MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 92

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part - 125

Maan gives the good news to everyone….

All are happy to know that another Khurana is on the way…

Even Aditi understands that a baby is coming….

Maan gets the blessings of Dadi, Naina and Mohan…

Everyone congratulate Geet…

Geet is so happy that this time she is not alone…

Pari too comes to wish Geet…

The girls tease Geet for being super fast…. They nick name her “super mom”

Geet is embarrassed… she can’t openly blame Maan na?

She won’t blame otherwise too, for this is what she wished for… a happy family with Maan… now the family is growing, that’s good na?

Now Dadi insists that they should get married…

But Maan tells her that they will only marry after the birth of the second child… he wants no discrimination between the two of his children… one before and after marriage will be unfair for Aditi, not that he believes in such thing, but if at all they decide to marry, it would be for the society, so why not please the society with both the births before marriage itself….

(PS: This is something I learnt from Mr. Kamal Haasan, and always appreciate the fairness in his statement)

Maan makes arrangements for Dev and family to leave for Mumbai…

Gayathri wants Geet to come with them at this time but Maan politely refuses giving the pandemic and also the tedious travel as the reason…

Maan understands that she has every right to take care of Geet more than anyone else but she has got her newly wed son and should be taking care of her daughter-in-law….

Moreover Maan is here and he wants to be a part of the pregnancy along with Geet as much as he could….

Pari bids farewell to her family and is her at KM…

From there Maan drops them at the airport…

Then Maan takes leave from KM and goes and stays in their guesthouse with Geet and Aditi…

He wants to take care of Geet this time… he wants to be with her always…

Ranno somehow gets the news and she comes to stay with her daughter this time with Lucky…

At the guesthouse…. .

Maan is happy that Geet’s family is here….

Ranno makes Geet’s favourite dishes…. She is so happy for Geet….

Geet still has the nausea problem….

She can’t eat anything she likes….

It was not the case the last time, she did feel it, but that time it was manageable….

And Geet had bigger problems then…. She had no time to complain about this….

Now it’s different, with Maan by her side all the time she has the luxury of throwing a little tantrum now and then just to see Maan panic everytime she does it…

Maan has got a special mug for her to use anytime, Maan keeps it handy with himself, he doesn’t hesitate to carry it with him, to the hospital, or even to KM, he doesn’t let anyone do the job, he has made it his own duty….

Ranno tries hard to take that job from him but she couldn’t…

Maan restricts her duties strictly with the cooking of special dishes for pregnancy time for Geet and taking care of Aditi..

Aditi gets attached to Ranno easily as she is used to be with Gayathri….

Ranno keeps scolding Geet for unfairly taking advantage of Maan’s good character…

She is in awe with her son-in-law that she keeps saying that she had never seen any man like Maan in her lifetime…

She keeps telling Geet that she should never revisit the past and make her damadji feel bad, she says that everyone has a weakness and very few accept it and try to redeem themselves like her damadji….

Maan is with Geet all the time and Geet delivers another angel….

Ranno is quite disappointed but Maan is happy Aditi got her baby girl just as she wanted…

Maan doesn’t have any preference as such, but he believes that his daughters will brighten the world of two lucky boys with their love and compassion… he strongly believes that a woman can make or break a man…

Maneet go back to Canada along with Aditi and Avanti…

Geet gets to study her favourite subject history at the University, she is doing research about Indian women’s evolution from the Vedic period….

She herself has taken the Indian woman a step forward in a way….. haina?

This concept is not trying to diminish the sacred institution of marriage in any way…

Its just the thought that a relationship doesn’t have to survive because of marriage, as is the norm, but any relationship survives because of love…..

Hi guys…

Thanks for joining me in my writing journey… wish your company always…

Have something interesting to share with you…

My original conception of the story is that Aditi is Dev’s daughter from his late wife which would be Geet’s neighbour Sameera didi, but I changed the storyline since I got the message that most of you wanted Aditi to be Maan’s daughter and I really enjoyed working on that story line and I’m still not able to conclude it…

But this has stretched a lot, so ending it here….

Looking forward to your feedback on this FF…


Do try this new FF - Oh Saathi Re..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5220621/mg-ff-oh-saathi-re-thread-2-link-jan-6-pg-150


This is another on going FF - Meine Pyaar Kiya...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5190347/mg-ff-meine-pyaar-kiya-updated-thread-2-link-pg-152-aug-12

Edited by ghsp2fan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Ohh boy!!
That's all?


I mean, Maan and Geet's second child being a girl is no surprise..

But why was Rano disappointed?


And I thought you will show Maaneet's wedding too.. but you ended it with the birth of Avanti...


Hmm...

Do consider writing an epilogue, least to say!

Make it the celebration of Maan and Geet's wedding.

Maybe it can be after Avanti grows a bit..

Say after about 6 months, when Maan and Geet are comfortable with their family of four..


Or another way of writing the epilogue would be fast forward to 20 years later..

Maybe you can show Aditi's wedding.

Maybe Aditi can get married to Dev and Pari's son..

Thet meet in college, and find each other's companionship worth a trial for the sacred bond of marriage.


Whatever you do, please write an epilogue..

Much needed here!

Don't end this abruptly.. please!!


And thanks for this wonderful story!

Maaneet's love and relationship is above all for all us readers, and writers in this forum provide us with that wealth and proximity of their writings and sharing their opinions on how Maaneet's story, though in reel format only, could have been shown on screen!


Keep going, and best of luck!

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Posted: 4 years ago

cannot believe that this FF has ended

thanks for sharing this incredible story with us

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Posted: 4 years ago

Last Part

Beautiful update.... superbly written

of cos everyone is happy....

ahh the girls tease Geet.

well Maan's reason for not getting married at this point is reasonable

glad that Ranno came there.

liked how Maan takes care of Geet and pampers her

at least Aditi bonded with Ranno.

wow Geet has another angel.

Maan is ecstatic....

why was Ranno dissapointed?

Maaneet move to Canada.

loved that Geet commenced her studies.

Maaneet never needed to get married as they love was enough for them


will there be an epilogue?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful story

Enjoyed reading

Thanks for sharing

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice update dear

Maneet are blessed with another baby girl

Rano is disappointment about maneet relationship

Lovely ending

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aww Avanti eh. Lovely ending yo a very nice story. Glad al are happy with the way things worked out. Geet finally got to be pampered by maan a lot in return she showers all her love on him. Adore Rano. Did she get to go to Canada with them. Hope so

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful ending..

Geet is pregnant and delivery baby girl .

Maan is very happy..

They shifted to London..

Geet completed her studies and they are happy..

Edited by swapna.p - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

abb toh dadima unke shadi karwaken hi chhodenge.............happy for dev n pari............


lovely update.........


loved it............

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Posted: 4 years ago

oh noooooooooooooooooooo.............its end..........m really going to miss d story............😭

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