MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 23

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part - 38


Maan finds it difficult to deciper this new savage Geet...

she not that simple innocent carefree Geet anymore...

yes, maturity comes with age, and it's been five years....

but it feels like she has lost her innocence faster and it's not the natural process like everyone else, it's been forcefully taken away from her....

it's not her choice that she turned like this, she had no other go, she had to evolve to survive the turbulance in her life....

she doesn't complain, she is happy that she has become independent and is capable of taking care of her child on her own.... she is a proud mother, a single parent....

Dev is there for Aditi, but Geet, she is not ready to make the same mistake again. now she won't go back to that weak dependent self ever.....

Maan: Geet, tum bahut badal gayi ho, tum meri Geet nahi, Maan ki Geet ko meinne kahin kho diya

Geet breaks her silence at last.... she bursts like a volcano simmering for years pretending to be dormant... it's like she was waiting for MSK. or MSK is her breaking point....

Geet: ab uss Geet ko doondhne se koi faida nahi, kyun ki woh Geet toh kab ka mar chuki hai

Maan: nahi Geet, woh yahi kahin chup rahi hai, mein jaise bhi usse doodh nikal loonga

Geet: koshsish karthe rehjaoge, ye toh aapki aadat haina? aap toh hamehsa apna kudh ka banaye sach ko hi doondhthe rehthe ho, sach aapke samne hothe hue bhi aap ko kabhi dikhayi nahi detha, kaise dikhayi dega? aap ne toh apni zidd se aap ki aankhon ko baandh ke rakha haina

Maan: tumne hi itne saalon se sach ko mere nazar se chuoake rakha hai Geet, mere aankh toh hamesha khule hi hai, aur sach ko hamesha chupa nahi sakthe

Geet: meine chupaya? kaunsi sach?

Maan: Aditi ki sachayi

Geet starts laughing sarcastically....

Geet: mein kyun chupaoongi? Aditi meri beti hai, mein toh iss puri duniya se garv se bathaoongi ki mein Aditi ki maa hoo

Maan: aur uske baap?

Geet: babaji ye mein kya sun rahi hoon? kahin ye mera veham toh nahi?

Maan: Geet, ye koi mazak nahi

Geet: aap ko sharam nahi aatha ye sawal mujhse karne se?

Maan: mein bhi kitna pagal hoon, tumse kya poochna hai? Aditi hummari beti hai

Geet: aap ko galatfami hui hai Mr.Khurana, Aditi Geet Handa ki beti hai. aur kissi ka bhi nahi hai, samjhe aap

Maan can't watch the pain Geet goes through when she utters those words....

Maan: Geet, sach se bhaagne se sach ko badal nahi sakthe, tumne toh tab mujhe nahi bathaya jab tumme bathana chahiye tha, kam se kam iss bar toh bathathi Geet jab mein wapas aaya tha

Geet: aap wapas nahi aaye the? aap apne kaam ke liye aaye the

Maan: haan, mein apna kaam ke liye hi aaya tha, phir bhi tumne mujhse chupaya kyun Geet? kya mujhe meri beti ke barein mein jaanne ka koi haq nahi?

Geet: aaj haq ke barein mein baat karnewale MSK uss waqt kahan gaye the? uss waqt toh aap mujhe akhela chodke chale gaye, ab kyun aaye ho?

Maan: mein tujhe chodke chala gaya? Geet, shayad tummari yaadhdast kam hogayi ho, teek se yaad karo Geet, kya mein tumme chodke gaya tha?

Maan reminds her of the past....... revisiting the past...

Maan is so happy that Geet too loves him as much as he loves her....

she is not faking this marriage as she initially said.... she is indeed in love with Maan....

Maan wants to choose the invitation card..... he wants to discuss it with Geet, he wants Geet also to be involved in the marriage proceedings.... after all it's her wedding too....

Maan calls Geet...... Geet is used to his early morning calls....

jab se Maan ne ye phone gift kiya hai tab se Maan roz subhe utthe hi call kartha aur pure raat Geet ki bak bak sunthe hi sonejaatha, it has become his lullaby..... yes, Geet is shy only when Maan is in front of her, but on the phone she just goes on and on non-stop....

Maan loves to listen to her pointless never ending talks....

she is in the middle of a beautiful early morning dream....

Geet is the princess and Maan is the rival Prince.....

Geet's marriage is fixed with someone else and Maan is coming on a white horse to take her.........

Maan: good morning Geet

Geet: good night Maan

Geet goes back to her dream........

Maan calls again....

Geet: Maan, aap bhi na/. itne subhe subhe kaun phone kartha, mujhe neendh aa rahi hai

Maan: mere neendh ko chura ke tum kaise chain se so sakthi ho Geet, utjao

Geet: ab toh mera sapna adhura reh gaya, aap ki wajah se

Maan: ab sapnon mein jeene ki kya zaroorat hai Geet, tummra sapna toh pura honewala haina?

