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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 8

Maan wants her to stop..to come to him..to be in his embrace..he want to love her..

Strange 'its really strange..her need is becoming strong..n he is behaving like a lovesick puppy..though he let her go, from that second he felt loneliness again'the room irritated him'how much he wanted to get rid of her'but the situations always make her come infront of him..he himself felt his behavior is strange'its not him..who runs behind a girl..or to ask a girl to be with him..geet has made him do all strange things'he punched the wall with full strength.n the palm had a small cut n bleeded... he did not care for the pain in his hand..

he was again fighting with mind n heart..

U must not let her go..

When she is not willing I cant force her..

If u have made her stay,u would have been normal..ur restlessness will be gone..

Shayad..but I cant'.i never force a girl..

geet moved out ..she still cant believe that she was saved..felt relief..she was even surprised a man like maan who asked her also let him go..she believed one thing in him..he may be not a gud person..but he dodnt force a girl like rahul'a certain pain was their still in her heart thinking maan did not trust her..she stopped before the lift n waited for it..she was totally exhausted..she leaned on the wall for support..she want to cry loud..but couldn't..her mothers thought frightened her..how she iis going to arrang the money..at that time her phone rang..

Vasanthi:geet where r u'

A sudden panick covered her..how her mother will be'

Geet:di..maa kesi hai..operation shuru hogaya kya..

Vasanthi:no geet..they have given us an hour time..if we didn't pay the initial fees they '

She stopped..

Geet:what di..

Vasanthi :they said they wont treat ur mama n asked us to take her with us'mama ka halath bi ithni achi nehi hai geet..do something..or..u'will..loose ..her..she said..

It's the least geet expected..she cant lose her mother..at anycost she will save her..

Geet wiped her tears..

Geet:mei mama ko kuch nehi hone doongi..i ll come there with money in an hour..

Ranjanis words started to flash in geets mind..to save the thing which u don't want to lose..u can do anything'n to to save the reason of my life..i ..i..slept with his brother'my body is sinned but not my heart..it still beats for rajesh only..

Geet st:mama..sirf aap hi ho mere liye'meri jeeneki ki aakri kaaran'agar aapko kuch hogaya..i will also finish myself..n that time this body will turn only to ashes na,,then y not for saving u I can turn a dead..yes maa..to save u I can do anything'

Geet entered maan room as a doll'

Geet:I am ready 'that's the word she said'

Maan was undoing his buttons to change'.he stopped hearing her voice..he tried to read her face'she has made herself rock..so others could not know whats in her mind'

Maan :are u sure..

He still don't want to believe it..there was a peace when she rejected him n went out..but now he was not sure of what he heared..

Geet:yes..but I need money.. her voice was dangerously cold..

Maan:take it..

He said thinking she will not touch it'still a part of his heart said she can not be wrong..his mind said she will take..n she proved his mind right..

Geet collected the money on bed which he threw..she was feeling low n tried not to feel weak before him'

Maan stood there watching her moves'he was hurt when she collected the money..he cant describe why it hurts him a lot'n it was making him angry..how can she accept was the only question running in his mind..

Geet:I will come back in an hour'

Maans trust on her broke fully ..though he never trusted anyone,he wants geet to prove him wrong n when he was proven right he started to broke her heart more..

Maan:what if u didn't come'how can I trust u''

Geet:I want to give this money..its a need of life n death'u have to trust me..i will keep my words..

she uttered helplessly

maan:I don't trust peoples words..trust n belief are words made to be broken'he said in trance living his past..remembering his fathers past..n present of geet..

geet:ok..if u don't trust me..come with me..

maan:do u think I will come with u to deliver ur money'

he asked in anger..what she thinks of herself..like im her servant..

geet:then tell me what should I do..nor u will come with me nor u will allow me go alone'trust me..pls'

after coming inside the room he saw her first expression..a plea..which he cant ignore..but his mind warned him she is also a girl who can misuse him..she is acting' when maan has listened 2 his heart..he went with his minds voice..

maan:ok..ive an option..i will tell my man to deliver the money where u say..just write the address where it should be given n give to him..

geet was left with no other option..she accepted..

maan called adi..geet wrote the address of hospital n her mothers name..

adi was now blank seeing geet in maans room..he knew about maan..he is not a womanizer..yes but he use girls when he is in anger..n geet..he cant think geet like other girls'she is gem of character..

adi looked at maan,who looked calm n composed than ever'from geets expressions he cant say anything...

geet trusted adi..he was one among the genuine human being she has seen..

maan:give it to him'

geet:adi sir..pls pay this money ..its urgent..ive written the address n name here..

adi simply looked at maneet..whats going in between them..why she is here..why geet is looking so worn out. he thought that there must be something else..not like he thinks he wants to question them but feared maan..n his anger..

maan:u may go adi..maan ordered..

adi"ji sir..

adi looked at the address..hospital..may be some urgency'

he rushed to hospital n paid the amount'

maan:till u confirm the money has reached ur place I will wait..i am a true business man...he said..

adi enquired about the patient n found from vasanthi ,the patient was geets mother'

here maneet were looking at each other waiting for assurance that money has reached..geets drugs took hold of her n at last she blacked out in couch in sitting position''maan thought she is sleeping'he sat opposite to her n watched her'she will be mine today'he looked at her beauty sitting opposite to her'more than beauty she looked so innocent.. just by looking her itself gave peace to him..but she is also same..the innocence which appears is not real..here she is with me with her submission'it angered him..

he was confused with his behavior..he must be happy when she accepted but he is not..this strange feeling killed him..why there is indifference in her behavior..first she denied then accepted..i cant understand her..one time she says she is not like he thinks..now she has accepted to stay 'only 4 money..yes..girls are only behind money'

her phone rang continuosly..she did not take it..there was not even a moment in her'he tapped her n found she is actually not in senses'he sprinkled water n after a long time she woke up..

maan : ur phone..

geet took it immediately..n saw many missed calls from vasanthi'

geet:di..

vasanthi:where are u geet..u sent a man..he deposited the money..operation shuru hogaya..

geet felt a relief hearing operation started..

geet: di .how much time will it take..

maan heared a bell n went outside ..it was the waiter who came n said the girl is ready'

maan looked inside n saw geet talking in phone..though he did not hear any..he said

no need of others..i got what I want'now u can go..he paid him tips'

geet was in phone'

vasanthi..nearly 5 hrs they said..n when will u come..

geet:I will be back soon..di..if u want to go home..u go'suhasini will be waiting for u..

vasanthi:ye bathao..when will u come..how did u arrange money'

geet: I ..sold myself..she slowly whispered..

vasanthi did not hear the last word..

vasanthi:geet..kuch sunai nehi deraha hai..zor se bolna..

geet:kuch nehi di'wo meri pass ek anmol cheese tha..wo bejnekelie feisla kardi.. n they paid amount before'

lump formed in her throats..

vasanthi:geet,I will stay here till ur return..tum kahaan ho..

geet:I am stuck with a work..kuch der hojayegi..wo jo cheese benja hai na..i must wait till the owner says me to go...but I will be there soon'geets heart bleeded'

vasanthi:ok..

geet kept the phone '

'atleast ,she needs to wash her face..there was something wrong from when she drank that drink..she thought..i only drank half..may be rahul has mixed something..thats y I am feeling dizzy'

Maan was still outside so,geet went inside insearch of washroom'n maan .came following her after dealing with waiter...geet heared his footsteps n turned n saw him..he mistook her as she came to bedroom'

maan was cold now..his expressions was also something unreadable..

maan:so miss moonshine..u r so desperate I think'shall we proceed'.

Geet rooted at her place hearing him straight.

Maan gave his shirt which he removed a while before..he showed the wash room..

Maan:go ..fresh up..wear this n come out..

Geet looked at the shirt..it was a white see through shirt..which may coverup only to her thighs n show her up fully..the think itself shivered her..

Maan:wear this means..only this..nothing than it'u smell rahul'I want u to smell me..got it'

geet was still looking at his shirt..

Maan:n haan..i do have conditions..u will not be here when I woke up in morning..i don't want any symptoms of urs here...

His every words pierced her heart'

Maan:why r u standing still..go..i m not having my whole time for u..

He roared n she jumped in her place..she took his shirt with shivering hands n moved to washroom..

Maan:do u know how to use the pipes..i can guess u people wont have seen things like this'

He came n filled her the tub n showed her how to use the shower attached to tub..it was more embarrassing for her..

She closed the door n saw the wash room..it was same like hers'tears formed her eyes..she opened the shower n stood under it..

Geet:kyun papa..kyun'why u left us alone..y I did not die when accepting his proposal..why papa..why'pls do something papa..i don't want to live anymore..if anything happens to mama..i will surely come to u..her tears mingled with flow of water'

Maan knocked the door..

Maan:its too late dear..come out..or I will join u..

Maan was not a man to tease or joke..but for the first time he teased her.n said dear also.but geet was feeling miserable..she removed her sari n made it to dry in the hanger..she wore the shirt which he gave..his manly scent was mixed in it'she can't look herself in mirror which showed her every part..she dared to step out..she took the towel n weared under her waist..it came till her knees..

she covered her front with her hairs..still she felt its not enuf to cover up her..

she crossed her hands over her chest n stepped out of washroom only to see maan in his shorts n vest sitting in bed with legs crossed n doing some work in his lappy'the tv was running behind in some music channel... he was not watching it..

he was looking like a greek god.if any other girl was in her place,they must have been drooling him...maan looked at her n was stunned seeing her beauty..he kept his lappy aside n showed his finger to come near him..she took slow steps..each step was heavy for her..blamming her..what she is doing is wrong'she cant go against her morals..it was only a step ahead'she felt a sudden pull'n the towel she wore was in maans hands..he threw it..

Maan:I said only my shirt'

He again pulled her n made her sit next to him'her one hand pulled her dress below her thighs to cover n the other covering her upper over her dress..she was dying every moment his gaze travelled on her body..she already felt like standing nude before him..she avoided looking at his eyes..it was something which she don't want to see at present..it made her feel week..with lots of questions,pain,care,a mixed emotions..which she was not sure ..what she must believe,his present act or his eyes'

Maan opened the side table n gave her a tablet'

Geet looked at him questioningly'but did not voice out..

Maan: nothing..its cyanide'which will take away ur life with in minutes'

Geet took it n swallowed..she so much wanted it to be true..a medicine which would take her life before she commit the sin..

Maan was surprised..she is the first girl who didn't ask him any question nor hesitated to take it..there was no annoyance in her face like others do'

He felt like he must explain..

Maan:its not cyanide..its precautionary tablet..that u don't get pregnant after our lovemaking..

(did he say lovemaking?..deep he has accepted his love..but when will he recognize it)

There was no expressions in her face,like she was least bothered about the information he said'her mind was occupied only with her mothers thought..

Operation is going on..how will she be now..when will she come back home..will she be normal..

Maan pressed her shoulders n making her lay back on bed..

he was looking at her face only..yes..his restlessness will end now..she is now near him..in his bed..he was going insane by the aroma he got from her..his body burned seeing her in his see through shirt..though she tried to cover herself..it was only a little..he was able to see her perfect structure,when she took the tablet from him..she forgot what she did'he was desperate to claim her his'

He took her hands n kissed her..the reality was hard when it comes infront..same was geets position..accepting n now facing the reality was too hard...geet came out of her thought when his hard lips pressed her soft skin..she woke up from her inner self'she instantly stood n moved to the window..it took maan for a second that she moved away from him.

He followed her n slided his broad palms on her waist inhaling her a roma..geet clutched her shirt collar..she again moved from him..the music channel played the next song..roop tera mastana..

her distance made him fury'he went n sat in bed..

Maan:u accepted with ur own will..its not too late..now too u can go'but before that payback my money'

Geet was not able to answer him..she has put herself in this mess

Maan:come back. Here..he ordered making her shiver..he too had no option ..he was in black.magic done by her '.after having her so close how can he let her go back..

Geet came n sat next to him..like the rope in puppetors hand

Maan smirked..

As u left me..its ur turn..u will initiate me..the whole ground swept under her feet..how can she touch him..when she was unable to bare his one touch..how can she..

No..i cant I cant do this..she thought..

Common..maan ordered..she looked at his eyes..the magnetic pull..

her hand trembled n touch his cheeks.his rough stubble scratched her soft palms...he kept his hands over hers n kissed it'she tried to remove her hands..this time his hold was firm n did not let her go..

he again pressed her shoulders n made her lay on back'he too made himself relax next to her..he squeezed her hand losing himself in her beautiful face'both looked at each other..

maan was looking at her fully in desire n hidden love..geet was looking at him with a hope..a last hope..shayad..he would stop..she turned her face other side feeling his intense gaze on her..

her thoughts again started revolving round her mother..there she is fighting with life n death..

here she is in someones bed..what will happen if mama comes to know about this'will she accept me with my sin..she will prefer death before she comes to death..

She was trying to hide her parts..she kept hr thighs close to each other..her hand all the while hided her modesty'Maan removed his barriers ..he placed his hands in between her thighs separating it..he took her left leg n encircled over his waist n hovered on her..

she gasped..fear ran over her spine'his hand on either side of her without touching her body he was fully over her..his breathe fanned on her face near her lips..she knew whats next..she want to stop him..she cant let him kisss..or go further..

Yes,I cant leave my sanity..i will accept all demands whatever he says..but this one I cant..i was not brought up this way'I will not be able to face mama after this..no..no..i must stop him'

Maan was looking at her facial expressions..it was changing different every second..he can read the hesitation behind her eyes.the eye ball moving behind her eyelids restlessly...she wants to stop..but can i..after nearing her so close..i don't think so..if she backs up'I cant force her..i will never do it'but I want her..at any cost..to get rid of her thoughts I need her'

She was about to say no'but she screamed maaa..he made his entry all of a sudden before she realize'he don't want this moment to go out of his hand..he wants an end to his restlessness n he claimed her ..

the pain was more for geet 'but she felt she lost everything..nothing more to lose..the treasure which she must give to her husband here she have given to some stranger..she has no dreams of husband..her thoughts of body n soul belongs to one person ..that must be her husband broke today..she lost her morals..her parents taught..she committed a big sin which a girl must not do...tears flowed from her eyes...maan bent n kissed it'

Maan:maa nehi moon'maan..maan naam hai mera..i like to here u call me maan n I wish to hear my name in ur moan..

He never gave the right to anyone to call him maan..he gave to geet..

Maan never felt tough entering before with other girls..he can feel her muscles tighten n the pain when she screamed..her pain gave him pain..n he kissed her tears ever so gently..strangely this was the first time he felt pain for others..

Maan:im sorry..i will be gentle..

He adjusted himself between her n moved slowly the next time..gentle was never been a word in his dictionary n he behaved gentle'she bite her lips suppressing her cry,which he mistook for pain'he gently took both her lips in his'her first kiss..for him too...he gently kissed her earlobes.

he never kissed a girl like he is with her..he had his habbit only to give pain to girls.he has teethed them..never kissed.them...their scream made him happy..here it was opposite'he was so passionate with her.which he never know he can also be this gentle..his hands moved under the shirt feeling her bare skin..she clutched the sheets tightly'her heart n mind was numb when he broke her virgin. she hated the fact her body was reacting to his touch..she had goose bumps in her body when he gave her small smooches on her face n when his hands made his way inside the shirt'

Geet:babaji,y I am still alive..y did not the earth open n take me inside when I lost my treasure..y babaji ab aur kya baki hai meri zindagi mei..i lost everything..pls give me death..she silently prayed..

