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Posted: 4 years ago

Part - 91




That evening....


Maan is sitting under the tree and enjoying the evening breeze....


Geet comes with Aditi...


Aditi: whitey aur blackey kahan hai?


Maan: woh toh apne maa ke paas chale gaye hai


Aditi: mere friends hai, mere paas hi hona chahiye, mujhe whitey ke paas jaana hai


Maan: aao mein tumme llekhe jaatha hoon


Geet: unne kyun disturb kar rahe ho? Kal subha hum chale jayenge haina?


Maan: nahi Geet, lagtha hai we are up for another lock down, this time it's serious


Geet: toh hum aaj hi jaa sakthe hai


Maan: mein abhi abhi Vicky se hi baat kar raha tha, usne kaha abhi Hoshiarpur hi safe hai, Dadi ko bhi yahan honi chahiye, wahan mamla bahut nazuk hai aur wapas jaana itna aasaan bhi nahi hoga


Geet: aur kitne din rukhna padega?


Maan: patha nahi Geet, tumme fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein kal town jaake sara samaan lekhe aatha hoon


Geet: teek hai


Geet utna bhi pareshan nahi hui jitna Maan ko dar tha


Geet bhi ab apne Zindagi ko ek aur moka dena chahti haina.... Ek hi zindagi hai, usse apnon ke saath kushi se guzar na hai, itne din toh samjautha kar chuki hai, ab aaise koi papandhi nahi hai uske upar, jaise Ranno ne kaha, Geet ko apni milli hui azadhi ko be wajhe ki dar se khona nahi chahiye


Maan: toh Aditi ko kya chahiye?


Aditi: ice cream


Maan: done


Geet: thanks


Maan bahut achche mood mein hai... He gets a little naughty....


Maan: kiss liye Geet? Abhi tak toh meine kuch bhi nahi kiya, uss din ke trailer se hi tum itne impress ho gayi? Tayaar raho Geet, kyunki picture abhi bakhi hai


Geet: issiliye mein aap se baat hi nahi karna chahthi hoon


Geet leaves and Maan curses himself for missing the opportunity to have an open conversation with his Geet....


Maan: rukho Geet, mein bas mazak kar raha tha


Geet has gone...


Maan takes Aditi to the poultry and they come back with another pair of birds, this time swanlings....


Geet: ye kya hai? Whitey aur blackey kahan hai?


Maan: ab hum unke saath katti, woh Aditi ko pasand nahi hai, ab yahi hummare dhost hai


Aditi is all happy that she got even bigger friends....


Geet: ye aap teek nahi kar rahe ho, patha hai aapka problem kya hai?


Maan is all ears to know what's Geet's problem is...


Geet: lifetime ka pyaar ek hi bar mein dikhathe ho aur phir gayab ho jaate ho, humme mayuuz karke


Geet is talking about the past...


Geet: it's better to keep Aditi away from all this, I don't want her to suffer like me


Maan: Geet MSK ek bar kiye galthi ko dubara apne Zindagi mein repeat nahi kartha, iss bar mein tumme prove karthe rahoonga ki MSK is not a loser


Geet leaves the two to play with their new pets and she goes to the terrace to get some alone time... She needs her space to clear her head....


Next morning....


Maan slept tight for he is so happy....


Maan gets up and looks at the time... it's already 6'o clock....


Maan feels fresh and has woken up quiet early...


Maan has had a good sleep, but what about Geet?


Maan always keeps thinking about her and her only.....


Maan first goes to see what the two ladies are doing....


Geet is not in the room while Aditi is still asleep....


Maan goes looking for Geet....


Geet is not in the house.... Maan has seen everywhere....


Maan is worried, Geet itne subhe subhe kahan jaa sakthi hai?


Aditi toh yahi hai, Geet Maan ko bhi bina bathaye aaise kahan chup chupke jaa sakthi....


Maybe she has gone to meet her mother, maybe last evenings conversation ended incomplete....


Geet might have gone to put a proper end to that coversation....


