MG Shots : Losing myself in your...Love||Updated Fourth shot - Page 5

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

hey Marium... can you please add page number on title
it's easy to find update

Originally posted by: maansi25

Hi

For the newcomer concept is different

Emotions are well described

Lovely update

Originally posted by: taahir004

So Maan is the Landlord's son and he has met with an accident

Geet learning that he is on life support but at the same time she realized

she is in love with Maan

that has to be the worst feeling ever , when the person's life is in danger at that moment you realize you love that person

I'm not even sure how the different emotions the conflict of love and pain will hit at her

knowing she is on the verge to lose her love to death and all she really can do is pray

the pain that she is going through now is unbearable

how does one live with that type of pain

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the pm Marium!

Beautiful emotional update! superbly written!

Geet's feelings well portrayed! she realises she loves Maan! he is on life support after meeting in an accident!

Feeling for Geet! she just realised she loves Maan but is on the verge of losing him!

Hope Maan gets better!

update soon

Originally posted by: Nefret19

Congratulations on your beautifully emoted story my dearie:) I loved it...I found it very uniquely written and conceived. Such intense emotions so beautifully felt and written it moved me to tears. The agony that Geet is going through...that unbearable pain that has now engulfed her in darkness...A hugely talented writer you are my dearie...Awesome awesome awesome:):):)