Maan leaving Maharaj Satyajeet and Khurana Industries. He even gets nightmares showing that Maharaj Satyajeet is dead, Yuvraj Maan thrown out of the Palace & Khurana Industries, and his nephew, Rajkumar Arjun is being crowned as the “King of Ramgarh”.



MAHARANI SUMITRA (KHURANA) RAJSINGHANIA



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54yr. Old. She is very elegant, graceful and compassionate person. She is a well educated and she often displays her intellectual side while advicing Maharaj Satyajeet in decision making. But in front of her husband’s elder brother, Rajkumar Yudhjeet she prefers not to display her intellectual side and get insulted. She loves all her sons equally but has an especially soft corner for her nephew Arjun.






RAJKUMAR YUDHJEET RAJSINGHANIA




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60yr. Old. He is first cousin of Maharaj Satyajeet. Although he is elder to his cousin, Satyajeet in age but Maharaj Satyajeet’s father was elder to Rajkumar Yudhjeet’s father. Besides Yudhjeet’s extragavant ways i.e. alcoholism and womanising along with lack of responsibility regards royal duties made Yudhjeet’s grandfather, Maharaj Indravardhan crown Satyajeet as King/ “Maharaj” of Ramgarh and Rajkumar Madhav Rao Rajsinghania (Maan) as “Yuvraj”. Yudhjeet has an extremely short temper which is extremely volatile when aroused. He is still living in olden times where girls are not allowed to study. Women are meant to be looked at but not be involved in any decision making! Also, if the royal name of Rajsinghania’s is ridiculed by any royal family member, he will not keep quite until Maharaj Satyajeet doesn’t disown that person even if it his family member. There is a dark and evil side of his life which no one is aware!


YUVRAJ MADHAV RAO RAJSINGHANIA (MAAN SINGH KHURANA) (Maan)



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35yr. old Crown Prince of Ramgarh. He is the eldest son of Maharaj Satyajeet and Maharani Sumitra. He has done his Bachelors in Architecture as well as MBA. He is the future heir of Khurana Industries as well as successor to the throne of Ramgarh. He is an extremely obedient son and has so far never disobeyed his elders including his scheming uncle (Tau-sa). He is a very compassionate, dedicated and humane man who always goes out of his way to help poor and needy inside as well as outside his kingdom. However he has otherside to his personality as well which he keeps hidden from his family i.e. he is very impatient, ruthless and has a violent as well as uncontrollable temper. Maan tries to be patient and keep his temper under control by doing yoga so that he seldom looses his patience and temper. He has also learnt to be patient as well as control his temper by his intensive military training. He lives a triple life - Crowned Prince of Ramgarh, MD of Khurana Construction as well as “Black Cat” Commando.

Yuvraj Madhav Rao Rajsinghania believes on getting success by one’s own merit just like his grandfather as well as bringing his education to use, hence he has opened a new wing in Khurana Group of Industries called, Khurana Constructions. Now he is MD of Khurana Constructions.

Simultaneously he is also being trained for the job of CEO of Khurana Group of Industries by JSK (Jeet Singh Khurana). For security reasons, he goes under the name of “Maan Singh Khurana” when outside Ramgarh. He is extremely intelligent and a tough employer to please. His impatience, ruthlessness and uncontrollable temper come out against inefficient KC staff. He hates lies, gossip & deceit. Maan always supports truth even if its spoken by people who are of lower status and of a lesser intellect than him. For him merit of a person is more important than his/her social status!

