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Apologies for this post as I have some criticism regarding last few updates. They are too repeatitive and nothing new has come out of them. The past is being rehashed in each update. Your point is valid that you cant shown Maaneet romancing suddenly. But please try not to repeat the past. It has happened as Maan's remorse, Geet's monologue, doctor's reproach, armaan's confusion over Maaneet's marriage and so on and so forth.

That said, your story is interesting, and I am always looking forward to read it. Please Try updating your other stories as well.

excited for update to know how maaneet's relationship moving forward..!!

Originally posted by: p4peppa

Apologies for this post as I have some criticism regarding last few updates. They are too repeatitive and nothing new has come out of them. The past is being rehashed in each update. Your point is valid that you cant shown Maaneet romancing suddenly. But please try not to repeat the past. It has happened as Maan's remorse, Geet's monologue, doctor's reproach, armaan's confusion over Maaneet's marriage and so on and so forth.

That said, your story is interesting, and I am always looking forward to read it. Please Try updating your other stories as well.

Hie..Thank you for your post.

Well..to begin with, I do take criticism positively...but one thing about you surprised me. You have never ever commented till date for any of my stories. and this being your first comment because you found some negetives and even though you found my story interesting, you have never mentioned it as against any of the parts that I have updated.!! This I couldnt take it that positively. Anyways, let me give my Point of View...

I am NOT a professional writer or Author... Still, I am proud to be a writer and I have my own style and way of doing it. I write with the flow of my mind and soul. I am slow, I am highly emotional and I pour in my personal emotions when it comes to the lead characters of my story. This applies not only for ORP, but all my other stories that I have been writing so far...and that leads to dragging here and there.

As I have mentioned in the previous updates, its a story full of Geet's pain and Maan's remorse. I could expose their feelings in the best way by going back to their flashbacks and that's all part of my story....and by the way, in my last flashback, I have clearly mentioned a note that its the last one..and no more flashbacks coming up..and I have also given an indication about upcoming twists...but again it doesn't mean they will have an immediate patch up...that has long time ago..

Coming to my updates, I totally agree that I have been pretty slow... I have to give my first priority to my family and 2 kids. However, my new year resolution is to give regular updates...come what may, I intent to complete 4 of my FFs next year and I will make it happen.

As you have said, I am just giving an insight about myself and my writing as you might not know much about me. As you have begin with apologies...I am ending this post with an apology..

My sincere apologies if I have said anything wrong.

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hie..Thank you for your post.

Well..to begin with, I do take criticism positively...but one thing about you surprised me. You have never ever commented till date for any of my stories. and this being your first comment because you found some negetives and even though you found my story interesting, you have never mentioned it as against any of the parts that I have updated.!! This I couldnt take it that positively. Anyways, let me give my Point of View...

I am NOT a professional writer or Author... Still, I am proud to be a writer and I have my own style and way of doing it. I write with the flow of my mind and soul. I am slow, I am highly emotional and I pour in my personal emotions when it comes to the lead characters of my story. This applies not only for ORP, but all my other stories that I have been writing so far...and that leads to dragging here and there.

As I have mentioned in the previous updates, its a story full of Geet's pain and Maan's remorse. I could expose their feelings in the best way by going back to their flashbacks and that's all part of my story....and by the way, in my last flashback, I have clearly mentioned a note that its the last one..and no more flashbacks coming up..and I have also given an indication about upcoming twists...but again it doesn't mean they will have an immediate patch up...that has long time ago..

Coming to my updates, I totally agree that I have been pretty slow... I have to give my first priority to my family and 2 kids. However, my new year resolution is to give regular updates...come what may, I intent to complete 4 of my FFs next year and I will make it happen.

As you have said, I am just giving an insight about myself and my writing as you might not know much about me. As you have begin with apologies...I am ending this post with an apology..

My sincere apologies if I have said anything wrong.

