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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#451

Kisne pw diya poocha... Kyu khud ke pair par khuladi maar rahi hai... Hehe

Aage ka banners.. Lets see..pehle new story lijho to sahi

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
Kisne pw diya poocha... Kyu khud ke pair par khuladi maar rahi hai... Hehe
Aage ka banners.. Lets see..pehle new story lijho to sahi

😆😆

na pahle tu promise kar ki banner bana ke degi time par tabhi likhungi😉

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.
😆😆
na pahle tu promise kar ki banner bana ke degi time par tabhi likhungi😉

Remove the clause " time par"

Mujhr suig nahi karta wo

Baaki sab teek

Agreed😆

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

Remove the clause " time par"

Mujhr suig nahi karta wo

Baaki sab teek

Agreed😆

nahin

*TIME PAR* hi to highlighted word hai😆

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

nahin
*TIME PAR* hi to highlighted word hai😆

Haan har din ek update with new banner

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

Haan har din ek update with new banner

Lo jp ne contract le li

Badhaai ho

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

Lo jp ne contract le li

Badhaai ho

Haan done

Mujhe Kya problem hai

Main update ko divide kar doongi parts me

Tum apna socho😆

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#458

hi Rashmi!

glad my comment made you happy! 😊

I felt bad for the short comment and felt that your update deserved a better comment!! I was just tired yday! but that's no excuse!

will miss bf and gf!!

thanks for regularly updating and entertaining us! 🤗

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi Rashmi!
glad my comment made you happy! 😊
I felt bad for the short comment and felt that your update deserved a better comment!! I was just tired yday! but that's no excuse!

will miss bf and gf!!

thanks for regularly updating and entertaining us! 🤗

No writer can be disagreed with me that detailed comments on update mame them happy. We as writers just only need that.. Every reader shoul share their view about update what they liked and what they did not. It helps a writer to know the flaws as well as good points of update

Thanks once again chetna