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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 51


Fascinating Update


Maan now seems in a much better mood

he is not sad nor sulking

instead he is getting everything ready and making sure

that Geet comes to Delhi

Geet thinking how Maan use to pamper her and if she was married

to him than Aditit would have been his princess

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part - 52


Dev calls Geet and asks them to get ready for they are going out the evening....

Geet is not in a mood for an outing though.....

Aditi likes such outings where she gets to have her favorite ice cream...

Geet has to do it for Aditi.... it has become a habit for Geet to do things for Aditi's sake not bothering about her own will and wishes....

Maan calls Dev.....

Maan: what happened? where are you?

Dev: Mumbai only

Maan: when is your flight it's already thursday

Dev: tomorrow early morning

Maan: good, how did you manage to get Geet on board?

Dev: oh that's yet to be done, I haven't told her yet

Maan: what? are you kidding?

Dev: don't worry, I know how to deal with the ladies, you know I'm the ladies man, you shouldn't give them any time to think, or else you know you are in trouble, you better learn the tricks Maan, you'll need it soon

Maan: I think I'm good with whatever tricks I have

Actually Maan has never had such problems, sometimes he just tries to fulfill Geet's wish, sometimes he acts according to his wish blindly expecting Geet to support him just like he supports her..... there is nothing in the middle or no room for negotiations, that's Maan's problem too

Dev: that's why you are still single

Maan: maybe that's right

Dev: don't worry, this time Pari'll take care of it, and I'm always there to help you out

Maan: aaise bade bade bathon karna aasaan hai, abhi tak tum Mumbai mein ho aur kehthe ho ki tum mujhe madat karoge, lagtha hai tumme hi meri madat ki zaroorat padegi, shall I talk to Geet?

Dev: no no, she thinks you have gone to Canada

Maan has forgotten that......

Maan: teek hai, I don't know what you'll do, but you should be here for lunch

Dev: gone

Maan: and don't forget to call me as you land, I'll send the driver

Dev: Ok see you tomorrow then

Maan: bye

Maan knows Dev needs some help.... Geet won't agree that easily

time to shoot the next arrow Maan.....

Maan calls Lucky and instructs him about his next move....

As per Maan's orders Lucky calls Nandhini and gives Geet's number.....

Nandhini has to plead Geet that she wants to meet her once.....

Nandhini calls Geet when they are on the ride....

Geet doesn't know that it's Nandhini......

Geet: halo

Nandhini: Geeet didiiiiiiiii

Nandhini is so happy to speak to Geet after a long time....

so is Geet.....

Geet: Nandhini?

Nandhini: haan didi, aap kahan ho? kaise ho? aur kab aarahe ho?

Nandhini goes on and on.....

Geet: hare, saans toh lelo Nandhini, abhi tumme aaise hyper nahi hona chahiye

Nandhini: didi mein bahut kush hoon

Geet: mujhe patha hai, aur congrats Nandhini, ab tum bhi maa banne wal ho? mujhe toh yakheen hi nahi hotha

Nandhini: aaise nahi chalega didi, aapko yahan aake mujhse milke badayi dena padega, tabhi aap ko yakheen bhi ho jayega

Geet pauses for a while......

Nandhini: didi didi, aap sun rahe haina? mujhe aapse milna hai, aap meri itni si khwais pura nahi kar sakthe ho? mein toh yahan Delhi mein hoon, kissi ko bhi nahi patha chalega, aap aarahe haina?

Geet: woh phir kabhi jab mein Delhi aathi toh milthe hai

Nandhini gets upset.....: aap bahut badal gaye ho didi, ab toh aap ko mujhse milne ko bhi sochna padtha, mein bhi aap ke liye parayi ho gayi hoon, haina didi?

Nandhini sobs......

Geet: hare tu rho rahi ho?

Nandhini: aur nahi toh kya? aap abhi bhi mujhse milna nahi chahthe ho

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Nandhini: aap nahi aathe toh mein inse kehke Mumbai aajathi hoon

Geet: nahi nahi, aaise waqt pe tumme travel nahi karna hai, samjhi tum, aur aaise bar bar yahan wahan gumne ki zaroorat bhi nahi

Nandhini: aap ye sab yahan aake bolo, tabhi toh mein manoongi

Geet: taak hai, mein koshish karhti hoo, ab tum drama band karo aur hanso

Nandhini: mein aur chotu aapka intrezaar karenge

Geet: sambhal ke rehna

Nandhini: teek hi didi, bye

Geet begins to think.....

