Not This Time (not going to update this one now) - Page 5

Wow this one had a superb beginning. The description of geet beneath the tree after the reprehensible act was amazingly written and quite disturbing. Wonder if maan is the prez of the company. As I read further I wanted geet to turn into cold and calculative, taking revenge from the perpetrator. Seems like my wish will get fulfilled

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Nice concept.geet was raped by a man in the ceremony. Is it maan?lets see how the story unfolds.

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Congrats for New story..

Nice update

Shocking intro indeed .waiting ....

Nice part poor geet raped by monster who is he I think she is strong & brave

Wonderful Start

I guess the girl who is raped is Geet and the man is her boss , may be Maan but the man seems to be mysterious, why he is living in a remote area away from the world and why he works from home, something is fishy here, eagerly waiting for next

Congratulations for your new story.

Nice start, hope she will find that strength to punished that person.

Congratulations on your new story

the Title is Intriguing

Intriguing and Curious Start

She works for the Khurana’s (I’m assuming she’s Geet)
she is an intern happy to be at the Khurana party , she strong willed which is great
while the Khurana’s are not known people of society , which makes me think there has
to be something wrong with them even if one is a billionaire they are well known but theses
Khuranas only are known to loyal people I suppose just a few of them
which means the party too they probably will not show their faces
it seems when Geet was leaving the party for home she was trapped by a man or a cheap monster

she was raped and left shattered too but what captures my attention is that the perpetrator
says he’ll be back after nine months to claim his cub , is this person real man or other
or is it just his words
a victim whether weak or strong once captured by a rapist , that person finds it difficult to trust
man when alone I suppose their fragile state surfaces

I’m anxiously looking forward to reading this story and finding out who had raped the girl