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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Thank you so much for updating this story
truly appreciate it
and I'm sorry for late response

Thanks dearie...I appreciate your comments as well...
Don't say sorry, can totally understand you!!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

appreciate the update!! thanks! reading now! 😃




My pleasure!! 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 29


Part 1

Amazing gif!! ⭐️

Tremendous update! excellently written! 👏

Adore Maan's care for Geet! why is she so impulsive? thank God she is fine!

Great seeing this teasing playful Maan! Geet gets angry so quickly!

nice seeing Maan voice out his feelings! she did scare him! her actions did hurt him! will she ever understand him?

Geet has no other choice but to pull this stunt! love makes one do stupid things!

Maan was right that Rano was worried! Geet is so stubborn but at lest she listened to Maan!

Maan's thoughts well portrayed!

wow Maan wants to hug Geet! so sweet of him to ask permission! liked Geet teasing Maan! he is so cute when he is shy!

love Geet cribbing to her Babaji!


Glad that you like the GIF...and update!!

Geet being impulsive - because that's variety!! Plus she is young and a little spoiled brat as well!! 😆
It's not that she doesn't understand him. It's more like that she wants him to break his shell..

Thank you very much for this lovely comment!!! 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 29


Part 2

Fascinating Gif!!

Marvelous update! beautifully written!

nice seeing this bold Maan! Intense hug! glad he made her promise not to that again! she let's her anger overpower her!

Loved how Maan confessed his love for her! his confession was unique!

Geet pleasantly surprised! superb moments!

enjoyed their banter!

at least now Maan is sharing his feelings with her.

they love each other so much! finally he says those three words!

glad that Maan took the initiative and kissed her!

now seeing them so happy!

Present - they were so so happy and could not live without each other then what happened? why is Maan adamant on marrying Neha when all he wants is Geet?

hot passionate moments! when did they get so close?

Geet ecstatic at her victory as Maan is with her!

Dadi interrupted at the wrong time...

lovely picture!


Again thank you very much...

I can't call Maan bold yet...He is more comfortable with Geet now... That whole scenario was his breaking point on this certain stage!!! He does love her very much!!

am ecstatic that you found the confession unique!!

Happy reading..Shall update soon!!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: hira2010

Awesome updates
Maan take promise and ask her not to do anything like this again
I love their cutest past
Present is hot
But fearing for heart break
Who will gonna break first

For your peace let me answer this...It's Maan who is going to break first!!! 😆

Thanks for your comment baby!!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: babelicious

Awww yes she is Maan ki Jaan and he finally admitted it to her. While the past was so mushy and romantic and endearing to watch their rootna manana & acceptance of their new blossomed love, the present was so sensuously erotic that I couldn't stop getting images of Maan & Geet getting so f**kin intimate with each other. There seems to be no boundaries in the way they play with their bodies, and, well, their feelings, smh..

wonderful update, thank you for considering this so story after so long. Eagerly waiting for the next update.. please write both past & present together like today.. it got more interesting reading this way


I loved your comment...I just loved it...
You have understood the essence of this story very well...👏

Yes. I hope I can continue this more often...

Glad that you like the past present fusion but many people used to find is confusing which is why now I try to mingle both era's a little less!!


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Piaa_21

The past part was solo sweet...maan was really like his name...MAAN...PRIDE...RESPECT...GUROOR...A SENSE OF STRENGTH...WE AS a reservation we read we feel proud that a man could also be lk this ...And respect his girl lk anything...Past was sooo beautiful...He lobes her a lot...JD it gives us positivity...But when I see present I can't digest it...Such low words for geet...He has made her a sex object...He will regret it a lot...A woman dignity is evrything

Aww...Love your description about Maan's name...I have a huge crush on his name lol!!! 😆

Hmm has he made her a sex object?? It's not that simple dear...She can say no..he is not holding her captive or anything...Everything what is happening that's consensual!

Regret - that's for sure!! 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Piaa_21

And I would really lk to mention as a writer ...U really hv a very wonderful way of portraying emotions...The way u hv characterised MAAN and geet in past...It's awesome...U hv portrayed their emotions soon beautifully...Kisi ko bhi padh ke pyaar ho jaye...U r awesome...But please in present times don't degrade geet lk this...I feel so hurt when I see her position

I am overwhelmed by you kind words...really appreciate it ❤️...
Glad that you think this way!! And hope I can continue to entertain you!!😳




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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Piaa_21

I would lk MAAN to break first...What geet did that he became soon cold hearted...But still he cannot use such words for her

For now be relieved that it's indeed Maan who will break first!! And what kind of words dearie???
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Posted: 6 years ago
thanx for pm
geet is realy naughty or say pagal
atlast maan agreed with her

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