Maan was undoing her shirt'n when her cleavages came visible he cant stop himself..he kissed her on the exposed skin he started to taste her hungrily ..he removed the rest of buttons..she stopped him'she felt ashamed n guilty n couldn't face even the light..how will she be able to face herself in mirror too'

Maan:what?

Geet:can u pls switch off the light'

Maan: I want to see u..ive paid u only 4 that'n u r feeling shy like its ur first time..

She felt needles piercing her..

Who can prove him its her first..after she had accepted he wont believe ..

Maan looked at her..he said like he read her face

Maan:don't say I am ur first..

Geet:sach ko koi badal nehi saktha'u r ..

Maan chuckled:u want me to believe'

He was still inside her n took his shirt off from her body..her hands immediately covered her curves..he pinned it on either side ..viewing the most beautiful sight before him..she closed her eyes..she was not able to face anything more' shame covered her fully..maan looked at her perfect curves n the erected nipple..he started to taste one by one..he kneaded it n teased it with his tongue..geets body was melting in his passion..she cant regret it'maan started to move again inside her..their was a strange peace in his heart ..which he never felt before..even the pleasure was endless to say'

Maan:moon,u know u r so perfect..u fit me like I own u..

Geet was numb under him'

Maan:moonshine..u r a drug..which my drug too cant give me..seeing u I have the effect..so only I call u moonshine..

Maan increased his pace..when he hit his climax he collapsed on her'he took her in his embrace n slept..

Geets phone rang..again n again when maan was busy with her..maan felt frustrated when it again rang disturbing his sleep..he switched off making geet shock..

Ur time is for me..no disturbance'he again took her in his arms n slept'

Geet was awake..her mind was running back to her mom..she want to go back..

She tried to remove his hands n move'

Maan pulled her again to bed..

Geet:shall I go..

Maan nuzzled his nose on her bare shoulder..his hands again pressed her softness..

Maan:ive not done yet..u will be with me till im satisfied..two lacs must be worth enuf..not for single time'

He said softly..but for geet'his words always meant she is a p*******

Maan came over her'he switched off the lights as she asked before..he bent to take her lips..her hair was disturbing him..he took the stress of hair pushing back her forehead .he did not realize nor she..his blood filled hand has filled her mang...he kissed her gently n started to go ahead with another lovemaking'

He chewed her lips..

Maan:u taste so honey dear..

She did not respond till now..

Maan :respond my kiss dammit'u are suppose to give me pleasure in all ways..he said harshly..

She responded..she followed his orders whatever he said..

Geet was like a doll in his hands..she gave herself n let him do whatever he wants'n did what he asked..whenever she tried to move,it awakened maan n end him up doing love making..he lost his counts that night..

Maan:moon..i never touched a girl more than a time..u r the first to make me repeat countless times..

Geet closed her ears..

Maan:u r gud in bed'too gud..noone has satisfied me..

Maan was blabbering all night..half in sense..half becoz of alcohol..

It was 3 when he was not holding her..she took the spread n covered herself..she switched on the side light..he was sleeping without clothes'she took his shorts n weared him'she removed the broken bangles n binned it..she saw blood near pillows that was holded by maan..she saw his hands bleed stopped still the wound was there..she had a little knowledge the hotels keep spare spreads n first aid kit there..she went to the wardrobe'n searched..

she took a new spread on covered him'n kept the old spread n his shirt in laundry bag.then took the first aid kit n dressed up his wounds..

she moved to the washroom .The pain between her legs were too much for her to walk.. 'maan was woke up when she dressed him..he kept quiet n want to know what she does.he enjoyed her dressing...he looked at her walking slowly opening his one eyes ..

was the night too much for her..did I gave pain to her.

.she has covered herself fully with spread..after a long night too,still she is shy..is it true..

maan dosed off thinking about her..n becoz of the everlong night'

geet entered the washroom n saw her in mirror..the love bites..though he did not teeth her his suck has turned blue in her white soft skin..her swollen lips..there was not even a place left he has touched her..she broke down into tears which she was holding for hours..she closed her mouth so her cry don't reach him'that's when she saw her forehead filled with blood..she touched it ..it was dry..

she don't know how to react'she opened the warm shower..the place where she can cry heart out'

maaa'what should I do now..he has filled my forehead..should I be happy or sad..kya mujei kush hona chahiye..the man whom I spent my night is my husband now..n now I have no guilt to spent night with him..or should I be sad 'a man who chose a girl for night..who thinks girls cheat..who thinks trust n belief or words to broke..will he believe me..he has made me his wife by filling my forehead..will he believe this ritual..he thinks me as a p*******..kya karoon maaa..kya karoon..

she cried n cried n cried till she felt she can face her mother..

she changed to her sari n moved out..her mother needs her more'she saw maan sleeping peacefully cuddled with a pillow..she smiled n cried 'both emotions filled her..

geet:I know u wont accept me..even if u have not filled my forehead I would never let anyone touch me or marry others'u r the one in my life n will be...when my body belongs to u my soul also belongs to u.. aap meri pati ho or na ho..but I belong to u only'she bent n kissed his forehead with pure love..n no guilt.he smiled in sleep whole heartedly..

as he said she checked once again that she did not leave any symbol of hers.. she left his room..without knowing the big storm waiting for her..

she may have cleared all her symbol of presence..but she left a biggest evidence which is going to be found by maan..

will both meet again'????????whats the future left for them??????????

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PART 9

Geet walked lifelessly..still fighting with her innerself..what happened last night..is it acceptable'maan will never come to know about what he did..if I say he is my husband ,will he trust me..no..he already told me..trust n belief are words made to broke'then y will he accept me..according to him I am a girl who spent night with him'he thinks low about me'n I have also proved it'I sold myself to my husband..what an irony'only I can say myself im a married women..noone will trust me..i have no proof'

Will my mama believe me'that im married'kitna sapna tha maaka aur papa ka'I spoiled everything'

No..i did not spoil'its all written in my fate'the princess of family,who never knows what a hard time means is struggling in her every path of life..oh..god..arent u not satisfied testing me'why u r testing me again n again..i lost my father..i lost our money n properties..i lost my mama..who is still living in past..i lost my everything today,only to save mama..pls god save her..give my mama back to me..i wont ask u anything else'

She reached hospital around 4..she did not think that she was walking for an hour'the hospital was dull with half lights..

Vasanthi came to geet..

Geet:kahan thi tum..

Geet tried to be normal..

Geet:wo di.. mama ..mama..kesi hai'

She asked in panic..

Vasanthi:operation is still going on..they are not giving hopes..

Vasanthi told softly'

It was enuf for geet to cry again..she sat in the floor hugging her knees..

Geet:nehi di..mamaka kuch nehi hoga...she will be back..atleast for me'she must come back..

Vasanthi hushed her..

Vasanthi:geet,control your self..its all in gods hands'he will listen to ur prayers..hope sab kuch teek ho..

Geet was crying bitterly'

Vasanthi s husband came'n asked her to go home.n come after freshing up..till then,.he will be there with geet'

Geet was looking blankly at the wall'the operation theatre door opened..

Geet ran to the dr..who came out..

Geet:dr..how is my mama..

They twisted their lips..

Dr:we have done our best'if ur mama gets conscious within 12 hrs..u r lucky'otherwise we r sry..

They moved away..

Vasanthis husband kept a supporting hand on her shoulder..

Geet:bhaiya'..

She cried..

Geet..think positively..after 12 hrs..ur mama will be fine..

Geet:sachi ..

Always hope for the best..i will get u coffee'

Geet:no bhaiya..i don't want anything..

She sat in a corner of bench hugging her knees..praying to god'pls save my mama..

It was 9 when ranjani came..instead of vasanthi'n requested vasanthis husband to go for work..she will be there with her'

Vasanthi sat next to geet'her mother was shifted to icu'geet followed her mother,who was connected to many machines n tubes'it shook her to hell'she feared what will happen if anything happens to her..her legs woggled n held the wall for support..

Ranjani made her sit outside icu..she looked at her pale form'

Ranj:Geet ,did u had something

Geet lied..yes'

So ranjani did not pressurize her..but the fact was geet did not have anything since last night..

Suddenly ranjanis eyes caught the red mark on her shoulder..n the way geet was chewing her inner lips said she must be having cut inside her lips'she looked geet with piercing gaze'n asked

Geet,how did u get money?

Ranjani prayed inside..what she is thinking must be wrong..

Geet smiled weekly..their was only blankness ..n she guessed ranjani has known something n she don't want to lie to her..

Geet:di, fate made me another ranjani..

It shook ranjani to hell'

She hugged geet n geet let her pain on her shoulders'making her dress wet becoz of her tears'

Ranjani:I always prayed to god..dont make another girl like me'but I didn't expect another one'

Geet:mujei tho sirf mama ko bachana tha'I tried to collect money..but..but'

Ranjani closed her eyes'this girl is tender like flower..y u snatched her fragrance..she cursed god..if he tests his devoties like this no one will remain to worship him'

The time passed n every second was a millinium for geet..she looked for answer ..with hope at every nurses n drs who came out'

Vasanthi:geet,its 12 now,,I will make a call to vasanthi di n ask how is rajesh..

Geet nodded yes'ranjani left to booth to make a call..

Here geet was sitting lonely..

A nurse came to her..

Nurse:beta,the lady who is inside..is she ur mom..

Geet :yes..how is my mama..

Nurse :beta'i cant say anything..is there any elders in home..mujei kuch zaroori bath karni hai'

Geet:no..only we both are there for each other..whatever it is say it to me..

The nurse looked pity at geet

Nurse:beta..im working here..i must not say this..but ive seen ur suffering..u r not rich too..

Geet looked at her..what she is trying to say..

Nurse: himmat rako'u must be strong'when u admitted ur mom,the operation must have done..just only for money..they delayed'n ur moms treatment delayed'ur mom lost too much off blood..n the injury was also bad..

Geet was shivering every minute'the way she is explaining scared her..

The nurse sighed..

Nurse:May god give u strength to hear this..

Geet voice shaked..k'k..ky.a..a..hu'a..ma.ma ko'.

Nurse:she slipped into coma when the operation finished'the drs were just trying to save themselves'

Geets earth slipped from her feet..she felt like thunder strike straight on her '

Her tongue got tied n even she tried to ask,,the voice did not come out'

Nurse:im sry beta'this is private hospital..not a trust..here money speaks'they will keep ur mother in icu n take care till the amount u paid equalizes..then'.

Geet looked nurse in shock..

Nurse:then if u pay money again she will be treated again'but..we cant assure when a coma patient will come out of her sleep..may be a year..two years..many years'or she may die in coma itself'can u pay for her life time'if the treatment is stopped..ur mothers breathe will also stop'ur moms life is in hands of money'

Geet was still in shock'she looked nurse with hope..is there any other way to save her mother..

Nurse understood her silent language..

Nurse"no way beta..if u want ur mom alive she must be under ventilation..nurse should be with her 24 x7'if u can get donators for treatment..then u can see ur mom safe'u must arrange for more money'

The nurse went away leaving a baffled geet'she moved towards the icu'.she saw her mother breathing heavy..the machines n tubes which are helping her to live'once it is removed'

Geet cant even think'she backed n hit the wall'

An unknown fear gulfed her..n she started to walk out in a numb state'.she walked in the way her legs carried her..not thinking of surrounding nor people..she was walking walking walking walking'n stopped in a lonely road'she sat on floor n cried loud'wjere no one can here her scream..at one stage tears also dried..n refused to come out'

She saw around n found herself alone..she was not afraid more..she saw the way leading towards a hill..she now knew what she must do'she started to walk towards it..her bare foot pained n bleeded while walking on the stones'she was so numb to realize her pain'she was half way when the darkness engulfed her n she fainted..there was no one around to help her'geet was lying there for how much time..she don't know'the sun started to set down'here vasanthi n ranjani the known people were searching her every where..but couldn't find her'.

In maan s room'

Adi came around 9 as usual to have a look on maan..the room was open..he looked at maan who was sleeping peacefully..the room was neat n tidy..even his wine bottle was binned.it surprised him..adi don't want to disturb maan..so he went again to his room'n packed his things'

Around 12 noon maan woke up..this was the peaceful sleep he had ever had'there was peace in his heart..his eyes was still closed n his hands moved on his left side on bed searching for geets warmth..he needs his morning to be pleasant waking seeing her'when he found it empty he opened his eyes'he sat in bed..there was restlessness inside him missing her'

Where is she?

after the long night too he felt some restlessness..he need her'it was not his physical need..his heart needs her..atleast infront of him..infront of his eyes..

Maan called her loud..

Maan:moon..moon'where r u..

He looked around..there was no sign of her..a fear of loosing her made him mad..he immediately rushed to washroom expecting her to be there'she was not there'he searched all around his room n balcony'there was no sign of her..

Did she went away..

May be..

I said her not to be here when I wake up..so she may have gone'

suddenly his mind started to warn him'she left u..might be with ur money'not as u said'

He looked for the suitcase..he remembered he did not keep again inside wardrobe.the table was empty..his heart said she did not cheat him..but his mind said she is also a girl who was in need of money'he started to break all things..dont want to accept what his mind is saying'after sometime'he calmed down ..but he was still a volcano..ready to spill lava any second..

He went to washroom n stood under shower..

I thought she is different..but she is not..she got money..i got her.she left me afterall her work is done...but why I am not happy..the restlessness must have been vanished'but why I am not..why I am still thinking about her..why cant I forget her..why she is not getting out of my mind..he punched the wall..his hand pained'n the wound bleeded again..

He looked at the dressing..a smile came to his face..

She cared for me'.then why she left me'.atleast before leaving me..

Why I am expecting her to say'before she had left..when im the one who said her to go before I woke up'y it hurts me,that she is not near me..i don't care about the money..if she took or not,,but I want her ..kyun mujei chain nehi milraha hai..kyun'

He came out of washroom wearing a towel on his waist..he dropped his shorts in laundry bag'he was still thinking about geet..

Where she will be now'in office..no..she wont go ..that too when she have escaped from rahul..she may be with another man for money'

The thought geet being with another man killed him..he opened his wardrobe to take his dress'he saw his suitcase there..he opened n saw the money left untouched'

so,she did not cheat me'

my heart was right..she did not cheat me for money..she did not betray me'

he heared a knock on door..he felt happy'it must be my moon..

he rushed n opened the door ..his excitement vanished seeing Adi..

adi:gu..gu..gud.. morning sir'

maan:hmm..

adi:sir ,shall I order u breakfast or lunch..do u have hangup..i'll order lemonade..

maan:no..order me a black coffee..

adi called room service n ordered ..

maan thought..first time im not having hang up..may be becoz of long sleep..

adi:sir,I called shyam garments to confirm ur lunch appointment..with rahul sir..

maan gritted his teeth hearing his name..

adi continued without knowing what is running in maans mind..maan was dressing up'

adi:his staffs said,he met with some accident n so he has gone back to his place..so,ur lunch with him has been cancelled'

maan smirked..i must have punched him more'

maan:adi,this deal will continue only if mo..he stopped saying moonshine..

maan:if only geet is there..she will be the one representing sg..

adi saw him suspiciously then nodded ok.