Unknown to his family, Maan is a “Black Cat” i.e. Commando on Special duty and at rank of a “Colonel”. He goes around under the code name of “Narsimha” (Half man and half beast!). Maan loves rifle and pistol shooting as a hobby, maybe it was because of his royal blood! He had also been taught ‘talwaar baazi’ (sword fighting) according to his Rajsinghania Rajparivar (royal Rajsinghania family) parampara (family’s tradition). It was one day that Major General Virendra Shekhawat from Indian army (FICTITIOUS NAME & DESIGNATION) saw Maan shooting at the shooting club. Major General Shekhawat was extremely impressed with his shooting skills and wanted to train Maan as ‘Black Cat Commando’. Although Maan was hesitant that he will not be able to do justice to the prestigious job of Commandos due to his royal duties as well as Khurana Constructions. But Major General Shekhawat convinced Maan that it will be only on some special cases not on regular combat basis that the Army will need his help. During training Maan’s concentration, diligence and integrity also made Major General Shekhawat positive that Maan was the right man for the job. But no one in Maan’s family, including Rudra is aware of Maan being a Black Cat Commando.

Maan has no love life despite the girls are willing to become his slave seeing his looks, wealth and royal title. However, Maan had seen a young girl (10-15yrs. younger than him) five years back in one of the charity shows dancing and was smitten by her and wanted to marry her but didn’t know anything about her i.e. name, social status or family background. Besides it would have been against his royal family’s “maryaada” (protocol, rules, regulations, values and etiquette) if he would have broached his marriage topic in front of his grandmother, uncle and father. However, Maan has made a sketch of the girl he has fallen in love with and often talks to the sketch as if it was as real person. Maan is a man of totally opposite interest as oneside he is a devotee of Lord Shiva and does fast and prayers for Lord Shiva every Monday and the otherside a Black Cat Commando!


RAJKUMAR ARJUN RAO (KHURANA) RAJSINGHANIA




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32 yrs. old. He is one and only son of Rajkumar Yudhjeet. He has done Hotel Management as well as MBA. He is extremely shy, sensitive and very artistic youngman. He hero worships his “Maan bhai”. His passion is music and painting which is always a cause of anger for his father. In order to save Arjun from constant humiliation by his father, Maan is training Arjun under him so Arjun can soon take over Khurana Hotels and Savitri Devi can announce him as MD of Khurana Hotels. For Arjun, Maan’s order is like the order from the Almighty. He may ignore his father, Rajkumar Yudhjeet’s orders but never Maan (much to the anger and annoyance of Rajkumar Yudhjeet). Arjun is also not very close to his father as he hates his father’s plans which only aim at harming his Maan bhai’s happiness, feelings, or physical safety. Arjun hates Rajkumar Yudhjeet’s constant cribbing about not getting the throne of Ramgarh, hence he only visits his father, Rajkumar Yudhjeet when Maan sternly orders it!



RAJKUMAR (MAJOR) RUDRA PRATAP (KHURANA) RAJSINGHANIA (Rudra)




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30yrs. old. He is second son of Maharaj Satyajeet and Maharani Sumitra. He is an Army officer and is known as Major Rudra Pratap Khurana, which is only known to Maan. Maharaj Satyajeet wants him to get involved in Khurana Industries but he is not interested. Maharaj feels Rudra is whiling away his time in body building, camping and trekking. Rudra is inseperable from Maan when he is at home. He is a black belt in Karate and a fitness freek like Maan. His sun rises with Maan as well as his sun sets with Maan. It is an understood norm in his family that where Maan will go, Rudra will follow (when Rudra is at home)! He has well toned body with 8 pack abs. His name personifies his persona. He is powerful, strong with a violent temper ready to erupt in a split second. He is wary of girls but girls fall for him like ninepins. However, due to his temper and attitude girls are forced to maintain a distance from him. There have been only two times when he has ever respected as well as been impressed by two girls. One was when he had gone along with his Maan bhai to a charity function and met an extremely graceful young lady. The young lady was very polite, well mannered, calm, composed and poised perfect for his obedient, traditional and calm Maan bhai. Rudra was wishing that this young lady marries his Maan bhai and becomes his “bhabhi” but unfortunately this “Swayamvar” business has come up! Second time was when he had encountered a simple, strong and selfless girl working in a village by educating them. But he did not know anything about her i.e. name, social status or family background. Although looking at the girl wearing simple village clothes, Rudra always felt that the girl belongs to a rich and cultured family but is just hiding behind the persona of a village belle!

