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Posted: 5 years ago
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part 4


Geet feel little bit hurt that family hide it from her …..but is she feel not bad with this meeting there her brain is getting confused ….

Maanslowly say don’t be Judgmental Geet bas shanty se samjne ki koshis karo why family behave like this ..its my bigbro Vicky idea .but I don’t want to start any relation on zhut false so I cannot stop my self to saying u all things .

And one more things i really like u …..and I will be happy person if I got life partner like u actually u like me yesterday itself when I heard your talk with your family .

all waiting for geet answer

she slowly say i still need some time for my ans i am not ready for wedding i am sorry

vicky feel angry he stand for say something but maan stop him and nodded in no

Geet feel so cheated but alas she not feel any anger towards to Maan which making surprised her about herself only …her mind play tricks that he say all the truth thou he can easily hide it .now she is stuck with mind and heart game ….she took deep breath she once look to her parent where she saw only fear , fear of her reaction ,her hurt that they tackle her maybe she took it on heart she once look to all.

They are in KM her every reaction action going to ruin her ma baba reputation but she is scaring for this marriage and all ….its not easy for her after what so happen with Mira its not easy her eyes start to fill with her helpless , agony .

Once she look to Brij and Brij found only one q in her down shape eyes YOU TOO BRO…which make hurt Brij as well as angry with himself and his own parent he give one gaze to ma papa.. he called softly Gudiya before he say word Geet stop him…

I know u all need to know my answer but frankly speaking I am confused and to be specific I am not ready for any new relation and for that I have my own valid reason but if u allgive me some time I want to think of it .

Andaunty she turn to Maan mother I need some coffee this sudden shock I need coffee badly can I…..

Maan mother like her maturity maturity of handling situation she say in mind ladki strong hai with mind…..she not create any scene here Maan mother took Geet hand in her hand and say take your own time beta and think positive about all this some time we parent tackle you kids like this but its only for kids good, their intention is only happiness of kids nothing else .

Geet gets that she indirectly hinting to her parent act .

I know aunt they only think about my happiness my future I know that

Vicky ease all heavy atmosphere he chirped so mom u make coffee but not Maan type please wo black and sugarless coffee yuk I cannot stand for it..

Maan and Mrs Khurana roll their eyes on Vicky antic …

Mrs. Khurana went to kitchen along with Geet mother Geet went to her Hulk who still fuming in anger she slowly hold his hand and nodded in no like she silently saying please yaha mat jagana apne ander ka HULK ..brij who can control his anger only for Geet took deep breath and nodded it …

And this is not escape from Maan and Vicky eyes …

.Vicky bend to Maan side and mummer in his ear beta apni would be wife ko khush rakhne ke liye ye hulk ko shaant rakhana hoga

Maan gulp hard with his talk he once look to Brij which eyes still turning red like anytime flame come out from it . other side Vicky make bhangra on Maan shock face.

Just than Maan distract with his fev coffee smell and same time they heard voice of meera upper side who is fuming in anger because she is totally get room imprisonment with her health but she now she turn so bore ..upon the smell of coffee make her restless like anything and she come with fuming poor Vicky run like anything to meera side he don’t want to face tournament full whole day ….

Geet and Brij get confused with Vicky running they turn to see where he is running and get shock of their life…they almost froze on their place they forget to blink their eyes.

Other side Vicky hold meera hand brought her down slowly he make her settle on sofa. Maan went to her with glass of water other side mr Handa also become shock to see her….

Meera took water and finish it ..maan say softly why u come down but next his word stop with meera one glare …

Do I am any prisoner jo muje room main band karke rakha hai main aur kuch der waha rehati to I will start to pull my own hair definitely please waise bhi I want to meet all and upon that ye apki balck coffee jo muje pasand nahi phir bhi I want to drink because of this chota nawab she indicated to her belly ….

And both Maan and Vicky ans same time chota nawab nahi choti pari …

Meera chuckle on both brother drama for girl child she make them shuu and indicated to guest both brother give stupid smile but Handa family still in froze mode.

Vicky put hand on meera shoulder and say she is my wife meera Vicky Khurana ….

Geet feel like a land escape from her feet she somehow take some step and come near to meera ….meera once look to Vicky and Maan and give awkward smile just than Geet touch meera face like she assuring herself that its real she is not watching any dream Geet turn to her father papa ….look a cry escape from her mouth her body start shake with her cry ….mr Handa almost rung to Geet side and hold her ..

He nooded yes Geet beta its truth …mr Handa is equally shock …

Vicky try to calculate some 2+2 just than meera replay sorry do I know u all

Edited by Mahimaan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#82

Nice update.

Geet confuse with her mind and heart and said need some time.vicky and her mother ease the situtation.

Geet and her family shocked seeing meera.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#83

thanks for updating!!

Part 4

beautiful update! superbly written!

can understand Geet's dilemma! her response does shock everyone! but is natural that she needs time!

great that Maan's mom advised her!

Liked how she handles Brij!

