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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: JareenDD

In every chapter things are uncertain. When i read i don't want guess what is next. Things are moving in very realistic way and i like the uncertainty in this ff. It shows how people react to love in different way. I feel sympathy towards both the characters. You are giving them equal rights.

Decoding is right word for this ff. You are decoding the feelings.
In new chapter i feel sympathy towards geet and i feel i may have reacted the same or more violently. When u love someone u want have certain rights on him. Here maan is pushing her react in such a way. I want to ask why can't he understand her. As a lover he should have open her gift. He is not shows some normal curiosity signs that one expects from her or his lover.

i am very glad that you could relate to Geet!!

Thanks for your comment!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: JareenDD

On geet i can understand her age and his reaction towards make her pushy. Someone has take a step forward. I don't think she feel loved. Maan behave like a stranger. He is happy with other friends including girls. In current situation i don't feel he is shy with girls he reacts such a way just with geet.

There is lot of things i want to discuss but lets end it here. Interesting ff anf looking forward to it. Hope it satisfy my curiosity. Right now m voting for geet. Not only geet maan is confusing me too.

Awesome work... You deserve more comments n likes

No Maan doesn't behave like a stranger... it's just that Geet wants more into their relationship from Maan..

Maan is trying to be as normal as he can keeping his boundaries..But the intimacy and warmth that they shared in HP that is engraved in Geet's mind which is why she is being demanding towards Maan!!

About Meera - Maan is still that shy little boy that he is...His equation with Meera shall be revealed soon!!

Thanks for your comment!!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Feynmann

Read all the chapters.very different story must say .

Continue soon.
Coming to the story.does maan really love geet?There is a difference between what you say and what you do.it is like geet is behind him and he has no interest.i hope geet shows some self respect towards herself then only we can see what real man really wants.
Last but not the least I really hope they find out Annie .Otherwise the story will be unfulfilled.


Love has different shades and different meanings varying to person to person.. Some people wants to be consumed by love while some people finds Love in sacrificing!! That is what maan's current mindset is...

Can he be selfish and give in just like that??? him trying to distance himself is the thing shows how much he loves and not only loves but also respects Geet!!

Thanks for your comment...😃 Glad that you have also found this story as unique!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: foslaa

Chapter 26

Wow stunning update. Past and present together. enjoyed the incorporation very much. Brilliant writing👏 this story just gets more and more interesting with every update. So now it continues in past where geet pulled maan in a soul searing kiss to wish him good morning. Maan is very much affected by geet. He is lying. He doesn't hate her i feel. The relationship between maan and geet is intricate. In past and present both places geet is facing hardship. Maan is aloof. I am connecting more with geet now. The sindoor scene is excellent. I loved whole of it. Loved Geet's reaction. Her dialogues. Everything. The way maan got flabbergasted by her boldness its just awesome. In past she is inviting him to some party and as usual maan denied. His talks are quite funny though. I would like to mention somersome special here the way he talked with geet regarding disc it seems he is totally normal with geet. But then geet feels anger towards him for not giving her attention. Clear this to me pls. Is it because she wants him as a lover???
Last portion was so playful.


You have indeed caught a crucial thing..this is a tiny matter but intricate... Maan is totally normal with her but she doesn't want only that much from him...Yes she does want him as a lover hence is so much anger huff and imploration from her side!! Hope this clears any doubt..thanks for your amazing kind comment!


Originally posted by: foslaa

Chapter 27

Fantabulous. Quite many things happened in one update. Maan is cordial with his friends which is making geet quite furious. Specially his friendship with meera is making her jealous. But the best part is maan has told meera about geet and garima too. Poor geet she is so heart broken. The update is so much natural. Anyone at Geet's place would have more or less reacted like her as she didn't know maans birthday. She feels sad and he notices. One thing i didn't like is that he had so much problems going at disc with geet but now he is going with his friends in front of geet. Positive part is that maan realized Geet's sad demeanor. It was really so sweet of him to bring the cake to her. I am bowled over his adorable gesture. He cant see her upset for sure. But he is at a helpless situation. Maan needs to realise that avoiding geet is not going to make this situation right. Becoz they have already fallen for each other. Geet's letter that is heart wrenching. Indeed sad. She poured her poor soul into that letter. Its written mesmerisingly. Loved the long update. Thanks for pm. Wish to read the next update soon. Waiting.

Thank you so very much fro your kind warm words...Stay tuned to know if your anger on Maan stays or vanishes!!! 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Maan bday everyone knows about it but Girima gave gift of his choice books even

Maan was comfortable with his friends even they r girls to in his gang but with Geet he behaved differently geet wrote letter and told him hr feeling and gifted him hr mobile but he didn't bother to open it wgen she was missing then he realize


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

i don't get their relation

they love but the hate
but there is still no indifference so how can he say he has no feelings for her
the kiss says otherwise


He obviously loves her..Just immensely angry and upset with her...But time heals everything!!

their relation - It is an enigma!! 😆😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maanyouarehot

Nice update... Can't wait please update soon...

Thanks dear...
Hope to see more in depth comment from you!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Have just read your note on page 7
I would totally support any decision you make

Thanks dear for your support!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
thank you Iptida! cannot wait for the updates??? and Clandestine, AE, IA, EM and PD???? I am pushing my luck! 😉

sorry 4 the pms!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

wonderful update..loved both the part ..
present nd past together ..wow ..
in present or in past ..I can only see it's geet who was or is crazy for maan ..in past also she was the one who beared a lot to make maan accept his unsaid love ..nd even in present also she is the one who is bearing everything for her love so that maan accept his Love again...why only geet ?

what she did don't know but I can't see her like this ...with so much pain still she trying hard to fight for her love her maan ...I can't understand maan's hatered ..he get effected by her touch ..can't stay away from her but still hates her so much that don't forget to insult her everytime ..
what will geet do when maan will marry naina ? she has gone crazy in love ...
precp looks interesting .. another heartbreaking moment for geet ...
thanks for the pm dear ..
continue soon...

Why only Geet?? - Well because that's how the story is making progress...I have to balance it out...I just can't show Maan's side right away and build sympathy for him..

what ever happened in past is something for which I shall show both their perspectives equally...

As for now it's Geet..But don't worry Maan ka number bhi aayega!!! 😆

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