Adi:sir our flight is preponed at 5..as its burfing heavily...

maan:ok..pack my things..

adi took his suitcase n packed his things..

maan:you may go now..n don't disturb me till we leave for airport..

adi:ok sir..he left..

maan sat on the bed thinking about geet..his heart was saying something bad is going to happen..he called nakul n confirmed dadi is ok'

he closed his eyes..there was a fear inside him..but cant figure out whats it..n y?

after some time there was again a knock on door..maans heart paced fast..he expected geet again..

maan:come in..

the waiter came inside with his coffee..

maan took it with a big disappointment..

waiter:sir,room cleaning..karoon..

maan :hmmm

the waiter started to clean the room..n then went to washroom..

waiter:sir,laundry mein aapki kapde hain..lejaun..

maan :hmm..but bring before I leave to delhi...

waiter yes sir..

maan was thinking how to reach geet'he decided atlast to call shyaam garments..n he got the news she did not come to office as her mother is not well

maan sighed..so she is with her mother..

'he asked her phone number n they gave..he slowly punched her number'it came switched off..as he is the one who did it'

The waiter came out of washroom cleaning it'he smiled sheepishly at maan..

Waiter:saabji..i was thinking y u rejected the girl I brought..ab samaj mei aaya..

Maan looked at him ..what he is saying..

Waiter:saabji,wo kudi kaun hai..kahaan rehthi hai..

Maan was getting hyper hearing about geet..

Waiter:maal tho kamaal ka hoga na saabji..hmm ab kahaan miltha hai kudi, kisine chua na ho'

Maan:kya bakra hi ho..

Waiter:saabji..u must be having a gud night na..when its girls first time..mazaa aaya hogana..

Maan was getting clear about what he was saying..still he want to confirm..

Maan:how can u say..its her first..

The waiter took the spread n his shirt which had blood stains'it shocked maan..she was virgin..the waiter moved to wash ..he was saying something which did not reach maans ears..he was dump..

Now he regretted his act..he remembered his encounters with her..all the time he accused her n she looked him angrily saying he is wrong'

Then he thought what happened in rahuls room..she was saying the truth'he was forcing her..

He remembered her words when he asked to spend night with him..

Whats the difference between u both..

Her plea to give the money..

Geet saying I want to give this money..its a need of life n death'u have to trust me..i will keep my words..

She was in need of money..n I used her situation..

Now I can feel why she was shy n hesitating to wear my see through shirt'

Why she was numb under me..

why it was tough when I entered her..its her first..

meine kya kiya..i hurt her with my words..

when she said its her first..i am the first to touch her..why she tried to cover her modesty every time'why she told me to switch of the lights..i pointed her as a call girl'

maan walked out of his room aimlessly..he took the car keys from the driver n started to drive rash'

THE PLEASURE HE FELT WAS NOW TORTURING HIM..IT WAS NO MORE A PLEASURE FUL NIGHT..HE REPENTED HIS MISTAKE..FOR MAKING AN INNOCENT GIRL LOSE HER SANITY..

he stopped on a cliff n shouted ahhh'..i cant forgive myself'she is pure innocent'all the while trying to save herself..i pushed her to the edge that she cant be back now'I ve stolen her precious thing..its not her tears of pain..its her helplessness..

maan again took the car n drove to a lonely place..it was a jungle..he sat there drinking n blaming himself n regretting the night'

the burf started n he was still sitting in cold..nothing affected him ..his heart was accusing him for snatching a girls life'where will be she now'will she be ok'his restlessness knew no boundaries..

maan fished for his phone n took it out n called adi..

adi:sir where r u..im waiting for u in airport'

maan did not answer him..

maan:adi,where did u give the money..i mean whats the address geet gave to deliver the money..

adi:hospital..

maan:hospital..but y?

adi:sir ,I enquired about it..her mother met with an accident n was in need of operation..the money is for that..

maan:call the hospital n connect me to geet..fast'

adi thought something is serious..otherwise maan will not sound so tensed..he searched for the number of hospital in directory..n called hospital'the news he heared shocked him also..he called maan..

maan:what adi..

adi:sir,geet is missing..

maan felt his earth slipped away..

maan:how can she leave her mother'collect correct information..

adi:sir,after operation her mother has slipped into coma..after hearing the news that she has less chances to save her mother,no one has seen her..its been 5hrs,she is not near her mother..her neighbours are searching for her'they said geet was behaving weird from last night..she never let her mother alone even if she had fever..

maans phone slipped from his hand..

maan:sab meri wajase..moon..where are u..i am sorry for what I did..pls come back..pls don't push me in dark..i found solace only with u..if anything happens to u..i cant think what I will do..pls come back to ur maan'atleast for ur mother u must be safe'

the burf melted into water n it made geet wake up..it was dark n only moon was the only source of light..she sat there..the darkness did not fear her than the life..

geet:God has punished me for what I did'mama doesn't want to see my sinned face..so she slipped to coma..

geet started to feel low of herself..

sry mama,,I stooped low to save u..but u punished me..to keep ur morals u r dying there..to save u..i need money.. I cant stoop low again..i cant sell myself to any other..if I do I will be proved like what maan said..no mama..that nurse said there is no assurance when u will get back from coma..how many years it may take.if I didn't pay u will be no more...can I save u mama..its better that I end myself before u die'im sry papa..i couldn't take care of mama'I lost my morals u taught..now its time for prayachit..

she started walking up the hills determined of her destination..

she stood at the corner n said..

im coming to u papa..pls mujei maaf keejeye..mama will also be soon with us..

she jumped from their'

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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 10

maan was still blaming himself'

maan:im sry moon..where r u..where will I search u..what will I do without u..how can I live without u..

maan was blabbering'when u lose it,u will know how much possession u hold for it..

maan in a trance without knowing himself was saying..he cant live without her..she has become a part of life'

love makes u do strange things which u have never done before..his claim on her is also a sort of possessiveness,..he want to prove her ..she belongs to him..in his madness he made her go against her culture..n now he is repenting for his deed..the burf was heavy..maan was sitting there still looking at the half moon..

the officer of the jungle who was leaving to home find him..n instantly recognized him also.

Officer:sir..aap..its burfing too much..come with me..

.he took maan with him to his office..maan was following him without questioning him..

He lightened the fire to warm the room..

Officer:sir..what r u doing here..

Maan gave him a weak smile'

Maan:came to search my life..but,don't know where she is?

He said absent mindedly..

Officer:u come with me..we will go back to city n give a complaint..do u have any photo..

Maan nodded no..i told her to go..she went..

Off:come sir..we will search in shimla..this place is not safe..

Maan:pls can I stay here for night..u leave me here n go..i want to be alone'

Officer:ok'

After he went.Maan came out 'the jungle was looking scary..fully covered with snow'the only light was moon'maan saw an axe near by..which they use to cut logs of wood..he wants to take his anger out..he took it n started to cut the trees on his way screaming

Maan:why I did it..sry moon..sry..pls come back..come back to ur maan..i will not let pain near u..i was wrong..every thing has its price..but u r priceless..i did not realize it'sry for what I did..pls is moron ko maaf kardo..give me a chance to seek forgiveness..

Suddenly he thought,what if she has returned till now..to her mother..

Maan fished his pocket n called adi..but adi was in plane n kept his phone switched off..maan felt frustrated 'his heart was still restless...he was moving in unknown direction,where his legs where taking him' his eyes caught something flying in air..it was stuck in middle of a tree'

Maan whispered in shock: moon..moonshine..its..its her sari..

How can he forget it..he rushed to the place..it was hard for him to reach walking between the trees in snow..he climbed the trees to reach the spot'he to0k the cloth,which was hanging in pieces...the aroma of the sari confirmed its hers..

Maan shouted:moon..moon'moon..kahan ho tum..he started to search her like a maniac in the dark jungle'the man who never knows what fear is was feared for her..scared thinking that his moons life is in danger..he stamped on something n stumbled'he adjusted to the dark n saw what it was'his earth slipped away from his feet..

Mooon..

He removed the snow over her..she was freezed..her body had no moments'he scooped her n came to the place where he can get some light of moon'his hands were sticky'when he saw it his blood froze'as it was her blood..he looked around..whom can he seek help in jungle..

Moon..utto na..uttona jaan..pls im sry..im sry to snatch ur sanity..pls sry dear..give me a chance to explain..

there she was lying in his lap lifeless..he hugged her n said

Maan:kuch nehi hoga..kuch nehi hoga tumei..i will not let anything happen to u'

He was saying it repeatedly not to her..for himself..

He lifted her lifeless body n ran to the officers room'he placed her before the fire'n looked at her'she was in her inskirt n blouse..the clothes were torn in some places..which gave him the view of his love bites turned blue..he closed his eyes repenting for the previous night..

her body frozed in snow..blood oozing out from several places..his heart pricked to see her like that'

he rubbed her feet n hand trying to heat her body..he searched the room n found a first aid kit..he cleaned her wounds n applied medicines n bandaged it'there was no movement in her'n her body was still cold..he covered her with several blankets n screen clothes whatever came to his hand..still she was lying their senseless..he took his phone n called the ambulance. N dr..dr.said due to snow fall they cant reach to the place where he says..it will take time..

maan shouted at them,scaring he will kill them if anything happens to her'

he was mad..mad at himself..mad on drs..mad on the worse situation they were stuck..

dr:pls..mr'khurana'u have one option..

maan:what?

He roared in anger..

Dr:give her ur body heat..the patient may get out of cold..

Maan was numb hearing it..

One time he did it..n he is facing the worse..not again..but he must save her..he removed the blankets'his hands trembled to touch her..the same hands which feasted her body last night now shivered to touch her..he removed her torn dresses ..he closed his eyes ..he don't want to witness the beauty which he went insane..now her lifeless body knocked him sense..the beauty is only the skin..which will die in time..he undid his dress n hugged her from back covering them both with the blankets..he rubbed her body creating heat..his eyes were looking somewhere n his thoughts were only revolving around her..how to get her back 'he can sense her body gaining heat.. she started to shiver n her lips trembled in cold'maan could not see her like that'he said to himself..

u must do it maan..to save her..do it..

he placed his lips on hers..only to give his hot breathe to her..there was no lust..no passion..only fear of loosing her..loosing his moon'loosinghis life..

her lips were calm n her body started to respond..her breathe was normal..

maan entangled his fingers with hers..

he was thinking how she came there..only one thought came to his mind..rahul..rahul must have harmed her..i will not leave u rahul'for harming my moon..

geet was moaning in pain..n was mumbling something..he could barely understand what she was saying..

geet:im sry mama..im leaving u alone..i know I am wrong .but,i cant see u dying..so im leaving this life before u..sry mama..sry for whatever I did..sry for not being with u..papa..pls sry..forgive me..forgive ur gudia..she lost everything..she has no right to live..a girl must not live after whatever sin she did..dont give ur back when I come there..pls papa..mama ko bi bulao na..mujei bohut neend aarahi hai papa..i ve not slept after u left us..give me peace to sleep papa..apki gudia ko maaf karo na..

maan was keenly observing her'her voice was meek that he cant hear her..but the face said her pain..she is in pain'it is becoz of him..he stayed there for hrs holding her in her embrace..the nude body now had no effect ..no attraction..no physical need..

only one thing he want..he want to see her safe..

slowly he too dosed off'geet gained her conscious'it took minutes for her to realize she is alive..the warmth around her bare waist made her turn n look the person who was holding her..

maaan'

before she thinks more her mothers thought came..its dark outside..means its night..mama..what happened to mama..what if she was thrown out of hospital..what if'.noo..noo..noo..i must not live..i must not live..muje koi haq nehi jeeneka..

she stood up..she stumbled..she has not eaten from last night..n the loss of blood made her weak n feel dizzy..but,she has decided n will not back out..she walked towards the door without any sensation..that she has no clothes over her..

maan wokeup missing the warmth n when he opened his eyes he saw her walking senselessly..

the girl who covered herself to walk to washroom was now walking out without clothes..

maan rushed to her n covered with blanket..

maan:where are u going..u r not well..

she turned to him n saw him without clothes..he immediately weared his boxers n pant..

maan:I m asking u moon..go n take rest'dr.will come soon to check u..do u know in what position I found u?

geet was starring at him..he was saying in real concern..

geet:why did u save me'

maan was shocked..

maan:what u mean..u..u..

he cant even think..

geet:y u saved me..s

maan:m..o..o..n

geet pushed him back

geet"say me why did u save me..u want my body right..take it..

she threw the blanket which he covered her..

geet:how many times u want take it..but let me die..die after ur need is fulfilled..let me die after u r satisfied with me'

she was not in sense..she doesn't know what she is speaking..will it hurt him or not..she did not care..

she was angry on him.not for being with her so close again..she didn't care if he took her vulnerable position to satisfy his physical need'or not..

she is angry on him .for saving her life..to bring back her to live..to breathe in this earth again...

maan took steps back hearing the horrible truth..she attempt suicide'just becoz of him..yes..he is the reason behind it..if someone must be punished it should be me..then why her..

she was walking again out ..she was dizzy again n she held her head..it has bandages..it pained..but not more than her heart..she took next step n her head spinned..her eyes went black n she fainted'maan held her before she fell on ground'he took his vest n shirt n weared her..he looked at his shirt..the previous night haunted him..he gave her his shirt only to see her..but today he is wearing his shirt on her to dress her'he tied up a screen as a skirt below her waist..he remembered how he pulled her towel..

there was a vast difference between 2 nights..both were not same now..he was sleeping in peace the previous day..but today he has lost his peace..he was holding her in pleasure last night..today he was holding her to feel her alive..

there was a knock on the door..maan opened it n saw dr. n ambulance..

dr:how it happened..

maan:she slipped from hill..

maan lied..so that dr.may not doubt her..

dr.examined geet n opened the bandages maan did..he put stitches in needed places n bandaged it again'

maan:is she ok dr..

dr:she seems very depressed n blood loss has made her weak..im giving saline now for energy..admit her in hospital for a day..she must take enuf food n take ample rest to gain her strength..take care of her..

he prescribed medicines n gave to him..

maan:can she travel'

dr:why r u asking..

maan:oh..i must be in delhi tomorrow..i can admit her there..or I can make drs look after her in house..

dr:hmm..ok..she may travel'but after 4 hrs..she needs some rest n come out of shock..after she woke up u can take ambulance..it will be better if she is in saline..

maan:sure dr..

there was an attender to help maan..after changing 2nd saline he too went to sleep..

geet woke up n tried to go again..she tried to pull the saline..

maan caught her hands stopping her..

maan:kya karrahi ho..

geet:I want to die..n u r saving me..

she tried to shove his hands..

geet:leave me..i want to die..leave me..

maan pinned her under him..

maan was already repenting n her words were killing him more..

maan started to shout at her'the only way he knew how to shut a selfrespecting girl..the girl which he saw a week before..

maan:this is not ur life ..that u can die..its mine..i saved u..n when I want I will let u die..u know..maan singh khurana never does favour in free..u will be with me till I want..if u think..i need ur body..then I agree ..ya..u will be with me to satisfy me..till u repay the price of ur life..samji tum'

geet was shocked..to hear whatever maan said..does her life is also not hers..tears ran down her cheeks..

the sun rised giving a new light to all living beings..

maan called her..geet was again to her numb state..thinking her mom will not be no more alive..

maan lifted her n placed her in ambulance..the saline was running through her veins..her eyes fixed in air'

maan st:im sry moon..i must be harsh..to keep u alive..if this is the way I can keep u safe..i will do it..

