MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 52

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part - 79




The ladies are having fun playing in the pool.....


Geet is enjoying full on without worrying much about Aditi....


Maan haina uske paas.... kabhi Maan ko bhi apna responsibilities apne upar lena padega.....


What does he think? His responsibility as a parent is just about financial support, how could he think that he can compensate his absence by giving money?


It's not about just money, money can't be a substitute for a father, haina?


Geet wants Maan to realize what he has snatched from Aditi's childhood.....


Kiran: patha nahi woh donno bachon ko kaise sambalthe honge?


Annie: aap kyun chintha karthe ho? sab sambal lenge


Kiran: Arjun toh phir bhi sambal lenge par Maan kaise sambal payenge?


Annie: aap ko hamesha aapki bete ki chintha hai, bhai bade se badon ko bhi kaise aasani se sambalthe? ek choti si bachi ko nahi sambalenge?


Kiran: Geet, Aditi zyada tang toh nahi karegi?


Geet: unko Aditi sambal legi


Ye baat toh Geet ne teek kaha hai.....


Geet toh kab se intezaar kar rahi hai ki kab Maan apna har maanke Aditi ko Geet ke paas hi lekhe aayega.....


Geet ko kya patha ki Maan itne jaldhi se har maane walon se nahi hai, kahin woh Aditi ka mamla ho ya Geet ka, Maan toh apne tareeke se kissi ko bhi asaani se apna kardega....


Ye Geet kaise bhool gayi?.... issiliye Maan Geet ko apne kamaal dikhana chahtha hai.....


Maan puts Aditi in the bath tub and opens the tap....


It's cold water.... Aditi shivers....


Aditi: ye toh tanda hai


Maan then adjusts the temperature....


Aditi starts splashing the water....


Maan too joins her....


Maan becomes a kid playing with Aditi....


After shower Maan takes the towel and tries to dry Aditi's hair.....


Aditi hates when someone touches her hair....


She starts crying loudly.....


Maan panics and tries to stop her .....: chup bilkul chup


ye toh Geet ke saath kaam karega, Aditi ke saath nahi....


Maan: kya hua? kyun roh rahe hai aap?


Aditi keeps crying and Maan puts his hand on her mouth to shut her....


Aditi bites Maan's hand and Maan immediately pretends to be crying louder than Aditi....


Aditi stops crying and is afraid that Maan would complain to Geet.....


Aditi catches his hand and looks at the bite mark....


Maan pretends to be in pain.....


Aditi: bahut dukhta hai?


Maan: nahi


Aditi: Geet se mat kehna


Maan: nahi kahunga, aap rona mat


Aditi: teek hai


Maan: aaj Aditi ye dress pehenegi


Maan takes out a cute white frock for her....


It's Aditi's favorite too....


Aditi gets ready soon and they go to have breakfast......


Diya and Arjun are already there....


Maan is half wet after giving a bath to Aditi....


Arjun smiles looking at Maan.....


Maan: good morning Arjun


Arjun: good morning bhai, lagtha hai Aditi ke saath saath aap ne bhi aada naha liya hai


Just then Maan looks at his wet clothes.....


Maan didn't even realize that his clothes are wet as he was busy with Aditi....


Arjun: bhai aap jao, change karke aao


Maan: it's OK Arjun, let Aditi eat, she must be hungry, haina Aditi?


Aditi: nahi mujhe bhook nahi hai


Maan: Aditi, what do you want?


Aditi: mujhe mama ke paas jaana hai


Maan: haan haan, jaathe hain, pehle kuch khalo, Diya bete, aap kya kha rahe ho?


Diya: papaya


Maan: very good, Aditi ko bhi papaya pasand hai


Maan gives the papaya to Aditi....


She eats a couple of pieces....


Then Maan asks Nakul to get his cereal for he is also hungry....


Aditi wants that....


Maan is happy that she is eating something.....


Arjun: ye log abhi tak kya kar rahe hai?


Maan: patha nahi, Annie ne kaha ki it's their day and we shouldn't disturb them


Arjun: ye Vicky toh bach gaya


Maan: usse pehle hi patha chal gaya hoga?


Arjun: haan bhai, kash mujhe bhi ek hint detha


Maan: ab kya karna hai?


Arjun: aaj Sunday haina? toh Diya ka cartoon day hai


Maan: kya?


Arjun: Annie has allowed DIya to watch TV only on Sundays


Maan: I don't know what's Aditi's Sunday plans are?


Arjun: don't worry bhai, sare bache cartoon dekhthe hai


They switch on the TV.... Looney Toons show....


The kids watch TV while the men take a break.....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aww maan somehow managing. Just surprised geet is not worried about her daughter. Maybe she knows Aditi will be fine?? Or that maan will somehow take care hmm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Hope all goes well

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update n thnxx for pm me

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Posted: 4 years ago

79

geet wants maan to come to her for help in aditi's matter while looking after aditi

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm

Part 79

fascinating update

at least Geet trusts Maan with Aditi

she is waiting for Maan to come get her

but Maan was able to take care of Aditi

great that he managed to get her ready and have breakfast

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet trusting Maan in A dit I matter and thinking he too have to know about responsibility of Aditi

Maan some how managing with aditi

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lovely update............


abb maan ko samajh mein ayega beti ko sambhalna kya hota hai...............


loved it.............

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 79


Fabulous Update


Maan and Aditi's time together is actually great

at least he gets a chance to do everything with his child

and he sees how Geet also has to do certain chores towards Aditi

Geet on the other wonders when will Maan come with Aditi

but Maan is enjoying his time and learning new things about Aditi

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Part - 80




Geet comes to see Aditi.....


