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Nice prologue & CH

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Loved the prolouge.. a bad relationship between father and son..

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will you be updating today?

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Prologue

Too small.

Maan is already so successful in 22! That's quite something to attain at such an age. How did he achieve that terror tag? Would love to know. His relationship with his father no so good

Update next part soon.

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Chapter 1





Maan stop his car outside farmhouse taking off his overcoat and picking up his bag he enter inside with spare key Only to find kitchen lights on.

Maan turned angry instantly

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M- GEET GEET

Causing her to come running toward him dropping everything.

Geet come & hug him instantly causing him to calm down.

M- what were you doing in kitchen. You were having fever yesterday. I told you to take rest.


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Gert look at him with innocent eyes.

Pouting her lips with a frown on her forehead

Maan look at her as she place his hand on her forehead indicating she is fine now.

Maan calm down a little bit placing kiss on her forehead he ask

M- you had medicines?

Geet nodded in yes

M- good.

Now come with me i'm hungry.

He hold her hand as they move toward dining area and nakul arrange everything.

Geet sat beside him taking morsal in her hand and forwarding it toward him. Maan take it and made her eat also with himself .

This is called bliss to be with someone who cares for you actually.

Maan was lost in his thoughts when geet patted his cheeks gaining his attention causing him to look at her as he pull her in his lap

M- nothing

He said placing a quick pack on her lips and she shy down immediately.

M- still you feel shy?

I have seen everything things infinte times.

She hide her face in his chest.

Hiding herself as he place kiss on her forehead.

M- well I need to leave for office early in morning so I think we should leave .

Geet nodded her head and turned to get up but he pick her up in his arms causing her to hold him tightly.

Next morning

Maan woke up only to find her sleeping in his arms naked.

Her arms wrapped around his waist legs entangled with his. Maan place a kiss on her forehead he remove her hand causing her to hold him more tightly.

Not wanting to wake her up he stay still. Watching her sleeping peacefully..

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R- WHAT’S HIS PROBLEM!

WHERE HE IS?

Ram asked from PA of Maan as there is no sign of maan from last night.

Where did he disappeared?

Don’t he know he had important meeting to attend?

R- I told you maa he is so irresponsible!

I don’t know how he reached here!

S- you need to trust him.

You always blame him for something or other!

You need to give him chance.

Farm house

Geet look at maan angrily for not waking her up & now he is late for meeting . Don’t know how much it gonna cost him..

Maan follow her as she prepare his things for office.

M- jaan

You were sleeping peacefully I don’t want you to distrub.

She pay no heed to him.

Handover him things making him ready.

As he tried to manofy her placing kiss here and there. Causing her to give him hard look..

M- jaan

He held her hand as she turns to leave

M- do you seriously think that I would let our company downfall

He asked making her look at him .

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Geet look at him nodding in no.

M- I hired staff that is more than efficient to handle things .

We build our company with lot of struggle I promise I won’t compromise.

Geet hug him holding her ears saying sorry.

M- now come on let me leave.

Geet place a kiss on his cheeks bidding him bye.

She look at him guilty as she doubt him but she can’t let his struggle getting waste just because of her. She saw him rising from scratch his struggle. Day & night working for reaching here.

She is with him since she lost her parents.

He was her saviour she lost everything thing that day but she found him who is now her life..

For world be with him like this may be termed wrong but she feel everything right.

She feel right to be with him. Everything look more than good when he is with her by her side

Teasing her

Loving her

Protecting her

Scolding her…

Just like a saaya!


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Edited by Ramjanki - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful relationship

Maaneet are like shadow and flame..

How much I loved their relationship

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