RAJKUMAR ABHIMANYU (KHURANA) RAJSINGHANIA (Abhi)



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23yr. Old. He is the youngest son of Maharaj Satyajeet and Maharani Sumitra. He is happy go lucky person. He is a qualified Accountant but refuses to take his education and career seriously! He hero worships and is inseperable from his “Arjun bhai”. But he is emotionally closest to Maan as being the youngest Maan pampers him a lot and he takes full advantage of that. He is an extremely charming young man and does possess a temper but which is seldom revealed.


GURUDEV GIRIJA SHANKAR PANDEY (FICTITIOUS NAME).



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63yr. Old. Rajpurohit of Ramgarh. He has been the royal priest (Rajpurohit) of Rajsinghania Royal family since the time of current King’s father, Maharaj Amarjeet. Although an old brahamin but he believes in translating traditional knowledge in modern context. He had long back predicted to Rajmata that Rajkumar Yudhjeet will be the cause of Ramgarh Royal (Rajsinghania) family’s ruin as well as being cursed by a woman who is reflection of Goddess Mahalakshmi.










KINGDOM OF KSHITIJA (FICTITIOUS PLACE)

MAHARAJ GAJENDRA RANAWAT




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56yr. old. King of kingdom of Kshitija. He is an extremely knowledgable man and in keeping with the time. He does not believe in the royalty titles and etiquette but is forced to obey them for the sake of pampara (traditions) of Kshitija’s royal family and kingdom. He feels that one’s status is on the basis of his deeds (karma). He has brought up his daughters as sons. He is closest to Princess Rajlakshmi among all his daughters, due to her maturity beyond her age, her extreme intelligence and her worldly wise nature. Maharaj Gajendra often takes Princess Rajlakshmi’s advice in his royal as well as business discussions, hence she is always present at all new projects pilot meetings. However as she goes around the name of “Geet Handa” so that no one is aware that she is Princess Rajlakshmi and what relationship does she have with Gajendra Ranawat as well as Ranawat family. Although he is an extremely modern King but he was unable to go against Kshitija Kingdom’s ministers and royal protocol when they said that Princess Rajlakshmi (Raj)’s marriage should be done as a ‘Swayamvar’. Hence, Raj currently has been reserved with Maharaj and her family since Maharaj asked Raj’s permission for her “Swayamvar” (bride chooses her own groom). Although Princess Rajlakshmi has given her permission for Swayamvar but she is not happy about it.


MAHARANI BHAGYASHREE RANAWAT



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49yr. old Queen of kingdom of Kshitija. She is an intelligent, attractive, graceful and elegant woman. Although she is educated but she still believes in old school of thought that no matter how much the world changes, the creator/nature or the Almighty has created man and woman different for a reason. Hence, she has taught all her daughters’ skills required by any girl in order to became a good wife, daughter-in-law and mother later in their lives i.e. cooking, stitching, decorating home etc. against Maharaj Gajendra’s wishes. She is an excellent cook and her this skill has been passed over to Princess Rajlakshmi as well. Whereas Princess Kumudini is excellent in home decoration, Princess Parvati is excellent in stitching and Princess Priyamvada is good in general looking after the house as she is still young!