Maan doesn't care what Ranno thinks about their reunion, she seems unaffected by his presence, so she also might not mind Geet getting back with him.....


Maan is only worried about Geet and he doesn't want her to go to that place where there is no respect for her even if that is her own house.....


Maan rushes out to find and stop Geet for he is sure she wouldn't receive a warm welcome at the Handa house....


Maan comes out and is surprised to see Geet out in the farm....


Maan is relieved that Geet isn't stupid enough to go to the Handa house.... If only she could get rid of her stupid zidd to stay with Dev whatever may be the reason.....


Geet is on her morning jogging rounds.... She wanted to finish it before Maan wakes but Maan has seen her jog around the house...


Maan is happy that she has become conscious about her looks at last and wants to get back to shape, maybe for Maan.... Maan is expecting too much in a day, haina?


Geet is actually thinking about what Maan said about Geet having put on a little weight and from that moment itself she wanted to shed those extra kilos which is the reason for Maan's complaints....


So, eventually she is doing it for Maan only....


Maan likes to join her....


Maan: good morning Geet


Geet turns back and looks at Maan....


Maan: Geet, rukho, mein bhi aatha hoon


Geet is actually shocked to see Maan.....


She didn't want Maan to think that she is doing this because of him....


Maan joins her and Geet slows down as Maan accompanies her...


Maan: toh tumme bhi lagtha hai ki tum moti ho gayi ho


Geet: kya?


Geet looks at him in anger....


Maan: Geet, aaise mujhse gusse karthi toh tum aur bhi sundar ho jaathi ho, I love this Geet, irressistable for MSK


Geet: I was just looking around the farm


Maan: typical Geet Handa, that's what I wanted


Geet: you continue, I'm done


Geet leaves while Maan continues his morning work out....


Maan comes back and looks for Geet....


Geet is in the kitchen...


Maan: Geet, did you sleep well last night? Itna subhe kaise utt gayi?


Geet: haan, Ramu kaka's haldiwali dhood helped me sleep


Maan: mujhe nahi mila?


Geet: woh Ramu kaka sab ko lekhe aaye the, aap so gaye honge tab


Maan: haan kal mein itna kush tha ki mujhe patha hi nahi chala ki kab mein leita tha aur kab neendh aayi


Geet: iss jagah ke hawa mein kuch jadu hoga


Maan: nahi Geet, ye iss jagah ka jadu nahi, samjho kissi mehmaan ka saath ka jadu hai


Geet: aap kya piyoge? black coffee ya milk coffee, yahan ka dhoodh bahut achcha hai


Maan: Ramu kaka kahan hai?


Geet: woh batha rahe the ki unki biwi ki tabyat teek nahi hai, meine unko ghar bejdhiya, biwi ki madat karne


Maan: mein samajh gaya Geet, bathao mujhe kya karna hai?


Geet: aap kuch nahi karo toh behthar hoga, wahi sabse badi madat hogi


Maan: aaise kaise Geet? tum akhele sara kaam kaise karogi? aur mein bhi koi kaam nahi karoonga toh bore ho jaoonga


Geet: toh aao, aap hi breakfast banalo


Maan: kya?


Geet has kneaded the dough for aloo ke paranthe.... she asks Maan to get them ready while she goes to bring Aditi....


Maan: Geet, isse kaise banathe? mujhe nahi aatha


Geet: gol gol banao, warna Aditi nahi kayegi


Maan: Geeet


Maan is kidding....he has been the sous chef at the restaurant when the chef's on leave in Canada....


Maan makes very good paranthe.....


Aditi likes them and eats it without much fuss like every day....


Actually Geet prepared everything including the stuffing........


Maan just made them crisp with extra ghee, it's the ghee.... haina Geet?


Geet too likes them, it tastes good with the flavor of desi ghee and coming pipping hot, tasty and kadak straight from the tawa....


Maan has only half cooked them earlier as they do at their restaurant and cook it again just before serving....


Maan: Aditi, aapko paranthe pasand haina?


Aditi: hmm, mujhe pasand hai


Maan: Geet ne hi banaya hai, mein sirf garam karke de raha hoon


Maan gives the credit to Geet.....


