MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 56

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very nice update

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Maan just waiting Geet realize she still love him and fr give him

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Part 83

thanks for the pm!

splendid update....

Geet and her nani are close.

at least her nani supported her.

Geet's thoughts well portrayed.

glad that Maan and Geet are getting to interact with each other

liked Maan teasing Geet

of cos she is upset by his comment

will Maan be able to manofy her?>

update soon

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Nice

Geet reminiscing about her Nani. Hope she gets

Happy seeing her. Good maan too left her alone

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Awesome update n thnxx for pm me

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Lovely part

Guess things getting good with maaneet

Cont soon

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Part 83


Fantastic Update


Maan , Geet and Aditi are on their to visit

Geet's Nani

and now Geet remembers the past when she fell pregnant

it was her Nani that supported her and made her strong

Maan enjoying Geet's sandwich while she has to eat

Maan's sandwich

now why is she again ignoring Maan

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Part - 84



Geet remains silent for the rest of the journey....


They reach Amristar by noon....


Maam texts Lucky about their arrival....


Geet is little reluctant to go back to that house which a few years back, she left unconscious fighting for her life ....


A lot of her memories are tied to this place, many happy ones and a few not so happy ones....


Maan knows her plight from the look on her face....


Maan wants to ease things out for Geet....


Maan then texts Lucky to come out and receive his pyaari didi....


That way Geet wouldn't feel embarrassed to be going back there and her feeling of not being welcomed would also vanish....


Maan stops the car a few yards away from the entrance....


Geet remains still not willing to get off the car....


Maan honks to signal Lucky....


Lucky comes running to meet Geet...


On seeing Lucky Geet automatically gets down and starts walking towards him....


Maan is happy that his plan worked....


Lucky: Didi, aap aagaye ho


Lucky is genuinely happy to welcome Geet home....


Geet stands there with Lucky but is not ready to go inside....


Maan signals Lucky to take her somehow....


Lucky takes her hand and almost drags her in....


Jugnu mama is the first one she meets....


Jugnu is also very happy to see Geet...


Jugnu: Nandhini, tum kab itne badi hui?


Jugnu and his short term memory loses....


Lucky: mamu, Geet didi ko bhi bhool gaye tum?


Jugnu: Geet, oye, Geet puthar, aao ji


Jugnu suddenly hugs and welcomes Geet....


Geet feels a little relieved....


Geet: mamaji aap mujhe kaise bhool sakthe ho?


Jugnu: mein kahan bhoola? mein toh dkehna chahtha tha ki kahin tum iss Jugnu jasoos ko bhool toh nahi gaye?


Geet: aap ko kaise bhool sakthi?


Jugnu's eyes then turn towards Maan standing right behind Geet with Aditi....


Jugnu gets suspicious and takes out his big lens to take a closer look at the two strangers....


Jugnu: Ye gabru jawaan aur saath mein ek bachi? ye bachi isski ho sakthi hai, not the point no.2


Lucky: hare mamu, bas kar yaar, ye hummare mehmaan hai


Jugnu: mehmaan ya koi dushman ka aadmi?


Lucky: ye mama toh pagal hai, aap iske baat ko seriously mat lena


Maan acknowledges Lucky's words....


Lucky: beeji, hare beeji, dekho kaun aaya hai?


Beeji comes out and is shocked to see Geet....


Beeji: Geet puthar, tum?


Geet: woh Nani kaisi hai?


Beeji: Nani toh tumme dekh ke bahut kush hogi


Lucky: Kyun Beeji? aap kush nahi ho?


Beeji: mein kush kyun nahi hoongi? aakhir meri beti aayi hai, Geet bhi iss ghar ki beti hi hai


Geet goes and hugs Beeji.....


Beeji: andar aao puthar, aap bhi aayiye damadji


Geet turns and looks at Maan who is smiling big....


Geet doesn't want to give any unnecessary explanations and remains silent....


She just wants to meet her Nani and then leave immediately....


Beeji takes Geet to Nani....


Beeji: maaji maaji


She is half- asleep....


She opens her eyes and looks at Geet....


