Maaneet OS - Saviour Part 3 updated on Page 26/18-12-2018 - Page 6

Congratulations on the new story sweetie:):):) A wonderful start to the story...It correctly sets the background and environment of the story's plot...I really hate that cruel monster dearie...How can od create such a monster in the name of a human being??? Its a shame to mankind...And the poor mother and Geet have to suffer all their lives...Such cruelty and abuse...Will he do that to his son? He thinks that woman are such helpless and weak beings? It high time to show that son of a $#@!%&! that women are no less and revolt against him ya...I really want to bash him up and leave him on the streets...I really hate anyone abuse anyone...be it verbally, emotionally, physically or psychologically sweetie...I cannot tolerate anyone who hurts others in any manner...Ha so I should bash him up na...

Poor Geet and her mom...they have nobody ti turn to...Geet only has her diary to whom she can pour out her feelings...pain and suffering...Beautifully thought of and written my sweetie:):):)

Interesting start. Geet's father is so cruel and abusive. Feeling sad for Geet and her mother as they are being beaten unnecessarily. Both are suffering as they have no one to turn to for help. Hope her brother is a sane man. Waiting for next.

Congrats for new story
Loved first part, how cruel is that man who beats his wife n daughter for no reason
Is he drunkard or just a bad man ?

Very sad geet daf os really a stone hearted crule man hope he rot in hell he is really evill por geet n her mom hope some one saved them from this hell

Interesting story..

Originally posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

Congrats shona for new os

Originally posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

Originally posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

Originally posted by: full2puneri

beautifully written part which expresses Geet's pain and internal turmoil. Waiting for the next part. thanks for the pm