Geet: bahut achche bane hai


Maan smiles that he has finally got a compliment from Geet.....


Maan then leaves happily for shopping.....


Maan: bye Aditi, bye Geet, tumme kuch chahiye?


Geet thinks for a second, hesitates....


Geet: kuch nahi


Maan: kuch bhi ho toh mujhe message karna


Maan is about to leave.... Geet stops him....


Geet: suno


Maan turns back and looks at her....


Geet: lunch mein bana loongi, aap bahar mat khana


Geet doesn't want him to get infected.....


Maan is surprised that this day has been such a lucky day for him....


Maan: hmm teek hai Geet


Maan leaves while Geet gets ready to prepare something good for Lunch.... maybe something that Maan likes.... haina?


After all he has done so much for her....


Now it's her turn to thank him at least indirectly....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 91


Superbly Fabulous Update


The fact that Geet is actually been nice towards Maan

her care and concern makes him happy

truly its time now that she decides to give Maab his chance

and get back with him

she should be able to see just how much he has changed

though even in the past he had always cared and pampered her

I enjoy how he ensure Aditi too is happy


waiting to see what Geet prepares and will it be a pleasant day

for Maan and Geet

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 91

thanks for the pm!

awesome update

nice seeing things slightly progress....

at least Geet seems fine around Maan now

liked her care for Maan

at least they will spend time together

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

91

very nice

geet is thinking deeply what her mother said her

maan happy to see geet is ready to talk with him n also affected by his presence

maan is thanking lockdown as he can spend time with geet

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aww maan very happy to be spending more him with his geet and daughter. She is happy too

wonder if dev and pari connected up like he said.


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Posted: 4 years ago

It's chance fr Geet to judge Maan and decide what she want and get little bit selfish fr her own happiness

Maan happy seeing Geet care fr him too

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update n thnxx for pm me

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part - 92



As Maan leaves Geet thinks about how Aditi has become so much attached to Maan in this few days....


Geet is happy that Aditi finally got to spend some time with Maan....


Geet bhi yahi chahthi thi na? issiliye toh Geet itne gusse mein thi, kyunki Aditi missed so much as a kid....


Dev was there but he is not Maan na?


Geet Dev se aaise gussa kaise kar payegi?


Geet is not sure if she could take all the freedom with Dev like she used to have with Maan even if she gets married to Dev....


Geet then takes Aditi in and they think about what they can cook for lunch....


Geet: Aditi ko lunch mein kya chahiye?


Aditi: aloo paranthe


Geet: subhe hi kaya na?


Aditi: wahi


Geet: tummare liye tummare papa ne bana ke rakha hai kya?


Geet just utters those words nonchalantly forgetting that it's Aditi's papa who actually made them for her.....


Geet looks at the dish and three paranthes are left....


Maan took his usual cereal and left it for Geet as she liked them....


So Aditi's lunch is ready.... ab Maan aur Geet ke liye hi kuch banana padega....


Geet toh apne barein mein kaise sochegi? Maan ke pasand ka kuch banana hoga.....


Geet knows Maan likes pasta very much....


Geet googles some interesting pasta recipes....


Geet looks into the pantry and there is no pasta....


Ramu kaka pasta nahi banathe honge....


Geet is disappointed..... ab pasta kaise banegi?


Geet then looks for home made pasta.....


Geet is never interested in cooking much....


Even at Mumbai Gayatri is a great cook and she rules the Khanna kitchen and makes sure that everything of Dev's choice is done....


She even makes Geet's favourite dishes with love...


Aditi too loves her lip smacking snacks....


Geet at times tries out something nutritious for Aditi which Aditi mostly hates....


Healthy hai toh tasty bhi hona haina...


Geet toh Aditi ko abhi tak sirf home cooked food hi diya hai....


She doesn't even give her anything store bought... Not even ketchup...


Luckily Gayatri's delicacies don't need dips and sauces....


so there is no need for Geet to worry....


Geet didn't have anyone to impress with her cooking skills in the absence of Maan...


