MG (FF): The Circle of Exile [Ch. 6 : Pg. 23] 8th Feb, '21

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Keepdreaming

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Congrats on new season

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divya22

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Finally yeahhh...

Okay so about prologue who is saying this? Maan or Mir?

Ch1 was nyc.. got to know about Geets family and her thoughts. Still i kind of hate her for leaving Maan.

Loved the piece : one morning if I come knocking at your door..

Amazing.

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sgmiss2003

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So nice to see you back with the new season. Looking forward to reading this wonderdul story written by amazingly talented writer.

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hermosoanu123

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Love to read ...thnk u for updating ...

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 6 years ago

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what life geet is living now...its not her life...she is writing now her version of poem...her thinking is still revolving around maan...then how she is staying away from him...n for what... she was afraid n ffle away from her dead kids...did not want to c their dead body...n left everything to maan...n now thinking how he was handling all of these alone...lets c how they will meet this time

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indiegirl

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Wow, I do not know what to say and where to start... you just are so awesome... it feels like I never stopped reading the other one it just feels the continuation and I am really awed by the way you have connected the two... new people... new surroundings yet the same intensity and the same mysterious setting... the separation of Maan and Geet ... Loved it ...
Thnx

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frostedstarlit

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: divya22
Finally yeahhh...
Okay so about prologue who is saying this? Maan or Mir?
Ch1 was nyc.. got to know about Geets family and her thoughts. Still i kind of hate her for leaving Maan.
Loved the piece : one morning if I come knocking at your door..
Amazing.

Well, I'd bet my life on Maan's prologue this time, though as the story progresses, who knows?

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frostedstarlit

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Originally posted by: sgmiss2003
So nice to see you back with the new season. Looking forward to reading this wonderdul story written by amazingly talented writer.

Thank you, excited to be back.

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frostedstarlit

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Originally posted by: hermosoanu123
Love to read ...thnk u for updating ...

The pleasure was mine😉

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frostedstarlit

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Originally posted by: paponecon
what life geet is living now...its not her life...she is writing now her version of poem...her thinking is still revolving around maan...then how she is staying away from him...n for what... she was afraid n ffle away from her dead kids...did not want to c their dead body...n left everything to maan...n now thinking how he was handling all of these alone...lets c how they will meet this time

The point here is that Geet was not broken on the day she thought both her kids were delivered dead. She had been leading herself to breakdown long before that. She never showed it to Maan, even when he tried to get in. But what happened when her water broke was more than just labour. The delivery was only the final blow, to everything that had been going around inside her - her parents, her identity, her past, her future.

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