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Posted: 6 years ago

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Prev Chapter 29 - Page 42 | Next Chapter 31 - Page TBA

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Edited by WaveTeal - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Precap


“Hi Geet…” Looking behind Maan’s back, Naina curved her lips in a smile!

“Hello Mam…” Footsteps came closer as a scrutinizing Maan focused at Geet’s face only to get flashed with her dazzling smile!!

“How sweet!” Sarcasm seeped through his disgusted voice as he smirked with his eyebrows raised, “ Awww,,,So now this is mature?? Greeting each other sooo cordially!! I am impressed!! I wish I could be this mature!!”

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Done with the update - PM tomorrow

Please ignore errors as it's not proofread


Next update>>
after good amount of response within next week

Edited by WaveTeal - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

@ WaveTeal.... thanks a million!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it

I'm speechless

Jis tarah you show Geet's innocense and naive love

Their love is so deep

But I think ki jamana sucche pyaar ko chain se kaha jeene deta hai

Aisa hi khuch hua hoga Maaneet ke saath bhi

Loved Daadi ma and Maan's convo

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

@ WaveTeal.... thanks a million!

My pleasure and extremely sorry for making you all wait!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: manjeet6

Awesome update

Loved it

I'm speechless

Jis tarah you show Geet's innocense and naive love

Their love is so deep

But I think ki jamana sucche pyaar ko chain se kaha jeene deta hai

Aisa hi khuch hua hoga Maaneet ke saath bhi

Loved Daadi ma and Maan's convo

Thank you so much Manjeet you are very kind...
I was not sure about the update as I am yet to read it with a concentrated mind..Glad that you loved it...
Please press like to both parts dear...


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Posted: 6 years ago

Awwww thank you sooo much for updating this (when I had almost given up on this lovely story) thank you thank you 😊.. You should have seen my excitement on reading that “updated” on this story. That too when I thought of not bothering you anymore 😒 ... I don’t know what it is about this ff that makes me so crazy abt it... could be Macho Maan’s character, or the third wheel and the triangle concept, or the sexiness between Maaneet, or the way he hides his love and keeps hurting her, or our naive and sexy Geet... ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Why why does Maan behave so rookha and Dusht to her 😩 Its getting so painful for me to read how lowly he speaks of her, more so in trying to hide his overwhelming love for her .. Dadima in all senses trying to explain to him and make him see things that are right in front of his eyes yet this stuck up ass is in his one track mind that Geet is playing with him 😼

The second part, seeing the gif I became so happy thinking Dadima’s lecture might have finally worked on him and he pampered his love, only later realized that’s an instance of the past🙄 the past was sweet, with an insecure Maan and our bholi Geet trying to assure him in her own innocent way that their love will have a happy ending.

Pls respond well to this ppl I hope to read the next one soon 🙏

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: babelicious

Awwww thank you sooo much for updating this (when I had almost given up on this lovely story) thank you thank you 😊.. You should have seen my excitement on reading that “updated” on this story. That too when I thought of not bothering you anymore 😒 ... I don’t know what it is about this ff that makes me so crazy abt it... could be Macho Maan’s character, or the third wheel and the triangle concept, or the sexiness between Maaneet, or the way he hides his love and keeps hurting her, or our naive and sexy Geet... ❤️

You can always pester me as I don't feel bothered at all...🤗
As long as am here you can be assured that I will be completing this...

Thanks for all the love that you have for this ff. But please as always I would ask you to keep your expectations low regarding the upcoming plots...Because things always might not end as you have expected...But yes there would be a lot more cuteness, rudeness, sexiness 🤣

Late update - It's just that you see the truth to be told I write this one very different than other stories...And it's a very dark plot which will be revealing...But seeing the less response had made me very appalled.

But I had decided that from May I will update this regularly.

And when it was not being updated for days and suddenly I couldn't decide to update this where the ones with regular updates are affected by the revamp..You get my point?? That's is why I had to wait...Both MP and DTE I am updating now since the site is a bit functional...Hopefully I will keep updating...But if the likes margin is less than 50 then I don't know!!! Right now I will just update some chapters regularly and estimate response data. You should be happy that very soon explicit ☺️18+ is upcoming...Chalo tab dekhenge kiya hota hain..Pw toh srif active readers ko hi milenge!! 🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

My pleasure and extremely sorry for making you all wait!!!

no worries, you updated that is enough! please do not apologize

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