Geet: aap nahi samjoge, bathao kya baat hai?

Maan: invitations kareedhna hai

Geet: toh kya aap uss ke liye bhi humse paisa mangoge?

Maan: Geeeeeeeeet, mein invitation choose karne jaa raha hoon

Geet: toh jaona, mujhse permission kyun poochthe ho?

Maan: hare Geet, tumme kaise card pasand hai? simple ones ya fancy cards

Geet: mein kuch nahi jaanthi, aap toh sab jaanthe haina? aap hi choose karlo

Maan: Geet, ye sirf meri nahi hummari shadhi hai

Geet: toh kya hua? aap choose karo ya mein, kya farak padtha hai?

Maan: farak padtha hai Geet? mein chahtha hoon ki abhi se hum milke sara decisions lethe hai

Geet: ab kya mein aap se pooche bina koi bhi kaam nahi kar sakthi?

Maan: aaisa nahi hai Geet, sirf shadhi ki shopping wagera

Geet: kya? mere shadhi ki shopping aap karoge? ye mein kabhi nahi maan sakthi, ye mein hi kyun, koi bhi ladhki nahi manegi, shopping toh ladhkiyon ka birth right hai

Maan: lekhin meri dulhan mere choice ki dress hi pehenegi

Geet: aaise kaise hoga? meri dress hai toh choice bhi meri hi hogi

Maan: Geet jab tum hi meri choice ho toh tummari dress kya cheez hai? waise shadhi mein sab se zyada mein hi dekhne wala hoon, toh tum mere liye sundar dikjao, bas

Geet: dekhthe hai

Maan: Geet, mobile apne paas hi rakhna, tummare bhai ko mat dena game khelne, I'll go to the shop and send you the card pics, then you can choose from that, ok

Geet: teek hai, bye

Maan sent the pics and waits for Geet.... she doesn't respond....

he tries calling her but she doesn't pick the call too.... that's unusual....

Maan the selects 3 cards and tells them that he'll confirm later....

That noon Dadi calls Maan home immediately....

Maan goes and finds the whole family gathered....

he thinks it's some wedding discussion....

Maan is happy he has found his family at last....

dadi: Maan, aap aagaye

Dadi seems a bit worried....

Maan: what's worng dadi? why are you so tensed?

Dadi: Maan, aap pehle khana khalo, hum badh mein baat karthe hai'

Maan: nahi Dadi, pehle aap bathao ki kya baat hai?

Dadi: woh Geet ne aapko call nahi kiya?

Maan: nahi Dadi? in fact Geet didn't even answer my call

dadi's face turns pale.......... something is wrong......

Dadi: woh Maan

Maan: dadi, aap seedhe seedhe bolthe kyun nahi?

dadi: Maan bete, ye shadhi nahi ho sakthi

Maan is shattered.... : what?

Dadi: lagtha hai Handa's iss rishtey se kush nahi hai

Maan: lekhin kyun?

dadi: chodiye Maan, hum aap ke liye isse bhi achchi ladhki layenge

Maan: dadi, aaise kaise woh log shadhi ko rokh sakthe hai?

dadi: Maan, iss baat ko yahi chod dijiye, iss mein hi hum sab ka bhala hai

Maan doesn't argue with dadi........... but he wants to know about Geet's wish.... he is not bothered about anyone else.... he knows his Geet would never say no to him....

he then goes to Hoshiarpur himself to talk with Geet in person....

he keeps calling Geet but her mobile is switched off....

he is at the Handa house.... there something happened that Maan never expected, that too from Geet...

Geet ne aaisa kya kiya?

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Posted: 5 years ago

thanks for the pm!

Part 38

Maan is shocked seeing this Geet.

Circumstances have changed Geet.

finally Geet bursts.

so Aditi is Maaneet's daughter.

Geet confronts Maan for leaving her.

But Maan reminds her of the past....

Past...

they were getting married and Maan wants Geet to chose the invitations with him.

he cannot get a hold of Geet.

so the Handas were unhappy with the marriage?

at least Maan wants to know what Geet's wish.

her mobile is switched off.

what did Geet do?

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

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geet n her family left before marriage n break it n then why geet is blaming maan

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Maan never left her its her family whom changed mind on last moment

So Maan is right y she hide about his daughter and y blaming him now

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omg...what happened in the past...where did geet go?? they were going to get married...now maan is wondernig why geet has changed so much...He feels she left him and she feels he left her..who messed with them??

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Posted: 5 years ago

nice update.................


loved it.............

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Part - 39


Maan has reached the Handa residence....

There is a lot of noise at the house...

Many new faces are seen whom Maan has never seen before....

Brij comes out seeing Maan to stop him....

but he is not strong enough for the ferocious Angry Singh Khurana...

Maan puts him aside in one blow and enters the Handa house....

he knows he is not going to get a warm welcome.... he has come for all that, he isn't bothered about anyone but Geet....