Dev: Nandhini thi?

Dev knows from Geet's happiness that it her sister Nandhini only....

Geet: haan, patha nahi Lucky ko mera number kaise mila? kahin tum ne toh nahi di?

Maybe Dev wants them to be there for their wedding....

Geet would also love to have them close during the wedding....

Dev: nahi Geet, maybe Sameera didi se Lucky ne manga hoga

Geet: haan aaise hi ho saktha

Dev: unse baat karke tum toh bahut kush ho gayi

Geet: haan, koi rishthe aaise hothe hai jo hum chahthe bhi chod nahi pathe

Geet thinks about Maan.....

Dev: toh kya baat hai? tum itna kyun pareshaan lagthi ho? sab teek haina?

Geet: haan haan, aaise koi baat nahi, Nandhini is expecting, can you believe? Nandhini toh school mein thi jab mein wahan se nikli

Dev: I know, time flies so fast

Geet: Nandhini ab Delhi mein hai

Dev: that's good, we're going to Delhi tomorrow, you can meet Nandhini soon

Geet: what?

Dev: see the tickets

Geet: hum Delhi agle hafthe jaane wale haina?

Dev: change of plans, Pari's orders and you too can spend some time with your sister

Geet: but achanak se kasie jaa sakthe, packing bhi karna hai

Dev: Geet , tum sab sambal legi, I know

Geet: Dev, this is not fair, this time you have to pack your things and also Aditi's, then only I'll come

Dev: done

So, Maan has succeeded in his first step.... but it's going to be a long journey....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Ma’am steps to getting geet has started. Just hope he does not hurt her this time. He should ask her instead what she wants instead of assuming things

ah so they think sameera has given the number. Assumption good .. wonder what she will when she comes to know it is maan hmmm


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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 52

excellent update... well written

Maan puts his plan in motion.

Well Dev thinks he knows Geet well.

of cos Maan gets Lucky to get Nandini to call Geet.

so Geet agrees to go to Delhi.

Maan has tough task ahead.

how will Geet react seeing Maan?

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome

Maan executing his plan well geet only want maan to fight fr her and when her all mu get clear what will geet decide

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 52


Superb Update


I like how Maan is getting involved to ensure

Geet comes to Delhi

he had already gotten Lucky to talk to Geet

and now he also tells Lucky to make Nandini

phone Geet and ask her to meet in Delhi

Maan also is in contact with Dev

Geet and Dev talking and he tells her they are leaving the next day

to Delhi


please don't let Geet hurt Maan this time , I know it will

take time for her to forgive him for the past

but at least let her be happy and cherish some moments

alone with Maan and Aditi

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part - 53


Maan has ordered a banquet for lunch....

It's only Geet and Dev but Maan wants to make sure each and every favorite dish of Geet is on the menu....

Maan is ready to welcome Geet home.... yes, this time Maan is not going to let Geet go away from him...

Maan awaits Dev's call....

The driver is already at the terminal....

The flight must have landed an hour ago....

Dev calls....

Maan: halo Dev, tum log aagaye?

Dev: haan

Maan: itne dher kyun ho gayi? sab teek haina?

Dev: it's all the pandemic fear, there's a lot of protocols

Maan: it's ok, that's why I wanted you to come soon, it'll only worsen

Dev: that's so thoughtful of you

Maan: don't hire a taxi, driver is waiting, be careful

Dev: I know, give me the driver's no

Maan gives the drivers number and they come to the guest house safely....

Geet thinks that it must be arranged by Pari.....

Geet: Dev apne Pari ko bathadiya ki hum pohunchgye?

Dev: Pari ko patha nahi hai Geet, usko call mat karna

Geet: kya? toh phir hum kahan aaye hai?

Maan just comes to receive his special guests....

Maan: welcome to Delhi Dev

Dev: hi Maan, finally we are here

Maan: hope you have a fine stay here

Maan keeps looking at Geet....

Geet is stunned as she didn;t expect Maan and she couldn't miss that extreme change in Maan's look...