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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
you reposted this story too
thanx
excited to read again
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
PART 11
what happened to geets mom..is she dead..or alive..i'll not answer for few parts..sry..pls..till that enjoy maneet scenes..

Maan don't want her to leave her alone in shimla...what if she committed suicide again...is the proof which he saw was not enough to slip the ground from him..will he be able to live in peace leaving her alone here..so he decided to keep her with him.she accepts are not he doesn't care..he is maan..maan singh khurana ,who never asks their permission..his decision is final..now too he is taking decision for her..not for her ..for himself..is the pain of past not enuf for him..the pain which he has created to himself is haunting him...the night which he used her for pleasure haunted him whenever he closed his eyes.only the lifeless body which he found in snow came to his thoughts...he jerked n opened his eyes.they were near his palace...maan has already called drs to palace...

The nurse removed the saline from her hand..she was sleeping becoz of the medications given to her..maan scooped her in arms n entered his palace...nakul was coming there with a garland to change in maans parents photo..he tripped on the furniture n the garland flew high n fell on maneet who entered the palace..nakul was shocked seeing maan with a girl in his hands...never maan had brought any girls to mansion nor palace..he hated the mere presence of girls..he was looking maan who was only in his pants..the girl was wearing his shirt..he looked at the beautiful girl who was looking pale n unconscious in his arms..the experience of his age made him think,that the girl must be in pain..she has went through so much...in that unconscious stage too,her face expressed her inner turmoil...he looked the garland..

Nakul:is this girl going to be his part of life..y I feel so..she will make him a man again..is it becoz his parents garland fell on them..is this the indication of his turn of life..r they blessing them..

Maan:remove it..

Nakul took the garland from them..

Maan moved to his room saying to nakul

Maan:drs will come now..send them to my room..

Nakul:ji baba..

Maan placed her on his bed..he settled her hair at the back of her ears..he took the spread n covered her neatly..he took a shirt from his cupboard n weared it..he sat beside her n gently caressed her hair..he took her hands in his n gently kissed it...

Maan:moon,don't do this again..i cant tolerate ..

He heared the knock on door...maan composed himself n said

Maan:come in..

Nakul:wo..drs has arrived..

Maan:hmm..send them here..bring coffee for me..

Nakul:ji baba..

Nakul looked once again at maan n geet n sent the drs in..nakul was preparing coffee..thinking about maan..his face was mirror today..any one can say,he was much worried for that girl..but the question is who is this girl..how maan baba knows her...why he cares for this girl..why he brought the girl home..when there is guest room,why he took her to his room..what relation he shares with her...must he say this news to dadi or not..atlast he decided till the girl wakes up ,or maan says anything he will not say to dadi..he placed the cups of coffee for maan n dr.in tray n went to his room..

Here dr.was checking geet n enquiring about the treatment given..dr.checked geets head bandage..

Dr:mr.khurana..as her head is injured we must take a ct scan to confirm..she has no blood clot inside her head r any serious hurt..

Maan:ji..

Dr:its better she is admitted in hospital..

Maan:I will take her to hospital for whatever tests she must undergo..but she will not stay in hospital..she will be treated here only..

Maan said in a stern tone..

Dr:if there is no severe injuries,she can be treated here itself..i will prescribe medicines after that..till that we can give her pain killer n keep her in saline..

Maan:ok dr..i'll be in hospital in an hr..

Nakul came n gave coffee 4 both..which they sipped in silent..

When they were busy with each other,geet got her conscious..she looked around..she was lying on a lavishing bedroom...there was photos of maan,which said she was in his room..

No..i ve no right to live..she turned her head right n left..she had a wide smile, which had no life..maan who turned to have a glance on her was happy to see her conscious..but,failed to realize why she was smiling..a deadly smile..

Maan:dr,I think she gained conscious..

They both turned to see geet...

Maan screamed in horror...nooo..

Geet saw a fruit basket with knife..she put her full effort to grab it..next moment she cut her nerves n blood oozed out of it..maan n dr.reacted fast..maan held her hand n dr..treated it..geet was wriggling under his grip .he was too strong for her...again the loss of blood n weakness made her unconscious..

Maan was holding her tight in hug,dr.was bandaging her...she was pushing him to an extent,that he cant come out of his guilt..her one attempt of suicide has took away his peace..now next...

can I seek forgiveness for my act.. kash..if I could erase that day in both of our life..i prefer to be in that restlessness than repenting my deed..kaash,I could return her virginity..that I stole from her..but,now I cant undo it..the girls all whom I slept was never a vergin...but..u..how can I do this to u..y I dint belive ur words..when u said u r in need of money..its a need for life n death..kaash ..i would have trusted u..mujei maaf kardo moon..meine tume kalang kardiya..

his heart cried..

dr:mr.khurana..mr.khurana..

maan came out of his reverie.

Maan:ji.dr..

He saw her hand bandaged..he placed her on bed..

Dr:hmm..her attempt to suicide..wo..should we inform police..

Maan:no..i don't want her to get into trouble..

its all bcoz of me..

he said in trance..dr.heared it..he cant make a man like maaan in trouble..or make him his enemy..

dr:I will wait in hospital..

dr.went..nakul was watching all silently..the girls suicide attempt has made him still..now he was in shock n don't know how to react...

After dr.went maan freshed up n came to geet..she was still in messy form..he closed the door n came to her ..he removed her clothes n wiped her with towel..he cant look at her body..nor feel the pleasure of beauty..

she was lying like a dead body under him...he took his tracks n shirt n changed her..thanks all to his madness..his craziness on her beauty..

He scooped her n moved to his car..he drove to hospital leaving a baffled nakul..if maan baba changed her dress,what it means..there is some relation between them..but he never trusted girls..then how can he..is he in love with this girl...his care towards her..is it love...kya sach mei maan baba pyar karne lagi hain..if so..thank u so much god ..for sending this beautiful angel ,who has brought some emotions in his life..par..kyun wo khud khushi karna chahthi hai??

Maan made all tests n scans of geet...geet was trying to open her eyes..she can hear some sounds around her n the smell confirmed it as hospital..her facial expressions showed her pain..she slowly opened her eyes..it was difficult for her..as she was sleeping for hrs..she thought,is it day or night..why she is in hospital...hospital..the word remembered her mother..she shrieked in horror n sat up..trying to get down from bed..she again felt dizzy..she held her head..maan instantly grabbed her n placed on bed..she murmered..i want to go..leave me...mujei nehi jeena...she was trying to remove the needles from her hand.. maan grabbed her wrist harshly stopping her moment..he lowered to her n whispered in her ears..

Maan:shayad,tum gajni bangayi ho..tumne suna nehi meine kya kaha..this life of yours is mine..you have no right on it..how dare u try to harm urself again..so chup chap lete raho...or I will tie u in chains...u will not be able to move even ur single part..if u forgot remember I said this before also..

He said in a dangerous tone..

Geet remembered maan saying:this is not ur life ..that u can die..its mine..i saved u..n when I want I will let u die..u know..maan singh khurana never does favour in free..u will be with me till I want..if u think..i need ur body..then I agree ..ya..u will be with me to satisfy me..till u repay the price of ur life..samji tum...

Now geet went back to her thoughts...her falling down n maans meet..then her cutting nerves..again he has saved her..she has become numb from wen she left hospital..she forgot everything..only one thing she remembered..god has taken her mother for her sinful deed..

kyun babaji..dont I have right to end my life also

Maan signaled dr..to do something for which he injected her a sleeping injection..

She was murmering..i don't want to live..

After that what she said it was not clear for anyone..

Geet:I must go to my papa..my mama must be waiting for me there..i must go to them...I don't want to live..i have done a big mistake for which god has punished me taking my mama from me..i want to die..so I must go to them n ask forgiveness to them..mujei marnedo..mujei marna hai..i don't have any right to live..i cant save my dignity nor my mother..i have no right to live..

The nurse who was checking geets bp called dr..

nurse:dr..patients bp is not stable...

dr.rushed n checked her...

as she went to deep sleep she was stable again..by the time the reports also came..he examined the reports..

dr:mr.khurana..as I feared there is no severe injuries in head..just some parts are swollen..it can be healed ..but,the way she reacts its not gud..u must take care of her..i think she is in depression..u must take her first out of this..n give her confidence to live..n give these medicines regularly..

maan:ji dr..

dr:hmm..i prefer she stay atleast for a day..let us confirm her bp is stable..or we may know if she has any pain ..when she wokes up...

maan sighed..ji dr..

dr:and after u take her home too..u must be careful that she doesn't try this madness again..

maan:ji dr..

dr:give her healthy food..so she may gain her strength..n be careful..i'll send a pshychiarist ..she may knock some sense in patient..so,she will not attempt suicide next time..

maan:shayad u r right dr..

dr:by night I'll discharge her..

maan:ok dr..

dr.left the two alone..maan was sitting next to her n caressing her hair..his one hand entwingled with hers n kissing it often ...he was mentally saying sry to her thousands of times..

she gained conscious n the pshychiarist came..maan was pacing outside nervously..dr. asked geet many questions..she did not answer..dr.even said her suicide is cowards act..n gave her advices..

dr.looked at geet,who was looking at the ceiling like she is watching the beautiful thing on earth...

dr.gave up n went to maan...

Dr.mr.khurana..she is in extreme shock..she has shelled herself..i tried to break..but she is not responding..u can take her home..but try to make her speak...from when she got conscious she is not uttering any word..u must work hard..ill come next week..

Maan:ji..

Maan came to her..

Maan:moon...moon..

Geeet:...

maan:how r u now..

Geeet:...

Maan:r u feeling better..

Geeet:...

Maan:shall we go to our house.. (our house..not bad maan)

Geet did not answer him..she diverted her gaze from ceiling to him..she looked him once n again started to stare somewhere else..

Maan 's heart burned seeing her like that..that gazel eyes r now numb..

Maan:u must be strong now maan..u must take care of her..

He lifted her n moved to his car n drove to mansion...he thought she will get down from car reaching destination..still she was looking somewhere..he again lifted her n took to his room.he placed her on bed...he looked around..he called nakul n gave all things that he thought she may use to attempt suicide..its knife,blade pills everything..

Nakul removed all things n came back with dinner for him n soup for geet..he did not question maan,who she is...bcoz somewhere he had a hope this girl is the one who can change maan..for that this girl must be fit n fine..without maans order he cared for her n prepared food for her also..

Maan:ok..u may go to sleep..

Nakul:hmm..if u need anything call me..

Maan:ok..

Nakul left..maan took the bowl n came to geet..

Maan:take this..

She did not listen to him..or should we say she don't want to hear anything..maan closed his eyes seeing her not reacting..

He took a spoon of soup n took to her mouth..

khalo..

she did not open her mouth..

maan:don't u think,u need energy to payback my favour...she looked at him..

he started to feed her n she took it silently..

he forcefully fed her tablets n made her sleep on bed..he had his food n went to his bar..he started to drink..drink till his mind stopped working n his heart cursing him..

maan:moonshine..u will be with me na..

he walked to his bed with mumbling steps..

he took of his shirt n slided next to geet..he hold her in his embrace tight..he wants to feel her safe..he kissed her hair..

im sry..moon..i'll not let u go from me..u r mine..only mine..

he slept holding her...even in his sleep he pulled her more closer to him..feeling her near him gave him peace..he kissed her nape n ears..his hands went under her shirt squeezing her bare stomach..tightening his grip ..he slept again..the solace he find in her... in drunken state he did things which he did not want to repeat..

the next day morning..

nakul came to maans room..it was wide open unlike other days..he saw maan holding her in sleep..the girl was staring at wall..

he got confused..must he go in or not..he knocked the door which made maan woke up..

maan:come in..

he sat holding his head..

nakul gave lemon juice..it has become maans habbit..the closer one all knows..

maan was feeling better..he looked geet ...he turned to nakul..

maan:this is moon..she will be staying here..bring her milk n coffee for me..till that ill fresh up..

nakul:ji baba..

maan:n I will be working from home for few days..

nakul was happy..maan n ghar deadly combination..

ji baba..

maan helped geet to stand n took her to washroom..she walked like a zombie..maan gave her a new brush .

maan:take this n brush ur teeth..

she looked at him..he was still holding her waist as he can feel her weak...

maan looked at her..he continued his act..

maan:I don't want u to smell bad when I near u..u know what I mean..

geet turned n brushed her teeth..maan gave her towel..she was walking out senselessly..maan stopped n wiped her face..he took the milk that nakul has kept n gave to her..

maan:u need strength to be with me...i said last night also..

maans heart broke into millions of pieces while saying it..he looked her face...no expression..

he fed her milk..then breakfast ..everything with force..he sat in same room n continued his work..24x7 he kept his eyes on her..so she may not take any wrong decision again...

a week passed...there was no improvement in geet..now she is used to his force..she will move from bed only for washroom..rest of the time she will be in bed staring at wall.or sitting near the window n stare the empty sky..searching her mom n dad in stars..

.maan as usual will drink n come to her n hold her n sleep..he was sure ..he will never repeat that night,which broke his moon..

it was another day maan was trying to feed her saying same words.

Maan:the sooner u r normal..the sooner I ll get my favour back..u know na..msk always prefers give n take policy..

.today he can see some expressions in her face.a determination...he can see in her..

yes geet decided..if babaji wants me to torture this way reminding that, this is my punishment for my sin..for leaving my mama to die..ok..i'll die thousands of death..i too need punishment for my sin..

she took the plate from maan n ate herself..

Edited by vrinda22 - 7 years ago
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The next day was also same...geet ate herself..but there was no improvement in her state..she was still in numb state.maan doesn't know how to break her shell..he was breaking inside billion times seeing her lifeless n emotionless..his guilt ate him...he was now doing his excercises more than usual..his every moves were making him bleed..

he hated pammi for making him like this..

becoz of her he is like this..

becoz of her he hated girls...

becoz of her he thought geet also as a cheater..

becoz of her he played with geets life..

becoz of her geet is in this situation..

becoz of her he cant live happily..

becoz of her he couldn't trust anyone which pushed him to do a sin..to take away an innocents virgin..to push her in living hell..

is his past not enuf to torture him..the deed he did was killing him n he hated himself for that..he punched his sand bag..it tore n the sand fall on floor...

aaahhh...

he screamed in frustration..but who can sooth his pain..he took his companion his moonshine wine n drank in one go..he broke the bottle still not finding peace..maan took more n more n gulped it ..