Agree with Vicky about Brij! hmm Maan should be aware lol.

Love the Khurana bros care for Meera! Handas are shocked seeing Meera there

Hmm so Meera does not know them?

update soon, thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Geet is very upset with all this as she is not ready for all reason is her friend Meera

All handa family with Geet shock to see Meera getting all care from Khurana brothers

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Mahi.... kindly post Part 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Last part



Now Handa family why meera saying such things she very well know them from year Geet and she is very closed childhood friends then why she is saying like that …why …

Other side Vicky brain start to calculation all things …he read shock of Geet face …

Before anyone say anything Vicky say in one breath …she is Geet meera ,her bro Mr. Brij Handa that is Mohinder Handa Geet father ,that’s her mother …

Meera say namste to all …Handa family are real confused …

Just than Maan mother come there with coffee that is turn perfect moment and Vicky make ishara to Geet to not ask any question which is they (Handa family ) get it and Handa family become quite after little chit chat, they are confused and lost in thought …

Ok meera thoda walking kar lo ab thoda jab tak in sabka coffee khatam hota hai …than we all talk non stop like you.

Meera nodded and went t o out side Maan father occupie her …

Other side Vicky took deep breath and ask do u all know meera …

Geet nodded and say softly she is my best friend we are childhood friends her family is little bit backward ……brije mummer in anger LITTLE BEAT ..

Geet stop for while and say when some body reject her …her family start preserised her like anything and one day she jumap in sea ….tear make way from Geet ….she fell so chocked that is reason I don’t want to get marry I start to hate tis word marriage which broken my friend like this than her that step last one and half year would be hell for us its so much hard to accept her ..dimsses

But today I /we in shock she don’t recognized us …..geet say inlittle cry but hurt voice …..

Vicky hold Geet palm and two people eyes glued their only one is Maan other is brij …

She lost her memory Geet Vicky say softly I found her near sea faze in injured state so I took her to hospital and when she gain her hosh I get that she lost her memory ….till than I start to fall for her so I dsicided to marry her now she is with us all happy till now we don’t found of any sine of her memory coming back …Geet .

Geet smile with tears I look she is happy …u know main to ye bhi souch liya tha I will make backmail to Brij bhiaya to marry with meera but meera unko bhai maanti hai ….

Vicky cried in loud voice …what are u saying ….

Maan nodded on vicky reaction ….brije give him a look and say yes may be I will marry her fo my choti …waise u canleave her hand now …

Brij is so possessive for Geet …

Vicky once look brij once to Maan than to Geet and say in firm why should I leave her hand she is my Adhi gharwali ….

Brije give him shock look what meera ki itani achi dost hai to wo meri Sali hui na ….

Now Geet turn red in shy with Vicky tease …

Than Vicky say in soft voice waise Geet main tumko Sali se jada bhabhi banana chata hu …

Look kuch burai main achai bhi hoti now she is life of Khuranas we all love her …

Than why u stoping yourself to face new happiness …jo hua bhool javo and move on a beautiful life waiting for you Geet, Vicky once look to Maan and Geet follow his gaze …

She know Vicky is saying right that Maan don’t try to hind anything jo bhi hai sab kuch sach bol diya whitout any other thought he is success ful and have great family …so there is no reason to say no to him.

Geet once look to family and than turn to Vicky and say in firm tone I am ready for it ……

All get stunt with her ans ….yes from her make tham all shock ….

Afte fewsecond all come out from shock with Vicky cheearful hooting he almost hug Geet ….ignoring Maan and brij galre ….

Geet once look to her parent than brij and found a tear of happiness other side

Maan come near Vicky and say him slowly is u having harmons changing problem along with meera …vicky one give look to Maan and Maan mummer softly u can leave her now from your HUG….

Vicky smirk on Maan pssoevinse …

This small converstion Geet heard that ans she once look to Maan and found a happiness and hopes in his smiling face ….

She know she took voice decision she got good humsafer along with her besti meera .

The end ….

Its small ss so no epi for this ……

I just want to talk about girls propriety some time there are reason are different but girls should decided about their marriage not other .

note

Ok next will be Marriage Love or lust last part which is coming today itself

Tomorrow willbe tanhayia

Than MG story ….


and english winglish along with do kinare


i already update so take look




your mahi...

Edited by Mahimaan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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very short but lovely story

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Last Part?? never expected this to end that soon!


Last Part

superb update! greatly written!

sad that Meera lost her memory! but she now has a loving husband and family!

Aww Geet happy seeing Meera!

wow Geet wanted Brij to marry Meera but alas Meera considers Brij as her brother!

not surprised with Vicky's reaction!

nice seeing him tease Geet!

glad that Geet agreed to marry Maan!

everyone is happy especially Maan!

liked this possessive Maan!

lovely end!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Mahi... thanks for this amazing OS!

You indicated that you will not post an epilogue but request that you please consider posting one!

thanks!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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once again thanks for this OS!

please reconsider and post the epilogue!

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