Beeji: dekho kaun aayi hai?


Nani's eyes turn bright seeing Geet....


The only name she keeps uttering sub-consciously is Geet....


Nani: Geet


Geet goes near her and holds her hands....


Geet: nani, aap ko kya ho gaya?


Nani: Geet aagayi


Geet: haan Nani, mein aagayi hoon, aap se milne, ab aap jaldhi teek ho jao, mujhe aapse bahut batein karna hai


Nani: Geet aagayi


Geet: Nani, aap kuch bolo


Beeji: Geet, nani bahut din ke baat do sabt boli hai, woh bhi tumme dekhne ki kushi mein


Geet sits with nani....


Lucky takes Maan and Aditi to the backyard where he has kept his small work out station....


Lucky takes the 10kg mugdar and shows Maan how to work-out using that.....


Maan appreciate Lucky's effort and he asks him if Maan could try...


Maan: kya mein ek bar kar saktha hoon?


Lucky: ji, par sambhalke, aap ko ye sab karne ka aadat nahi hogi


Maan lifts it on his in one go easily and shows Lucky how it's properly done....


Lucky is shocked to see Maan doing it like a pro....


Maan then shifts it to his left hand and does with much ease....


Maan's biceps speak for themselves....


Lucky touches Maan's biceps in awe....


Lucky: aaj se aap mere guru ho


Lucky falls flat on Maan's feet....


Maan: ye kya kar rahe ho? utto


Jugnu is following Maan closely....


Jugnu: Lucky, mere prathan shisya, isse barosa mat karo, ye dushman ka aadmi hai


Lucky: tum toh nakli guru ho mame, itne saal se tumne ek bar bhi issko haath se chua tak nahi, abhi isse utake dikhao


Jugnu: mein dushman ke samne apne secret talents ko nahi dikhatha


Lucky: jao mame, mujhe patha hai ki tummra ek hi talent khana hai


Jugnu: great insults to Jugnu jasoos, dushman ke samne


Maan: mamaji, aap mujhe apna shisya banao


Jugnu: dekha Luckies, dushman ki aadmi ko kaise apna side lathe? ab ye humme dushman ka kabar dethe rahega


Maan: ji mamaji, aap mujhe kitne paise doge?


Jugnu: paise?


Maan: agar mein aap ke liye kaam karoon toh aap ko paise dena padega na


Maan turns and finds mamaji missing....


Lucky: aap ne kamakaam mame ko daradiya hai


Maan smiles.....


Lucky: ye Geet didi ka beti haina?


Maan: haan tummari didi ka beti hi hai


Maan just wants to tell that it's his daughter.... but this is not the right time....


Lucky: halo baby


Aditi: mein baby nahi hoon, mein school jaathi hoon


Lucky: ye toh didi ki tarah hi bindaas bolthi hai, aap ka naam kya hai?


Aditi: Aditi


Lucky: bahut pyaari naam hai


Aditi: aap ka naam kya hai?


Lucky: Lucky


Lucky befriends Aditi by giving her ladoo...


Aditi likes it very much....


Geet comes looking for Maan....


Geet: ab humme jaana hoga Lucky, nahi toh bahut dher ho jayegi


Lucky: aap hummare saath do din rukh nahi sakthi?


Geet is silent....


Maan: humme jaana hai Lucky, abhi dusra lcokdown bhi aane wala hai


Lucky: bas aaj rukh jao, kal chale jaana, please didi


Geet: nahi Lucky, Maan ko bahut kaam hai


Geet doesn't think she can stay there like before....


She is not so comfortable after all....


Maan too thinks it won't be a good idea....


Maan: OK, Lucky, hum chalthe hai


Lucky is not ready to bid farewell so soon.....

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Part 84

superb update

can understand Geet's fears

glad that Maan called Lucky

at least Geet fears were eased

liked how the family welcomed them

so they assume Geet and Maan are married....

Geet does not correct this

Lucky impressed by Maan

Geet meets her nani.... emotional moments

so Maan and Geet refuse to stay there

update soon

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geet become little hesitate to enter nani's home but maan call lucky n make it easy for geet

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