Mortal Promises!#T6!*UPDATED CH64@PG 125 ||23rd Nov 2021

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
wow thanks for so many updates!!! shall read and comment Ipti

Waiting for your comments!! Hope you are happy with such big updates!! I slept twice while updating!! It's so big lol!!!! 🤣

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#292

@WaveTeal appreciate the updates! Of cos I am ecstatic! at least you managed to update!!! 😉

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#293

part 57

awesome update

geet ask maan to do situps as punishment... hehehe... so funny

i like it

maan comment on geet's punishment... that was so hilarious ...

geet is so innocent but still very much understanding... u describe her feelings so well... love it

geet understand maan so well

the way u r write about maaneet relation depth n bond its amazing... where there is no scope for silly MU ... only Trust... Awesome

geet lovingly ask maan to say whole thing n maan also continue with details ... maan avoid only that part which could hurt geet

like that... caring Msk

u wrote maan saying whole matter part so well... perfectly written

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#294

Chapter 57

Part 1

Beautiful gif👏

Marvelous update! wonderfully written!

loved Geet's punishment for Maan! Only Mishty can get the great MSK to do as she wants! Ha ha Maan scared of Geet!!! 😆 Lovely moments!

was surprised that Geet needed time to assess what he told her but glad she knows that the love he has for her is above everything!

Adore the love and trust that they have for each other! she knows her Maan so well! they are an ideal couple! Maan is just awed by her! admire Maaneet!

Geet wants to know further what happened!

liked Maan's promise to his Mishty! Can understand why Maan took so long to tell her! he does not want to hurt her and see her in pain!

he did not expect things to get so out of hand! but Sameera...😡 crossed all limits! hated that Sameera accused Maan! glad that Maan told Geet almost everything! Sameera indeed tested his patience!

I agree with Maan that Geet would be hurt if she knows what Sameera said about her!

Geet's questions are valid.

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#295

Chapter 57

Part 2

Splendid update! excellently written!

Maan cannot fathom Sameera's behavior! the proposal came as a great shock to Maan!! and I understand why! he sees Sameera as a friend and even treats as like his sister!

Loved how Maan explained to Geet the friendship he shares with Sameera! they clicked as felt she was different than girls! she never threw herself on him nor sought his attention.

enjoyed Maaneet's banter and the stolen kisses! Only Geet can make MSK run after her!

Maan was close to Sameera as she was a family friend! this is why he is protective of her! so Aayan likes Sameera! sad that Sameera could not see this! will Aayan approach Sameera?

its surprising that Maan never saw that Sameera's changing feelings for him! but he is too much into his Mishty!

Geet was right about how Sameera fell for him!

Sameera could never accept Maan's refusal! Thank God Adi's call saved Maan! but Sameera was relentless! Maan was forced to have a drink with her! Maan only wanted to chat with her as she saw she was about to break down!

Oh no Maan broke his promise to Geet!

Liked how he cutely apologises and justifies!

fascinating picture⭐️👏

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#296

stupendous precap...already waiting!!!

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#297

part 58

superb update

geet said so sincerely that she is proud of their relation n also add her naughtiness in it... lovely

oohh... geet is so sweet she is thinking all about sam n her care, her pain

geet want to set aryan n sam love story by her filmy gyan...LOL

love geet every gesture u wrote... simply amazing

geet comment on maan's star ... HAHAHAHA... so funny... loved it

maaneet got interrupted by vijay's call... still maan manage to do some romance with his little wifey

maaneet with elders... family time... i like that

maan star at geet n give her tuff looks ... geet is so shy ..ooohhh

love madhu nature... she is more like geet

in madhu's talk geet also say about her views without thinking... hehehe

dadi want to pull maan's leg but maan being maan did reverse ... poor dadi...

maan left everything on dadi left n geet did same

superb updates

thanks for double updates

update next part soon

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#298

shall read Chapter 58 tomorrow and comment! thanks😃

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Firjannat

@Firjannat

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#299

Thank you for this long updates and please give the next update quickly.Waiting eagerly.

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#300

Ch 57

I was eagerly waiting for this and must say that the wait was worth it. Such a complex issue and you handled it so beautifully. 👏 It was brilliant the way you again showed the love and trust in their relation. Geet is such a pure soul, she takes everything at face value. Loved the way Maan told her all from his side and she understood his anxiety, his worry and his disbelief over Sam's behavior. Thanks for such honest emotions from both. Loved it.