RAJKUMARI RAJLAKSHMI GEETESHWARI RANAWAT (Raj / Geet)




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23 plus year old. Eldest daughter of Maharaj Gajendra and Maharani Bhagyashree. Rajlakshmi is an apple of her fathers' eyes! She is living in disguise of “Geet Handa” in Jaipur to protect her original identity. Besides, Rajlakshmi (Raj) also doesn’t want anyone in Ranawat Constructions and Interiors to know her relationship with Gajendra Ranawat. Rajlakshmi is a qualified Architect working in Ranawat Constructions and Interiors. Rajlakshmi is an excellent warrior as well and excels in sword fight (afterall she is a princess). She is intelligent, extremely wise, innocent, quite and reserved person. Her spiritual divine beauty can attract even most unromantic and heinous of men. Raj has maturity beyond her age, which shows in her intelligence and worldly wise nature i.e. when she advices Maharaj Gajendra and Maharani Bhagyashree by analysing each and every situation objectively without letting her emotions cloud her judgment! Hence Maharaj Gajendra Ranawat often takes her advice in his royal capacity as well as business discussions. Due to her practical and wise nature she often protects her three younger sisters and guides them. Although Kumud is younger to Rajlakshmi by only 6 months but she is extremely emotionally dependant on Raj just like Paro is. Rajlakshmi loves all her sisters equally but she is closest to Parvati (Paro). For Rajlakshmi, her self respect comes before any relation. She is a strong believer in woman’s rights. She knows how to behave with elder generation as well as her own generation. She is a true classical beauty and also an epitome of “maryaada” (protocol, manners and etiquette) and grace. She has a milky white complexion with doe-like (mrignayani) hazel coloured eyes. She has brown, thick and wavy tailbone length hair. Although she seems very calm, collected and poised but once in a while her true anger does come out and its usually against injustice done towards women. When she is in extreme anger she has a capacity to burn herself as well as others. Her first love is dance and music, hence she has been training in Bharatnatyam and also in Indian classical music from age of 8yrs. As she has an extremely sweet and melodious voice and therefore she is called “Geet” by her family. It was during one of her these dance and music recitals which she was doing for Charity when she came across a handsome youngman in his early 30s. She felt an instant attraction towards him but kept her emotions in control and in ‘maryaada’ (protocol, manners and etiquette) so that her father is not ridiculed in their royal family or in their kingdom or any other neighbouring kingdoms. However, Geet has made a edgy sketch of the youngman she has fallen in love with and often talks to the sketch as if it was as real person. She is a devotee of Goddess Adi Shakti (Parvati/ Durga/ Kali) and does fast and prayers for Goddess Adi Shakti every Friday.


RAJKUMARI KUMUDINI RANAWAT (Kumud)



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23yr. Old. Only daughter of Maharaj Gajendra’s elder brother, Maharaj Veerdwaj and Maharani Chitralekha. She is trained as Assistant Manager in Food and Beverage Department. Kumud is a simple, reserved (after her parents untimely death) and quite girl, but she is extremely impatient and short-tempered. She is a slender built and beautiful girl. Due to her reserved nature she often comes across as a snob. She loves painting in her free time.



RAJKUMARI PARVATI RANAWAT (Paro)



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22yr. Old. Second daughter of Maharaj Gajendra and Maharani Bhagyashree. She has just completed her degree in Fashion Designing and is currently looking for a job. She loves to stitch and do emberiordery. Paro also believes in giving to society what she has hence she often goes to illiterate villages during her college vacations and tries to educate them. It was in one of these vacations that she met a handsome young Major in Bhartiye Suraksha Dal (BSD). Paro is closest to her eldest sister, Rajlakshmi and vice versa but she was unable to tell Geet about her liking for a young Major. Paro is the only one in Ranawat family who is aware of Raj’s attraction for a handsome youngman in his mid 30s. Rajlakshmi and Parvati met the handsome youngman and his equally handsome brother at the Charity Show few months. Despite of Paro continous insisting Rajlakshmi refused to tell her parents about the youngman (she had made a sketch off) saying that what can she tell them as its only an attraction and that too only from Raj’s side. But since their father announced her Geet didi’s “Swayamvar” (bride chooses her own groom), she has become very reserved with their father, mother as well as three of them i.e. Ranawat sisters.

