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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jssood

part 1 geets aloofness and silence treatment for maan he was affected by this

and badly wanted that geet lashout on him
part 2 he go to gwet room with slice of cake at 11.45
so that no one notice him
that was cute
he want that geet stay away from him
in other side he didnot like geet like this
now where is our geet
she suffer a lot
thanx for pm and long long update

Yupe you are correct on this...But isn't it the very nature of love?? You want to stay away..but when the person you love also treats you the same then you can't endure!! Love is a total equation of reciprocation!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tammana.m


fabolous both parts😊

seeing maan with meera n garima it some how hurt geet
and the way garima wish him on his bday
but her silence disturb him to..
bt is not he towanted same \geet should away from him
and another part he go to geet room without anyone knowledge with cake piece and
her writting letter on him and phone
which she gifted..its quite surprising to see crazy geet in past
waiting for nxt


Glad that you liked the updates..Thanks for the kind words!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: curtus

God i hate if

Mera sara comment del ho gya😭

Ohh... 😕 Copy paste karke rakha kar baby always...You usually comment big so don't right away post them yaar!!
Edited by WaveTeal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
hi, really appreciate response to comments!
glad that u are updating?? will u b updating MP and His Ilicit Conditions??😉
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi, really appreciate response to comments!

glad that u are updating?? will u b updating MP and His Ilicit Conditions??😉

Yes I would be updating each of them one by one...😃
Mp would be late... The os shall be updated within 2 days I am expecting!! 😳
Edited by WaveTeal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: curtus

Chapter 27 part 1


Awe adorable heart melting pic
Outstanding mind boggling update. Excellent writing👏

Maan introducing geet with meera that is something lol
But did he notice that she is angry with the 3rd woman involvement?
Ow he told meera about geet? That's really surprising not only for geet but for me too
Meera seems like a warm friend but geet getting jealous seeing maan so lively around his friend
Ye sab ho hi raha tha k she faced the bomb of his bday oh no
Ab bechari kaise handle karegi khud ko she even denied going out with maan's friends
Comn maan ab to samajh jao tumhari enchantress gussa hai tumse
The name of this chapter has caught my eye aisa kia karne wali hai geet? Omg
Sab kuch ho hi raha tha that now even garima 2 wished maan in such lavish way nd made things more sad for geet
But i think geet ne maan ko pucha hi nhi hoga about his bday nd maan to obviously khud se jake nehi kahega that today is my bday
Ok so finally maan did sense that geet is upset bcoz she didn't even wish him
Geet ki craziness is making me very confused bcoz i really cant understand maan's anger in present now
Even in past geet was d crazy onE
In max stories maan is d possessive one n loves geet more but this 1 is certainly a different one
Bold geet and crazy geet also head over heels in love with maan but maan is making her upsetonlyy
Let's see what he does with d cake


Thanks a lot for this outstanding comment!!! 👏 Glad that you find this part as adorable!!

Lol Maan toh samajh bhi gaya aur aapni enchantress ka gussa pighlane ki cute try bhi kiya!!
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Geet's plight and past / present - you will soon get over your confusion..The name itself is enigma so confusion is bound to happen!!

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: curtus

Part 2


Wowww astounding gif. Loved it superb
Fantastic part. Satiesfying nd loving. Hats off 2 ur writing.

Aweee how cute is that? Maan brought cake for geet
This is so much cute n lovely
He does get her psychology but his hands r tied with responsibility
How cutely he stammered when geet was showing cold shoulder nd the way he offered the cake was too much adorable
Geet licking his fingers☺️ so naughty i love this bold geet
He was so much affected by her that she ended up in his arms nd he was about 2 kiss her
Outstanding dhak dhak moments baby n superbly written
I just love the threshold this story has between past and present
It's amazing 2 see how their teenage hearts craved for each other
Maan came back 2 his room nd now he is running out of patience
Its really not an easy situation for him bcz he is extremely innocent nd good by nature who loves geet purely
His love is pure
I have read dte from d begining nd i noticed one thing in d past there was still no trace of maan where he is lusting geet
His love is so pure
He is in a very difficult situation
So geet wrote him a letter
It made me so sad reading this

Glad that you liked the GIF...

Thanks again for this amazing comment!!! 👏

Sorry that the letter made you sad!! 😕
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: curtus

Geet's letter has made me so much sad i can't even tell

She was head over heels in love with maan
The way she described everything its heart warming
So much love pain nd rejection
Yearning for him that man
She wanted a cure from him
Really maan would u cure her? I really wonder what went wrong in between them
Why did maan not go to the cinema with her?
The twist nd turn is awesome
She even gave her own phone to him
Nd as if she had known that maan would not come
I loved each word she has wrote in the letter yes it was not a dramatic letter but a heart wrenching one filled with the pain of one sided love
But geet ko kia malum maan loves her equally if not more
Maan is trying hard to stay away from her but jab wo dur hoti hai to kitna panic ho jata hai

Sometimes it doesn't need drama or poetry...
Plain words can also mean the deepest of sorrow!! I loved your analysis over Geet's letter..Thanks baby!!

Indeed he is the cure for her and vice versa!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Loved it .how overly possessive she is to a limit of being obsession...she really must have done something extremely drastic and hurt him for him to retaliate now...and make him hate her aooo much...

On the other hand felt bad for her too the only one not knowing about his birthday and him talking so easily and freely with everyone else except her must hurt her a lot

She needs to stop and think why that is so...maybe it is something about her or their relationship...

Poor maan he too is shaken by her and thus not able to behave the same way with her...

Question is will they both together work...she is volatile and he is a quiet volcano...hmmm


They are like fire and ice...Either they will work like magic or destroy each other, devour each other's existence!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: JareenDD

This is such an interesting ff. I am really loving it. The characters, theme and situation is new. I do not know how to express but there is which increase my heart beat. Frankly speaking i have never felt like this while reading any story. There is certain kind of uneasiness. Something that is holding on to you.

Welcome to DTE...
Thank you for your kind words...Hope you would continue to shower your love and support!! 😳

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