||MG SS - Namesake||Part 4||Page 33|06-02-19

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preetidhawan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Thanks for the PM

Nice Start

Madhav and Devika ignored their baby son after the loss of their second baby , the influence of servants is more on baby instead of his parents, poor him

What,s the name of boy ,Is he Maan

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Amazing n wonderful start

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Poor boy. How can parents ignore their children ?

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: swapna.p
Congrats for new story..
Nice update..
Continue soon..

Thanks

Sure wait for it

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: drrose31
Welcome back to writing... Hope you are here to stay now... 😛

Thank you... Hope too...

Coming to Namesake...Why such title??? will readers be able to know that in future parts???

It's the perfect name I could think of...yes you will know as the story progresses

PART 1

why Madhav and Devika doesn't have their Son's name??? 😆

What's in the name...but if you don't find something suspense ..how can that be mine 😆

Poor them they lost their another baby and neglected what they had...

Yes you wouldn't know what you have when you are in pain

Edited by Jeevana - 6 years ago

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Part 1

lovely update! superbly written!

Sad that Madhav and Devika ignore their son as they are grieving the lost of the baby that they never knew!

feeling for that child that had to grow up with love and now shouldered with responsibilities!

update soon

Thank you ...

Brace yourself to feel for that child

Sure

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Welcome back jeevana dear loved it congrats on new story so devika and madhav has a son whose name I am guessing is maan devika and madhav were very happy with their small life and with addition to their son was estatic but after devika had a miscarriage both parents were too lost in their own sadness that they ignore their son like he didn't exist for them poor child couldn't even express his feeling as he grew up more responsibility was put on his shoulder the parents totally forgotten him to understand he needs to study and explore life not to take over his dad job

Thank you...

They became blind in his case

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Piaa_21
It's a very good concept...Lovely...I hope the boys is maan md the girls is.geet...Maan has a very unusual character here nd u hv a very different writing style... Continue

Thank you

Me too hoping with you...

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: love2_soma
howcome parents do like dis...dis is tooo much...
nice starting...

Well there isn't limit in fiction right...

Thanks

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Jeevana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: vrinda22
welcome back praff
Seems like chotu is being good
Mummy started to have time for herself
Oh my lovely baby..thanks to u for leaving ur mom with us

Thank you Vrinda

He is growing so I just get little less time

But trying to make it here