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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 4 - pm is mislabeled cl3, sowie




Hey everyone!

Seems like you guys are enjoying my cutest jhalli and fighter Maan

A twist is coming up with this update.

Please keep pouring your excitement for the plot and characters and I will keep posting updates quickly.

You do know it is a ROM COM right?

Hope you are ready for some fun along with some love to come 😉

PM WILL ONLY BE SENT TO THOSE WHO COMMENT.

Avi
Edited by dqno1 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks again for the lovely comments and likes everyone 😃

By the way Daadi ko kuch nahi hoga so don't go getting anxious about it
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi25

Ch 3

What a dhamakrdaar twist
The way you have described his feelings, his thinking, care and love for geet in his puberty is awesome

He is shattered with the thought of any harm to geet by the goons
That only for a chain
And that was the moment of realizareal
How much her existence mean to him

First love humans can't forget
Same applies to Maan
So after seven years
Still he longs for her
And
Babaji sabki sunte hain
Aur
He finds her in his farm house
With iconic candle scene
You have made this update heavenly
Tum meri mangetar banogi
Yahan tak to thik tha
Par jhoothi bolne ki kys jaroorat thi
😡
Kair ab ab sae hai to milan bhi hoga hi
Waiting


@bold: Thank u 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: its_me

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">But the ever intelligent Geet Handa was back with her black magic theory...🤣</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">The song was so apt... It was conveying the emotions so beautifully...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">Well... They meet again... No matter when n how... People who are meant to be... Bump into each other someway or the other...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">Waiting for the next part already !!!</font>
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Thanks so much 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiyaji

Wow another amazing update chapter 3 was brilliant

Haaye am fida on maan he so cute our ganguli
Uff geet and her black magic
Wow they going get engage
And thank you for pm keep writing god bless you.


Thank u 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


so glad u r enjoying it 😆[/QUOTE

U r green hoping for updtt...😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Chapter 3

LOved the intense feelings Maan felt when he saw her scared...
glad that he decided to play safe...I do not doubt his strength to fight those people but when in danger one should always play with mind rather muscles...and that too Geet was with him...nice move that he decided to stay in dark...
Aww the teengae boy felt good to be a protector...nice...yes the feelings he has for her are beyond attraction...loved the moment when he realized that...his anger was cute...but poor Geet...she is attached to that chain...her mother's memories...
Mere Baare mein nahi sochti was just too awww...loved that whole conversation...:)
and how he scolded her to use the main road was sweet too...
chalo atleast she got to know his name...vrna saari umar Ganguly sunne milta...the fact that he laughed at being called Ganguly and did not get angry was cute too...sahi hai itne saalo se the real Ganguly is getting her curses...:P
Maan is a gone case...and Geet thinks he is expert in some black magic...uff kya hoga is ladki ka...

(I love the song Phir Le Aya Dil...lovely lyrics and awesome Arijit's voice)

Dadima wants him to settled...unhe kya pata bichara Ganguly to apni triple chinny chin k upar atka hai...
God...had he taken some effort to get more aquainted with Geet then yeh sab nahi hota na...ab tak Dadima ki wish bhi poori ho chuki hoti...LOL...
Maan has changed...Poor him...did not like that he no longer plays cricket too...sad...
OH MY GOD...they met and how...lovely yar...
ab Babaji ne uski wish poori kr hi di...got Geet as the prospective bride,,,,lovely yar...
but why did he has to say jhooti...yar yeh Maan na...kuch nahi ho skta...
but am glad they met...and jhoota hi sahi, they are gonna be engaged...

Loving this Avi...:)

So glad to hear that 😃
I am lucky to have readers who can pour their feelings out and let me know how they feel
Warna writing would not be so fun 😃
Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

U r green hoping for updtt...😳


yup coming soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 4

Avi yaaar...first things first...I loved the updates name you have given...LOL...Kaala Jaadu...uff...kahan se laati ho yeh naam...

about the update
kya sahi dramatic setting mein tumne meeting krwai dono ki...with the wind and all...nice...
and does she not know about the job of fake fiancee..she seems surprised...
Navratri seems to be a fun festival...I really wanna play Dandiya some day...
Ohk the uninterested Maan suddenly was interested in Dandiya all because of one name...Waah beta...oh I absolutely loved his inner talks...he is fighting a battle with his self control...funny...:P
itna analyze krne baad bhi he asked about the time...LOL...Maan gya kaam se...
chalo Navratri k baahane he is having a good view of Geet dancing and having fun...majnu Maan...he has started to notice even the minute details about her,...that is nice...
Geet is so naive...grabbing attention but is still obvilious to things...
Maan and possessiveness suit each other...always love when he is jealous...
but woaah...she slapped him...yar ab toh the egoistic khurana ko gussa aana hi tha...
she too started to look for him...chalo sorry k liye hi sahi but kahin se toh shuruwaat hui...haayee...he ignored her...chalo itna toh bnta tha...after all he saved her from embarrasment...ab itna attention toh he deserves na...hahah
kitna bhi gussa ho...ofcourse he will not let her pair with Rahul na...LOL...
she apologized and that too so cutely...adorable she is...
and Maan took full advantage of her innocence and use shart k chakkar mein fasa liya...chaalu Maan...
Geet nadan bachi also started feeling things but use kaun smjhaye yeh Kaala Jaadu nahi balki Pyar and attraction ka Jaadu hai...hahah
I loved this line...it made me go Aww..:_
She had him wrapped around her little finger and she thought he was doing black magic?
not just the game...she has win him over and that too without even realizing...
Did he just ask her out on a date...uff...tauba...
and the jhalli Geet did not get the hint...kya hoga iska...
his way of making her fingers better was aww...Kash mjhe bhi ki aise better feel krwaye...main toh roz ungli pe chot kha lungi...:P

present...
Uff Dadi in ICU...since u mentioned Dadima is going to be fine so am counting on you to make her all better...:) I miss her on this story...
ok so her being there was all a confusion...oho...tabhi main sochu Geet ko pta kaise nahi job baare...
Adi sir please don't curse Pinky...she has done the cutest disaster ever...lovely...
Edited by sahibasharma - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update!!
I don't think Maan has seen Geet yet. Pinky by mistake has done something right by sending Geet to farmhouse.

In past, Maan is so cute being 18 years old and in love. Geet has recognized him and will agree to be his fiancee.

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