MG (FF): The Circle of Exile [Ch. 6 : Pg. 23] 8th Feb, '21

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frostedstarlit

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Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: indiegirl
Wow, I do not know what to say and where to start... you just are so awesome... it feels like I never stopped reading the other one it just feels the continuation and I am really awed by the way you have connected the two... new people... new surroundings yet the same intensity and the same mysterious setting... the separation of Maan and Geet ... Loved it ...
Thnx

When I was writing this (it was during the time I was finishing Beyond this Heaven), I was feeling like this is a different tangent I have caught. But three paragraphs into it and I felt I knew the Mir and Fehriya and even Ida since forever. And then when the thought of Maan occurred - in the begging and again at the end, I felt as if I hadn't seen Maan for ages. Weird😆

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Posted: 6 years ago

#22

This was quite painful to read even though I was expecting Geet to yearn for Maan but she is practically in hell right now emotionally. She is not the strong Geet we came to know but is a woman looking for some meaning to her life fullof remorse . Her poem was heart breaking where she kind of begs Maan to open the door when she comes knocking. Only consolation is she has Fehriya to console her. Mir is a mystery and I hope he turns out to be a good one. Looking forward to next .

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goldenchimes

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Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Very nice update .Although sad reading Geet's state.

You penned it so beautifully. Thanks

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

My endurance for pain has been tampered with too many times

hence I was waiting for the new dawn to break and the new story to begin..

so my apologies .. I am going to finish the 3rd story and then read ..

Itna bhi waqt na lagao lautne mein frosty

hum pighal ke beh jaaye

ya hawaaon mein udd jaaye..

❤️