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Posted: 5 years ago

Work in progress dear. Will post it very soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

All parts are too good

I have read all parts are one goes

Want to see how maan handle geet and why geet so blindly trust in akhil

Watting for update

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Sorry for the super delay

Part 68

Geet disgusted hoke wahan se chali gai

Maan glares menacingly at Akhil

Akhil smirks

Akhil- You don’t steal my stuff! She is my slave, she can’t be disobedient to me. You are just a nerdy boy. I always get what I want.You liked her, wanted to protect her. Now she hates you and she is back to me!And you my boy, can’t do anything. And the best part is, you have to stay hereand witness everything.

Maan walks out silently

Dekha idhar udhar par Geet dikhi nahi

He goes back to his desk

He calls her but gets no answer

He is feeling nothing drastic after the slap; he was more shocked at her confession of I loved you. He thinks, had she really or had she just believed that she did

Somewhere he had been prepared for this kind of reaction but not for this reason but yes the reaction…a much harsher reaction in fact when he had imagined Geet finding out who he really is and what he had really done

It hurt him...that he had hurt hurt her and that their golden days were over for some time now

But now he will do what had been left to do

Ek baari to Maan ko laga bhi tha ki Akhil se accident hua tha and there was no fault of his

But today seeing his smirking face he is all the more determined to follow through his plans

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Geet goes to hospital to meet her mother

G- Papa, kya hua ye sab. Maa aise?

Papa- Tumhari maa abhi thik hai. Tum bahar aao I need to talk to you

Dono bahar nikalte hain

Papa- Stop talking to that boy Maan and stop thinking about the guy. Akhil aur uski family ke bohot ehsaan hai hum par. Aur agar wo log kuch nahi chahte toh humein bhi waisa hi karna chahiye. Hamari poori family unpe dependent hai. Meri job, tumhari jon…hum sab…

She looks at her father then blurts

G- I cant. When I loved Akhil..i was always lonely sad miserable…but with Maan...I feel loved...and cared for

Her dad isn’t too sure about a guy she met a month ago

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Maan walks out of the office looking for Geet, wanting to straighten things out between them

He couldn’t find her anywhere

Collegues se poocha to pata chala ki wo to chali gai

Maan bike nikali

Geet ke ghar gaya

Par dekha lock hai

Akhil ke ghar gaya, socha wahan to koi naukar honge jinhe pata hoga

Naukar ne kaha ghar mein koi naa hai ji

Maan ne kaha ki main office se aaya hoon wo saamne ke log kaha gaye... unke liye packet deliver karne hai; urgent hai

Naukar ne kaha humein naahi pata...hum to naye hain

M-Koi aur hai jinhe pata ho?

Naukar ne kaha naa hai ji

Maan ne kaha ok I’ll come back tomorrow

Maan chala gaya

Bike thodi door park karke wahi mandraya kaafi der, hoping ki koi to ghar aaye he can catch up with that person and baat ho jaye

Par koi nai aya

Maan ne kuch der stones ke saath football match khela

Dopaher ki shaam, shaam ki raat hone ko thi

Maan ko laga ki ho sakta hai ki Geet wapas ghar jayeto get her things

Wahan toh he will definitely catch up with her

Toh wo phir seedha ghar chala gyaa

Bike park ki, bhaagkar andar gaya to check Geet ka saamanhai ya nahi

Par saamaan intact hai

Maan baar aa gaya ghar ke

Geet doesn’t’ come

Maan wahi ghar ke bahar wali bench par let jaata hai…waiting

Wahi so jata hai….waiting

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Next day office gaya

Dekha Geet is on her seat...working silently like earlier

Maan walks up to her

M- What are you doing here?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Akhil and his dirty games .... Maan should straight out punch him in the face. Geet still loves Maan? I dnot know what mind games are happening. the stupid ehsaan cad her dad pulling not knowing his daughter is slaved by Akhil.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 68

hate this Akhil.

what will Maan do?

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 68


Geet's mother in hospital

while her father tells her that Akhil is a good person

because of him the entire family depend on him

Geet tells her father she once loved Alhil and she stayed alone and sad

but now with Maan she is very much happy

the next day Maan sees Geet at the office but what had happened that

she came back to Akhil

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geet's father ask her to be away from maan

maan must expose akhil soon to save geet from him

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Aww even after she thinks Maan cheated her she still tells her dad he made her feel loved, because that’s how he treated her, with so much love and respect.. Akhil’s cunning tactics have worked, she is back to working under him again...

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I don't like what her father said if akhil family have any ehasan it's not mean Geet sacrifice hr happiness

Geet confess she loved that guy Maan now determine to go with his plan against Aakhil he came in between Geet and him but he drown in Geet confession he searching fr hr next day found hr in office on hr seat working

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Part 69

Next day office gaya

Dekha Geet is on her seat...working silently like earlier

Maan walks up to her

M- What are you doing here?

Geet glances a second...then resumes working

M-What? You are going to ignore me now? Is this how it all is?

She stiffens a little

M-Look Geet. I told you everything about what I knew Akhil was doing. I swear if I had known your family was sick I would have told you, taken you there myself. I do value family. You know that I do

Akhil comes

Akhil- You two! In my cabin

Geet gets up carrying a file

She walks to Akhil's cabin

Maan he follows her inside

Akhil dono ko project ke baare mein brief karne lagta hai

Geet is scribbling the notes

Maan is listening intently about what is expected of him for the project keeping an eye out for Geet and nodding as he noted down the points

Maan ko lagta hai he needs to speak to Geet

Maan ne socha Akhil ke saamne baat ho nahi payegi

Dono nikalte hain cabin se

Maan quickly pulls her into the storeroom pinning her to the wall in the cramped room

He questions her in the storage room

M-How are you here? Why are you following him around like that again? What is wrong with you?

G-Move! Liar! I hate you…hate you

M-What did I do? Huh? What’s so hateful about me all of a sudden? Answer me! I told you about Akhil ; I didn’t know about your family or I would have told you; or you really think you have been living with a guy who is as low as that?

She is sniffling as few tears wet her cheeks

M-Your tears aren’t my answer. So, you better tell me what the hell is wrong with you? Why are you becoming a doormat again?

She actually starts sobbing

He gives her a hanky but does not let her go or ease away

Her head is on his shoulder.

She is really shedding tears

M-Geet what is wrong? c’mon tell me! You can tell me; you know u can tell me. No is stopping you from telling me. Everything will be fine once you tell me

G-i..i..don’t know..i…i...am...stupid..i..i...you…i..miss...missed...you

M- I missed you to and you don’t have to hear me say it to know it. What’s going on here Geet? Why are you here? We were going to leave here and start a nice life together…what is all this?

G-Akhil...made me...sign a contract

M-What contract? What’s in it?

She shakes her head slowly...i dunno...didn’t read

Maan is thinking of calling his legal counsel having them take a look at it and see what is wrong

M- ok fine get a copy of it. You know where he keeps everything, get a copy and give it to me and don’t do anything so impulsively stupid again

G-I…I'll be fine…I will ask him what’s in there

M-I'll make sure you’ll be fine. Look Geet, you knowI don’t like Akhil but above my animosity and dislike for the man; surely you see that he used your emotional state to make you sign a contract... and not give you copy or time to read....that is deviousness and I don’t know how much you trust him but I don’t. Let me be the devil’s advocate and get a copy without him knowing and we will pretend to fight just like he wants us to coz I want to know why he wants us to be not together


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