He is not getting anything..how 2 make the life as before..he is now burning in his sin..

Nakul came n touched his shoulder,when maan was about 2 take another round of alcohol..

Nakul:bus bi karo beta..

He shoved him n took another round..he was now struggling even to walk..nakul helped him to reach his bedroom..maan saw geet..he moved inside with slow woggling steps..

Nakul sighed n went away..

Maan came to his side n slided next to her..he hugged her from back n placed numerous kisses on her shoulders n hair..she was fast asleep becoz of the pills she took..but she had a little sense ,when she found his hands moving inside her shirt n pulling her more closer to him..she was glued to him...maan slept feeling her in his arms..he was murmering..sry moon,which didn't reach her ears..

Next morning..

Maan woke up again with hangover..he took the lemonade from nakul..geet was in washroom..maan was feeling pain in his stomach..he touched the place ..

Nakul:kya hua?

Maan:get me a pain killer..im feeling pain here..

Nakul went n came with a pain killer..maan took it..geet saw it..but she moved quietly n sat in the window side staring the sky..

Nakul went to make breakfast..

Maan came to geet n caressed her hair..

Maan:gud morning..how r u feeling today..

Geet looked at him...but did not answer..she turned again n starred the sky..

Maan freshed up n came..nakul brought breakfast..both had it..then dr.came n checked geet..then she too went..

Maan got a call 4m kc..some thing needs his attention..

He was already frustrated..he shouted at the poor staff..

Maan:I don't care..cancel the meeting..

Staff...

Maan:may it be crores of losss..i don't care...just cancel my meeting means..cancel it..

He threw the phone making it break into several pieces..

He is not angry on staff..he is angry on himself..dont know how to get out of this fire burning his heart..

Maan gave geet her medicines..soon she slept..he made her sleep comfortably on bed..n came to living room..

He sat there with eyes closed...he was thinking about dr's words..

You must break her shell mr.khurana..once she speaks or broke down everything will be fine..take her out..change of surrounding also can make her gud..make her move with others..but seems like she doesn't open her mouth even to servants..

Maans st:I don't know..how to break her shell..the great maan singh khurana who thought he can do everything by money now doesn't know how to break a shell of girls heart..he is the cause for her state..

Maan got a call from adi..

Maan:hello..

Adi:...

Maan:whats the matter..

Adi:..

Maan:.ok...he sighed...give me details often..

Adi:...

Maan:ok..haan look after the final preparations of mr.scindya's project also..

Adi...

Maan:idk..when I will come to kc..till that u pass me the details..once u come back to delhi..

Adi...

Maan:ok...bye...

Maan closed his eyes feeling frustrated n helpless..

He heared a group of voice...for the first time he felt relaxed seeing them..

Group:surprise

Maan smiled at them..

Maan:hai arjun,prateek n yash...

Maan stood at his place n welcomed them with a hug..the trio looked at each other..becoz this was the first time they have seen maan welcoming them with true warmth..truely as a friend..

Arjun:maan,r u alright..

Maan:ya..

Prathik:hmm..dude..i can see some change in u..

Yash:yaar..see maan..he has lost his weight..n see dark circles around his eyes..it looks like he has not slept for ages..

Maan st:may be its true..how can I sleep peacefully fearing when my moon will harm herself..

All 3 were talking something maan was lost in his thoughts..

Yash shook him..

Maan,maan..

Maan:hu..what?

The three knew something is there behind maan's aloofness..but he wont open they know..

Arjun:maan.did u hear what we said..

Maan:no..what u said..

Arjun:this two want a special party only for themselves..

Maan:party?y?

Arjun:maan,u forgot im married..n they want a separate party only for u 3..

Maan:hu..haan..i forgot..thats gud na..to celebrate ur marriage life..

N I think now its going 2 be a month..so lets celebrate ur first month anniversary..

The trio looked maan with jaws opened..maan never showed interest in arjun's marriage..now he is saying to celebrate month anniversary..

Maan:hmm..y not u all come with ur pairs..

Yash:n what will u do without pair..

Yash thought he may try maan to agree 4 marriage as dadi wished..

Maan:hmm..that I will see..

Prateek:then y not we go for disco at weekend

Maan thought for a while..

Maan:ok..

Yash:maan..we are going for picnic tomorrow..if u wish u can join us..

Prateek:yes yaar..u too will feel relaxed..

Maan:ok..i too want to get out of this..hope this may break the shell..

The trio did not understand what maan said..but were happy that maan agreed..

They had snacks n tea n left...

The next day maan asked geet to get ready ..maan had pain again in stomach..he clutched feeling the pain more than the day before..he took the pain killer n relaxed..geet came out..maan then only realized..he cant take her out in that dress..from the day she came to his house,she was wearing only maans tracks n shirts..maan took bath n took her to the near by mall n selected some dress..salwars n saris..she want to refuse him..his one glare made her off..he passed her a chudithaar n she changed in the trial room..she looked gorgeous..maan could not hold himself back..he placed a soft kiss on her forehead..

Maan:u look gorgeous..

Geetsts:this beauty only made me fall on my own eyes..

Maan paid the money n placed his hands on her waist n took her to the car..she did not deny anything..she knew only onething,that she is now his puppet ..till he relieves her..she is waiting for that day..she will go back to her papa n mama..she felt her life as burden...

Maan drove to arjuns house..the three pairs were already there..

They never expected maan..he honked the horn.

Maan:get in..

.n all three pairs entered the car n looked maan disbelievingly..

Geet was looking outside the window..the car moved to maans farm house..it was a very lovely sight..one side surrounded by hills n river flowing on other side..all kinds of plants.trees,fruits were there...wherever they turn it was green.. the view was pleasant..

The girls were silent..arohi,pari n meera..

When maan stoped the car n all got down,they exchanged a sweet smile..the girls were thinking will it be fun with maan around..maan opened the passenger seat n extended his hand to geet..

Maan:moon.we have reached..

Geet gave her hand n got down..the three pairs looked maan shocked surprised with eyes wide opened..n without blinking..the girl looked very homely n very beautiful they thought..n the most maan n the girl looked perfect with each other..

Maan:moon,this is arjun,his wife arohi,yash,meera his fianc..prateek,pari..his fiance..

They said hi n extended there hands..maan took geets hands n placed on their hands..

Maan:say hi..

Geet looked at him n said hi..

Everything looked puzzle for them...

Arjun:maan.introduce her..

Maan:this is moon..sry..geet...my ..he thought what to say..he searched for words n atlast said..

Maan:my friend..

Yash whispered 2 others..

Yash:maan aur girl friend..cant believe

Pratheek n arjun:hmm..

Maan:u all can enjoy..take moon..i mean geet with u..

With that he moved inside..

The girls let a deep breathe..

Arohi:hai geet..uff..we r scared of maan bhai..u know..

Pari:coming with him itself for a picnic is record break..

Meera:acha..chalo lets go n enjoy..bhai went inside giving us space to enjoy na..

Arjun:ya..common lets go to garden side..

Arohi:arjun:have u been here before.

Arjun:yes,dadi showed this place once..

Geet was been pulled between the three girls n she was walking with them where they took her..all six noticed geet was blank n did not talk anything than hai..they tried n tried but nothing worked..they all played throw ball volley ball ,pulling each others legs having fun..arjun never let a chance to romance with his wife..geet was silently watching them..she felt she was a filth to be with them..their happiness looked alien to her..she can never experience that in her life time..

Maan was in balcony holding his wine n watching geets moves..he let her free,thinking she may be comfortable with others than him..but she proved him wrong..she was silent..only difference was she was not staring sky..she looked at the playing couples..they often came to her n asked her to join them..she nodded no n sat silently...

Nakul was there with them..he made lunch n arranged it in garden..

Maan came down ..

Maan:moon lets have lunch..

She followed him without anywords..

All took the seats..maan himself served geets plate ..confirming its all healthy to her..

Maan:have it moon..

Maan turned to others..

Do u all want anything else..

All looked maan..they have never seen this side of maan..he was not rude..n more than it his friendly side..the man who pays his share for food when they have in hotels too is now offering them lunch..

They all started to talk..maan answered only in yes or no..geet never did that too..

Arohi:bhai..why she is so mute..

Maan looked at geet..who was playing with the food listeneing to them.

Maan kept mum...

Meera:she is not answering..nor mingling with us..what happened to her..

Maan left the lunch as he had no answer..how can he say he is the reason for her numb state..after the truth will they be friendly with him..this girls who just called him bhai..will they ever give that respect..they will look like he has done a big crime..n that's the truth too..he is a sinner..he must be punished..but before that he want to make geet normal...

Prateek:what happened to him..

Arohi:geet,why he left..do u know the reason..

Geet just remembered the fateful n8...for the first time her eyes moisted n she ran inside the house...she banged on something hard..n before she fell down maan grabbed her waist..n hugged her tight..she sobbed silently in his arms..he carried her to bed..letting her tears flow down..he was successful a little somehow...he rubbed her back hushing her..

The three pairs looked at him n came down ..

Prateek:Nakul kaka..whats going on..

Arjun:kahin..geet is like other girls for maan..

Yash:but she looks like she belongs to a gud family..n we all know maan never stays with girls..its always to take his pain...

Nakul:don't know beta..but onething I know..this girl has successfully brought some emotions in maan..he brought this girl home in unconscious state..what happened I don't know..the girl tried to end herself also..n maan successfully saved her..she is with maan for last 10 days..n maan never let her go out of his sight even for a minute..he behaves like his life will end if she is not before him..

what relation is there between them I cant understand..they sleep in same bed..but the door is always kept open..

nakul:today only I have said this to dadi ma also..dr.told maan to make her speak or cry..what happened ..y this girl is mute..i too don't know..i think he brought u all ..so that the girl will come out of her shell..

arjun:interesting..

arohi:so,we must make this girl normal..

meera:I think maan bhai has some feelings for her..

yash:if we succeeded..maan will also have a normal life like us..

prateek:dadi will be happy..

after some hrs..maan n geet came down n joined all..maan was talli...they were playing dum sharathi n all making each others partners confuse..same time nakul brought cake for them..arohi in anger threw cake on arjun..n arjun threw on arohi..she nudged n it fall on yash..in few minutesere smudged in cake..

seeing their funny faces,maan laughed loud making all stun...

nakul came forward to his friends n folded his hands...

thank u beta..u have made him laugh after several years..

geet looked maan like she was seeing him for first time..

geet(ST): he look just like innocent baby while laughing but y his smile not reaching his eyes...

yes..she has never seen him laughing..he was always rude n angry..but why kaka said he is laughing after several yrs..is he too in some depression...

maan was laughing n suddenly he held his stomach ..

nakul kaka...its paining again.. I want pain killer..

nakul:y don't u go 2 dr..

maan:kaka..its not time to talk..get me pain killer soon..

nakul brought him tablet..

nakul:beta.day by day ur pain is increasing..u must show to dr..

maan:mujei kuch nehi hoga..if happened too its gud..y should I live..for what reason kaka..i have no interest to live ..

geet looked at maan..his voice showed his pain..he too is sailing in same boat.she thought..

arjun:u wont worry about u..what about dadi..what about that lakhs of workers who is dependant on ur company..did u ever thought of their family..their childrens..this kc is dependant on u..n same the workers family too on u..n what about ur dads ambition..

maan:I know..so only I am still working...or else I would have sold kc long before..kc n dadi are the only reason I am living..or else..kabka mei bhi moon ki tara sochthi..this heart is rock..no feelings ..no emotions..all think like that..but who knows the pain inside me..

he was opening up for first time..shayad the alcohol has took over him..

maan came to geet..

maan:do u know moon..i have no heart..its rock..only rock..i too want to play..i too want to laugh..i too want to cry..but I cant..becoz..i am the great msk..the business tycoon..the great businessman,who knows how to grab deals within seconds..he has millions of money..he can get what he wants..but a failure in life..he is zero in his personal life..he cant be happy ..he is cursed to be in pain through out the life time..he cant trust his own friends.nor girls..thats what he was taught n what he experienced..my dad..he taught me give n take policy..i followed his path..but what I got..nothing..nothing than falling in dark..

geet(ST): how can be he so lifeless..and dadi who is she i never saw her...the man which i know is not he..may be some situatuions make him like this..but whatever i cant trust him...for me i m married to him..but for him i m jst his slave..the owner of my life..may be he is drunk thats y he is behaving like this..he again become that heartless person..but its also fact y his pain affecting my heart somewhere...she come out of her thought with maan next set of words..

kaka..kaka...i want 2 be child. A small child who knows.no worries Of this world..no cheating...all will feel happy..he was murmering more n more making the friends feel bad for him..they cursed the fate which made him like this..nakul had silent tears..maan blacked out in few minutes..

maan murmered..moon don't go..be with me..i wont let u go..

geet sat there numb hearing him..

precap:maneet in disc..the girls which are maans past meeting geet..what will happen to geet,when they see her with maan????
Edited by vrinda22 - 7 years ago
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maans friends took himto his room n placed him on bed..

maan was blabbering on something..nothing was clear other than one word..moonshine..n his hands searching beside him in bed...arjun took the pillow n kept between his hands..he hugged it n slept...

all thought he is asking for drink ...only geet knew he was searching for her near him..not the drink n as he is hugging the pillow,they don't know nowadays she is his pillow to sleep peacefully..

boys ngirls went back to their homes,when nakul said he will take care of maan..as its normal..his drinking..n losing conscious..

geet was confused where to sleep..in maans place it was different..she was in same room..but here..then she heared maans blabber n searching her again ...

Geet sighed..he says na i am debted to him..n nothing is left more to think..she went n layed beside him..his heart was pulled to her feeling her presence..he turned her side n pulled her to his embrace locking her in his arms he slept soon..n geet too tried to sleep soon..thinking about her cursed fate..but she couldn't..she thought for a minute..maan is sleeping peacefully..why cant I go away from him..

She took his hands from her waist slowly n walked out of his room with determination,that she will chose the way which can ease her pain..

Did she know,she is destined to be with him..how much she may try she will not succeed..when their fate is tied up..

Geet took slow steps.there was no one when she came out of the house.. when she reached the gate of the farm house..she was stopped by the gaurds..

Gaurds:sry,mam..u cant go out without sirs permission..

She still tried to move on..

Gaurds:pls mam,we have family n we don't want 2 be in bad books of him..if we are thrown out we wont get job anywhere..aap sir ko jaanthi nehi hai..he never forgives mistakes..its our strict order to keep u inside the house n not allow u alone without his knowledge..geet felt defeated..

Wo ab apna mann ki mallik be nehi..she cant do anything of her own..

She came back only to see him sitting leaned on the bed post..

Feeling her presence he opened his eyes..

Maan:where did u go moon..leaving me alone...if u want to go out say me..i will take u ..

His voice was very cold..that she can sense his anger behind it..

Geet came n layed beside him silently..

Maan pulled her into his embrace..

Maan:never try to go away from me..i cant bear it..

Geet sensed his pain..dependent of her in his voice,but shrugged off thinking he is saying in effect of drug..she only thought he wants her..n that's y he is saying those things..

