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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting Teaser

So Geet is now at Maan's house
waiting for the full chapter
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Very interesting teaser. Geet is finally at her husband's home and maan is shocked to know about it. Eagerly waiting for geet and maan meeting. Update soon.
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Congrtaz
Awesome update
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Lovely teaser
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Amazing n wonderful start
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Interesting Teaser

So Geet is now at Maan's house
waiting for the full chapter



Thanks
Yes she with Maan 😊
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Very interesting teaser. Geet is finally at her husband's home and maan is shocked to know about it. Eagerly waiting for geet and maan meeting. Update soon.


Thanks
Let see why Maan is shock 😕
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Superb update
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Waiting for your update dear
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Naseeb
Part. 2.

It has been 3 months to Maan's mother death, his father and his dadi went to village where to meet his wife {Geet} family that he know but later he got shock when they come back that time his father got married with another girl who will be almost few years elder from him and that was not another than Shurti he was sad and hurt. Later he got the purpose that why his dadi took his father to village where she want him get marry again and he didn't said them anything also after that he got quite and start to stay from everyone and his focus was on just study his as he want be become number one like his mother dreamed for him.

Few years more passed nothing changed in Khurana mansion where Maan was busy in his achievement and in house he softy talk with his step sister who is Sneha as she is cute also he know its not Sneha or his step mother mistake but still Shurtii unknowingly took his mother place which he cant give to anyone also he didn't hate both of them. Sneha become part of his life as she was first one who make him laugh after his mother death and that time he promise himself that he will protect his small sister and never let her face what he had faced in his life.

Now he was 22 years old and he was in college where all girls droll over him but he didn't care as his focus was in studies, he had three friends, Armaan, Sujal and Yash but their majors were different as he is final year of Architecture. As Sujal Gupta was like him who talk less but he was best in his work as he is in final year hotel management and in future he want to help his father. Armaan Malik he is the number one flirt in the college but helpful person and he is doing Final year of MBBS. Yash Singhania was also like Armaan flirt and he more prank start and make anyone life hell with his prank but all are good heart also he is in final year of law. They all know every side of Maan also like him Sujal ignore the girls but Yash and Armaan love to be with girls and sometimes they both beaten from Maan and Sujal when they are continually talking about girls.

After enjoying the time in college with his friends, Maan went to office where he help in father and it was late evening when he come back he was surprised to see his father and mother in law sitting over there, forcing smile he went took their blessing and they all happily blessed him then his dadi said him.


D. Maan beta go and get fresh till then I will sent Geet bahu with your coffee (listening about Geet Maan look at his dadi with shock expression but Geet father Mohindar said.


Mo. Maa jii as you and maa have decided it happened as we had come drop our Geet mean your bahu to her own house so we should take a leave (dadi nodded her head and said.

D. Shurtii bahu go bring Geet bahu here (Shurtii nodded her head and went away bring Geet there who went and hug her parents, her both parents were felling helpless seeing daughter like this then Rano cupped Geet face and said her.

R. Geet beta take care of everyone and never say no them also do what ever damad jii say ok (Geet hug her mother also tears fall from her eyes also said her mother.

(Imagine Geet as 13 year old child)

G. Maa I want to be with you please maa (her parents fell helpless seeing their daughter like this also they curse themselves as they are unable to save their daughter but Rano clear her tears and said her.


R. Geet beta you know Maan jii is your husband I told you so you have to live with him like I live with your father so you had promised me and you are good daughter so now you have to be good daughter in law and also good wife so do what I said you (Geet nodded her head but Shurtii come held Geet from shoulder and said.


S. Don't worry Geet is not my bahu but she is my daughter and I promise you that I will take care of her (Rano and Mohindar again hug Geet and left with heavy heart, as they left dadi also went away, Maan also didn't fell good seeing Geet in this situation also he was unable to say anything. Shurtii who was holding Geet she hug her and Geet also hug her then she thought) why God why our girls fate {Nasseb} is like this I had accept my destiny when I married with double age men as he had son and just because no one wants to marry me because of my color. I know I will never able to become Maan's mother but I will be there when he need someone also I got shock when I came to know that Geet is Maan wife then late I know how they got married but this poor girl how will she had these responsibilities and Maan how will he handle this and why these two God why they are suffering in this small age where they should be happy.


Maan was angry on his family that they giving small 13 year old girl wedding responsibilities who didn't know what wedding is and fisted his fingers when he saw Geet was crying hugging her parents and they left now his step mother was consoling his child wife, he closed his eyes in pain and left from there looking last time at Geet. Maan was sitting in room he remember how Geet served him food like his step mother served his father also he can when she was serving him her hands were shivering and when accidentally little fell down on him she look at him with scared expression and he can see she was scared but when he give her small smile she become relax.

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