Mannet ss : saaya pt5 page 41 / tsr pg49

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Prologue :


M- i told you stay out of my life.

Maan warned his father causing him to look at maan angrily.

Mf- why?

What i said wrong? Do you know what?

You have got blind just because of your success!

Just like your mother.


M- ENOUGH!

dare you say a word against her i will forget that i have a father for namesake.

S- bs kijiye aap dono.

Savitri tried to stop her son & grand son. But it's already too late maan left khurana's mantion with no hope to come back.

Here nobody understand him. He is alone here just like his mother was alone.


He start his car turning toward his farn house that belongs to him where his life was waiting for him..

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So how was it?


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Character sketch:


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Maan singh khurana - 22 yrs old business tycoon. Self made man who struggle and grow all by himself. Now his name is terror in itself. No one dare to mess with him.


Geet - 20 yrs old. Cute yet simple..

She can't talk due to some previous circumstances and now love of his life..

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This story belongs to me only!

If by chance any scene match with other one it's purely a coincidence nothing else!!

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Index :


Prologue & CS - Above

Chapter 1 - page 4

Chapter 2 - page 12

Chapter 3 - page 20

Chapter 4 - page 34

Chapter 5 - page 41 ( protected🔒)

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Nice can’t wait to read it

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Nice start can’t wait to read it

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congrats for new story dear, interesting prologue , eagerly waiting for update

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Love the prologue

CS seems so good

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Nice prologue... Waiting for update...

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Congrats on your story 😊😊😊

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Interesting

By the congrats

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Nice prologue.waiting for update.

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