The next day maan had an important meeting in kc..as he avoided office for so many days,the works were lined up..so he took geet first to KP..n made her change n he too dressed up for office..

She wore a saree after nearly 15 days after that incident..

Maan looked at her..he was getting affected by her..but his guilt never let him repeat that night..she was looking extremely beautiful..in that blue sari..her features were very well curved n it was prominenet by the way she wore it..maan could not take his eyes off her..

Maan:I must hold back..i wont try to get intimated to her..one night caused my peace..n I wont repeat it..i only want my moon safe with me till eternity..

Maan:moon,lets go..

She nodded..she never asked him questions..she just followed whatever he asked to do..she is prepared for everything,if he wants her to be in bed too..may be that is the punishment for her to live this painful life..to be treated as a pleasure giving toy for him..

They both had their breakfast n sat in the car..

Both headed towards Kc followed by his bodyguards...the last picnic has made her atleast notice her surroundings..a break from her grief..she was awed by the entrance of KC..the car stopped n maan moved towards the lift along with geet..he can see the questioning eyes of gaurds looking geet..he didn't like it..he kept his hands on her waist n walked inside the office.it was an another way of warning for them...don't look at things that are mine..geet is mine..he held geet protectively n moved...geet looked at the staffs wishing him..some running here n there seeing his presence..some looking at the beautiful girl beside him..maan stopped at mid of office..

He looked around n saw the mess ..he was not for 3 weeks n the office doesn't look like how he left..

Maan roared in anger..

Maan:I want my office everything back in place tidy within 10 minutes..r else u all r fired..u all r enjoying the lack of my presence..i assure u if I found any mistake in work I will not think once before throwing u all out...im not paying u all to gossip..n chat in my place..nor any tv show is going here...

He said saying at the staffs who are looking at geet...geet felt needles piercing her every part with their look..so she lowered her gaze...

Maan shouted.:now all back to work..n all HR's in my cabin right now within 2 minutes..all ran for their life n work..if they failed to give perfection,they wont get job any where else..

Maan again held geet n walked inside his cabin..he asked her to sit in the couch..he heared the knock..

Maan:moon,be comfortable urself..i'll be here only..if u want anything ask me..

He said n sat in his chair..

Maan:come in..

The hrs came inside fearing his wrath..

Geet only looked at him n the staffs..his way of working..his works..

He was held with continuous meetings..n site visits...in all he kept geet with him...n this made geet realise..1000s of families is working under him..dependent on his business...just becoz of her,he lost one deal which lead to crores of loss..

Geet st:is his lust for me more than his crores..for rich people profit or loss doesn't matter..only their desire is mean to them..for him ,I am his lust,a toy in bed to satisfy his needs..he is with me only waiting for me to get physically fit to be in his bed..mei bhi tayaar hoon..i don't want his staffs to suffer for me..

Geet was taking the dinner quietly...she ate all food which maan gave her..

Geet sat on bed waiting for him..he came n made her sleep on bed..n tucked her under the duvet..

Maan:u must be tired so sleep..gud night moon..

Geet was getting confused by his behavior day by day..he says he want her but never came to her ..

He pecked her fore head..it felt so natural between them..

Maan made his way to bar n took his drink..n sat in balcony..like all days he tried to search his parents in the sky..

Talking to them thru his heart ,sharing his pain,n questioning them y they left him alone in this world to suffer..y he cant be happy like his friends,y he snatched the purity of an innocent girl..y..y..y..he got no answers..he was more talli,not in senses..he came to geet.n slided next to her..nakul was silently watching him..wen he went to bed,nakul closed the door n went to his room to sleep..here maan looked geet..

I am sry dear..mei na bohut galath kiya tumhare saath..tum mujei maaf karogi na..he looked at her sari.she has not changed...her waist exposed n making him a magnetic pull..he placed kisses on her waist n belly button..his hands unknowingly removed her sari n kissed all over her n stopped after giving smooches in her lips..geet was in deep sleep bcoz of sleeping pills he gave today..he don't want her to go away from him like she tried last night..so he changed her pills...he was murmering ..

Im sry..im sry..give me peace dear..i get it only from u..pls get well soon..i cant see u like this..

He did not proceed..he hugged her n slept in the valley of her chest..

When geet woke up,first she felt heavy..then only she realized the weight on her is actually maan sleeping over her..

Nakul who came with the lemon juice saw this..he thought ,like all days there will be no relation between them..geet could not move as maan was sleeping over her..she took the spread n covered them both feeling embarrassed...her sari lying on floor...nakul immediately closed the door. never he expected this..nakul st:is she also like other girls..am I wrong judjing this girl..oh god..pls keep maan safe from all miseries..he cant face another betrayel..

Geet tried to free from his grip...but he pulled her more..n snuggled to her like a small baby..

Maan murmered:mujei chodke math jao moon..

She thought he is asking for her..so she layed there silently,thinking what happened last night..why she don't remember anything...maans hands were moving on its own accord in his sleep..geet closed her eyes tightly..its second time for her,to be touched by him more intimately...his hands went under her blouse. N kneaded her curves..geet started to shiver knowing what may be his next move..today he is going to repeat the night..

Maan woke up with a sudden jerk..he thought he was dreaming..but her shiver disturbed his sleep n he came to reality..he was shocked to see what he was doing..her sari not drapped on her..his hands on her body...

Oh shit...

He immediately removed his hands n looked at geet..she was suppressing her cry by biting her lips..it pricked him to see the salty water on her eyes..

Maan pushed his hair backwards..

Why must I do things to regret..kya wo raath kaafi nehi tha..

Geet opened her eyes when she did not feel him on her..

She sat on the bed n the sheet slipped from her body..she did not try to cover..nothing is left that he has not seen nor touched..maan took the sari n covered her..

Maan:I am sry..i did not know what I am doing in sleep..

He closed his eyes n said without looking at her..

Geet for the first time spoke..there is nothing left,that u hv not done to me when u are in sense..this is nothing regarding that night..u said u want me..n I wont stop u..becoz I am already feasted by u...nothing is going to change when u repeat it..

It was like a slap to maan..her every words pierced him n made his heart bleed..

Maan heared the knock n geet moved to washroom..

Nakul came inside n gave maan the lemonade..maan looked at nakul,his look was not so pleasing..there was dis approval in his face..in house its first time ever maan has been with a girl n nakul did not like the closeness of maan with geet..

Without saying anything nakul came back to kitchen..he called dadi n said about what he saw in morning..dadi decided to meet the girl..she don't want any one to play with her grandson,who is already broken...

Here maneet got ready n maan took geet again to office with him..he can see the improvement in her..so,he decided to keep her in change of atmosphere..till she is ok..

Maan went to conference room leaving geet alone in his cabin..geet came n sat near the window..she was lost watching the busy life of delhi highways..she did not realize the elderly lady who came inside n watching geet for a long time..

Dadi tried to get her attention..but she was so much lost in her past life thinking about the lovely moments with her parents...how they pampered her..how they did not let her sad even for a moment.how much they hated tears in her eyes...but now happiness is not there in life ..only tears are left..n it will also dry in few days..then only blood will come..she was lost in grief ..she turned feeling a touch on her shoulder..she turned n saw the old women claded in half white sari,adorned with pearl jewellary..royalty was oozing out from her n geets brought up made her immediately touch her feet..

Dadi took a step backward..it pinched geet..

Dadi:I am maans dadi..dadi straightly came to point...

Geet now knew the reason..why dadi stepped back..

Dadi:so,u r the girl staying with maan..

Geet kept mum ..

Dadi:u seem to be from a gud family..then y r u doing this..my maan is already a broken man..i beg u pls don't play with him..

Geet looked shock seeing the elderly lady folding her hands before her..

Dadi:I don't know what is ur intension..pls,don't break his heart..i have only maan for me..n I am already dyeing seeing him suffer becoz of the womens he met in life..he has not yet came out of that betrayel..n u don't be a ghee over it,,his fire is already turning him to ashes..uske saath saath hum be ash horahi hain..pls..if u want money ask me..i'll give more than u want..pls mere pothe ko chod dho..i cant see him broking again..i am still carrying this life only to see my maan happy..whatever is left in him,dont steal that too..he is already a broken man..dont push him more in dark...

Dadi looked at geet expecting her to answer her...geet was in shock hearing dadi's words...she did not answer her..dadi left the cabin..geet was standing still in same place..dadi ,the grand mother of maan ..she too judged me wrong..like I am after maans money..so only I am staying with him..dadis words has brought her back..she was forced to think,y she is with him..she decided to confront maan once they were back to house..she want to get rid of this painful life..she will ask him today,when he will free her ..

Maan came to his cabin..

Maan:moon,come lets go..my work is finished at present..

Geet thought they were going home..but maan took her to a restaurant..maan made her sit n ordered food for them..both had the lunch silently stealing glances on each other..

Geet tried to speak,but her throat went dry whenever she saw maans eyes..

After lunch maan took her to the mall..maan want her to enjoy the surrounding ..but she was walking quietly behind him..

Hai maan geet tum dono yahaan..asked arjun yash n prateek..

Maan:hmm..just like that..i was free..so I came with moon..it will be a change for her too..what u 3 r doing here...

Yash:our gfnds called us here..they r purchasing for arjun arohis reception...

Y don't u join us..

Maan :ok..

Maneet joined them..though maan was not interested in shopping he was with them...he thought geet will become friends with them n everything will be in place..but geet was fearing to speak to them..what if they too questions the relation..what will she say...

She kept herself again in cage till they finish...maan saw a red sari cladded in a doll..he thought it will suit his moon ..he bought that sari...then,they all went to coffee bar..having gharam pakodas n coffee with chat..thats when maan started to feel his stomach pain uncontrollable..he held geets hand for support..as the pain increased his pressure on her hand also increased he diggged his nails n blood oozed out..she looked at him n his painful face..his friends too noticed the change in expressions..

Maan,what happened..

They asked him..

Maan:its paining again...

Before he complete he fainted..all of them immediately took them to hospital...drs immediately admitted him n did a full check up..dadi n nakul also reached hospital..

Dr. came out..

Dadi:dr,mera maan kesa hai..

Dr:u come with ..i 'll say u..

He said looking at the friends..

Dadi:dr.ye sab meri hi bache hain..u can say anything before them..bcoz they all know maan better than me..n they r well wishers...how is maan..

Dr.sighed:at present he is fine now..but there is a bad news mrs.khurana..

Dadi:dr..bad news..dont say anything..i have only maan for me..i will die if anything happens to him..

Dr:gabrayeyi math..its in ur hands now..

Arjun:dr..pls saaf saaf kahite kya kehna chathi hai aap..

Dr:before that can I ask u something..

Yash:ya..

Dr:from when mr.maan started to drink..

Arjun:not sure..but may be 10 yrs r more..

Nakul:when he learned to live alone from that time he is drinking...

Dr:hv u seen his hands shivering or any symptoms like he will go wild if he did not take his drinks..

Nakul:yes dr..ive seen like that..after drinking he will get normal..

Dr:ok..now the problem is maans liver is getting affected..like u all say I can guess maan cant live without alcohol..he is addicted to it..we must send him to centre to make him get over the addiction..

Nakul:ye tho na mumkin hai..

Dr:namumkin ko mumkin banana hai..if u don't want him to go there u may all try by ur own efforts..he must stop any how...I will give medicines for it..it will help u..but if he again drinks,it may cause his life..

Decide what u want to do..send him to centre or u will make him stop by ur efforts..

For now u can take him home..consult with him..he is a great businessman..if u all advice him,he will understand...n he needs healthy food..no spice for some days..

Dr.gave the prescription n went..maan was back to his house..he looked at the faces of his friends n dadi..girls have left to their houses..

Geet s heart was restless from the minute she heared anything may happen if maan takes drink..n dadi's position was more vulnerable..she cried n cried looking at maan..her bps hooted n her health got worse ..she landed in bed...

Dadi:maan,pls stop drinking..

Maan looked other side..

Dadi:pls maan,don't leave me to suffer in this world..i want u beside me maan..i want u settled..i want to see u happy..i want to see my great grand childrens..mujei nirash math kijeeye maan..promise me..that u wont take alcohol from now..

Maan:u know dadi..i cant live without it..

Here geet came out of dadis room..

First time she went to kitchen n called nakul..

Geet:kaka..can u come with me..i need ur help..

Nakul:help?what help?

Geet:come with me..i will say u..

Nakul followed her..

Geet went to maans room..

Kaka:remove all his drinks from here n bar..n make sure he must not get any bottle in his hands..wherever I found ive binned it..u r here ..so u may know where he may have kept than the regular places..

Nakul:ji..i know..

He went n took the bottles from the book shelf,washroom self.study..etc..n collected all..

Nakul:that's all

Geet:before he comes here,take all n bin it or hide it..

Nakul:thanks..i did not get this idea..

Nakul immediately hide it all before maan comes n searches for the drink..

Geet:I am doing this for the old women crying there..

Her st:how it feels losing ur closed ones..i only knew..i don't want that women to face the loneliness at this age..

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PART 14

After some time geet heared maans foot steps'

He entered the room n searched for his drink..he looked at his hands often which was shivering..he went to bar n saw there is no bottles..all are removed..he came back n opened his shelf,study n looked for the bottle madly..his hands started to shiver more..n his anger too took over him..he pushed all the things breaking into pieces n shouted in anger..

Kakaaa..

Nakul came running to the room..geet was silently watching him..

Ji beta..

Where is my drink bottles..i want now..

Nakul looked geet..by the time his friends n dadi too came there hearing his scream..

dadi:dr..said u must not drink..dont u remember..

maan:I don't want to hear anything..i want means I want..i cant be without it..he said looking at his shivering hands..

arjun:maan..u must not drink..

yash:r u mad maan..drs have strictly warned u..u must not take alcohol..

pratik: its affecting ur health..

maan:even if it affects my health..i want now..i want it..samji aaplog..

maan came to nakul..

kaka..where is the drinks..

nakul kept quiet looking at geet..maan knew now he has removed all..

he softened a little seeing dadi's worried face..

maan:dadi,pls tell them to give me drink..i cant live without it..dadi looked at him helplessly..she so much wanted to remove his pain..to recover from this habbit..its too late now..maan was asking politely first to everyone..then he shouted at all..

maan:y don't u all understand..i want it..i want it..i will die if I don't have it..this burdened heart will burst if I did not lose my sense..i want it..pls get me soon..i cant live without it'...cant u all look i m dying for drink my body is shivering...u people claim to love me na then how can u all see me like this...plz get me my drink or else i will do something which u all will be repenting..

all stood silent seeing this side of maan..as he has always had the drinks,he never get wild..but not getting the drink,he got mad..shouting on all pleading to give him ..dadi was continuosly crying seeing maan helpless 'arjun,yash n pratik stood by her side trying to console her..or her health will get worse..they were also standing worried looking at maan..

geet was silently watching his antics..his anger,frustration,pleading'she cant see him like this..something inside her broke seeing him like that..her heart felt bad for him..

maan:deepak..deepak..

maan called his another servant..

Deepak:go n get me drink soon..he gave money to him..

Deepak looked dadimaa who was having tears in her eyes seeing her grandson who is now fully addicted to drinks..she never thought her life will be in pain seeing him facing troubles daily..