Geet ko yakheen nahi hotha ki Maan ne itne dher Aditi ko kaise sambal liya?


Aditi toh har ek minute Geet ko poochthi rehthi, woh bhi subhe jab woh neendh se utthi hai....


Aaj tak Geet ke alawa kissi aur ne Aditi ko akhela sambal hi nahi paya...


Specially Aditi is very reluctant to take a bath, she gets irritated every time Geet tries to dry her hair....


Maan should have skipped the bath.... Geet ko hi jaake Aditi ko tayaar karna padega....


Geet hurries in to see Aditi and Diya happily watching looney tunes on TV while the boys are busy on their mobile.....


No one even notices Geet, Aditi did see Geet but continues watching her favorite cartoon without giving any attention to Geet....


Geet always limits Aditi's screen time, so Aditi uses this chance to enjoy as long as possible....


Even Annie doesn't like Diya watching TV, it's only when Arjun is with Diya they both watch TV....


Diya watches cricket with Arjun now itself....


they don't say blood is thicker than water without any reasons, no wonder Aditi bonds so well with Maan


Geet: hai lovelies, how long have you been watching this? aren't you bored? come, let's go out and play


Aditi: nahi, aap jao, hum nahi aayenge aap ke saath


Geet is shocked.... Aditi is asking Geet to leave? what's happening here?


Maan is smiling victoriously.....


Geet: aap itna kush kyun ho rahe ho? Aditi ko cartoons bahut pasand hai


Maan: Geet, meine toh kuch bhi nahi kaha


Geet: tum log yahan aaram kar rahe ho?


Maan: kyun? hum apna kaam hi kar rahe hai, bachon ko kaise sambhalthe, ye toh koi hum se seekhe, haina Arjun?


Maan gives a high five to Arjun....


Geet: Itna kush hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, bachon ko toh TV sambhal rahi hai


Maan: kabhi kabhi dusron ko bhi appreciate karna seekho Geet


Annie just comes....


Arjun: Annie, aap logon ka day off katam ho gayi hai kya?


Annie: itna bhi kya jaldhi hai Arjun? aaj pura din hum koi bhi kaam nahi karenge


Arjun: waise tum roz kitna kaam karthi ho Annie?


Annie: bhai ke saath rehke tum bahut sawaal karne lage ho Arjun, lagtha hai tum donno ki jodi ko tootna padega, haina Geet?


Geet: haan didi, bachon ko hum samlthe hai, aap inko koi aur kaam do


Annie thinks for a while....


Maan: ye toh cheating hai Annie, hum apna kaam kitne achche se kar rahe hai, toh hum koi aur kaam kyun karein?


Annie: bhai aap kuch bhool toh nahi rahe?


Maan: kya?


Annie: aaj ka dinner aap ke zamedari hai


Maan: I know, you people be prepared for a treat


Annie: bhai, Khurana ka naam ko bachalo, ab guests bhi hai


Annie points to Geet.....


Maan: ek bar Khuranas ko achche se jaan lenge toh guests bhi hummare ghar ko chodke jaana nahi chahenge


Maan indirectly conveys a strong message to Geet....


Geet: baatein karna toh sab jaanthe hai, dekhthe hai ki Khuranas kya kamaal karthe hai?


Arjun: well said Geet, I'm so happy I got some support at last


Annie: bhai ab toh ye hummare izzat ka sawaal ho gaya, chalo, mein aapki madat karthi hoon


Arjun: haan Geet, toh aaj hum bas enjoy karenge


Geet: that's right, guests hai toh guests ban ke rahenge


Geet replies to Maan....


Maan just smiles....: mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki ye guest ka natak kitne din tak chaltha?


Maan whispers so that just Geet could hear him.....


Geet turns towards him and stares him.....


Maan toh dar hi gaya..... haina?


Geet kab samjhegi ki Maan ko iss bar koi bhi rokh nahi saktha....


Maan ne toh apna galthi ko maan bhi liya hai aur uske liye prayachit bhi karne ke liye tayaar hai, ye Geet bas usko ek mokha do de sakthi, haina?


Ab Geet Maan ko mokha nahi dethi toh kya?


Maan apne aap mokha bana saktha hai.....


Maan takes Annie to the kitchen to assist him....


Nakul is worried, jab bhi Maan kuch karne lagtha toh Nakul ka kaam dukhna ho jaatha, isse achcha Nakul hi sab kuch banake detha....


It's a nightmare to be Maan's sous chef.....


There is a lot of noise coming from the kitchen and Geet is very curious to know what's really cooking.....


Geet takes a sneak peak into the kitchen.....


Geet could smell the delicious aroma coming from there.....


hmm looks yummy.... Geet is a foodie and Maan knows how to impress his lady love.....


Maan has seen Geet who is peeping in hiding behind the curtains...


Maan just reaches out, grabs her hand and pulls her out....


Maan: Geet, tum itna bhi intezaar nahi kar sakthi ho? mujhe patha hai Geet, MSK se koi itne aasani se bach nahi saktha


Maan looks at her and smirks.... aakhir tum mujhse dhoor nahi reh sakthi....


Geet: woh, mujhe thoda bhook lag rahi hai, Nakul bahiya, lunch tayaar haina?


Nakul: ji m'am, aap beitjao, mein lekhe aatha hoon


Geet pretends to eat while her attention is only on Maan.....


Maan is happy that he has got a stalker....


Ab dekhthe hai aage kya kya hotha hai.....

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