Maan shouts.... Geeeeeeeeet Geeeeeeeet kahan hai tum? mujhe tumse baat karna hai

Darji: tum yahan kaise aaye ho? chale jao, Geet tumse nahi milna chahthi

Brij: Geet tummare chehre bhi nahi dekhna chahthi

one more old lady comes out of the kitchen followed by Ranno...

it's Darji's daughter, Preetho, Geet's buaji..... the one Madan rejected....

Preetho: dekho ji kaun aaya hai?

Maan stares her....

Preetho: Jr.Khurana, sirf shakal hi nahi milthi baap se, ye toh apne baap se bhi bada dokebaaz hai

Maan can't tolerate such disrespect for his father....

he may have mistaken him initially but he knows his father very well....

Maan ignores all the nonsense for he is here only for Geet... nothing else matters....

Preetho keeps on abusing.....

Maan: Geet, mujhe inn logon se koi baat nahi karna hai, mujhe sirf tummare muh se sunna hai ki tum iss shadhi se kush nahi ho, bolo Geet, kya tum mujhse shadhi karna nahi chahthi?

Darji: sharam nahi aathi tumme, kiss muh se Geet se mine aaye ho? besharam

Preetho: babaji ki lakh lakh sukar hai ki hummari Geet bach gayi iss besharam aadmi se

even Ranno doesn't spare him....

Ranno: uss ladhkiyon ki tarah meri beti ki zindagi bhi barbad mat karo, mein tumse meri beti ki zindagi ki beech mangthi hoon

Darji: Ranno, andar jao

Darji ko gussa aatha ki ranno iss Khurana ke samne gidgidathi....

Maan is confused..... what's going on?

Preetho: mein sab jaanthi hoon tummare barein mein, tumme kya lagtha ki tum Canada se door aake yahan apni chalaaki chala sakthe ho? tum iss duniya mein kahin bhi jao toh bhi tumme koi bhi izzatkar ladhki nahi milegi, jaisa baap waisa beta, pyaar ke naam se kitne ladhkiyon ke zindagi mein khelenge ye log?

Preetho still can't forget what happened with her, her nannat is married to a Canadian citizen from Maan's place, Preetho often spends her summer there and has been stalking the Khuranas for years... she just can't get over that rejection by Maan's father

Maan has a bestie Sam back in Canada, they had a fling for a couple of months since they started sharing an apartment.... later they moved on but still are best friends sharing the same apartment...

Maan happened to pick up and drop Sam's friends late nights after parties.....

Maan owns a Ducati and every girl wants to ride it once....

Maan had no problem in taking them for a ride once in a while.....

Preetho has seen all this for she has always been spying him....

Preetho told to the whole family that Maan is a loafer and is after girls....

everyone starts abusing Maan and the situation is getting out of control....

Maan takes all the insults silently b'coz he believed in Geet, Geet knows Maan....

she would never believe all this trash....

Geet has been watching Maan and Maan only from her room....

Enough of all this drama...

She has already taken a lot of all this crap for the whole day....

She is no longer going to tolerate this stupidity...

Geet shouts form the window....

Geet: Maan, chale jao yahan se, aap yahan kyun aaye ho? chale jao yahan se

Maan: Geet, ye tum bol rahe ho?

Geet: haan, mein hi bolthi hoon ki aap chale jao, abhi, issee waqt

Maan is shattered hearing that....

everyone looks at him in pity.... this is the moment that Maan really feels all the insults and mud slinging he has been receiving all the while...

Maan no longer wants to stay there.... he leaves immediately as Geet expected...

Maan can't believe it.... Geet trusts her families words more than Maan... she has no trust in Maan...

how can any relationship survive without trust?

it's all over for Maan now......

Maan breaks down and turns crazy....

he just hits the road without knowing where to go?

he is not ready to go back to Delhi....

Dadi keeps calling Maan but he has left his mobile uncharged and has turned into a mess, trying to run and hide form the brutal blow that Geet gave him..... he moves from one place to another like a nomad taking solace in his long lost friend, alcohol....

he has been an alcoholic already and came out sober after so much difficulties, but now he doesn't want to stop drinking at all...........

everyone was worried about Maan and they kept searching him everywhere....

Dadi requested the family not to spread the news of Maan's absconding but to tell the people that Maan has gone back to Canada to save Maan's reputation....

Maan actually left for Canada after a couple of months.... Dadi packed and sent him back hoping that he would go back to his life in Canada with friends and start afresh....

but Maan's alcoholism worsened and he went to rehab....

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Maan went to Handa's residence to confront geet but her relative insulting him but he don't care but after listening Geet he really gelt insult and left and try to forget her but failed

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so geet's bua taking revenge from as his father reject her

maan totally broke with geet not trusting him

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Part 39

intense update.... well written.

Hate this bua.....

sad that Geet did not trust Maan.

he was shattered and became an alcoholic.

he never left Geet....

will these mu be cleared?

update soon

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