Totally agree with you regarding my comment. I never commented on your stories before and took it for granted to criticise you as a reader. It was very insensitive of me. I rarely comment and am a silent reader. So to comment out of the blue and attack the writing style of a writer was not a nice way to introduce myself. I am really sorry for that.

Hi! How are you? Bahut time ke bad comment de rahi hoon....shaayad ORP pay pehli baar.....sorry for that...

I loved this concept! Aapne jis tarha se maan geet ki feelings portrayed ki hai ...just awesome!

Mujhe lagta hai ki past ke beena 'aaj' nahi hota toh agar aaj ke liye koi gilt hai toh usska karan atit hi hoga....toh maan aur geet ka atit ko baar baar yaad karna lazmi hai!

Maan ke boorhe bartaw ke bavajood bhi mujhe uss par gussa nahi aata....yeh aapki writing ka kamal hai....maan ko geet ka dil jitne ke liye help karne ka mann hota hai!!!

Geet was awesome! Bahut strong hai! Jis tarha se woh apne swabhiman ke liye lad rahi hai....main fida hoon!!!

Main apni personal life main thodi busy ho gayi thi toh 12 updates post ho gaye usske baad maine padhna shuru kiya tha....ek baad padhna shuru kiya toh apne aap ko rok hi nahin payi!!!

Thank you so much for this awesome story! Waiting for next update

Hi Laxmi.... trust that you are well!

waiting for update

please

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Laxmi.... trust that you are well!

Hie Chetna..How are you?

Allz well from my end dear...its just that I am busy with too many school holidays this month.... Here, in UAE December begining we had 5 days local public holidays and from 12th Dec, its winter + Christmas holidays till end of Dec. Schools will start from 5th January...So, busy busy with kids...😵

However I am preparing to give an update now..

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Hi! How are you? Bahut time ke bad comment de rahi hoon....shaayad ORP pay pehli baar.....sorry for that...

I loved this concept! Aapne jis tarha se maan geet ki feelings portrayed ki hai ...just awesome!

Mujhe lagta hai ki past ke beena 'aaj' nahi hota toh agar aaj ke liye koi gilt hai toh usska karan atit hi hoga....toh maan aur geet ka atit ko baar baar yaad karna lazmi hai!

Maan ke boorhe bartaw ke bavajood bhi mujhe uss par gussa nahi aata....yeh aapki writing ka kamal hai....maan ko geet ka dil jitne ke liye help karne ka mann hota hai!!!

Geet was awesome! Bahut strong hai! Jis tarha se woh apne swabhiman ke liye lad rahi hai....main fida hoon!!!

Main apni personal life main thodi busy ho gayi thi toh 12 updates post ho gaye usske baad maine padhna shuru kiya tha....ek baad padhna shuru kiya toh apne aap ko rok hi nahin payi!!!

Thank you so much for this awesome story! Waiting for next update

That's really sweet of you my dear... I know like me many other readers are having busy shedule. Its quite understandable...also, I havent sent PMs to my friends since the time this IF has transformed not for Good...but BAD

Thank you for understanding Maan and Geet so very well in this story. Its not a dark story but yes...a story about misunderstood, undervaluing and disturbed relationship... but things will sort out one by one. Do Like and comment on further updates whenever you have time.

Originally posted by: p4peppa

Totally agree with you regarding my comment. I never commented on your stories before and took it for granted to criticise you as a reader. It was very insensitive of me. I rarely comment and am a silent reader. So to comment out of the blue and attack the writing style of a writer was not a nice way to introduce myself. I am really sorry for that.

Hie dear

Thanks for your immediate reply...

Well please dont be sorry... That was not my focus at all...I wanted to bring to yours as well as other reader's notice that we writers know our readers very well. Who is commenting/ not commenting and who is in line with the story and who is misled...and so on.

Also, since we have not interacted much and I am sure you would have not got into my conversations with other readers. I just wanted to explain, my writing style. That's it.

Hope you like the upcoming part and do give in your continuous feedback.