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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: cutical
Nice part ops geet is scared but maanjust want to control her how eill she fell in love wen he always tries to scare her in this way she just fear from him nt love
Wy maan nt tries to win her with his love whicj she always crave fr

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Let see why is like this

Also in this will he get her love 😊

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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97
OK regarding last update and this teaser it seems Geet puri k puri Maan ki kattputli ban by...
And sorry di for not commenting on last update my phone was on repair... part 12 superb splendid update Maan dus danav ya rajkumar... Confusion horaha hai

Yes he want her to be his kathputli

But why let see 😕

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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anuabi30
Ohhh maan wants a puppet who obey all his order and satisfy his need he wants to own her not caring abt her feelings
Very bad this maan will not change I think Sooo . .
Nice teaser
waiting for the update

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Let see will he ever change

Or will remain like this

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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: sanum23
Nice
Maan satisfied to know she's just obeying him like puppet

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Yes he is happy

But let see why he is

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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: aparna3011
poor geet scare to answer simple question

It is because of her family

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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg
Superb teaser

Thank you😊

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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: honeybunch1988
Nice teaser.
Geet should forget her fear
She is so nice and her family take
her disadvantage.
Hope she became Fairless and independent.

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Let see how will he make her strong

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mehrunnesa

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Posted: 6 years ago

#618

Geet still have no guts to speak
but maan can bring it back
I think they left villages

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jeyanthi123

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Posted: 6 years ago

#619

Nice teaser
Update soon
Waiting

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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#620

I Own You

Part. 13.

M. Geet you are blank paper and now I have start writing over there as I own you and I can do what ever with you also you will never stop me as my words will be your command and you will do what ever I saw without questioning me finally I own you so now your life is mine (he smirk while pulling her more closer to him.

Next morning Geet woke up saw Maan was reading his file then taking his permission she went to get fresh after getting ready come out wearing simple saree with long earrings and just wedding chain in her neck also she was wearing bangles as she love to wear them. Maan kept looking at her also felt proud that now she is his and her everything he own her. He move towards her then kiss on her lips where she give him equal response then he left her when she was out of breath after that he he dress her wounds, they both went went down where Adi saw them and said.

(Geet dress)

Ad. Good morning sir and mam (Maan nodded his head but Geet kept looking down then he again ask her) and mam how are you felling now (Geet was scare to answer him as she didn't know she had to speak or not and when she she didn't answer him, Maan look at her then understanding her gesture he said her.

M. Geet when someone ask from us then we had to answer that person and now when he is asking you something then why are not answering him (Geet look at him felling scared so he again said her) answer him (Geet look at Adi and slowly said him.

G. Jii I am fine and felling better (Maan was satisfied with her answer also he know he had to work hard to change her according to him, Adi give her small smile then he said them.

Ad. Sir breakfast is ready(then they had breakfast with Adi also after that Adi said him)sir everything is ready like you want and tomorrow we can go back to Delhi as our work is finish as today last checking is left(Maan nodded his head then turn toward Geet and ask her.

M. Geet do have your certificates with you (she look at him and nodded her head then he said her) go and bring that (after few minutes she come back after bringing her certificates then give it Maan who look at it and he left proud of her as she is 1st position holder then he give it to Adi and said him) Adi take these and I want you get Geet admission in one of the best college and except her parents name, her name should be related with my name also from next week I want a teacher for her who make her learn every basic things do you understand also take care of her age and may you kept her age as 18 as within week she will turn to 18 (Adi look at him and said.

Ad. Yes sir don't worry everything will be set like you want (saying this Adi went away. Geet was in shock state as when she saw him giving her certificates to Adi she thought he will ask him to tear them but to her surprise or to shock he ask him to get her admission in best college, she kept looking at him and when Adi left, she kept looking at him she ask him when she was unable to hold herself slowly call him.

G. Suniya (listening to her voice Maan look at her and seeing him she ask him) woh can I ask ask you something (Maan nodded his head seeing this she continue) woh you said I can study but can I (Maan kept looking at her then while pulling her closer he said her.

M. So you don't want to study (she immediately said him.

G. No I will if you want (listening to her Maan was happy and he said her.

M. Yes you will be studying but what you will study that I will decide ok (she nodded her head but in her heart she was more happy that she is going to do study also didn't care what he want her to study but her thoughts were broken with munshi jii who come and greet them.

Mu. Good morning sir and mam (Maan nodded his head then he said him) Maan sir someone had come to meet you (Maan look at him then on other side where he saw one little old men enter in house and seeing that person Geet whisper.

G. Lawyer uncle (Maan also heard he look at her and seeing his gaze on him she said him) jii he is lawyer uncle who come and give nana jii money to me (Maan blink his eyes it make her relax but she was still confused why he is here as he given this month money. Lawyer come and shake hand with Maan and greet with Geet who give him small smile also took his blessing who bless her happily but then ask her.

L. Geet beta jii are you fine (Geet nodded her head also lawyer know that Geet didn't speak much so he give her small smile then ask her) tell me is he your husband (Geet look at Maan and nodded her head then that lawyer ask her) is he good or does he beat you (but Geet immediately said him.

G. Nahii he is nice he care me and doesn't hurt me (Maan smirk at the lawyer but that lawyer smile at her and said.

L. Ok I understand beta that your husband is nice men ((Geet give him small smile then lower her eyes but that lawyer turn towards Maan and said him) sorry Mr. Khurana asking these questions from your wife and I hope you didn't mind (Maan smirk at him then he said him.

M. Not at all you can ask anything from her (Geet was lowering her eyes and Maan was happy listening to her also lawyer smile at her innocence.

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Edited by T.Peru - 6 years ago

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