Maan himself is a fairly good cook...


It's not easy to cook for men who know a few cooking tricks...


Geet wants to show that she could be a good competitor for Maan....


The fact is that she wants to cook something good for Maan....


She wants him to enjoy her food...


Geet has to engage Aditi too...


She shows some recipe videos from youtube abd asks Aditi to choose one as everyone is just the same...


Aditi picks her favourite chef, the one who looks good for her...


Aditi likes the chef's style of cooking with a Rajinikanth touch.... You know that extra gimmicks....


Geet has a tough time with Aditi expecting the same style from poor Geet...


Aditi seems to be a tough task master like her father...


She won't settle for anything less than perfect....


Geet finally gets the pasta done when she gets a call from Maan...


Maan is at the department stores and there's a mad rush and shortage of goods...


Maan can't understand people panicking like it's the end of the world....


He waits for the mob to clear and so calls Geet in the meantime....


Geet is too busy with all the mess she made....


Maan: Geet, what you people are doing?


Geet: kaam


Maan: what?


Geet: what are you doing?


Maan: I'm waiting


Geet: where?


Maan: at the grocery store


Geet: why?


Maan laughs and says that people have gone crazy for they're shopping like there's no tomorrow...


Geet: that's good, it's better to be prepared


Maan: what?


Geet: kal se lockdown haina?


Maan: that's not going to last forever


Geet: who knows?


Maan: Geet, you are thinking too much


Geet: better hurry or you'll return empty handed


Maan: it's ok, we'll survive by fishing and hunting like cavemen


Geet imagines themselves in Flintstones style.....


Geet: what? That's impossible


Maan: why are you worrying? I'm meant me and Aditi, Aditi will enjoy all that


Geet: just don't come back without getting everything, you don't know your dau


Geet stops suddenly....


Maan: what about my daughter Geet?


Geet: kuch nahi


Geet is already thinking about how she is going to manage Aditi....


Just for making a little pasta she got exhausted....


Maan: why are you always stressed? Just chill, when MSK is there Geet shouldn't worry about anything, I'll take care of my daughter and also my mishty


Geet ab aur behas nahi kar sakthi....


Maan: tumme kuch chahiye?


Geet instantly says pasta....


She can't be doing the experiment everytime...


Maan: pasta? Tummare liye?


Maan knows that it's for him only... He wants to see what Geet says....


Geet: woh Aditi ke liye


Maan: tum toh Aditi ko maggi tak nahi dethi na? Toh pasta kaise chalega?


Geet gets angry....


Geet: aap ko jo chahe lelo, mujhe kya?


She cuts the call....


Maan thinks that Geet maybe right... They need to stock at least something for the next few days...


It's not Delhi where you got at least basic pantry items stocked....


No one knew about their stay here....


Maan has brought them here and so he should take care of them....


Woh bhi Geet Aditi ko lekhe kuch zyada hi pareshan ho jaathi....


Being a single parent Geet wants to protect Aditi from missing her other parent...


Geet pampers her a lot, to that extent where Aditi gets uncontrollable making Geet loose her temper and go to the other extreme....


Maan has noticed it himself but he can't blame Geet for he is the actual culprit in the end....


Maan has a tough job ahead for he has to compensate his absence not only in Aditi's life but also in Geet's life.....


More than Aditi Geet needs him to take his rightful place in her life for she has not let anyone take that place.... She has tried to fill that place herself for Aditi to some extent but has failed drastically....


Maan is slowly learning to fulfill what's his duties are as a family man.... He wants his family back at any cost....


This is the best chance that life has given him, very few get such a golden opportunity that too for the second time... Maan knows he can't make any mistakes this time around...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 92

thanks for the pm

superb update

liked that Geet is happy that Maan is spending time with Aditi

well she realised she will never be happy with Dev

glad she accepted that Maan is Aditi's dad

great that she decided to make pasta for Maan

so Aditi has some of Maan's traits

of cos Maan teases Geet about the pasta

Maan's thoughts well poytrayed

loved that he wants to get his family back at any cost

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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