Somethings wrong.... Maan looks pumped up and determined....

what's his plan?

Dev: wow Maan, you look a lot younger and sexy, looks like you have got a naya josh, pyaar ka jadhu hi kuch aur hai, haina?

Maan: true, pyaar insaan ko kamzoor bhi bana saktha aur takat bhi de saktha

Dev: Pari is one lucky girl I must say, you know what Geet,it's all Maan's idea to get us here earlier

Geet thinks that something is fishy....

Dev: Maan is planning a big B'day surprise for Pari, isn't that lovely?

Geet: it's strange that people change so quickly

Geet is a little jealous too.....

Maan: kya karein? pyaar humme kab aur kaise badaltha ye toh humme patha bhi nahi chaltha

Dev: tum toh pagal deewana ho gaye ho Maan, congrats, welcome to the crazy world of love

Maan: I'm not new to the madness of love, actually I've been hit by the love bug long back and yet to recover, I think I've been permanently infected and it looks like there is no cure

Dev: this pandemic has made the medical lingo trendy

Geet: I'm happy that you found love at last,all the very best for your love life

Maan: thanks Geet, i need your wishes badly

Geet: Dev, Aditi must be hungry

Maan: haan, you people freshen up, I'll get the table set, come on in,

Maan takes them to the guest room

Maan: I think this must be good enough for you two, Dev, how about sharing the room with me? sorry, this place has got only two rooms

Dev: that works for me, don't worry we'll adjust, haina Geet?

Geet: haan, this is fine for us

Maan: Ok Dev, come let's go upstairs, our room is there

Maan has deliberately put them in different rooms.....

Maan leaves Dev and comes down....

He goes to Geet's room and knocks....

Maan: Aditi tayaar ho gayi?

Geet: haan, kyun?

Maan: I'll take Aditi so you can get ready

Geet: that's not a problem, we'll manage

Maan: Geet, Am I looking like a kidnapper or what?

Maan gets really angry this time.....

Geet lets Aditi go with Maan.....

Maan takes her to the garden and lets her play with the puppy....

Aditi has easily got attached to Maan....

Geet comes after getting ready to take Aditi for lunch...

Aditi is eating her sandwich which Maan specially made for her with lots of cheese watching the puppy play catch the ball....

Geet too stands there admiring little Aditi eating on her own watching Maan feeding the dog every time it brings the ball back to Maan and having a bite herself when Maan turns back and signals....

Maan has taught her to have a bite each time he gives a biscuit for the puppy....

Dev too comes and he asks Geet to let Aditi play with the puppy while they can go finish the lunch....

Geet is surprised that Maan remembered that she likes the tender coconut kheer that Nakul makes and has brought it from KM for Geet....

Maan can't forgot even the minute detail when it comes to Geet.........

Aditi is happy to have got a new friend.......

Aditi: what's her name?

Adit asks Maan looking at the cute puppy....

Maan: it's not her, it's him, I don't know, why don't you chose a name for him?

Aditi thinks for a whie....: tinku

Maan: tinku, tinku likes Aditi

Aditi: Aditi likes tinku

Maan: oh that's good, Maan loves Aditi

Aditi: Aditi loves Geet

Maan: that's ok, Maan too loves Geet

Maan smiles and hugs Aditi..... children are so pure and innocent....

how Maan wishes that we could stay like that forever....

Geet was like that when Maan first met her, but time snatches that innocence from us somehow....

The father daughter duo have fun on their own....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 53

thanks for the pm

fabulous update... nicely written

of cos Maan is eagerly awaiting Geet's arrival.

Maan has planned everything and has ensure that the lunch is Geet's choice.

finally they are there.

so Geet is jealous when Maan speaks of Pari.

she assumes that Maan loves Pari.

clever Maan has made Dev share his room with him.

at least Geet let Aditi go with Maan.

Geet awed seeing the lunch.

Maan enjoys with Aditi.

great that Geet saw this.

Aditi plays with the puppy.

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

52 n 53

maan is taking every step carefully n succeed getting geet in Delhi

geet surprise to see maan welcoming them

geet become jealous thinking maan move on with pari

maan enjoying his time with aditi

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice one. Dev didn't know anything about maaneet how can he react after knowing both relation.

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