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Posted: 6 years ago
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explosive teaser!! awaiting Maan's reaction! update soon! thanks

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good update. Geet is in a difficult position. Wish to see how she is going to go forward

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Posted: 6 years ago
#83

Nice update.

Though Maan is stubborn but I liked this stubbornness from him. He has a clear take on marriage and it’s values.

2 parts but Maaneet haven’t even interacted once.

Will he give a chance to Geet to explain?

Waiting for next.

Update soon and please don’t say that you won’t update after 4-5 parts. Want so much to read this story. Pls update regularly at least for regular readers.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Prologue


You know what ma, I am ready to marry that man who was left by your so-called daughter but believe me if anything happens to my daarji then you will see what I will do.. threatened geet to her mother. She slipped into the red wedding lehenga that was supposed to be her step sister's but her sister had run away with one of her lover leaving her to substitute for her.


Nimisha Handa looked at her daughter and gave her a deadly look.


Don't forget you are my daughter, and it's our reputation which is at stake geet.. she said as she gave Geet the jewelry to replace her old ones. She had come to the wedding of her stepsister but things changed suddenly.


Do you ever feel any kind of maternal instinct for me ma? I am definitely amazed at your selfishness. Taunted geet as she saw her mother trying to help her in the pretext.


You remind me of your useless father geet and don't worry about the hospital bills as long as you play samaira.. Geet was getting agitated now. She removed her mother's hand from her shoulder as she was helping geet, not as a daughter but as her daughter samaira's substitute.


You disgust me you know. You first seduced my father, had me and then married his brother ma.. and I am glad that I have my father's genes and his upbringing. You may not be able to accept me with all that shit you throw at me and my dad but believe me if anything happens to my daarji , you will see what I will do with you and with that son in law of yours.. she spat and left her so-called mother.

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Let's see if I will write further parts or not

nice story geet seams to have a strong character.please pm me the updates
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome updates, why is maan so ignorant of Natasha's motives. hope geet clear it to maan that she is not Samira
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86

Please do not quote my post

It's a personal request

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Posted: 6 years ago
#87

Part 2

Fantastic and Awesome

Maan has been in love with Natasha while it seem she

is not want she portrays anyways in time he will surely find out

her true face

Geet now married and decides that she will tell her husband that she is Geet

while Natasha again suggest to spend the night with Maan and I

love his thoughts on marriage its excellent

I'm looking forward to when Geet tells him she is no Samira Handa but Geet Handa

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Posted: 6 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: hahajaja

Nice update.

Though Maan is stubborn but I liked this stubbornness from him. He has a clear take on marriage and it’s values.

2 parts but Maaneet haven’t even interacted once.

Will he give a chance to Geet to explain?

Waiting for next.

Update soon and please don’t say that you won’t update after 4-5 parts. Want so much to read this story. Pls update regularly at least for regular readers.

I meant to say I will complete it within 4-5 parts , not leaving it incomplete

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Posted: 6 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Silvermist32223

Congrats on your new story Suhaana

Interesting title 😉

Thank you Kiara

I am glad you liked the title

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Posted: 6 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the warning Suhana!!

but hope that you will not discontinue!

I want to read this story! thanks

I don't want to but can't commit to anything. Depends on my mood to write for maaneet.

I have been reading a lot on maaneet to complete my Fictions. This time I will atleast give a logical ending to most of them.

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