Knock, Knock! Who's there? Pt 21/22 pg 80, 82 23/04

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

clear but very confusing

superb update

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Twenty1st

Sure, thats perfect😃 Sahiba, is that ok?

Yes Dear...absolutely fine...🤗

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Sahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Chapter 2

Ohk so she did produce the legal documents before him...cool...

am sure Maan would not have expected that...

Why would Maan donate his sperm and then now react like this??

hehe...Of course, Maan wants to sue the company for disclosing his identity...his normal life with football just went whirlwind...haha

But he is so sensitive and caring, by the way, he noticed her discomfort and asked her to remain seated...A warm person he is...

Heart skip a beat? Ohk so Maan liked her and can I say attracted too or is it too early? LOL

So Maan already has a girlfriend...oh no...

Ohk now I am really curious to know why Geet came looking for Maan...If she was conscious enough to take a decision to get pregnant by a sperm that was donated, then why does she want to know about her baby's father...hope she is not in some trouble or something...

Interesting part Soph...

Though I have some questions in my mind but am hoping they will be answered as the story unfolds...:)

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Interesting story
Something different from usual concept

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sgmiss2003

@sgmiss2003

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Interesting concept. Waiting to see how the story unfolds.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Thanks for the quick update Sophie!

Part 2

magnificent update! why did Maan donate his sperm? Maan's reaction is justified!! hmm his heart skipped a beat... seems like he is attracted to her!

Oh no Maan had a gf!!! wonder how she will react!

Maan shocked when she asks him to be the child's legal and biological father! why does Geet want this?

update soon

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Cology55

@Cology55

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

nice update

but u stopped at wrong time

eagerly waiting to read geet's past

want to know why geet opted for that option n why she wants to make him the legal father... is something going to happen her..

i loved the way u described the whole scene..it was amazingly written...

maan has a gf 😕 but koi nahi i think the baby will bring them closer 😳

thnx 4 fast update..

waiting 4 next plzz update soon

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Interesting Update

Geet wanted Maan fathered her child but knowing Maan has a girlfriend she was guilty and asked Maan to listen her side of story and Maan agreed. Maan himself was amazed realizing his behaviour towards Geet , eagerly waiting to know Geet,s past