Geet sighed..all are standing numb seeing maan..noone has the guts to go against him..nor get him what he wants..she thought she must interfere for his gud own'she can face his wrath..she cant stand quiet like all does..they all said not to drink'by love n care..but could not force the great msk..they feared him.they know he will never listen to others..wo apne man ka mallik hai..

.but geet never was into it..she is rock n she can face any thing now'.if he shouts or slaps or torture her she can face it..

Geet:Deepak,u go n do ur work..no need to get drink for him..

She turned to all..n u all can go n take rest..i promise..he wont drink from today..

All looked at her in astonishment..if some others were in her place maan would have shouted at them for taking decision against him..but its geet..everytime he sees her his guilt comes before him n makes him speechless..today too he was standing mute becoz of it'he want her to say don't promise..u will fail..i will get my drink anyhow..nothing matters to me..when he looked geet all his decision vanished..n again kept mum..

Dadi did not like it..an outsiders interference..but something in her made to believe geets words..all left maaneet alone..nakul was standing there..geet assured him through her eyes ,that she will look after maan'

Geet:kaka,bring food for maan sir..

Nakul..ji..

after all left geet started to clean the mess created by maan'

Maan:where is drinks..i know u only said kaka to take all na..

Geet:yes..i only removed all from here..I said na..u wont drink..

Maan:pls..dont make do things that u would regret..

Geet:go ahead.. there is nothing left in my life to regret..

Maan closed his eyes knowing the meaning of words..but now his need is more..he want his companion his moonshine..his drink..he cant even shout at geet..what if she brokes n did anything wrong like before..he cant think anything bad happening to geet

Maan in pleading voice..

Maan:pls give me moon..i cant live without the effect of drug..tum nehi jaanthi sirf nasha hi hai mujei sukoon desakthi hai..i want to sleep..only moonshine can give it..

Geet saw nakul standing with dinner for both

She placed his food before him...

Geet:first u have ur dinner..then lets talk about it later..

Maan:no..i don't want dinner..i want my drink..u have urs'

he was also stubborn..

geet:I wont eat till u have urs..she was also stubborn..she knew he cares for her n he will surely eat.

maan ,he cared for geet..how can he leave her to starve..n as drs advice she must eat well to gain the loss of blood..

he gave an accusing look for cornering him..she took a spoon full of the food n took near his mouth..he had it..it was very blunt..he made faces..

maan:now u too have it..

she took the food of his n took it..

maan:this is not urs..

geet:I cant eat tasty food making u look at me..im fine with this..waise..jeenekliye food zaroori hai..its blunt or tasty koi fark nehi partha..

geet fed him n ate also ..they both had it from same plate..(juta khane se pyaar badtha hai..haina)

nakul was looking at both..maan,who never goes with others words was silent before geet..he obeyed her words only to make her eat..n this girl..she is an enigma..i cant judge her..first she was mute n tried to end herself..then the closeness with maan,I thought her like other girls..now she is totally making him under her control..only to make maan not to drink.n sharing his blunt food...if she is like other girls she would not have thought about maans well being..she must be after maans money only..will not be caring for him..

geet gave his tablets..he took quietly..

nakul took the tray n went..

maan:ab tho dedo na..pls..

the great msk who never bent before others pleaded n begged before her to give him his drinks..when u r under the control of alcohol,it can do anything that the man cant do in his sense..

maan:pls..give me na..i..i..cant sleep without it..i want the drug to take off my sense to sleep..pls..pls moon..give me..where u have kept..he again searched all cupboards like a maniac..geet was shocked by his pagalpan..throwing all dresses out of cupboard..

maan:atleast one peg..pls..

geet was thinking once again that what she has decided..she will do it not for him..for his dadi n the thousands of family belonging on him..

geet came n sat next to him..

geet:sir,why cant u stop drinking..see how much ur friends n dadi n kaka are worried for u..

maan:moon,I know..but its my need..to forget myself..pls give na..

geet:ok..u need to forget urself..then take me..i was also ur need na..that night..n u said u want ur pay back..so take me for ur need'to forget that moonshine take me..

maan was shocked to hear those words..it pierced him..making his heart bleed for what he did..

maan:no..i won't ..i wont repeat it.its a great mistake of me..haan I said I want u as payback..but.i said that only to keep u safe..

maan literally spilled the truth that he said those words only to save her..n he started to say what is in his heart.

maan:I am already burning in guilt to snatch ur sanity'don't push me again.i cant look into ur eyes too..i am sorry for whatever I did to u..i cant correct that night..i am already burning in hell..i started drinking to forget my past..now I am drinking to forget that night..still ur freezed body n the blood in ur hands haunt me day n night..so,I drink more till I lose my sense..before girls became my prey to take my wrath out..never I thought u r pure..not like other girls..sry.sry for snatching ur innocence..i cant be forgiven for my sin..my sin is tortorturing me day n night..n only my drink can give me peace..pls moon give me my drink na..i want to drown myself in it..i want to lose my sense..i want to sleep..only drink can give me that..pls..tell Deepak to get me some drink if u don't..

geet never thought he is repenting for what he is not responsible..if she is the cause of pain..she will make sure he will come out of it..

geet:u think u raped me???????????

geet asked him out of blue,which made him stun..he did not..n he cant never force any girl..

geet:u did not force me that day ..u never did anything wrong to me..its me who sold myself to u..i was in such a position to do it..,if its not u may be I would have been with someone else'its true I tried to save my dignity..but a poor girl who was in need of money what can she do ..i gave u myself..n u gave me money..where did sin came here..if anyone should be blamed its fate..not u..got it ..u don't want to repent for anything that u have not done..

maan:I ..i..made u sleep with me..i cant forgive myself..i pushed u to end urself..

geet:wrong..I slept with u for the money..n u have nothing to do with my suicide attempt..its not becoz of u..

maan looked at her with little hope.to soothe his painful heart..to believe her words..he is not the reason behind it'

maan:.sachi..i am not reason for ur suicide..

geet:(firmly)..no..when I failed in my life,how can I blame u..u r not responsible for anything happened in life..ya,I did to end myself becoz I have no reason to live..i felt my life is burden..i am not worth living ..there must be any reason to live na ..i have nothing..so I tried to finish my life..

maan:..u made me out of my guilt..thank u..

geet: thanks ki zaroorat nehi hain..i said whats the truth..u have dadi,friends n business ..u must think about them..on ur every step sir..dont think about what u did to me..u never snatched my purity..it was my submission..

maan:teek hai..i wont think that I snatched ur innocence..moon,pls drink mangwalona..he was again asking her for drink'

he cant believe himself why he is asking permission from her..he would have moved out of his own will to any bar..but he is seeking permission..asking her to give him drink'not getting angry on her like he does with others..

geet:ji..why cant u forget drinking..

she sat close to him'it affected him..maan was controlling his inner desires'he may be in hell till now..repenting his mistake,but he always felt the temptation to get her near him n make her his again...which he always controlled..today it is more with geets nearness..her face close to his..her breathe fall on him..he moved a little trying to avoid the feel growing inside him..

maan:I will try..but from tomorrow..give me today..i will not drink from tomorrow..

geet smiled weekly..there is proverb sir..the drunken men will promise daily that they wont drink from next day..but will drink it daily..but I wont let u touch the drink even a drop..i ve promised ur dadi..n I will fulfil it at any cost..

maan was feeling helpless..he was now shivering very badly..geet can feel it too..

geet:u want that drug effect only to sleep na sir..

maan nodded yes..n that's the truth too..

geet:if u get the effect of drug u will sleep peacefully haina..

maan:ya..

geet:then take me..

maan shockingly:no moon..i said na..i wont..i wont..

geet:y sir..do u remember what u said that night..y u call me moonshine.. moonshine.the name of ur drug...u was affected with me..u felt me as a drug.that night the pleasure was more ,.which ur drug too cant give u'..so only u call me moonshine..today u will forget that moonshine bcoz this moon will give u that effect..that day I gave for one life..today I will give to save for the thousands of families dependent on u..

maan:no.moon..no..pls..i..

he was silenced with her kiss..she kept on kissing him till he give up to the desire n respond her..maan tried to shove her..today he was vulnerable comparing to her..slowly he lost in her kiss n forgot whatever he was thinking..he cant hold himself back ..he started to kiss her passionately..geet smiled at her victory..but her heart bleeded for taking this step..she is again in his bed giving pleasure..maan kissed her n was drowning in her beauty..this time it was different for him..geet was making him drown in passion whenver he thought to stop'she pulled him more to her 'n maan started to relax in her passion..both parted for air..

geet:u can love me..she said blankly..

maan:how much u try moon..i wont repeat it..

geet: u can forget ur drink by loving me ..u can get ur senseless sleep..take me..

maan: no ..no...never ...i'll happily die inspite of repeating that mistake...i accept i want ur presence to sleep and ur warmth has become my addiction more than my moonshine...iska matlab ye nehi i will near u to spend night with u..

both did not know the bond between them..why they cant see the pain of others..why they care for each other..why they can cross anything to keep the other happy'both were strangely in love with each other..but don't know it..or the circumstances they are in are not making them to feel their love..

maan:moon..never I will repeat my mistake..i don't want to be in guilt again'

geet was overwhelmed,atleast he is thinking about her now..when she is ready to save him..

geet:ok..i will make u sleep in my warmth..

she threaded his hair.making him lay on her lap..his hands went around her waist..he snuggled close to her like a kid..

she remembered how her mama use to sing lori for her..she started to sing the song..

Lori lori lori... (4)


Chandaniya chup jaana re
Chan bhar ko luk jaana re
Neendiya aankhon mein aaye
Bitiya meri so jaaye
Hmm...

Neendiya aankhon mein aaye
Bitiya meri so jaaye
Leke godh mein sulaaun
Gaaun raat bhar sunaaun
Main lori lori
Ho main lori lori

Lori lori lori... (4)

Gardhaniya chun chun baje
Palkan mein sapna saje
Dheeme dheeme haule haule
Pawan basanti doley
Hmm...

Dheeme dheeme haule haule
Pawan basanti doley
Leke godh mein sulaaun
Gaaun raat bhar sunaaun
Main lori lori
Oh ho main lori lori

Meri muniya rani bane
Mehlon ka raja miley
Dekhe khushiyon mele
Dard kabhi na jhele
Oo...

Dehke khushiyon mele
Dard kabhi na jhele
Leke godh mein sulaaun
Gaaun raat bhar sunaaun
Main lori lori
Hmm main lori lori

Lori lori lori... (8)

maan s thought went back..his dadi too always sings song for him to make him sleep..

dadi,nakul n friends came to maans room hearing the sweet song..it was closed..the window was kept opened'n what they saw was heart wrenching..geet singing the lori..n maan listening to her lying on her laps..he was drowsy,as she massaged his head lovingly..he slowly slept hugging her '

dadi n others were happy seeing it'they came back to the room..

geet had tears in her eyes when he slept peacefully in her embrace..

today somehow I stopped u to have ur drink maan sir..tomorrow also u will not drink..ye mera wadha hai..i will not let u touch the drink till I am here..

nakul:dadi..

dadi:hmm

nakul:I think this girl is really gud..

dadi:hmm,,im also thinking that only..anjanemei,tumhari baath sunkar,meinei bi usei hurt kiya..but she did gud to us inspite of all..she has controlled maan..n first time he is sleeping without the effect of drink..ab mujei ehsaas horaha hai..she is not like we think..she is gud at heart..

arjun:u r right dadi...wo achi ladki hai..we were with her whole day..if she is like other girls who are after his money..maan would not have kept her with him..n we know maan hates girls presence..if he cares for a girl,then there must be something we don't know..the girl who we saw was mute n lost ..today she was caring for maan..n we knew maan..he wont here advices of others..he does what he thinks..today he did not say any word against her..

yash:iska matlab ye hain..maan is developing feelings towards her..isiliye wo geet ki bath maani..n she made him sleep without taking drink..she can make him out of depression..he will also bi normal man soon..

prateek:yes dadi..i also think she is perfect for maan..she too cares for him..so,y don't we get them married..

dadi:bus bus..we have to wait for sometime more..n I have one question..i agree she is gud n caring..but y she is staying with him..in same room..i want to get the answer of it..n I want to know about her n family..then only we can talk to maan..what he feels for the girl..if he said she is the girl he wants to marry..then I have no problem..mujei sirf maan ki kushi chahiye..

Edited by vrinda22 - 7 years ago
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PART 15
the song i updated in last part was suggested by bulbul n ruby..film.rowdy rathore

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he next day,maan woke up n saw he was sleeping in geets chest.over her softness.hearing her heart beat..he laid there for somemore time hearing it..if he can he will be there in same position..but the reality struck him n he sat in bed'she was sleeping leaning her half body in bed post n he was sleeping hovered over her..missing the weight over her,geet too opened her eyes lazily..

geet:u woke up..geet say little uncomfortably...she is concious

maan: ohh...i want to say...thanks..

she can feel maan said from heart for the first time..she gave him a weak smile..though it was weak,he felt gud to see it.atleast she recovering from her num state...it looked like his day will be good today seeing the smiling face of hers..

geet:why ur thanking me???????

Maan:first time I had a peaceful sleep without drinking..bcoz of u..

Geet: u know u must leave it...its a slow poison for u...

Maan:I will..if u are with me to support me..

Geet:if u think my support can make u out of this addiction then surely I will..

Saying she left to fresh up..n maan layed on bed looking at the ceiling of wall..

He was thinking when he had this peaceful sleep without alcohol..it was many years back when he was small'

N for the first time he did not have hang up or feel dizzy'

Maan looked at the side when he heared the sound of door opening..geet came out wiping her hair..maan was mesmerized by the sight..she looked beautiful with those water droplets dripping on her face..the morning sunlight adding more beauty to her..he stood looking at her..she looked like an angel with her pure beauty..no artificial make ups..

Geet:u need anything??????

Maan:hmm.. no i going to get fresh...

He came out of his thoughts..she moved out..

Maanst:why I was looking her like that ?maan..tu pagal hai..u r checking her..what if she has caught u..isnt ur sins enough for u to repent..she has taken out from u last night only..do u want to spoil this unnamed relation too..what is she to me..a friend or what..at present you must be careful with her every moves..u cant make her , risk her life again..

He sighed n went to take bath..

Geet came to kitchen and saw nakul making lemon juice..

Geet:wo...what are u doing kaka can i help u?????

Nakul:lemon juice..for maan..he will be having hang over na.

Geet:kaka..he did not drink yesterday ..u know it..we only hided every bottle yesterday..

Nakul stopped preparing lemon juice..

Nakul:wo,adadt hogayi na..isiliye..thank u beta..

Geet felt her eyes moist hearing the word beta..she looked other side hiding her tears..

Geet:kaka,what will maanji have coffee or tea..

Nakul:black coffee..

Geet:ok..i will make it..u prepare for breakfast..

Nakul:do u know to prepare blackcoffee..bcoz maan beta wants perfection in everything..

Geet:when we don't have milk we use to have black coffee only..

She said thinking the days in shimla..when her father was alive he never allowed her take coffee or tea..she was special..rano always kept horlicks,boost,complain n all varieties for her taste..