RAJKUMARI PRIYAMVADA RANAWAT (Priya)




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18 yr. Old. Youngest daughter of Maharaj Gajendra and Maharani Bhagyashree. She is treated like a doll of Rajsinghania family. She is rarely given any duty or responsibility to shoulder hence she is very carefree and full of life. Due to her innocence and impulsiveness she often speaks without thinking.

DIWAN VIDYASAGAR BHARDWAJ



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60year old. Prime Minister of Kingdom of Kshitija. Maharaj Gajendra trusts him more than anyone else in the kingdom. Besides Rajkumari (Princess) Rajlakshmi, he is the only person whose advice Maharaj Gajendra listens to and often follows.

MUNIM SHAMBHU NATH GUPTA



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55yr. old treasurer cum accountant of Kshitija who accompanied a disguised Rajkumari (Princess) Rajlakshmi to Ramgarh. He always spoils and protects Rajkumari Rajlakshmi. He tries to give Princesses small joys which they kften mis due to their royal stature. Rajkumari Rajlakshmi treats Munimji more like a father rather than an employee and calls him “Bauji”.

BRIJENDRA TEJAWAT



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A man in his early forties. He is a traitor of his home country and smuggles war guns and ammunitions from enemies and supplies it to terrorist organisations. He has a youngish and royal look which makes him a “ladies” man. He is very close friend cum business partner of Rajkumar Yudhjeet. Brijendra provides finances for their nefarious activities and joint business between Rajkumar Yudhjeet and Brijendra called Satyam Finances. Whereas Rajkumar Yudhjeet provides glitz and glamour due to his royal title during media conferences and social events. Rajkumar Yudhjeet and Brijendra Tejawat also have a disgusting business hidden from the world.

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INDEX





Character Sketch Pg. 01


Prologue Pg. 01


Chapter 1 Pg. 05


Chapter 2 Pg. 06


Chapter 3 Pg. 10


Chapter 4 Pg. 12


Chapter 5 Pg. 15


Chapter 6 Pg. 17


Chapter 7 Pg. 20

Chapter 8 Pg. 23


Chapter 9 Pg. 26


Chapter 10 Pg. 26









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PROLOGUE

Soon the competition started and as Maan had predicted after being announced on the mic, “SAVADHAAN” (Attention/ON GAURD!) no opponent lasted most than ten minutes. Either the opponent’s sword fell on the floor or the opponent himself ended up on the floor. In one and a half hour all 13 opponents had lost and now was Maan was the last competitor. Maan was inside the main combat area. The youngman and Maan bowed in respect before the start of fight. When the youngman raised his head Maan first time saw his opponent’s beautiful hazel coloured eyes. Then it was announced on the mic, “SAVADHAAN” (Attention/ON GAURD!) and the battle began. Maan defended all the attacks made on him thereby stripping him of his upper attire and leaving his bare taut muscular body for everyone to see. Then Maan attacked the youngman, and the youngman defended himself. The people present in arena were spellbound at the superb sword fighting going on. How long the sword fight continued no one knew resulting in Maharani and Princesses also coming in the arena. Maharani Bhagyashree whispered, “Maharaj, abb yeh pratiyogita sheeghr samapt kijiye agar kaheen………” (Maharaj, please quickly announce the end of the fight. What if.....)

The crowd gasped as Maan’s final blow came with his sword passing near the young man’s face slicing through the cloth mask on the young man’s face bringing an in drawn of breath from all gathered in the arena. Luckily the young man was standing in such a manner that only Maan, Maharaj, Maharani and Rajkumaris were able to see the youngman’s face no one else. Maan said in sotto voice to his opponent, “Aap jaayiye aur kapade badalkar aayiye hum yahaan sambhalte hain.” (Please go and change your clothes while I handle here.) Maan said taking a graceful bow bring a roaring applause while the young man ran towards the palace entrance.

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Happy Birthday, hope you have an amazing day
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Happy birthday nice start

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Happy birthday

Congrats on new story

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Nice Prologue & CH

Will be waiting for part 1

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Awesome

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Many many happy returns of the day dear

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