Knock, Knock! Who's there? Pt 21/22 pg 80, 82 23/04

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

wow a new story! thanks for posting Soph!

awesome update! well written!

Maan world turned apart when Geet drops a bombshell that she is pregnant! can understand his reaction!

so Maan donated his sperm and now Geet expecting!!!

continue soon!

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Keepdreaming

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

hooo new story
and I don't know ... sanju di too
she gonna kill you lol

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wow

A SS from Sophie

Are you slow too as writer like you are slow as reader? 🤣

Well i think it's a short story so can manage because it's irritating to wait for months to get one update

Will comment later

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Congratulate me for becoming your reader Sophie 😆

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Tej

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Hi. Very nice story. Continue it. Loved your writing.

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Cology55

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

wow interesting concept

when maan said he doesnt believe in one night stand i was wondering usne sapene me geet ko pregnant kiya kya...

but but maan is vicky donr 😆

but why did geet went to option really want to read further

plz continue soon...

Edited by DVD10 - 7 years ago

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Liked the update Sophie

Nice start

But sorry

I can't comment like you comment with personal tadka in that😛 so i think it's fine with you😆

Maan and Adi great fan of football.. and they excitedly were enjoying it on TV.. But a knock on the door disturbed them..

Oh wow

Miss. Geet handa is there to meet Maan

Why? Because she was pregnant with Maan's kid

Hehehehehe..Poor Maan he was so shocked to know and he gave the certificate of his clean character saying that he wasn't a one night stand man..And then he too got the fact to make it clear that he only was the biological father of the baby

Poor Maan

I liked it but now two questions i'm waiting for the answers

Hmm. Maan is sperm doner..and why he is doing so? For money? Ok

Then now about Geet

Why she needed a baby ? Is she married? if yes then fine ..I can understand but then too a question again po[[ed up in my mind

if she is married then why she came to Maan.. she should be with her husband and if she is not married then why she needed a baby thru this way?

Update soon and answe my aquestions in update please

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priyasree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Congrats on new story

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priyasree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Amazing n interesting start

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Twenty1st

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
hooo new story
and I don't know ... sanju di too
she gonna kill you lol

don't go scraing me like that Dream😡

on second thoughts i'm PMin u n Her

if she asks then there was a slight glitch, teek hai😉😆

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