Thinking it geets eyes moisted..

Nakul made milk n gave to her..its maan's order to give her milk daily..so,she may get out of weakness soon..

Geet:kaka,u go n give this to him..till that I will have my milk..

She don't want maan to know,she made it..

Nakul:ok..

Maan came out of washroom..his eyes searched for his moon..he looked from his room..he can see geet there.

Maan:whats going on with me..she is not before me I am searching for her like ihv not seen her for ages..

Maybe iam used to her presence that y..

When nakul came out,he saw maan lost in his thoughts..

Nakul:gudmorning maan baba...

Maan:gudmorning kaka

Nakul:ur blackcoffee

Maan took it n ..sipped it..he stopped n looked at nakul..

Maan:what happened to u kaka..today the coffee is tasty..

Nakul:wo geet ne banaya..

Maan: moon prepare it...its awesome...

Maan was cherishing his every sip..

Nakul saw him..whats there in black coffee that he is tasting like having some sweet..

Maan returned the cup to him n went to do his regular works..

Here geet n nakul made breakfast..geet took the tray n arranged breadsandwich,veg salads n fresh juice in a tray..

Geet:I will go n give him his breakfast..

Nakul:beta,then y u made parathas..

Geet:its for dadi n other servants..u knowna,what dr.said..he must have healthy foods no spice nor oily till he recovers..

Nakul:ya..

Geet:so only I made this ..haan kaka..call dr to come n check him now.

Nakul:ji beta..i will call now..

Geet went to their room..n nakul called the dr..

Dadi was silently watching geet's every moves..she want to say sorry to her..but thought to watch them with a little distance..if she talk with geet,geet may behave normally with her..in return she will also behave gud..but maans view of geet,she must watch from distance only..not from geets view..

Maan was often looking at entrance waiting for geet'she entered with the tray n kept it on table

Geet:hmm wo suniye...,ur breakfast..

Maan:ok..but for u moon..

Geet:mine too is here only..

Maan came n sat on couch..she served him..he did not say anything..he had it ..for first time he felt everything new..from his morning till now..he looked at geet..

Maan:u have urs..

Geet:ji..

She too had hers..after finishing geet went n kept the tray in kitchen..she came back n saw maan taking files..

Maan:moon,lets go to office..u r ready na..

Geet:before that u must have checkup..if dr.allows u can go..

Maan:but moon..

ok..with one condition..

Geet:what?

Maan:call me maan..

geet: how can i call u by ur name...its not look good naa..

maan: y...u dont like my name???

geet: no its nothing like that but taking ur name...

maan: moon plzzz for me u can do this bit na...

Geet:ok..maan'now ok..

his name from her mouth sounds like heavenly music to him...Maan smiled..

Nakul knocked the door n got their attention..he was standing with Dr..

Maan:yes come in dr..

Dr.examined him..dr.did not believe that maan did not take drinks the previous night..

Dr:its gud to hear mr.khurana..must say u have a great will power..if u go on like this u will be out of this addiction..

Nakul:dr.he wants to go to office..

Dr:sure..he can go..his habit of taking drinks is only at night times na..so,he will feel shiver n may be vulnerable at that time only..as much as he concentrate on other works forgetting drinks its gud to him..

Nakul:when he will be alright dr..

Dr:if he passes this one week successfully,I am sure he will be alright in 2 months..u must take care of his medicines..i will give sleeping pills..if he need it u can give..divert his thoughts whenever he is need of alcohol..

mr.khurana..it depends on ur confidence n will power..which u got last night u must maintain it..

maans eyes went to geet..if she was not there he would not have been slept..

maan:ji dr..i will try my fullest to come out of it..

after that maneet went to office..geet told nakul,what to make for lunch n asked him to send it to KC

KC

Both entered the cabin..n geet sat in couch like previous day.

Maan:moon,if u want anything call receptionist..her name is pinky..she will help u..

Geet:ok..

.maan asked his assistant to come..he came n gave his work schedule..geet was now looking him..she was no more numb..her only time pass was to watch maan'

the way he talks..his attitude..his anger..his working style..how he makes things perfect..how he makes his staff run to do his work..

it was 11..she called reception..

pinky:yes sir..

geet:hmm wo'I want fresh juice or black coffee for him..

pinky:yes mam..

geet :call me geet..no mam..

pinky:wo..sir will not like it..i don't want to lose my job..pls..mam..

geet:ok..

maan was busy with his staffs making preparations for next presentation..he heared the knock..

maan:yes come in..

the peon came in n kept his black coffee..

maan:who told u to bring coffee..i didn't call..

peon:wo pinky mam told mam asked for it..

maan looked at geet..she said yes thru her eyes..

maan was astonished ..he started to love the attention n care he got from geet..he was getting this care from outsiders for first time..dadi nakul or adi..they all belongs to him in some way..but geet..she must hate him..but she is caring for him besides what he has done to her..his heart was feeling light..unknowingly geet was reducing his pain n loneliness of his life'.

maan turned to peon

maan:get one orange juice for her..

peon went n came with juice for geet..

it is the real care..both did not think about them,but cared for others life..ye pyaar nehi tho aur kya..but will they feel it or express it ever'

precap:the dark past day..for both

Edited by vrinda22 - 7 years ago
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PART 16

Noon

Nakul sent lunch for both..

Geet served him n she served herself..the food was blunt..maan who was not interested in food now wants tasty food..

Maan:moon..its not tasty..i need my taste of food not this hospital special dishes...

Geet:maan,its healthy..it will keep u healthy..

Maan:do u think I am not healthy..

Geet::no..i did not mean it..this type of food u must have till u recover..or ur stomach will burn more becoz of spice..

Maan :u have all answers for me..btw y ur eating this bland food u like spicy food right??????

geet: i m having this food to give u company...and y i like spicy food but if u can have this food y not i...

He was happy that she interacted with him..doing so much for him, care somuch for him...

He had his lunch without any interest..just for his moons sake..he also feel special seeing her concern for him..

unknown to herself geet fulfill all wife duty which awake somany new feeling in both heart..

After that he was again busy..

Geet sat in couch n saw him working..she has no work..other than watching maans moves..how he works non stop..she dosed off watching him in sitting position..she woke up after 2 hrs..

Geet saw herself sleeping comfortably in couch..her head was placed in pillow..she looked around..

Geet:how I slept?she looked at pillow..how

Maan:u must be tired..afterall u took care of me night..i only placed u..u r uncomfortable sleeping in sitting position..

He said..looking her with somuch love

Geet:wo.sry..i slept in office..idk..i never sleep in day times..she tried to say her part..

Maan:its ok moon..

Geet:did u have anything..

She asked in care..maan's heart again start beating faster...when ever she show any care toward her his heart beat faster...

Maan:ya..ur bournvita is in flask..he poured it in cup n gave to her..

Geet:hmm..thanks..

maan: wo nakul kaka told me that teenagers like bournvita or chocolate horlicks..something like that..so i order i hope u also like it if u dont like it plz do tell me i order coffee or whatever u like...actually i dont know ur choices na..

geet she started with her sudden care and love which she think she lost with her dad...he is the only man who pamper her like princess...her eyes get little teary but she hide it from maan then she say..its ok..i like it

This was all new to her,,unexpected from maan..

Maan felt happy that he successful in getting little bit close to her his heart jumping in joy when geet drink bournvita like he got biggest treasure of his like he thought geet force him to again live life like teenager..he shook his head and again concentrated on his work..she heared maan talking to adi in phone about project details..

Then maan saw geet looking at him..

Maan:wo.adi is not here..

He again tried to interact,but she simply nodded..

Maan called his staffs n worked on project which was in 2 days..as they were talking about her favorite subject,she listened them carefully maan looking her from corner of his eyes and notice she is lost in something but doesnt get she lost in the project which he is discussing ..when maan was finished,all went back..

At the end of day,except maneet all left office..maan who was working on lappy stopped n saw his shivering hands..he looked at geet who was watching him..he again tried to type..he opened his draw n saw his wine there..his hands itched to take it n drink it..but before geet he cant..

He started to fight with himself n atlast his helplessness won..he took the bottle n opened up..

Geet who was watching him saw his eyes fixed on his draw for a long time.she saw him taking the alcohol...so she came near him n stopped him ..

Maan gave her a pleading look..

Maan:pls moon..just 1 sip i swear i will not drunk more then that...

Geet:no maan..its dangerous for u..

Maan:see my hands are shivering..pls let me have it..

She can see the same crazy maan who behaved like a maniac last night..she must stop him..

Geet:maan,lets go home..

Maan was in his own land..he did not hear her..

Maan:pls give me permission for today..

Geet:maan,u said u will get out of this habit'

Maan:yaa i gave but i asking u for one sip..i will die if i dont drink it now geet close his mouth at once hearing his statement she herself dont know that his mere saying that word will snatch ground from her feet...but maan is too engrossed in his craving to notice this

Geet remove her palm from his lips and took his shivering hands in hers n entwingled with hers..she gently rubbed his hands n massaged it lightly..it felt gud for him..still the shiver was there.

Maan:pls..moon.

Geet hushed him.

Geet:till I am with u,u will not touch this moonshine..help me to keep my promise which I gave to dadi..

Maan tried to control himself for her his hold on her was tightening.. she closed her eyes to tolerate the pain given by him..her hands were turning blue..

Geet:aahh..

Maan left her when he heard her scream,which came out when uncontrollable for her..

He went n stood near the windows holding the steel rods on it..he want to control,but its not in his hands..his hands shiver was making him more vulnerable..he turned often only his looks were on wine..geet took it n threw it in dustbin..

Geet:where else u have kept..

Maan:pls moon don't do it..i want it..cant u see how I am shivering..

Geet opened all other cupboards..everything was arranged neatly by files'geet saw fridge she opened it n saw the storage of alcohols..

Geet:ok say how to clear all this..

she can feel his attempt of controlling..he bit his lips to control more..it bleeded..

maan gave her a pleading look..his hands were turning red n his lips bleeded n blood started to ooze down his chin..

geet panicked seeing him struggling so much..he avoided her gaze n looked at the sky..

she came to him n took her pallu to wipe his blood..maan stopped her..

maan:moon pls..i cant ..pls let me go in my way..

geet looked at him n said

geet:did u let me go in my way..

maan:moon its not time to talk about right or wrong.geet said yes its not time to think about right or wrong..once u r wrong,then always u r..u cant correct it..

she said thinking about her life...if its parents,self respect or ur virgin. once lost cant be gained..when its already wrong u can repeat it..even if it kills ur heart..to save hundreds u can repeat it..

geet cupped his face'n took his bleeding lips in hers'first maan startled.. atpresent he is in vulnerable condition..geet was repeating last night..it is the only way to calm his sense. he is also a man...maan again started to loose himself in her n started responding her..as he started to lose on her,he became wild in his passion.geet did not complain him.the kiss gave him pleasure..making him forget what he wants..he pulled her by waist close to him n sucked ,n nibbled her passionately..both parted for air..maan took entry in her mouth..she let him do what he wants as she is the one started now..she took his tongue in her mouth..both were lost in each other..one kiss converted to other n it became endless..she also lost herself responding him with equal passion..they lost track of time..both kept on kissing,nibbling,sucking ,toying n thrusting each others tongue..maan was fully under her control as she kept on holding him close to her..they took certain breaks for air n soon again they were lost in each other...both were kissing for long time..but they don't know they were expressing their love..so only it was turning to hrs n they couldn't part..

geet was feeling a new sensation rushing in her body..she tried to reason it..he is getting diverted because of this'but maan..somewhere deep he knew,she is his medicine than dr.prescription..he controlled in that state too not to proceed ending in love making n hurt her..

maan was keeping his head on shoulders n panting..

he looked calm..n peaceful..his hands were still entwingling with hers n she felt still shiver in him..

geet:lets go to our home maan..(did she said ours home)

maan:ya..

both went back n freshed up..geet went n helped nakul in dinner..she came to their room with food..both had silently..the air was thick..maan was now thinking..why her nearness affects him.

Geets spoon fell down..she bent n took it..maan looked at her..her cleavage was visible to him..it made him hardened immediately..she always had this effect on her..maan took his gaze from her skin n continued the dinner.he looked at her swollen lips.. why he did not stop her..am I misbehaving with her again..when a girl initiates how can a man stop..i got carried away..i must not have done that'he cant say he repented it..but loved it..only he was thinking what geet must have thought about him..

Geet was thinking same. why it continued for a long time..when it must have come to end soon ..she was also lost in his passion..

Both finished the dinner n geet gave him his tablets..n both silently went to bed..they did not talk much..maan was facing his back to her.he was not able to sleep..he was holding the pillows in his fists..to stop his shiver..she remembered the last day..so she leaned on the bed post ..she took his head n placed on her laps ..she released his grip from pillow n made it encircle around her waist..

Maan:moon y r u making it harder for me..he said helplessly..

Geet:maan,u slept yesterday like this..just think me now as the pillow u r holding..do u want me to sing'she asked threading his hair..he looked into her eyes n she looked into his'maaahiii)

Both were looking at each other..only their hearts sound was there in the room..they only knew how both can sooth their pain..how the closeness gives peace to them..

They both dosed off lost in each other'

The next morning both were sleeping cuddling to each other..maan opened his eyes,,to see her beautiful face..her messed up hair also was adding beauty to her..missing his warmth geet was searching him in sleep..when maan neared her she again cuddled to him n slept again..maan held her n smiled..

She is like a child sometimes..but behaves matured..

He pecked her forehead..he felt gud holding her n watching her every morning in his arms..geet woke up..

Maan:gud morning..

Geet:gud morning..

She went to washroom..when she came out she was looking pale..she went to wardrobe n searched something..maan who came all ready asked her what she is searching..

Geet: wo..w o..

Maan:what..u want something??????

Geet:whisper..

Maan:I never whisper,,I always use this tone only..and u dont need to hesitate to ask me something if u want something just tell me ill bring moon at ur door..

Geet slapped her head..st:whether really he don't know or making fun of me..and what moon at door is he think himself any superman aur something i just simplly need whisper...

Maan:moon..what happened..tell me what u want and say it clearly not whispering

Geet:I want whisper..i got periods..she said straight n turn around to facing her back to him she is feeling shy when she see him from corner of her eyes he is also turning red n feeling embarrassed,

Maan:hmm.wo..there are no women here..u know..ok let me send someone n get u..i mean ur..

Geet nodded her head..

Maan went down n called a servant..

Maan:Deepak

D:ji sir.

Maan:go to..shop n buy..

He stopped..can he say he must go n buy whisper..then it will be embarrassing for geet also..

Maan:nothing u go..i ll buy myself..

Deepak looked at him weird..

Maan himself went to nearby shop n bought one for geet..

Maan :moon..here it is..check if its right or not..

Geet opened the paper wrapped over it..n took out..

geet:ya..

both were not looking at each other feeling shy..finally maan run from there not bearing more embressment

dadi was watching it through the window..

dadi:hmm not bad..my grandson..the great msk went to shop to buy whisper..maan..i know u well..u r in love with her..n ur selection is also not bad..

Edited by vrinda22 - 7 years ago

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