Chura Liya Tumne Jo Dil Ko - repost - Epi pg 138* OSR link pg 149

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hottyangel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Nice update. Maan saved geet and she is grwatful to him. Leap of time has changd many thongs in their lives. Geet has moved out yo some other place and maan became the MD of KC. Dadima is sick and she wanted maan to get married and settled. Voila adi brought geet as his fake financee. Eagerly waiting for the next

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Siriusly Serious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Ch 2

Haha.amazing.cant stop smiling while reading.khajuraho,black magic everything we're spot on.update soon and do pm

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Siriusly Serious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Plz give password for Ch 3

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SGAYATRI

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Oye Ganguli really Geet calls him with these name can't stop laughing my son was asking why i am laughing. Maan saved Geet but still see thinks he is doing black magic present interesting Geet being jhooti mangeter.

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Sahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#155

I am always excited when I see a change in the topic name with "Updating status"

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Waiting Avi

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vasavi_sri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

Not able to connect to word express

So will read once the problem is solved

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Siriusly Serious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Ch 3

Wow just wow.very well written.no beating around the bush.

When started I didn't thought that I would lyk this story this much.

Waiting for NXT part.update soon.

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Awesome update

Maan saved Geet and was angry for risking

Her life for the chain its the memory of her mom

Maan was worried for Geet's safety but he was

Satisfied when he made the goon hurt and

Run away

Geet doesn't know the name of the person who

She is fighting and called Ganguly to thank him

She is so innocent still thinking of black magic

Maan was back college but his first love was

Not there they have shifted to their hometown

After darji retired

Maan he wants a fake mangater to show to dadima

And in all ADI had brought her

Quite interesting

Thanks for the pw

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maansi25

@maansi25

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Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Ch 3

What a dhamakrdaar twist

The way you have described his feelings, his thinking, care and love for geet in his puberty is awesome

He is shattered with the thought of any harm to geet by the goons

That only for a chain

And that was the moment of realizareal

How much her existence mean to him

First love humans can't forget

Same applies to Maan

So after seven years

Still he longs for her

And

Babaji sabki sunte hain

Aur

He finds her in his farm house

With iconic candle scene

You have made this update heavenly

Tum meri mangetar banogi

Yahan tak to thik tha

Par jhoothi bolne ki kya jaroorat thi

😡

Kair ab samne hai to milan bhi hoga hi

Waiting

Edited by maansi25 - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Feynmann
Ch 3
Wow just wow.very well written.no beating around the bush.
When started I didn't thought that I would lyk this story this much.
Waiting for NXT part.update soon.

@bold: Thank you, I think 😆