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Posted: 6 years ago
#71


Teaser ~



G- how dare you?
She asked angrily turning him toward her gaining his attention.
He look at her with bored eyes . He know now he is going to accused for something again but what he did now?
When she handover him papers

M- clg admission form
So now what?

G- YOU ARE DOING THIS PURPOSELY!
DON'T YOU?
Just because i'm carrying twins you played this trick haina?
I know you very well.


He look at her before turning back .
M- think whatever you want.

Geet clapped
G- i knew it!

He look at her for a moment before leaving. He didn't get about what trick she is talking now. But he will be honest.
Ab toh inn harkaton pr usse gussa bhi nhi aata..


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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Madhu_31

Hello there 😃

April 5th is coming soon,so let us gear up for GHSP 9th Anniversary celebration.Please do participate and if you can..win a gift😲(only limited gifts available 😆😉 )

Please have a look at the announcement thread and send your works on or before 25th March to the respective persons mentioned in the thread😃

Plz don't ignore this..we are doing it for our beloved Maaneet,our fav GHSP and our GF😊If we all joined together and did means it will be a great success😃 So plzz do participate!!😳

Link :



I would love to participate.
But for 3 more days i'm busy due to my cousin wedding.
Will send you pm after that
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73
Geet again accused maan... For admission.. guess he is not affected by her words he is used to it by now
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Posted: 6 years ago
#74
Waiting for updates nyc teaser
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Posted: 6 years ago
#75
Awesome teaser
Geet blame game chalu hai
Maan ignored her accusations
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Posted: 6 years ago
#76
Nice tsr
Geet negative mind
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Posted: 6 years ago
#77
Uff brainless girl always take him wrong.nice tsr
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78
nice update
janki ne geet ko admission forms diye but issme bhi geet ko koi trick lagi maan ki
geet carrying twins aur woh bohut ghabrai hui he aur iss ko ussne admission forms se connect kar diya
hey bhagwan iss geet ko jab akal ayegi
past janki maan ke orphanage gai usske liye gifts leke but maan woh saare gifts share liye apne frnds ke sath
waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#79
nice teaser
geet again accusing maan stupid geet
waiting for update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#80
Chapter 16



It was late in night when they both come back from orphanage. Maan was little disturbed so he want to stay there for some time and janki too felt it so just stay with him. They were greeted by Ram as soon they entered in KM.
R- where were you both?
Ram asked worried as its unusual for them to stay in orphanage for so long. Ram look at janki who nodded her head in nothing.
R- maan beta
But in response he just come and hug him tightly causing both of them to look toward him surprised.
J- maan
Janki caresses his forehead and Ram hug him in return.
R- are you fine son?
M- thank you.
R- maan?
M- for giving me a life a family and saving me. You adopted m
J- MAAN
Causing maan to look at his maa as she looked angry all of sudden
J- aaj toh kh dia . Aage mt bolna
Ram too look angry
R- YOU ARE OUR SON. My SON MAAN RAM KHURANA!
So dare you think about that.
We are your parents and we did only what anyone do for their children .
M- sorry
He apologized felling guilty for saying something like that.
In return they both take him in a hug placing a comforting hand on his back.
R- janki you should go & take rest. I want to talk to maan.
Janki nodded but look at ram who assured her through his eyes that he will talk to him. Surely he is hiding something that is troubling him deeply.
M- papa anything serious?
R- yes it is !
But first have your dinner you must be hungry by now.
They all did dinner in silence but janki made things that maan & yash like the most. Turning the atmosphere light as they do share about arrival of twins. Causing yash to jump in happiness for getting double promoted and savitri too was so happy hearing this news that she Hanover geet a set of ruby. But two were not happy first one was geet who was so scared and angry for getting trapped and second one was maan. As he was worried about the future of his babies and the guilt of hiding about geet eating him with in when his parents love him the most . In one way he was hurting him. He doesn't even knew will they forgive him for hiding this thing from them?

..
Geet went to her rooms throwing things here and there as she felt suffocated, scared & cheated at the same moment.
Twins?
What if something happen to her? What was the use of freedom then?
Her parents surely won't let her leave the childrens . She will be trapped once again and maan!
He did played a game again. She was wrong so wrong. A selfish man like him can never change. She waited for him to turn up but he did everything to ignore her. Didn't he?
How he insulted her in front of his mother?
How could he do that to her?
She wants to go to someone who can understand her. But no!
No one is here who try to understand her!
She felt Jeleous from him everytime she see him with his parents, his family. Who understand him so well.
They even know by his look he likes thing or not.
His mother & father never needed words to understand him . His dadi love him to no limits and yash for him maan is sn ideal.
She did feel Jeleous why can't she have a family like him?
He didn't deserve so much love! When he snatched her happiness from her.
She was so sure the day they will come to know about his real rang dhang they will hate him for sure.
...

R- what is it maan?

Maan look at his father before lowering his head because if he look in his dad eyes he won't be able to hide.
M- kya dad?
I'm fine.
R- you are not son..
Ram said coming toward him and placing his hand on maan shoulder.
M- aisa nhi h
I have no reason for being unhappy.
R- since when you start lying maan?
Causing maan to hold his breath
R- son
Look at me.
Saying so he made maan look at him
R- we are worried for you.
Do you know since how many nights your maa didn't slept well just because she keep thinking that you are in deep trouble. I know it not professional because my son is capable more than enough for handling such kind of matter.
R- it's about geet.
Even I feel that we made a mistake by marrying you to her.
Causing his breath to stop almost.

Maan hug his dad In return because he is neither able to lie nor able to tell him truth.
R- we are here maan.
With you at every step. You have no need to worry about anything.
I won't pressurize you because I know it should have some strong reason that you are hiding things from us.
But I want you to know and keep it in your heart & mind . We are here with you at every step.
In every phase of life.
You are my proud my maan! Like your name say.
Just keep this always in mind that me & your maa are always here with you..

Maan's eyes turn teary as his hold tighten on his father. Finding solace finally in arms of his parents and soon janki come there. Placing a kiss on his forehead.
J- we know you are worried but we are here.
Even if you want time to share things. We will wait. But promise us that till then you will not hurt yourself by any way.

M- promise maa I won't hurt myself now.
Thanks and I promise i'll share everything with you soon.
J- that's like my son. Now go & sleep you must be tired.
He left not before hugging them once again felling much calm than before like some weight lifted from his shoulder and the trust his parents show in him fulfilled him with a new strength.
..

Maan when entered in his room find everything messed up. With her looking at him with accused eyes. Soon she made way toward him angrily
G- how dare you?
She asked angrily turning him toward her gaining his attention.
He look at her with bored eyes . He know now he is going to accused for something again but what he did now?
When she handover him papers
M- clg admission form
So now what?
G- YOU ARE DOING THIS PURPOSELY!
DON'T YOU?
Just because i'm carrying twins you played this trick haina?
I know you very well.


He look at her before turning back .
M- think whatever you want.

Geet clapped
G- i knew it!

He look at her for a moment before leaving. He didn't get about what trick she is talking now. But he will be honest.
Ab toh inn harkaton pr usse gussa bhi nhi aata..

Moreover he promised his maa that he will no more hurt himself and he is going to fulfill his promise for sure.
So he turn toward the small room attached with his. When she blocked his way.
G- you need to admit that you tried to trick me.
This is just a lollipop so that I won't leave?

M- do you know one thing?
I want to laugh at you at this moment. You are so self-centered!
Do you know I don't want you to stay here now. It's just i'm bounded with my children whom you are carrying And after their birth I won't like it even a percent that you stay.

Saying so he left to sleep closing door on her face.
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